Unit 4 Growing up 单元话题满分范文必背-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（牛津译林版）

Unit 4 Growing up 单元话题满分范文必背 1．第19届杭州亚运会中，20位深圳健儿参赛，拿到了10金5银4铜的好成绩。假如你是小记者李华，采访了乒乓球团体赛冠军林高远，请根据你的采访写一篇报道。内容包括： 1．1995年，林高远出生于广东省深圳市一个普通家庭。 2．4岁时，爱上乒乓球运动。5岁时，正式乒乓球训练。 3．从2009年至今，在国际赛事中拿下超过20个冠军。 4．给大家的建议：保持好心态，永不言弃。 5．补充2点自己对林高远的评价。 参考词汇：普通的ordinary  银牌silver medal  铜牌bronze medal 要求：1．要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，衔接连贯。 2．文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息。 3．短文不少于80词。 The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022 turned out to be a great success. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022 turned out to be a great success. We have the pleasure of interviewing Lin Gaoyuan, the champion of the table tennis team competition. He was born in an ordinary family in Shenzhen, Guangdong Province in 1995. At the age of 4, he fell in love with table tennis. Then when he was 5 years old, he began his formal table tennis training. Since 2009, he has won more than 20 international titles, which makes us be proud of him. He thinks whatever difficulties we meet, we should keep a good attitude and never give up. I think he is very modest and honest. He never shows off what he has achieved. Instead, he sticks to practicing every day. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇新闻报道，属于材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍林高远的个人信息； 第二步，阐述林高远的建议； 第三步，阐述自己对其的评价； [亮点词汇] ①fall in love with爱上 ②be proud of骄傲 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①Since 2009, he has won more than 20 international titles, which makes us be proud of him（定语从句） ②He never shows off what he has achieved. （宾语从句） 2．在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如：Spud Webb，Tan Dun，Audrey Hepburn，Jackie Chan，Neil Armstrong，Marie Curie，Yuan Longping等，他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容涵盖以下要点： 1. Who is your role model? 2. What meaningful things he/she did influence you most? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥； 3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb. When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practising playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most. When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is always my hero! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样； 第二步，介绍榜样做的哪些有意义的事情对自己影响最大； 第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①kept on doing sth继续做某事 ②give up放弃 ③think of想起 ④go ahead前进 [高分句型] ①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. (but连接的并列句) 3．“铁榔头”郎平曾经是中国女排的主教练，她的优秀事迹和为中国女排所做的贡献值得我们传颂和学习。假设你的偶像是郎平，请你根据下面表格的提示，写一篇关于她的文章，发表在学校英文报刊上。 个人信息 1960年12月10日出生于中国天津 受父亲的影响，从小就对排球感兴趣 职业生涯 作为运动员，刻苦训练，参加国家队的选拔，成功地赢得了许多奖牌，证明了…… 作为教练，高标准严要求，队员处于困境时……带领中国女排多次夺冠，我们以她为骄傲…… 你的感受 作为青少年，我从她身上学到了…… 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； （3）词数：100词左右； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 中国女排：Chinese women’s volleyball team 夺冠：win the championship The Hero in My Heart ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Hero in My Heart Do you know the “Iron Hammer”? She is a hero to Chinese sports fans. Her real name is Lang Ping. Lang Ping was born in Tianjin on 10th Dec. 1960. Influenced by her father, she has been interested in volleyball since she was young. As a volleyball player, she practised hard and tried out for the national team. She succeeded in winning many prizes. She proved that Chinese women could play volleyball well. As a coach, she was very strict and worked to high standards. She always cheered her team members up when they were in trouble. She thinks the whole team should fight for the last minute. Through hard work, the Chinese women’s volleyball team has won many games. We are proud of her. The spirit of never giving up has impressed me a lot. From her story, I realize that I should never give up when I am in trouble. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍郎平的个人信息，职业生涯； 第二步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in出生于 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③succeed in doing sth成功做某事 [高分句型] ①Influenced by her father, she has been interested in volleyball since she was young.（since引导时间状语从句） ②She always cheered her team members up when they were in trouble. （when引导时间状语从句） 4．观看体育赛事时，运动员们不言放弃的体育精神和勇攀高峰的全力以赴，深深感动着每一个人。有没有哪一位体育明星让你印象尤为深刻？请根据提示和要求，以“My favorite sports star”为题，写一篇英语文章向学校报刊的英文专栏投稿。 提示：(1)他/她是谁； (2)你为什么喜欢他/她； (3)你从他/她身上学到了什么。 要求：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； (2)词数100左右。标题和开头已给出，不计人总词数。 My favorite sports star There are many successful sports stars around the world.   ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favorite sports star There are many successful sports stars around the world. My favorite sports star is Su Yiming, the champion of Men’s Snowboard Big Air in the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics. As a sportsman, he brings glory and honor to our country. He won China’s first Olympic gold in the sport. As a young person, he is talented and confident with a strong will. He used to be an actor, but he chose to follow his heart and has made great achievements. He sets a good example for me. His story inspires me to dream big and keep trying. I hope I can also use my strength to do something different in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你最喜欢的体育明星是谁； 第二步，介绍你喜欢他/她的原因； 第三步，最后介绍自己学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去是 ②choose to do sth选择做某事 ③keep doing sth坚持做某事 [高分句型] I hope I can also use my strength to do something different in the future. (宾语从句) 5．榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有许多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、姚明等著名人物，或者你身边的老师、亲人、朋友等普通人。请以“A Person I Admire”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1）你最喜欢或敬佩的人是谁？2）你为什么欣赏或敬佩他/她？3）你从他/她身上学到了什么? 要求：1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 A Person I Admire _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: A Person I Admire Yao Ming, an amazing basketball star, is a player I greatly admire. Yao Ming is widely regarded as one of the greatest football players. One of the things that I admire most about Yao is his hard work. Although he faces many challenges, Yao always sticks to his goals and achieved great success. Another thing that I admire about Yao Ming is his kindness. He has always remained ready to help others. This has made him an admirable person. In a word, Yao Ming is not only an amazing football player, but also a role model for people of all ages. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中对榜样的介绍，包括外貌、性格以及钦佩此人的原因。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最钦佩的人是谁； 第二步，介绍自己最钦佩的人的外貌、性格特征以及钦佩此人的原因； 第三步，介绍你从他/她身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①one of +the +形容词最高级+名词复数，表示“……是……中最……之一” ②stick to坚持 ③be ready to准备好 [高分句型] ①One of the things that I admire most about Yao is his hard work.（that引导的定语从句） ②In a word, Yao Ming is not only an amazing football player, but also a role model for people of all ages.（并列连词not only…but also…，连接和强调两个同等句子成分） 6．假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在收集“时代呼唤英雄”的主题材料，计划做一期“英雄人物”的系列推送。请你用英语写一封信，告诉你的笔友 Peter 你推荐的心目中的英雄，他/她是谁，做了什么以及你的推荐理由。 要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语： love, train, study, never give up, take pride in 提示问题：Who is your hero? What did he/she do? Why do you want to recommend him/her? Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to tell you something about a hero in my heart. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to tell you something about a hero in my heart. Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world and I love playing table tennis. She started playing table tennis when she was five. She trained hard, so she became a great player later. She has won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics. She stopped playing when she was twenty-four. She began to study at Tsinghua University in Beijing and then attended university abroad. Seven years later, she completed her doctor’s degree at Cambridge University. I recommend her because I think she is a good player as well as a good student. Whatever she does, she never gives up. She is simply the best and she is a true hero. I take great pride in her. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己心目中的英雄，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己心目中的英雄； 第三步，介绍推荐她的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①stop doing sth.停止做某事 ②as well as和 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world and I love playing table tennis. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②She stopped playing when she was twenty-four. (when引导的时间状语从句) 7．世界上有许多伟大的人，他们在某个领域有着突出的成就，他们的精神值得我们学习。在众多拥有杰出贡献的人中，谁是对你影响最大的人？为什么？请你根据以下提示，以The person who has influenced me most为题写一篇短文。 写作提示： 1. Who is the person? 2. What’s his/her achievement? 3. What have you learnt from him/her? 要求： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 100词左右。 The person who has influenced me most _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The person who has influenced me most Yao Ming is the person who has influenced me most. Yao Ming was a Chinese basketball player. He played it so well that he was accepted by the NBA. Later, he became one of the best players in the NBA. After he retired from the NBA, he made great contributions to charity work. I admire Yao Ming because he is not only a great sportsman, but also a man full of love. He cares about children’s education and makes efforts to protect wild animals. From him, I have learnt that people should try their best to make their dreams come true. And, after achieving their dreams, people should do something meaningful to make the world a better place. