Unit 1 单元写作指导与演练-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）

Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation? 单元写作指导与演练 【单元话题解读】  本单元以“假期活动”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群，涉及子主题“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”。常从度假的时间、地点、活动及个人情感等方面展开描写。 主要为记录和描述自己在假期参观的某个地方或自己的旅途见闻。主要内容包括活动的时间、地点、人物、活动内容及感受，写作时，要注意一般过去时态的正确使用。 此话题常见的写作角度涉及： 1、向他人讲述自己的假期计划；2、讲述与他人的旅行经历；3、如何让假期生活更有意义。 【写作技巧】 本单元主要话题是谈论假期，以日记的形式记录自己生活的故事。写英文日记是“写作”题中常见题型之一，其一般对内容、体裁、格式、词数都有严格的要求。日记可以有标题，通常可以省略。正文部分可以顶格写，也可以空三到五个字母的空隙。一般情况下可以用过去时态来叙述，但是若有议论、抒情或写景时，可以用现在时态或将来时态。日记中记叙的事情不宜过多过杂，选取你印象最深的一两件事记叙即可，不能写成流水账。左上角顶格写日期，星期几。此部分内容页可以写在第一行偏右位置。 【写作目标】 1.能用过去时描述自己曾经历过的某个假期,内容包括:时间、地点、人物、景点、食物、住宿、具体活动、感受等。 2.能用短语something interesting，anything delicious等描述事物或事件。能用不同的形容词表达感受。 【写作思维导图】 【单元素材积累】 (1) 相关短语积累  1.on vacation 在度假 2.enjoy food 享受美食 3.stay at home 待在家里 4.have nothing much to do 没有什么事可做 5.study for a test 为考试学习 6.take the train 乘火车 7. buy something special for Dad 给爸爸买一些特别的东西 8.feel bored 感到无聊 9.go to the mountains 去山区 (二) 常用句型积累  1、The weather was sunny / cloudy / windy / rainy / snowy / cold / ... 2、It was a nice / sunny / cloudy / windy / rainy / snowy / cold / ... day. 3、I took the plane / train / bus / car / ... there. 4、 I went there with ... 5、I stayed there for a day. 6、First we ... Then we ... After that, we ... 7、In the morning, we ... At lunch, we ... In the afternoon, we ... 8、The food was delicious / terrible. 9、There I saw many different kinds of ... 10、It took me half an hour / ... to visit it. 11、The guide told / taught me ... 12、All in all / In short, it was a(n) ... trip. ◆开头句 ①The weather was fine today. I went to the beach for a trip with my classmates. ②I went to Beihai Park with my classmates in May and we had a great time there. ③I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer. ◆中间句 ①There were many people on vacation. ②We also took lots of pictures of the flowers there. ③In the afternoon,we went on a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together. ◆结尾句 ①All of us had a great time! ②All in all,it was a wonderful trip. I'm looking forward to visiting there again. ③I was tired but happy. I hope to visit Beijing again. ◆名言积累 ①Life is short and the world is wide.生命短暂，世界广阔。 ②It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. 读万卷书不如行万里路。 【实例讲解1】 ◆写作任务（Section B 3c） 假如你和父母周六(3月26日)在杭州观光，请你用英语写一篇旅游日记，把你们的经历记录下来。 ◆审清题目 内容：记录当天去某地的旅游经历，应着重记录你所看到的、听到的和你的感受。 文体：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为记叙文。 时态：记叙过去发生的事情，用一般过去时。 人称：以第一人称I或we为主。 ◆头脑风暴 What did you do? What did you see or hear? Where did you go? How did you feel about the trip? ◆提供素材 (以去杭州为例，展示去游览以下景点如何搜集所需语言素材) ◆常用单词和短语 在横线上填写单词或短语。 地点 活动 见闻 评价 West Lake (1)______________(绕着湖四处走走), take a boat on the lake, enjoy the beauty of the lake green trees, beautiful flowers, different kinds of boats, Three Pools Mirroring the Moon (三潭印月) beautiful, (2)______________(绝妙的) Meijiawu Tea Culture Village visit the tea houses, pick fresh tea leaves (新鲜的茶叶), make tea, drink Longjing tea, (3)______________(了解很多关于绿茶的知识), taste farm food hundreds of tea trees, a village with over 600 years' history, tea art performances (表演) great, quiet Qinghefang Street visit some old stores, (4)___________(给爷爷奶奶买礼物), try local snacks (当地小吃) lots of stores, restaurants, tea houses, (5)____________(古画), old buildings, delicious food, nice works of art interesting, great Zhejiang Science and Technology Museum (科技馆) learn something about Chinese medicine (中医), (6)________(尝试不同种类的运动), experience a typhoon (体验台风), watch science movies, go to the gift shop all kinds of robots exciting, (7)______________(令人愉快的) Key: 1. walk around the lake   2. wonderful / great   3. learn a lot about green tea  4. buy gifts for grandparents / buy grandparents gifts   5. old paintings   6. try different kinds of sports   7. enjoyable ◆常用句型 • The weather was sunny / cloudy / windy / rainy / snowy / cold / ... • It was a nice / sunny / cloudy / windy / rainy / snowy / cold / ... day. • I took the plane / train / bus / car / ... there. • I went there with ... • I stayed there for a day. • First we ... Then we ... After that, we ... • In the morning, we ... At lunch, we ... In the afternoon, we ... • The food was delicious / terrible. • There I saw many different kinds of ... • It took me half an hour / ... to visit it. • The guide told / taught me ... • All in all / In short, it was a(n) ... trip. 