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写 作 集 训 1 众所周知,读书对我们非常重要。 _, it is _ for me to read. 阅读不仅开阔我们的眼界,而且使我们更好地了解世界。 Reading _ opens our mind _ makes us _ the world. 我喜欢阅读。 I _ reading. 读书永远不会太晚。 It’s never _ late _ read. 我总是花费时间读书。 I always _ some time _. 我计划去读受欢迎的魔法书《哈利 波特》。 I plan to read Harry Porter _ is a popular magic book. 温故而知新 As we all know of great importance am fond of get a better understanding of not only too but also to reading spend which/that 2 “多变句式”原则 “词组优先” 原则 “连贯性”原则 并列句 (and/so/but/not only…but also…) 复合句 (because/so…that/so that…/if/as long as/ when/although/定从/宾从) 感叹句 固定句型 It’s never too late to do sth. play a part/role in of great importance get a better understanding of Sb. spend time doing sth. be fond of 衔接词 “高级词汇”原则 positive 积极的 attractive 有吸引力的 excellent 优秀的 outstanding 杰出的 perfect 完美的 incredible 难以置信的 wonderful 极好的 amazing 令人惊异的 useful 有用的 温故而知新 目 录 CONTENTS 凌晨四点钟 看到海棠花未眠 写作突破(三) 写作突破(三) 提 纲 议论文 Title(题目) Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 Paragraph 3 开头:点题 总结:再次强调己方观点 文体解读 表达作者的见解和主张 正文:详细阐述观点 摆事实,讲道理,直接表达作者的见解和主张。议论文应具有论点、论据、论证三个基本要素。 5 写作突破(三) 2. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside. 1. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages. 开头的神句: 3. As we all know, computers are playing an important part/role in our daily life. 4. A heated discussion was held in our class meeting about whether we should be sent to school or not. 写作突破(三) 2. 表示对比: 1. 表示递进: 必备词汇: 3. 表示顺序: 4. 表示转折: 5. 表示总结: besides, in addition, what’s more, in other words while(而) First…then…after that…at the same time…finally/in the end/at last on the one hand…on the other hand…一方面……另一方面…… but, however, instead of, after all personally, in my opinion/view, in a word, in short last but not least, As far as I know, … 联系语文中的“起承转合” 7 写作突破(三) 原题再现 假设你校为了配合创建“文化校园高效课堂”活动,最近以“学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案?”为题做了一个调查。调查发现,一些学生赞成,但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示,以“Think before you search online”为题用英语写一篇短文。 赞成者 反对者 你自己 观点 1.不会做题 2.学习别人 3.节省时间 1.不利于能力提升 2.不利于思维发展 考生自拟(至少两点) Think before you search online 要点提示 素材串联 开头:引出主题 正文: ①赞成者观点 ②反对者观点 结尾:己方观点 写作突破(三) 网络帮助学生做作业 不会做题寻求帮助 向别人学习 节省时间 先自己思考问题 正确利用网络 不利于能力的提升 不利于思维的发展 写作突破(三) Now students are using the Internet to help them with their homework. 阐述背景:学生使用网络来帮助他们做作业。 一、开篇点题 使用开篇“神句” But opinions are divided on it. A heated discussion was held in our school about whether we should use the Internet or not. 引出矛盾:但是不同的学生对此事有不同的看法。 But different students have different ideas/opinions about it. “多变句式”原则 _, the Internet is influencing the ways of learning. As we all know 写作突破(三) Some students think _the Internet, we can learn _. 我们可以向别人学习。 一些学生认为,在网络的帮助下,我们可以独立学习。 二、阐述赞成观点 “多变句式”原则 We can not only learn from others but also save time through the Internet. _ problems we meet, we can _.(高级句式) 无论我们遇到什么问题,我们可以向它寻求帮助。 我们可以节省时间。 We can learn from others. We can save time. with the help of by ourselves Whatever ask it for help 写作突破(三) Some students _ that. 从网络上抄袭答案不利于我们提升能力。 一些学生对此持反对意见。 三、阐述反对观点 “连贯性”原则 On the one hand, copying answers from the Internet is bad for us to improve our abilities. On the other hand, it can even stop the development of thinking. 它甚至会阻碍我们思维的发展。 _ answers from the Internet is bad for us to improve our abilities. It can even stop the _ of thinking. are against Copying development 一些学生认为因为因特网,我们正变得越来越懒。 Some students think we are getting lazier and lazier because of the Internet. As long as we click the mouse gently, the answer appears immediately. 12 写作突破(三) “多变句式”原则 四、阐述己方观点 依我来看,我们应该充分利用网络。 _, we should _ the Internet. It’s necessary for us to make good use of the Internet. 当我们遇到问题时,我们应该首先自己思考。 _ we have problems, we should think _. 如果我们依然有一些问题,我们可以求助于网络。 _we still have some problems, we can _ the Internet. In my opinion/view make good use of When by ourselves at first If turn to 13 写作突破(三) “多变句式”原则 四、阐述己方观点 依我来看,我们应该充分利用网络。 In my opinion/view, we should make good use of the Internet. It’s necessary for us to make good use of the Internet. When we have problems, we should think by ourselves at first. If we still have some problems, we can turn to the Internet. 用这种方法,因特网对我们的学习有很大的帮助。 Only in this way can the Internet be of great help to learning.(高级句式) _, the Internet can be _ to learning. Only in this way can sb./sth. do sth. (only句式) In this way helpful 写作突破(三) Think before you search online As we all know, the Internet is influencing the ways of learning. Now students are using the Internet to help them with their homework. But opinions are divided on it. Some students think with the help of the Internet, we can learn by ourselves. Whatever problems we meet, we can ask it for help.(高级句式)We can not only learn from others but also save time through the Internet. Some students are against that. On the one hand, copying answers from the Internet is bad for us to improve our abilities. On the other hand, it can even stop the development of thinking. In my opinion/view, it’s necessary for us to make good use of the Internet. When we have problems, we should think by ourselves at first. If we still have some problems, we can turn to the Internet. Only in this way can the Internet be of great help to learning. (高级句式) 15 “多变句式”原则 “词组优先” 原则 “连贯性”原则 并列句 (and/so/but/not only…but also…) 复合句 (because/so…that/so that…/if/as long as/ when/although/定从/宾从) 高级句式(Only in this way can sb./sth. do sth./ Whatever problems you meet, you can ask it for help.) 固定句型 It’s never too late to do sth. / It is +adj.+ for sb. to do sth. ①play a part/role in ②be fond of ③of great importance ④get a better understanding of 衔接词 温故而知新 “高级词汇”原则 Thank you for listening! $$