Unit 1 写作讲义2024-2025学年人教版英语七年级上册

2024人教七上英语写作 Unit 1 You and Me 单元话题分析 【课标话题】 人与自我---自我认识，自我管理，自我提升 本单元以“结交新朋友”为话题，要求写一篇短文，让同学们向他人做自我介绍，认识自我。在写作的过程中主要涉及介绍自己的姓名，年龄，家庭，爱好等内容。 【写作题目】 英国网友Richard在网络上发了一个交友帖子，他想结交一位中国朋友，请你阅读他的帖子并用英语给他写一封回信。 Hi, I am Richard.I am 13 years old. I want to make friends with you. How old are you? Can you tell me something about you and your favourite things? Do you want to be my friend? 写作要求： 1. 文中须包括帖子中提到的问题，可适当发挥； 2. 词数60左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Richard, I’d like to be your friend. 写作思路 【审题】 · 审主题、审体裁：主题为自我介绍；体裁为说明文； · 审人称、审时态：通常以第一人称为主，若以他人视角写作，则用对应的第三人称；时态以一般现在时态为主；（本题以第一人称为主） · 审要点：本题中出现两个问题，问及年龄和喜欢的东西，除这两点之外，可自行梳理写作要点。自我介绍通常包含姓名，年龄，国家/国籍，家庭，爱好等。 【写作过程】 · 开头部分：引入主题,表明想要结交朋友的意向 I’d like to be your friend. 我想成为你的朋友。 I’d like to tell you something about myself. 我愿意告诉你一些关于我的事情。 I’d like to introduce myself to you. 我愿意给你介绍一下我自己。 Now let me tell you something about myself. 现在让我告诉你一些关于我的事情。 · 主题部分：自我介绍 · 结尾部分：再次表明自己愿意结交新朋友的意向，并希望能成为好朋友 I’d like to be your new friend. 我愿意成为你的朋友。 I’d like to make friends with you. 我愿意和你做朋友。 Would you like to make friends with me? 你想和我交朋友吗？ Would you like to be my friend? 你愿意做我的朋友吗？ I hope we will be good friends. 我希望我们将会成为好朋友。 I want to be your friend. 我想成为你的朋友。 【实用表达】 · 介绍姓名： My name is ./I’m . His name is ./He’s . Her name is ./She’s . · 介绍年龄： I’m years old. 我...岁了。 He/She is years old. 他/她...岁了。 · 介绍学校，班级： I study in Middle School. 我在...中学上学。 I’m in Class , Grade . 我在...年级...班。 · 介绍国家/居住地： I’m from ./I come from . 我来自... He/She is from ./ He/She comes from . 他/她来自... I live in with my . · 介绍性格： I’m (personality). He/She is (personality). · 介绍爱好： My(favourite)hobby is (doing). I like/love (to do/doing). I enjoy (doing). I am interested in (doing). I am fond of (doing). · 介绍家庭： There are people in my family. My family has people. They are . My father is a/an (job). He work in/at (place). · 介绍梦想： My dream is to be a/an . 我的梦想是成为一名... I dream to be a/an . 我梦想成为一名... I want to be a/an . 我想成为一名... I would like to be a/an . 我想成为一名... I dream of being a/an . 我梦想... 【词汇储备】 · 介绍性格 outgoing外向的，shy害羞的，quiet安静的，hard-working勤奋的，strict严格的，friendly友好 的，smart聪明的，patient耐心的，funny幽默的，active活跃的，optimistic乐观的，polite礼貌 的，creative有创造力的 · 介绍职业 teacher教师，doctor医生，nurse护士，engineer工程师，policeman警察；businessman商人，lawyer 律师，hairdresser理发师，driver司机，housewife家庭主妇 · 介绍爱好 play basketball/volleyball/football打篮球/打排球/踢足球，draw/paint画画，swim游泳，listen to music 听音乐，read读书，cook做饭，play the piano/violin/guitar 弹钢琴/拉小提琴/弹吉他，dance跳舞， play chess下国际象棋，hike远足，run跑步，climb mountains爬山，travel旅行，play computer games 玩电脑游戏 【小试牛刀】 1. 我很愿意告诉你一些关于我的事情。 I tell you something about myself. 2. 我们家有四口人。 four people in my family. 3. 我有一个弟弟，他很可爱。 I have a brother. He’s . 4. 我最喜欢的爱好是画画。 My favourite hobby is . 5. 我最喜欢的运动是乒乓球。 My favourite is . 6. 我和我的父母住在西安。 I Xi’an with my parents. 7. 我的妈妈是一名老师，她在学校工作。 My mother is and she works . 8. 我长大想成为一名医生。 I to be a doctor in the future. 9. 我性格外向，喜欢交朋友。 I’m and I like to . 10. 你愿意和我做朋友吗？ Would you like to with me? 【答案解析】 1. I would like to tell you something about myself. 2. There are four people in my family. 3. I have a brother. He’s cute. 4. My favourite hobby is drawing. 5. My favourite sport is ping-pong. 6. I live in Xi’an with my parents. 7. My mother is a teacher and she works at school. 8. I want to be a doctor in the future. 9. I’m outgoing and I like to make friends. 10. Would you like to make friends with me? 写作范例 英国网友Richard在网络上发了一个交友帖子，他想结交一位中国朋友，请你阅读他的帖子并用英语给他写一封回信。 Hi, I am Richard.I am 13 years old. I want to make friends with you. How old are you? Can you tell me something about you and your favourite things? Do you want to be my friend? 写作要求： 3. 文中须包括帖子中提到的问题，可适当发挥； 4. 词数60左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Richard, I’d like to be your friend. Dear Richard, I’d like to be your friend. Now let me tell you something about myself. My name is Li Mei. I’m 13 years old. Now I live in Xi’an with my parents. I study in No. 4 Middle School. I’m in Class 2, Grade 7. I’m friendly to my classmates. We often help each other. My favourite color is green. I have many green things. My favourite animals are monkeys because I think they are clever and funny. My favourite sport is tennis. I often play tennis with my father at weekends. I really like to make new friends. I hope we’ll be good friends in the near future. Li Mei 【亮点词汇】 live in...with... 和...住在... be friendly to 对...友好=be good to each other 彼此 in the near future 在不久的将来 【高分句型】 Now let me tell you something about myself. I hope we’ll be good friends in the near future. I’m friendly to my classmates. 写作练习 假如你叫李可，Sally 是你认识的新朋友，请根据下面表格中给出的有关Sally的个人信 息，以“My New Friend, Sally"为题， 写一篇作文。 姓名 Sally 年龄 13 国籍 England 爱好 打排球、听音乐、看书 Sally的家庭 4口人，爸爸，妈妈，姐姐 要求: 1.短文应包括所给要点，可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整: 3.文中不得出现你本人的姓名、所在学校名称和地址: 4.词数:不得少于50词。 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。) My New Friend, Sally I have a new friend and her name is 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$