Unit 10写作 课件 2024-2025学年人教版英语八年级上册

Unit 10 Problems and Solutions Writing Guide 目录 Start by Reading & Warming up 01 02 03 04 Collecting Time Learn & Practice Practice More Start by Reading & Warm up 01 1 Read and Answer. A Scary Performance A Scary Performance A Scary Performance The last time I had a problem at school was last week. We had to sing in front of the whole class. The teacher gave me a solo. I don’t like being the center of attention. I was really nervous! I asked my mom for advice. She told me that imagining people in clown costumes is a great way to calm down, so I decided to try it. It was time to sing in front of my class. When I got nervous, I remembered what my mom said. I imagined my classmates were clowns. It reallt helped! I didn’t foget any words to the song. I was really anxious about performing the solo. But pretending everyone was wearing clown costumes made it a lot easier, and a lot funnier! The last time I had a problem at school was last week. We had to sing in front of the whole class. The teacher gave me a solo. I don’t like being the center of attention. I was really nervous! I asked my mom for advice. She told me that imagining people in clown costumes is a great way to calm down, so I decided to try it. It was time to sing in front of my class. When I got nervous, I remembered what my mom said. I imagined my classmates were clowns. It reallt helped! I didn’t foget any words to the song. I was really anxious about performing the solo. But pretending everyone was wearing clown costumes made it a lot easier, and a lot funnier! The last time I had a problem at school was last week. We had to sing in front of the whole class. The teacher gave me a solo. I don’t like being the center of attention. I was really nervous! I asked my mom for advice. She told me that imagining people in clown costumes is a great way to calm down, so I decided to try it. It was time to sing in front of my class. When I got nervous, I remembered what my mom said. I imagined my classmates were clowns. It reallt helped! I didn’t foget any words to the song. I was really anxious about performing the solo. But pretending everyone was wearing clown costumes made it a lot easier, and a lot funnier! 点击替换图片 点击替换图片 1 Read and Answer. Answer the questions. Answer the questions. Answer the questions. What was the writer’s problem? What was the writer’s problem? What did the writer think after the performance? What did the writer think after the performance? He was really nervous when he was the center of attention. His mother told him that imagining people in clown costumes is a great way to calm down.. What did the writer’s mother say? What did the writer’s mother say? He thought that pretending everyone was wearing clown costumes made it a lot easier, and a lot funnier. 2 Warm up What are your problems? What are your problems? What are your problems? have no close friends to talk to have too much homework eat too much and get fat feel sleepy in class Do you have any else prpblems? Do you have any else prpblems? Do you have any else prpblems? I think you should try to play games with your classmates. 2 Warm up I have no close friends to talk to. What do you think I should do? Can you give me some advice? I have no close friends to talk to. What do you think I should do? Can you give me some advice? I have no close friends to talk to. What do you think I should do? Can you give me some advice? If you join a sports team, you’ll know many new friends. If you join a sports team, you’ll know many new friends. I think you should join a club. I think you should join a club. I think you should try to play games with your classmates. I think you should try to play games with your classmates. Make Your Own Conversations! Make Your Own Conversations! Make Your Own Conversations! 02 Collecting Time 1 佳句欣赏与模仿 If we ask people to bring food, they’ll just bring potato chips and chocolate because they’ ll be too lazy to cook. If we ask people to bring food, they’ll just bring potato chips and chocolate because they’ ll be too lazy to cook. 一些家长常要求孩子努力学习，但他们因为太忙以至于不能了解孩子真正的烦恼。 一些家长常要求孩子努力学习，但他们因为太忙以至于不能了解孩子真正的烦恼。 Some parents often ask their children to study hard, but they are too busy to know their children’s real worries. Some parents often ask their children to study hard, but they are too busy to know their children’s real worries. 1 佳句欣赏与模仿 I think talking to someone helps a lot. In English, we say that sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. I think talking to someone helps a lot. In English, we say that sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. 逃避问题会使你感到更糟。 逃避问题会使你感到更糟。 Running away from problems will make you feel worse. Running away from problems will make you feel worse. Mike decided to work without finishing his college. 2 If he does, ____________________________________ I think he should _______________________________________ 行为 后果 建议 用“if”推理下列行为的后果，并提出合理的建议。 he won’t graduate from his college. go on studying in his college. I lost my wallet last week, but I am still afraid to tell my parents. 2 If you _______ ________________________________________________ I think you should _______________________________________ 行为 后果 建议 用“if”推理下列行为的后果，并提出合理的建议。 don’t tell your parents, maybe you’ll have no money when you need. trust your parents and tell them. Su Mei’s brother can’t do well in English. He plans to give up learning Engish. 2 If _______ ________________________________________________ I think _______ _______________________________________ 行为 后果 建议 用“if”推理下列行为的后果，并提出合理的建议。 he gives up, his English will be worse and worse. he should find a better way to learn and practice English. 