【谋篇布局】将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 Key: 1. We took a boat on the lake 2. The tea was so fresh that we all liked it / The tea was fresh and we all liked it 3. They were really delicious 4. Some can draw (pictures) and some can sell drinks 5. the trip was fun / interesting 【实例解析2】 5月1日，你们班组织了一次郊游。请根据表格提示，发挥想象，写一篇英语日记，记叙这次假期旅行。 Date Friday,May 1st Weather fine Place beach People friendly Activities play beach volleyball,eat seafood Feeling great 要求： 1.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.80词左右。 ►►审题指导 1.文体：应用文 2.人称：第一人称 3.时态：一般过去时 4.写作要点：明确写作要点，所给的要点要全，并加入自主发挥的部分。 ►►思路点拨 ►►范文赏析 Friday,May 1st The weather was fine today. I went to the beach for a trip with my classmates.There were many people on vacation. They were friendly to each other.At first,we walked along the beach. It was relaxing. Then we played beach volleyball.When we were tired,we lay on the beach and relaxed.At noon,we felt a little hungry,so we tried something special—seafood. How delicious it was! All of us had a great time! Friday,May 1st     We ①arrived at the beach at ten  o'clock in the morning. It was a sunny and  fine day,so we decided to play beach  volleyball with the people there. To catch the  ball,everyone ②jumped up and down with  excitement.I ③felt like I was a bird in the  air. People there were friendly to us,too. At  twelve,it was time for lunch. We tried the  seafood,a special dish there.  After lunch,we just stayed on the bus to read or relax for half an hour. In the afternoon,we did something relaxing—lying on the beach. The sun was ④so warm that we just forgot the time. It was a really great day,⑤wasn't it? 点评： ①arrived at，②jumped up  and down with excitement 和③felt like等短语的使用 使文章的描述更加生动形 象。 ④so…that…引导的结果状 语从句和⑤wasn't it反意疑 问句的使用使文章的表达 更加丰富、高级。 本篇范文语言丰富生动， 同时能够活学活用本单元 所学知识，如jumped up and down with excitement，felt like和 so…that…等。 【实战演练】 旅行中值得我们关注的是途中的人和事，还有那些美好的经历和景色。要么读书，要么旅行，灵魂和身体必须有一个在路上。请用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你的一次旅行经历。 要点提示： 1.When and where did you go? 2.What did you do there? 3.How did you feel? 审题指导 1.文体：________ 2.人称：__________ 3.时态：____________ 4.写作要点：①________________________________； ②__________________________；③________________。 ►►思路点拨 ►►小试身手 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文： Beihai Park is one of the most popular places to visit in Beijing. I visited there with my classmates in May and we enjoyed ourselves. We arrived there early in the morning. The air was cool and fresh. As we walked along the lake,we saw many people doing exercise and dancing. We also took quite a few pictures of the beautiful flowers there. Then we crossed the bridge and climbed up the hill. The views from the top of the hill was so beautiful that we felt like we were in a picture. In the afternoon,we went on a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together. All in all,it was a wonderful trip. I'm looking forward to visiting there again. 【真题解析】 1．（2022秋·山东临沂·八年级校考阶段练习）在新学期开始之际，校英语报发起了题为“A Wonderful Vacation”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的暑假中一次难忘的经历，向校报投稿。 内容提示： l. Where did you go? 2. What did you do there? 3. How did you like it? 要求：90词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 A Wonderful Vacation I went to Qingdao with my sister this summer vacation. We had a good time there. Qingdao has many places of interest. First, we went to the beach. The sea was as blue as the sky. And there was always sunshine and soft wind, which made us so comfortable. We also took many photos there. Later we went to sea life center. We saw many amazing sea creatures and learned more about them. Also, I bought many beautiful souvenirs for my parents and friends. And my sister took me to taste all kinds of delicious seafood. Although we were tired, we wanted to visit Qingdao again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“去哪度假了，做了什么，有什么感受”的要点，同时可适当添加细节，使文章内容丰富。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己去哪里度假； 第二步，具体介绍度假期间都去了哪里，做了什么事情； 第三步，表明度假感受。