Unit4 Section4 Writing(课件PPT)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册（外研版2019）

Unit 4　A glimpse of the future Section Ⅳ　Writing 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 目 录 写作培优 增彩增分 01 CONTENTS 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 写作培优 增彩增分 01 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 谢谢观看 返回目录 Unit 4　A glimpse of the future 英语·选择性必修 第三册(配WY版) 1 读后续写 读后续写是考查学生语言综合运用能力的一种新高考题型。在形式上，它类似于阅读理解文章结构题中的预测下段内容，同时又是书面表达题。但实质上，这种题型在能力考查方面又远远高于这些。这种题型不仅考查学生的语言表达能力，还考查学生对文章的理解能力、对文章结构的把握能力和对情节发展的判断及构思能力。学生只有在对原文准确并深刻理解的基础上，对情节的发展做出判断，运用合适的构思能力才能写出优秀的续写。因此，读后续写具有较大的难度。 一、抓住六要素，巧用修辞展主题 读后续写的文章以记叙文为主，记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。一般来说，完成一篇完整的记叙文写作，需要选取合适的角度、按照一定的顺序组织素材并进行叙述，其中包括六个基本要素：时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过和结果，即我们通常所说的五个“W”(what, who, when, where, why)和一个“H”(how)。除此之外，鲜明的主题和生动的语言，也是一篇优秀的记叙文不可或缺的。 描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式，对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用，它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节，有时还可以运用比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的续写往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。同样地，议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也发挥着重要的作用。 二、构织画面，合理收尾 1．建议学生边读原文边根据语境构织故事发展的画面； 2．利用所要续写的第一段的首句预测第一段将要发生的事，第二段是故事的完美结局，即第一段叙述出现的问题，第二段叙述怎么解决； 3．利用所要续写的第二段的首句预测第一段中事情的发展情况；依据上下文的逻辑关系找到第二段中解决问题的线索。 一、词块积累 1．表示人物喜乐 be delighted at .../be joyful over/about ...对……很高兴 feel inspired/encouraged 受到鼓舞 be in high spirits 精神高涨 2．表示人物悲伤 a strong sense of loss 强烈的失落感 fall into despair 陷入绝望 with a heavy/sinking heart 怀着沉重的/沮丧的心情 3．表示人物愤怒 be annoyed at ...因为……而恼火 be speechless with anger 气得说不出话来 get mad/cross at sb 对某人勃然大怒 express/voice one's complaint about ...对……表示不满 二、句式积累 1．开心 (1)I couldn't restrain my joy and jumped into the house. 我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。 (2)We were very pleased to hear this encouraging news. 听到这个令人鼓舞的消息，我们十分高兴。 (3)She was relieved to see his face light up with a boyish grin. 看到他脸上露出孩子气的笑容，她松了一口气。 2．悲伤 (1)Words cannot express my sorrow. 言语无法表达我的哀伤。 (2)The burden of grief made her in low spirits all day long. 压在心头的悲伤使她整天郁郁寡欢。 (3)Her hands were shaking and she was on the verge of tears. 她的双手在颤抖，她快要哭了。 3．愤怒 (1)Then she stood up, wrapping her coat around her angrily. 然后她站了起来，怒气冲冲地穿上大衣。 (2)She looked at him with eyes flashing angrily. 她愤怒地看着他。 (3)She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。 4．恐惧 (1)His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened. 他的心怦怦跳，似乎被吓坏了。 (2)She was so frightened that she couldn't make a sound. 她实在吓坏了，不敢发出一点声音来。 (3)I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 我吓呆了，害怕得不敢移动一步。 5．惊讶 (1)We were all astonished at the unexpected news. 听了这个突如其来的消息，我们都十分惊讶。 (2)She was surprised that he had no words of blame for her. 使她惊讶的是，他竟然没有对她说任何怪罪的话。 6．感动 (1)I was greatly touched by what you told me. 你对我讲的话使我大受感动。 (2)It is very moving to see how much strangers can care for each other. 看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照，实在令人感动。 阅读教材中第47页的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Soon, Carolyn arrived at her workplace at flying speed. Just at the same time everything was about to break down when Todd rushed in and gave her the emergency call device. [审题构思] Setting Time：During the breakfast Place：At home Characters Todd and his wife Carolyn Plot Another prison breakout (faulty robotics blamed)→Carolyn, who worked in prison insisted it resulted from an old facility, and theirs were advanced.→ Todd protested that even new, regularly­maintained robots can break down.→Carolyn rushed to work in an aircar.→An hour later Todd noticed Carolyn had left her emergency call device on the breakfast table. Ending 卡罗琳会不会遇到问题？根据原文中的“one small error could cause a lot of problems”推测下面会遇到什么问题？如何解决？ [遣词造句] 1．令她吃惊的是，一些罪犯已经跑出监狱，殴打值班的机器人工作人员。 To her surprise, some of the criminals had run out of the prison, beating the robot staff at duty　. 2．卡罗琳毫不犹豫地在包里找她的紧急呼叫设备。她哪儿也找不到。 Without any hesitation　，Carolyn was going to search for her emergency call device in her bag.She couldn't find it anywhere. 3．就在那一刻，她意识到她把它忘在家里了。 It was at that moment that she realised she had left it at home. 4．她像热锅上的蚂蚁，不知道该怎么办，只是走来走去。 Like a cat on hot bricks　， she didn't know how to do, just walking up and down　. 5．卡罗琳感激不已，双手颤抖地按下了按钮，最后一切都变得平静了。 Gratefully, Carolyn pushed the button with her hands trembling　， and everything tended to be quiet at last. 6．卡罗琳终于明白了托德所说的话，眼里饱含感激的泪水，紧紧地拥抱着他。 Carolyn finally understood what Todd had said, hugging him tightly with grateful tears in her eyes　. 7．这次失败使卡罗琳意识到恰当使用机器人的重要性。 The failure made Carolyn realise the importance of using robots appropriately. [句式升级] A．用非限制性定语从句改写句2 Without any hesitation, Carolyn was going to search for her emergency call device in her bag, which she couldn't find anywhere.　 B．用强调句型改写句7 It was the failure that made Carolyn realise the importance of using robots appropriately.　 [连句成篇] One possible version： Soon, Carolyn arrived at her workplace at flying speed.To her surprise, some of the criminals had run out of the prison, beating the robot staff at duty.Without any hesitation, Carolyn was going to search for her emergency call device in her bag, which she couldn't find anywhere.It was at that moment that she realised she had left it at home.Like a cat on hot bricks, she didn't know how to do, just walking up and down. Just at the same time everything was about to break down when Todd rushed in and gave her the emergency call device.Gratefully，Carolyn pushed the button with her hands trembling, and everything tended to be quiet at last.Carolyn finally understood what Todd had said, hugging him tightly with grateful tears in her eyes.It was the failure that made Carolyn realise the importance of using robots appropriately. $$