给下面青少年存在的问题提出合理的建议 3 Betty always runs away from her problems and tells nobody. I think ___________________ ________________________ she should face her problem and try to solve them. If ______________________ ________________________ ________________________. she continues to do like that, her problems will always exist and will be more and more Lingling is heavy. Some classmates often laugh at her. I think ___________________ ________________________ ________________________________________________. those classmates should stop laughing at Lingling and Lingling also should lose some weight to get more healthy If ______________________ ________________________ ________________________. Lingling can lose some weight, she will be healthier and maybe more popular. 4 Problems and w__________ are n___________ in life. 01 02 还记得课文中的这些句子吗？来填空吧！ 03 U_______ we talk to someone, we’ll certainly feel worse. I will always remember to s_________ my problems in the future. orries ormal nless hare Remember them! Remember them! Remember them! 4 It’s b_______ not to run away from our problems. 01 02 还记得课文中的这些句子吗？来填空吧！ 03 Students often forget that their parents have more e______________ and are always there to help them. In English, we say that sharing a problem is like cutting it in h_______, so you’re halfway to s_________a problem just by talking to someone about it. est xperience alf olving Remember them! Remember them! Remember them! 03 Learn & Practice 3 Learn and Practice Talk to someone you know. Find out his/her three biggest worries. Try to think of some solutions to the problems and write them down. 3a 3 Learn and Practice Problems Possible solutions don’t stay up late, buy an alarm clock, ride your bike to go to school too heavy eat less junk food and more vegetables, do more exercise always be late for school take notes in class, do more exercises, ask the teacher for help physics is difficult 3 Learn and Practice My friend _______ has a problem. He / She ___________________________. I think he/she should _________________. If he/she____________________________, he/she will __________________________. Write about your friend’s first problem and the possible solutions. Use the structures below to help you plan your writing. 3b 3 Learn and Practice 分析3b中的作文提纲，可以看出, 写三个方面的内容就能轻松完成一篇小作文。 首先，写清楚朋友的名字及其现在存在的问题或困难。 然后，写出自己给他的建议。并用if从句来进一步说 明自己的建议将会起到的作用。 最后，复读一遍作文来检查有没有错误。 指 导 3 Learn and Practice Possible version Possible version Possible version My friend Jenny has a problem. She is too heavy. I think she should eat less junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit. I think she also should get more exercise. If she eats more vegetables and fruit, she will eat less junk food. If she gets more exercise, she’ll be much thinner soon. My friend Jenny has a problem. She is too heavy. I think she should eat less junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit. I think she also should get more exercise. If she eats more vegetables and fruit, she will eat less junk food. If she gets more exercise, she’ll be much thinner soon. My friend Jenny has a problem. She is too heavy. I think she should eat less junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit. I think she also should get more exercise. If she eats more vegetables and fruit, she will eat less junk food. If she gets more exercise, she’ll be much thinner soon. 3 Learn and Practice My friend also has two other problems. __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ Now write your advice for your friend’s second and third problems. Use the structures in 3b to help you. 3c 3 Learn and Practice Possible version Possible version Possible version ….She is always late for school. I think she shouldn’t stay up late on weekdays. She should get an alarm clock. She should rides her bike to school. If she has an alarm clock, she will get up early. ….She is always late for school. I think she shouldn’t stay up late on weekdays. She should get an alarm clock. She should rides her bike to school. If she has an alarm clock, she will get up early. ….She is always late for school. I think she shouldn’t stay up late on weekdays. She should get an alarm clock. She should ride her bike to school. If she has an alarm clock, she will get up early. If she rides her bike to school, it will cost her less time to get to school. She thinks physics is too difficult for her. I think she should take notes in class. She should also do more exercises. She should ask the teacher for help after class. If she rides her bike to school, it will cost her less time to get to school. She thinks physics is too difficult for her. I think she should take notes in class. She should also do more exercises. She should ask the teacher for help after class. If she rides her bike to school, it will cost her less time to get to school. She thinks physics is too difficult for her. I think she should take notes in class. She should also do more exercises. She should ask the teacher for help after class. Your school is taking part in the project “We Can Help!” Add more items to the poster. Then talk about what you will do if you take part in the project. We Can Help! old people’s home visit school clean-up children’s hospital visit _____________________ _____________________ A: What will you do if you visit an old people’s home? B: If I do that, I’ll bring the old people some flowers. 4 3 Learn and Practice What will you do if you visit an old people’s home? If I do that, I’ll bring the old people some flowers. 3 Learn and Practice If I do that, I’ll sing and dance for them to make them happy. 4 Learn and Practice 04 Practice More 4 Practice More If 意为如果，表示条件，if引导的句子是从句，用现在时 态，主句则用将来时态。也就是所谓的“主将从现”。 如： If you eat less, you will be thinner. If you work hard, you will be successful. If you come to school late, your teacher will be angry with you. 