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②as…as和……一样…… ③all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] ①And there was always sunshine and soft wind, which made us so comfortable.（which引导非限制性定语从句） ②Although we were tired, we wanted to visit Qingdao again.（Although引导让步状语从句） 2．（2021秋·八年级课时练习）刚刚过去的国庆节正值新中国成立70周年。你最想对祖国母亲说什么呢？国庆节也是饱览祖国大好河山的黄金周，你到了什么地方？请写下你的旅游经历，参加校刊“英语角”的征文活动。 要求：60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Oct 1 is Chinese National Day. This year is the 70th birthday of our motherland. I want to say: ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Oct 1 is Chinese National Day. This year is the 70th birthday of our motherland. I want to say: I am proud of you and love you forever. I visited several places during National Day. Mount Tai was the most unforgettable place. I still remember my dad and I went to climb it in the early morning. I enjoyed the sunshine and took in fresh air. I was so close to nature and loved it. Seeing the mountains with large rocks around me and the waterfall below us, I smiled. I enjoyed my success in reaching the top. And I was proud of the great rivers and mountains of our country. 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生介绍国庆节期间的旅游经历，属于记叙文写作，需注意写清楚游览经过。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般过去时为主，以一般现在时为辅来叙述。写作时承接开头，要写出游览的地点、时间、经过，最后介绍自己的感受。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 3．（2018秋·八年级单元测试）书面表达。 假如你是林涛，去年夏天去北京度假，参观过许多地方。以My vacation 为题，写一篇60词左右的短文。 内容包括： 1. 旅游景点（the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, Tian'anmen Square, Beijing hutong)； 2. 天气、活动； 3. 观点或感受等。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My vacation Last summer, I went to Beijing on vacation with my father. The weather was sunny and hot. First we visited the Great Wall. There were a lot of people on the Great Wall. It is really the longest wall in the world. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square. We took many photos there. We also visited some other interesting places in Beijing. We visited Beijing hutong, too. We had a great time there. I hope to go there again. 【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，结合所给写作信息，以“My vacation”为话题，把“旅游景点、 天气、活动以及观点或感受”等有条理地表达出来。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般过去时态为主，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了on vacation, a lot of，in the world, the next day，take many photos，and, have a great time，hope to do等词或固定搭配，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰；还使用了It is really the longest wall in the world.最高级比较的句型，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。 4．（2018秋·八年级单元测试）书面表达： 介绍刚过去的暑假中你和家人或朋友的一次旅行。 80词左右。注意时态！ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】On my vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. we went there by train. we stayed there for a week. The weather there was very hot and dry. We went to the Great Wall. There were so many people. Then we went to the Science Museum. We saw many interesting things. They were wonderful. We also went to a Beijing Hutong. We went shopping and had delicious food. People were very friendly. we had a good time there. 【详解】介绍刚过去的暑假中你和家人或朋友的一次旅行。 80词左右。注意时态，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来，表达出旅行中的所见所闻，表达出自己的观点等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】这篇短文作者其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含表语从句的准确使用是本文的一大亮点.如There were so many people. Then we went to the Science Museum. We saw many interesting things.，学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 5．（2021秋·广东韶关·八年级统考期中）以My Vacation为题写一篇短文，描述你的假期，介绍一下你去过的地方。 内容提示：1.去哪里玩： 2.游玩经历： 3.谈谈你的感受。 作文要求： 1.    不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 2.    语句连贯，词数80个左右。 My Vacation ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last summer vacation. I went to the beach with my parents. The weather was sunny and hot.    In the morning, my father and I played beach volleyball. My mother read books and rested on the beach. In the afternoon, the sea water was so warm that we could swim in the sea. We felt comfortable when we were in the water. In the evening, it was cool. I went fishing with my father. It was interesting. I loved the beach. The most unforgettable thing was the sea food. It was so delicious. I want to go there again. 