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英语话题作文之节假日活动
英语话题作文之节假日活动
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目录
CONTENTS
范文及练习
细审题
列框架
列要点
篇章及复查
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列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
近年来我国的传统文化越来越受到世界各国人民的关注。假如Jimmy是你的美国网友,他想了解关于中国的传统节日—中秋节。请根据要点提示,用英语写一封邮件给他介绍该节日。
When is it celebrated?
Why do people celebrate it?
What do people do on this day?
What are your ideas about it?
要求:
1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息
4.词数不得少于70词(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
定主题
介绍中秋节
定时态
一般现在时
定人称:第三人称
定文体:说明文
定要点:
1.节日的时间
2.节日的来源
3庆祝节日的活动
4.对节日的看法
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
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开头:引出主题中秋节(已给出)
I feel really happy to know that you are interested in the Mid-Autumn Festival.
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
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正文:介绍中秋节的时间,来源,活动,看法。
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
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结尾:表达期许(已给出)
This is the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.
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列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
农历八月十五是中秋节(August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar)
据说这一节日来源于民间故事嫦娥奔月
(folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moom)
活动:团聚;赏月;吃月饼。(get together, admire the moon, eat mooncakes)
感受:中秋节增近了家人们的感情。(make family members closer together)
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正文:介绍中秋节的时间,来源,活动,看法。
表达节日日期的句型:
It’s on +日期
It is held on+日期
It is celebrated on+日期
It falls on+日期
It comes on+日期
It is celebrated on August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar.
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
农历八月十五是中秋节(August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar)
据说这一节日来源于民间故事嫦娥奔月
(folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moom)
活动:团聚;赏月;讲故事;吃月饼。(get together, admire the moon, tell stories, eat mooncakes)
感受:中秋节增近了家人们的感情。(make family members closer together)
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正文:介绍中秋节的时间,来源,活动,看法。
It is celebrated on August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar.
It comes from the most touching folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moon.
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
农历八月十五是中秋节(August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar)
据说这一节日来源于民间故事嫦娥奔月
(folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moom)
活动:团聚;赏月;吃月饼。(get together, admire the moon, eat mooncakes)
感受:中秋节增近了家人们的感情。(make family members closer together)
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正文:介绍中秋节的时间,来源,活动,看法。
It is celebrated on August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar.
It comes from the most touching folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moon.
People often get together to have a big dinner with their family.
Besides, they also admire the full bright moon.
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
农历八月十五是中秋节(August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar)
据说这一节日来源于民间故事嫦娥奔月
(folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moom)
活动:团聚;赏月;吃月饼。(get together, admire the moon, eat mooncakes)
感受:中秋节增近了家人们的感情。(make family members closer together)
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正文:介绍中秋节的时间,来源,活动,看法。
It is celebrated on August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar.
It comes from the most touching folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moon.
People often get together to have a big dinner with their family. Besides, they also admire the full bright moon.
It’s a tradition to eat mooncakes. How delicious the mooncakes are!
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
农历八月十五是中秋节(August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar)
据说这一节日来源于民间故事嫦娥奔月
(folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moom)
活动:团聚;赏月;吃月饼。(get together, admire the moon, eat mooncakes)
感受:中秋节增近了家人们的感情。(make family members closer together)
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正文:介绍中秋节的时间,来源,活动,看法。
It is celebrated on August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar.
It comes from the most touching folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moon.
People often get together to have a big dinner with their family. Besides, they also admire the full bright moon. It’s a tradition to eat mooncakes. How delicious the mooncakes are!
It’s my favorite festival because it brings family members closer together.
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
Dear Jimmy,
I feel really happy to know that you are interested in the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It is celebrated on August 15th of the Chinese lunar calender. It comes from the most touching folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moon. people often got together to have a big dinner with their family. Besides, we admire the full bright moon. It’s also a tradition to eat mooncakes. How delicious the mooncakes are. It’s my favorite festival because it brings family members closer together.
This is the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.
Yours,
Julie.
字数
拼写
calendar
标点
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语法(时态、
人称等)
get
they
逻辑、
连贯
On this special day,
It’s my honor to introduce this festival to you.
字体、
卷面
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列框架
范文及练习
列要点
篇章及复查
Dear Jimmy,
I feel really happy to know that you are interested in the Mid-Autumn Festival. It’s my honor to introduce this festival to you.
It is celebrated on August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar. It comes from the most touching folk story—Chang’e flies up to the moon.on this special day, people often get together to have a big dinner with their family. Besides, they admire the full bright moon. It’s also a tradition to eat mooncakes. How delicious the mooncakes are! It’s my favorite festival because it brings family members closer together.
This is the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.
Yours,
Julie.
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
假如你是张欢,两天后就是中国传统佳节—端午节。请根据提示语给恰逢来你校交流学校的David写一封email,邀请他和你的家人一起共度传统佳节。
提示语:What is it?What to do? When and where to meet?
要求:
1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息
4.词数不得少于80词
篇章及复查
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Thanks for listening!
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