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英语话题作文之环境保护
英语话题作文之环境保护
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目录
CONTENTS
范文及练习
细审题
列框架
列要点
篇章(分段、分层)
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
分段/分层
定主题
环境保护的措施
定人称
第一人称
“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法,以“ How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题,写一篇英语短文。要点如下:
骑自行车(by bike)或步行(on foot)上学;
垃圾分类(sort the rubbish);
节约水资源 (save water);
……
定时态
一般现在时,祈使句、情态动词构成的句子
定文体
建议、号召类文章
定要点
三个方面,适当进行拓展第四点
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
分段、分层
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开头第一段:
点明主题
(保护环境)
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正文第二段:
详细描述环保的建议
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结尾第三段:呼吁养成保护环境的习惯。
分三段
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
分段/分层
绿水青山是我们的财富。
总体强调环境保护的重要性
总体建议应该让家乡更美
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The clean water and green mountains are our treasures.
开头第一段:
点明主题
(保护环境)
It is very important to protect our environment.
We should make our hometown more beautiful.
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures.
It is very important to protect our environment. As students, we should try our best to make our hometown more beautiful.
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
分段/分层
骑自行车或步行上学(by bike or on foot)
垃圾分类(sort the rubbish)
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正文第二段:详细描述环保的建议。
We’d better go to school by bike or on foot in order to reduce air pollution.
We should learn to sort the rubbish.
Don’t throw away the litter everywhere and remember to sort the rubbish.
节约水资源(save water)
We should save water as soon as possible. For example, we can clean our floor when we finish washing the clothes.
社区周围植树(plant trees)
Planting trees around our neighborhood is also a good way.
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
分段/分层
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正文第二段:详细描述环保的建议。
First, we’d better go to school by bike or on foot in order to reduce air pollution.
Second,we should learn to sort the rubbish.
Don’t throw away the litter everywhere and remember to sort the rubbish.
Third, we should save water as soon as possible. For example, we can clean our floor when we finish washing the clothes.
Fourth, planting trees around our neighborhood is also a good way.
最常用的表分层词汇:
first, second, third, fourth;
firstly, secondly, thirdly, fourthly
first of all, what’s more, besides,
last but not least; in addition,
lastly, in a word,
however, but, for example, and
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
分段/分层
We should get into a good habit of protecting our environment.
We should get into a good habit of protecting our environment to make our hometown more and more beautiful.
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结尾:呼吁养成保护环境的习惯。
In a word, we should get into the good habit of protecting our environment to make our hometown more and more beautiful.
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
分段 分层
How to Make Our Home Town More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. It is very important to protect our environment. As students, we should try
our best to make our hometown more beautiful.
First, we’d better go to school by bike or on foot in order to reduce air pollution. Second, don’t throw away the litter everywhere and remember to sort the rubbish. Third, we should save water as soon as possible. For example, we can clean our floor when we finish washing the clothes. Fourth, planting trees around our neighborhood is also a good way.
In a word, we should get into the good habit of protecting our environment to make our hometown more and more beautiful.
总
分
总
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细审题
列框架
范文及练习
列要点
地球是人类共同的家园,假如你是李华,作为一名学生,应该为环境保护作出哪些贡献呢? 请以“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”为主题,写一份倡议书,呼吁大家从小事做起,尽最大的努力保护环境。
要点如下:1. 节约用水
2.乘公共交通工具
3. 垃圾分类
4. ......
分段 分层
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Thanks for listening!
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