复习： if 条件状语从句 4 Can I come to your place after school on Friday? Yes._______________________________________(bring, film, watch) 01 Does she have to go to hospital next week? Yes._______________________________________(treat, get better) 03 02 Do you think we can do this competition? Yes._______________________________________(succeed, win, prize) Practice More Use if and the words in brackets to answer the questions. Add other words you need. If you bring a film, we’ll watch it together. If the doctor treat her, she’ll get better. If we succeed, we’ll win a prize. 4 Practice More 4 Can he borrow some money from you? No._________________________________________(borrow, not, pay back) If he borrows money, he won’t pay it back. 5 Shall we do the housework together? Yes._________________________________________(share, finish sooner) If we share the house work, we’ll finish sooner. 6 Do these jeans need to be mended? Yes._________________________________________(take, shop, mend) If we take them to the shop,they’ll mend them . 7 Shall we make an effort to contact Peter? No._________________________________________(ring,now, not, happy) If we ring him now,he won’t be happy. 4 Practice More: 篇章训练 青少年在成长过程中难免会遇到一些困惑。下图中是Jim的一些烦恼。假设你是Jim的朋友Alice，请你根据表格内容，给Jim写一封信，给他提出合理的建议。内容包括：具体的困惑、感受、可能的结果、你将会怎么解决等。可自由拓展。词数100词左右。 Problems Advice(建议) Lost his wallet and is still afraid to tell his parents … Has lots of homework and can’t do what he likes … Be a little heavy and worried about his health … … … 4 Practice More 审题分析： 写作目的： 针对朋友Jim的困惑和烦恼给出自己合理的建议。 2. 写作内容： 针对Jim的三个烦恼，从具体的困惑、感受、可能的结果、你将会怎么解决等 方面来写。 3. 写作体裁： 书信（收件人：Jim 寄件人：Alice(我) , 注意书信格式） 注意事项： 1. 不要忘记适当的开头和结尾，并且可以首尾呼应。 2. 注意在叙述困惑时，人称要改为第二人称。 4 Practice More 细节分析： 具体的困惑： You lost your wallet and are still afraid to tell his parents. 2. 感受 You will feel more upset and worse if you don’t tell them. 4. 我的解决方式 Share your problems with your parents and talk to them. 可能的结果 Your parents will understand you and they have more experience than you, they won’t blame you. 4 Practice More 细节分析： 具体的困惑： You have too much homework and can’t do what you like. 2. 感受 You feel unhappy and I feel it’s terrible. 3. 我的解决方式 Talk to your teachers. 4. 可能的结果 The teachers will know the students ’ problems and try their best to give you less but more helpful homework. 4 Practice More 细节分析： 具体的困惑： You are a little heavy and if you get heavier, you will be unhealthy. 2. 感受 You feel worried about your health. 3. 我的解决方式 Do more sports and ask your P.E. teacher for help. Eat more vegetables and fruit. 4. 可能的结果 You will be healthier and healthier. 4 Practice More: Possible Version Dear Jim, I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in your life. Problems and worries are normal in life, so you don’t need to worry about them so much. Beginning: 表示难过，劝导并安慰。 4 Practice More Body: Problem 1 I know that you lost your wallet last week and you are afraid to tell your parents. If you don’t tell them, you’ll feel more upset. I think it’s best to talk to your parents. You’ll certainly feel worse unless you tell them. I think they’ll be understanding. Sharing your problems with your parents is a good way to solve your problems because your parents have more experience than you! 4 Practice More Body: Problem 2 What’s worse, you have too much homework. And you feel really unhappy because you have no time to do what you like. I think it’s terrible. Why don’t you talk to your teachers? If you do, the teacher will know more about the students’ problems. They will try their best to give you less homework. 4 Practice More Body: Problem 3 You are so worried about your health. It is true that if you are too heavy, you will be unhealthy. I think doing sports can help you a lot. If you do sports you like, you will be thinner soon. I think you can also have a talk with your P.E teacher. If you do, he will help you make a special plan that can help you do better. What’s more, I think you should eat more vegetables and fruit. If you do , you will be healthier and healthier. 4 Practice More Ending: 呼应首段并总结解决困惑的方式，还要表示祝愿。 As we know, problems in our life are quite common. When you have problems, the first step is to find someone you trust to talk to. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. I really hope you can be better soon! Best wishes! Yours, Alice meeting teenagers video experience 1. If my family travels to a new country this summer, I’ll send you a letter about my __________. 2. Will you watch the ______with me if you are free this weekend? 3. If the __________ stay out too late, their parents will worry about them. 4. I’ll go to the ________ if it ends by 5:00 p.m. experience video teenagers meeting Self Check I. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box. II. Complete the conversation with the words in the box. if are will flight want sorry going A: Hi, Sally. ____ you ____ to the party tomorrow? B: I _____ to, but I can’t. A: Oh! But _____ you don’t go to the party, you _____ miss all the fun! B: I know, but I got into a _____ with my parents. A: Hmm… then you should just say _____ to your parents. B: I guess you’re right. I _____ talk to them tonight. Are going want if will flight sorry will III. Use your information! What will you do if … 1. It rains all weekend? 2. There’s an English test tomorrow? 3. Your cousin decides to come and visit from another town? I will stay at home. I will work hard / go to bed early tonight. I will pick her up and treat her a delicious meal. If I eat too much lunch, _______________. If I am a good cook, _____________________________. If I watch too much TV, _______________________. If I don’t help others, ______________________. I will feel sick I’ll cook delicious food for you I won’t have enough sleep others won’t help me Complete the sentences using your own ideas. $$