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读后续写解题技巧
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CONTENTS
目
录
解题技巧点拨
PART 01
针对训练
PART 02
总结
PART 03
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解题技巧点拨
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It was the day of the big crosscountry run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route (路线) through thick evergreen forest.
I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!
I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.”
I bit back my frustration (懊恼). I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the crosscountry team. It just took him longer—that's all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. ______________
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. ___________________________
2022年 新课标 全国卷
01 解题技巧点拨
read the text and mark out important information
key words/key sentence.
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解题技巧点拨
who
when
where
how
why
what
six basic
elements
step1 寻找文本要素 整体把握语篇
What is the text type of this text?
argumentation
narrative
exposition
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解题技巧点拨
step1 寻找文本要素 整体把握语篇
who
when
where
what
why
how
fill in the blank based on the important information you have marked.
six basic elements
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解题技巧点拨
step1 寻找文本要素 整体把握语篇
who
when
where
what
why
how
six basic elements
David, I(a special education teacher at the school), a coach
It was the day of the big crosscountry run.
in a small town
Though David had worked so hard for the event, he hesitated and even decided not to run
David had the brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children so he was afraid that the kids from other schools would laugh at him
The school's coach gave David the chance to join but let him decide and I was proud of his strong determination and tried to have a talk and encourage him to go on
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解题技巧点拨
Share the important information you have marked.
presentation
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解题技巧点拨
It was the day of the big crosscountry run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route (路线) through thick evergreen forest.
I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!
step2 串联要素 梳理两条主线
情节主线
plot line
情感主线
emotion line
plot line
emotion line
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解题技巧点拨
step2 串联要素 梳理两条主线
Analyze the plot line and emotion line
six students in a group
Group discussion
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解题技巧点拨
I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.”
I bit back my frustration (懊恼). I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
step2 串联要素 梳理两条主线
emotion line
plot line
emotion line
Analyze the plot line and emotion line
plot line
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解题技巧点拨
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the crosscountry team. It just took him longer—that's all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
step2 串联要素 梳理两条主线
emotion line
plot line
emotion line
Analyze the plot line and emotion line
plot line
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解题技巧点拨
step2 串联要素 梳理两条主线
Analyze the plot line and emotion line
plot line
emotion line
David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence.
The coach let David make choices by himself.
David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish.
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David: hesitated
The coach: uncomfortably
Other kids: thought it usual
I: proud of David
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解题技巧点拨
step3 基于原文和首句 预测故事
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. ________________________________________________________________________________
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. ________________________________________________________________________________
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解题技巧点拨
step3 基于原文和首句 预测故事
参考答案
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. I said gently and quietly, "No one can change yourmind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others’ thoughts." He sat stillwith a deep breath. “"You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here", I added with a sincere tone. Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run. His coach heard what David saidand gave me a look-the kind that was more determined than anyone else's.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a brain disease. David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he was tripped over within the a few kilometers. It didn't take long before hepicked himself up again and continued his mission. Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him.”Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!" they shouted enthusiastically. To everyone's joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th, It was no more important whether he won the first place or not, It was his brave heartand strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.
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针对训练
Chinese companies will no longer remain in the hard stage and they are also promoting a culture Chinese companies will no longer remain
in the hard stage and they are also wang ling yan a culture
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针对训练
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._____________________
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._______________________________
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针对训练
step1 寻找文本要素 整体把握语篇
who
when
where
what
why
how
fill in the blank based on the important information you have marked.
six basic elements
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针对训练
step1 寻找文本要素 整体把握语篇
who
when
where
what
why
how
six basic elements
Jenna, Jeff, dad and mother
Mother’s Day
in the kitchen
The twins, Jenna and Jeff, cooked breakfast for their mother
they wanted to create a surprise so that their mother would be pleased and proud.
The twins were trapped in a messy situation while cooking.
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针对训练
step2 串联要素 梳理两条主线
Analyze the plot line and emotion line
plot line
emotion line
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解题技巧点拨
step2 串联要素 梳理两条主线
Analyze the plot line and emotion line
plot line
emotion line
The twins, Jenna and Jeff planned to give their mother a surprise on Mother’s Day.
The big day came and the twins cooked breakfast smoothly.
The twins encountered messy troubles.
excited and confident
still confident
Jenna: confident→ panic
Jeff: calm→ painful
They became hopeless.
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针对训练
step3 基于原文和首句 预测故事
参考答案
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their downcast eyes, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for their mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned up, and the father made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, and added a card they had made.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They hugged their mother tightly and yelled, “Happy Mother's Day, dear Mummy! "The mother hugged the twins, her eyes widening at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to snore. He acted astonishedly when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best one she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite, too. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly.
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总结
Chinese companies will no longer remain in the hard stage and they are also promoting a culture Chinese companies will no longer remain
in the hard stage and they are also wang ling yan a culture
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总结
step1 寻找文本要素 整体把握语篇
six basic elements
who/where/when/what/why/how
step2 串联要素 梳理两条主线
plot line/emotion line
step3 基于原文和首句 预测故事
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THANKS
谢谢大家
Chinese companies will no longer remain in the hard stage and they are also promoting a culture Chinese companies will no longer remain
in the hard stage and they are also wang ling yan a culture
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