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作提示”中任何一个要点，可适当添加细节，但要突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单介绍对你影响最大的这个人是谁； 第二步，具体介绍这个人有哪些成就； 第三步，进一步介绍你从这个人身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ① make great contributions to 为……作出巨大贡献 ② not only...but also... 不仅……而且…… ③ try one’s best 尽某人最大的努力 [高分句型] ① He played it so well that he was accepted by the NBA.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句） ② From him, I have learnt that people should try their best to make their dreams come true.（that引导的宾语从句） 8．中国作为旅游资源丰富的大国，每年都有不少人到全国各地旅游。现学校将举办一场以国庆节为主题的作文，请你以此写一篇作文，内容包括： 1. 假期的活动（如家人去一些有趣的地方，到处都是鲜花和国旗，去济南度过3天） 2. 了解到的人物（如邓亚萍5岁开始打乒乓球有4枚金牌。24岁退役后去大学学习并完成了博士学位。无论她做什么她都不会放弃，我觉得她不仅是一位出色的运动员而且还是一名好学生。她实在是最好的。） 写作要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得出现真实学校名称和学生姓名； 2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯，可以适当的增加内容，以使行文连贯。词数不少于80词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The National Day is coming. There are flowers and flags everywhere during the National Day. My family and I always go somewhere interesting as soon as the holiday begins because we have 7 days off. We are going to spend 3 days in Jinan. We will learn about something about Deng Yaping. She is my heroine, because she is one of the best table tennis players and I love playing table tennis. She started playing table tennis when she was 5. She has won many world competitions, including 4 gold medals at the Olympics. She stopped playing when she was 24. She began studying at Tsinghua University in Beijing and attended university abroad. Seven years later, she completed her doctor’s degree. Whatever she does, she never gives up! In my opinion, she is a good student as well as a good table tennis player. She is simply the best. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍假期的活动； 第二步，介绍了解的人物——邓亚萍； 第三步，书写自己对邓亚萍的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①in one’s opinion 在某人看来 ②give up 放弃 ③interesting 有趣的 [高分句型] ①She is my hero, because she is one of the best table tennis players and I love playing table tennis.（原因状语从句） ②She started playing table tennis when she was 5. （时间状语从句） 9．根据以下思维导图内容，以Xu Haifeng为题，写一篇约80—100词的英语短文对中国射击运动员许海峰进行介绍，并赞扬他为中国争光的精神以及他对射击项目的热爱和努力。 Xu Haifeng Shooting is hard for most people, but there are always excellent players finding pleasure in it. Xu Haifeng ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Xu Haifeng Shooting is hard for most people, but there are always excellent players finding pleasure in it. Xu Haifeng is one of the best shooting players in the world. He was born in Fujian Province on August 1, 1957. When he was a child, he was interested in playing toy guns. After many years’ hard work, he became a player in national team successfully in 1984. His dream was to be the best shooting player. As a shooting player, he had many achievements. He won the first Chinese Olympic gold medalist in 1984. He also won four gold medals and broke a world record in Asian Games in 1986. I think he is a strong-willed man. No matter what difficulty he met, he never gave up. I will learn from him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍射击运动员许海峰，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据题干中的提示信息介绍许海峰的基本信息以及他取得的成就； 第三步，介绍自己对他的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in 对……感兴趣 ②give up放弃 [高分句型] ①When he was a child, he was interested in playing toy guns. (when引导时间状语从句) ②No matter what difficulty he met, he never gave up. (no matter what引导让步状语从句) 10．每个人心中都有自己认为的英雄，以邓亚萍为例，根据汉语提示，可以适当的增加内容。 1. 邓亚萍是我心目中的英雄（in my heart）因为她是世界上最棒的乒乓球运动员之一。 2. 5岁开始打乒乓球。她努力训练，所以后来成为了一名伟大的运动员。 3. 她赢得了许多世界比赛，包括四枚奥运会金牌。 4. 24岁停止打乒乓球。停止打球后开始在北京清华大学（Tsinghua University）学习。 5. 她无论做什么都不放弃。她是一个真正的英雄。 注意： 1. 词数不少于80词。 2. 可以适当的增加内容，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world, and I love playing table tennis. She started playing table tennis when she was five. She trained hard, so she became a great player later. She’s won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics. She stopped playing when she was twenty-four. She began to study at Tsinghua University in Beijing and then attended university abroad. Her English wasn’t good enough when she began. Once again she worked hard, and seven years later, she completed her doctor’s degree at Cambridge University. Whatever she does, she never gives up. I think she is a true hero. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步，按照提示的要点逐点叙述邓亚平的人生经历，可适当增加细节； 第三步，称赞她的精神品质并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①one of the best table tennis players最厉害的乒乓球运动员之一 ②attend university abroad到国外留学 ③complete her doctor’s degree完成博士学位 [高分句型] ①Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world, and I love playing table tennis.（because引导原因状语从句，and连接两个并列分句） ②Whatever she does, she never gives up.（whatever引导让步状语从句） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$