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求根据提示，介绍一次旅行。内容包括游玩地点、游玩经历及感受。首先，我们要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达。然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作。时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合。在叙述旅行的活动经历时用一般过去时，描述景点的景色和自己的收获时，用一般现在时。文章要紧扣题目要点，层次要分明，条理要清晰。 6．（2021秋·山东青岛·八年级青岛市城阳第九中学校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，下节英语口语课老师要求你们分享去年暑假是如何度过的。请你根据以下提示，以My Summer Holiday为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你的旅行经历，为口语课活动做准备。 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do? 3. How did you like the trip? 要求： 1. 内容应包含所有提示，可适当发挥。 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺，连贯。 3. 80词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】[例文] My Summer Holiday During last summer holiday, I traveled to Beijing with my parents. We stayed there for five days. We lived in a very beautiful hotel. We visited the Tiananmen Square, the Imperial Palace, the Summer Palace and the Old Summer Palace. We also went to the Great Wall. The weather was very hot, but we were exciting. I had a joyful summer holiday there last year. I like Beijing very much. I hope I can go there again. 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“My Summer Holiday”为题写一篇作文，介绍自己去年暑假的旅行经历。 2.写作指导：以李华的名义叙述自己的旅行经历，人称应用第一人称，记叙去年发生的事情时态应用过去时，抒发自己的感想时可用现在时。文章所给三个要点提示都要涉及到，要做到思路清晰、层次分明，不要出现单词拼写和语法时态使用错误。 7．（2022秋·八年级课时练习）提示：假期是我们生活中最快乐的时光。在假期里，你做过什么？有什么收获？请以“A Meaningful Holiday”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的一个有意义的假期。 要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 A Meaningful Holiday _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Meaningful Holiday I’m Jerry from No.1 Middle School. I’d like to share my meaningful holiday with you. During the holiday, I developed a habit of reading, and I kept reading books every day. It not only opened my eyes, but also brought a lot of fun to me. Besides, I kept on doing sports, such as playing basketball or table tennis. Last but not least, I went to Beijing with my parents. We visited the Great Wall and Tian’anmen Square there. I took many photos and I was very excited. This was how I spent my holiday. It was meaningful, wasn’t it? 【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“A Meaningful Holiday”为题写一篇作文，介绍自己假期做了什么，以及有什么收获。 写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般过去时为主，描述假期生活经历及个人的收获。注意要紧扣题目，语言的表述符合语法的结构和英语的表达习惯。 【直击中考】 2024·云南·中考真题 你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Close to Nature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟（如郊游、研学、劳动实践等），或谈谈接近自然的好处。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 【答案】例文 Getting Close to Nature Nature is the greatest gift of God to human beings. It is the source of our life and the most beautiful scenery in the world. It is very important for us to get close to nature. First of all, getting close to nature can help us to relax. Second, getting close to nature can help us to build a healthy lifestyle. Finally, getting close to nature can help us to appreciate the beauty of nature. In conclusion, getting close to nature is very important for us. We should take some time to enjoy the beauty of nature and protect the environment. 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：要求以“Getting Close to Nature”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明亲近自然的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍亲近自然的好处； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① get close to nature 亲近自然 ② First of all 首先 ③ In conclusion 总之 ④ protect the environment 保护环境 [高分句型] ① It is very important for us to get close to nature.（It固定句型） ②We should take some time to enjoy the beauty of nature and protect the environment.（并列结构） 2024·福建·中考真题 假设你是李华，学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友Henry对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示，用英语给他写一封信，谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 【答案】例文 Dear Henry, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. Let me tell you something about it. In the morning, we visited the History Museum. We learned about the history of the Long March. Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art. We also watched local opera performances that are educational. The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of Chinese traditional art! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：结合所给图示完成写作，注意不要遗漏信息；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，告诉对方自己去了历史博物馆场进行实践活动； 第二步，具体介绍活动的时间以及过程； 第三步，谈谈此次活动带给自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① learn about了解到 ② not only... but also ... 不但……而且…… [高分句型] ① Let me tell you something about it.（祈使句） ② After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art.（定语从句） （2023·连云港）【图表类：连云港的介绍。地方元素介绍】走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。注意：（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。Welcome to LianyungangI’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Welcome to Lianyungang I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. Lianyungang lies in the north-east of Jiangsu. It’s famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It’s cool in summer. Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I’m sure you will enjoy it. Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”. Welcome to our hometown. We’re looking forward to meeting you soon. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明连云港的地理位置以及著名的景点； 第二步，介绍连云港丰富的文化和当地的人们以及食物； 第三步，最后邀请大家来连云港做客。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②moreover而且 ③look forward to doing期待做 [高分句型] Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”.（when引导的时间状语从句） （2023·襄阳）【提纲类：演讲稿：旅游】 今年五一，襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务，吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周，你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示，结合你的旅游或出行经历，写一篇英语演讲稿。 1.要点提示： (1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法； (2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历； (3)根据你的旅行感受，为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。 2.注意事项： (1)词数90左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear schoolmates, Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Dear schoolmates, Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here. Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon. Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. It was a great day. I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists. That’s all. Thank you! 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据内容提示，介绍自己的旅游经历和感受，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法； 第二步，详述你的一次旅游或出行经历； 第三步，提出自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①be  interested in对……感兴趣 ②at the same time同时 ③places of interest名胜古迹 [高分句型] ①Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.（非限制性定语从句） ②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句） （2023·浙江宁波）【图表类：文化活动介绍】 为了弘扬传统文化，你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日（中国旅游日）开展了丰富多彩的文化活动（cultural activities）。假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。 注意： （1）短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； （3）词数80—100；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 When What I did What I learned Feelings in the morning visit Ningbo Museum the long history of the city ... at noon make Ningbo Tangyuan a symbol of family get-togethers in the afternoon ... ... My Traditional Cultural Experiences On May 19, our school organized ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Traditional Cultural Experiences On May 19, our school organized many traditional cultural activities. I was happy that I learned a lot. In the morning, I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts. Everyone was excited to learn about the long history of the city. At noon, we made Ningbo Tangyuan (Dumplings). We learned it was a symbol of family get-togethers. In the afternoon, we read many ancient local stories and shared them in the story-telling competition, learning about the traditional values of our city. These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind. 【解析】 详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据表格提示介绍一天做的事情和自己学到的东西； 第二步，表达自己的个人感受。 [亮点词汇] ①learn about了解 ②a symbol of……的象征 ③not only...but also...不但……而且…… [高分句型] In the morning, I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts.（and连接两个并列结构） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$