Unit 3 写作 2024-2025学年人教版（2024）七年级英语上册

2024人教七上英语写作 Unit 3 My School 单元话题分析 【课标话题】 人与自我-多彩，安全，有意义的学校生活 本单元以“介绍学校”为话题，要求写一篇短文，让同学们向他人介绍自己的学校以及校园生活。在写作的过程中主要涉及介绍学校的环境，校园基础设施以及丰富的校园生活等。 【写作题目】 假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Peter想了解你的学校。看图并根据中文大意和英文提示词语，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校。内容包括你学校里建筑物的数量和位置，你是否喜欢你的学校以及原因。 注意：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于60词的文段写作，文中已给出内容不计入总词数，所给提示词仅供选用，请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语： in the middle of…，behind，between…and…，on the left，lessons，sports，beautiful Dear Peter, I’m writing to introduce my school to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let me know about your school. Write to me soon. 写作思路 【审题】 · 审主题、审体裁：主题为介绍学校；体裁为说明文； · 审人称、审时态：通常以第一人称为主，若以他人视角写作，则用对应的第三人称；时态以一般现在时态为主；（本题以第一人称为主） · 审要点：本题要求介绍学校的建筑，比如数量和位置，除此之外，还需说明自己是否喜欢学校以及原因。介绍学校建筑的数量和位置，要根据图片中提供的信息来介绍。 【写作过程】 · 开头部分：引入主题 I’m writing to introduce my school to you. I would like to introduce my school to you. Now let me tell you something about my school. · 主体部分：介绍学校的整体环境，学校的建筑物，比如建筑物的数量，名称以及位置；可自行梳理，描述不同学校建筑物的用途以及相关活动；表明自己对于学校以及校园生活的喜欢，并描述原因。 · 结尾部分：点名主题，再次表达自己对于学校以及校园生活的情感，并期待了解对方的学校以及校园生活。 How about your school? Would you like to tell me something about your school? Can you introduce your school to me? I would like to learn about your school. Are you willing to tell me? 【实用表达】 · 介绍学校整体环境 My school is big, clean and beautiful. My school is great. There are many trees and flowers. · 介绍学校建筑 There are modern buildings in my school. The playground is in the middle of our school. The classroom building is between and . The sports hall is on the left of . The office building is on the right of . · 介绍校园生活 I have lessons every day. The Chinese class often begins at and finishes at . We always on the playground. My school life is colorful and meaningful. We spend most of our time in the classroom. · 介绍喜欢的原因 I really love my school. Because I make many new friends here. I deeply love my school. Because I have many good teachers and interesting classes. Because I really learn a lot here. Because my teachers and my classmates are very friendly to me. Because we have different kinds of outdoor activities. 【词汇储备】 · 介绍学校建筑 school gate 学校大门 sports hall体育馆 sports field运动场 playground 操场 dining hall餐厅 science building 科学楼 library 图书馆 classroom building教学楼 school hall学校大礼堂 art building 艺术楼 music hall 音乐大厅 Teachers’ building 教师楼 · 介绍位置关系 next to 紧邻 in front of在...前面 behind 在...后面 between...and...在...和...之间 on the left of在...左边 on the right of 在...右边 across from 在...对面 【小试牛刀】 1. 我的学校既干净又美丽。 My school is and . 2. 我们学校有6栋现代的大楼。 There are six in our school. 3. 体育馆在学校大门的左边。 The gym is of the school gate. 4. 办公楼在学校大门的右边。 The office building is of the school gate. 5. 教学楼在图书馆和办公楼之间。 The classroom building is and . 6. 餐厅在科学楼旁边。 The dining hall is the science building. 7. 我们经常在操场上体育课。 We often have the P.E. class . 8. 我们每天大多数时间在教室度过。 We most of our time in the classroom. 9. 我很喜欢我的学校，我的老师和同学们。 I like my school, my and . 10. 因为我在学校能交到很多新朋友并且能学到很多知识。 Because I can and a lot. 【答案解析】 1. My school is clean and beautiful. 2. There are six modern buildings in our school. 3. The gym is on the left of the school gate. 4. The office building is on the right of the school gate. 5. The classroom building is between the library and the office building. 6. The dining hall is next to the science building. 7. We often have the P.E. class in the playground. 8. We spend most of our time in the classroom. 9. I like my school, my teachers and classmates. 10. Because I can make many new friends and learn a lot. 写作范例 假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Peter想了解你的学校。看图并根据中文大意和英文提示词语，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校。内容包括你学校里建筑物的数量和位置，你是否喜欢你的学校以及原因。 注意：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于60词的文段写作，文中已给出内容不计入总词数，所给提示词仅供选用，请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语： in the middle of…，behind，between…and…，on the left，lessons，sports，beautiful Dear Peter, I’m writing to introduce my school to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let me know about your school. Write to me soon. 【优秀范文】 Dear Peter, I’m writing to introduce my school to you. My school is big and beautiful. There are six modern buildings in our school. When you enter our school, you can see the playground in the middle. We often have our P.E. class in the playground. The sports hall is on the left of the school gate. The science building is between the sports hall and the dining hall. The office building is on the right. The classroom building, the tallest one, is between the library and the office building. We spend most of our time there. I really love my school. Because my teachers and my classmates are friendly and I learn a lot from them. How about your school? 【亮点词汇】 modern building 现代建筑 in the middle(of) 在中间 on the left(of)在左边 on the right(of)在右边 between...and...在...与...之间 spend 花费，度过 be friendly(to)友好的 learn a lot学到很多东西 【高分句型】 When you enter our school, you can see the playground in the middle. 当你进入我们校园，你能看到操场就在中间。 The classroom building, the tallest one, is between the library and the office building. 教学楼，就是最高的那个，在图书馆和办公楼之间。 Because my teachers and my classmates are friendly and I learn a lot from them. 因为我的老师和同学们都很友好，并且我从他们身上学到了很多东西。 写作练习 假如你是李华。你刚刚进入新学校学习，你的美国好友Tom想了解你的学校。请根据表格信息提示，给他写一封70词左右的邮件介绍你的学校。 作文要求： （1）不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名； （2）语句连贯，词数70个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Tom, I am very happy to tell you something about my new school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to my new school. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$