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Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious! 单元话题作文讲练 话题分析 本单元的话题围绕“Festival（节日）”为主题，在写相关的作文时，要叙述清楚节日的时间、起源、相关风俗等，要描写人们的庆祝活动，表达要清楚、简洁。命题者一般是围绕大家熟知的节日、假期或者庆祝活动等来设置试题，要求考生根据已给出的提示或建议进行描写。话题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、庆祝方式等。此类题目通常采用要点提示的方式来考查。 Let’s watch a video about Chinese traditional culture! Lead in 3 What is your favorite Chinese festival? Why? Lead in 4 the Spring Festival the Lantern Festival Qingming Festival the Dragon Boat Festival the Double 7th Day / the Chinese Valentine’s Day the Mid-Autumn Festival the Double 9th Day Lunar New Year’s Eve When on the first day of the first lunar month on the 15th day of the first lunar month April 5th on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month on the 7th day of the seventh lunar month on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month on the 9th day of the ninth lunar month on the last night of the last lunar month … is celebrated on … Chinese Festivals What’s your favorite festival ? I think it’s the Spring Festival. When is the day? It’s on the first day of Chinese lunar year. Why do you like it so much? I guess because I can get lucky money from relatives and have fun. Free Talk The Spring Festival is the most important Chinese festival is. It is celebrated on _______________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ Introduce the Spring Festival: When is the festival celebrated? What do people usually do? What do you think of it? 7 When we talk about a festival, What else can we write? reason ？ feeling ？ story ？ Things to do ？ Things to eat ？ Writing What is your favorite Chinese festival? When is it? What do people eat? What do people do? Why do you like it? Theme: favorite Chinese festival 9 Write a letter to your pen pal and tell him/her about your favorite Chinese festival. Use your notes in 3a. Use the following expressions to help you: My favorite Chinese festival is… It is celebrated in/ on… During this festival, people… It’s my favorite festival because… It makes me feel… In your letter: First, introduce the festival and when it is celebrated. Then talk about what people do and eat. Finally, explain why you like it best and how it makes you feel. 3b In your letter In your letter: First, introduce the festival and when it is celebrated. Then talk about what people do and eat. Finally, explain why you like it best and how it makes you feel. My favorite Chinese festival is… … is one of the traditional festivals in China. It is celebrated in/on … Chinese have been celebrating it for… During the festival, people usually… One of the most exciting things is… It’s my favorite festival because… It makes me feel happy and… How interesting/fantastic …! In my opinion, we should… 点明主题 节日习俗 看法与意愿 What is the name of the festival? When is it? What do people eat? What do people do? Why do you like it so much? the Spring Festival. on the first day of the first lunar calendar. Jiaozi, niangao, fish. ✱clean the house several days before the festival ✱buy new clothes ✱make dumplings ✱watch the Spring Gala on TV and have a reunion dinner with the family on the eve ✱visit relatives during the festival ✱give “lucky money” to children/ get “lucky money” Enjoy meeting relatives Enjoy getting “lucky money” Enjoy setting off firecrackers 3a Your English-speaking pen pal wants to know about your favorite Chinese festival. Make some notes about the festival. ◆ 定体裁：信件为应用文 ◆ 定人称：给朋友写信，人称为第一人称和第二人称 ◆ 定时态：介绍喜欢的节日，一般用一般现在时 ◆ 定要点：1. 介绍你喜欢的节日和庆祝时间； 2. 人们在节日期间做什么、吃什么； 3. 你喜欢这个节日的原因，对节日的感受。 Step 1---审 My favourite Chinese festival Step 2---列 1. What’s the festival and when is it? 2.What do people do and eat? 3.Why do you like the festival? Beginning （开头） Body （内容） Ending （结尾） Step 3---构 First, introduce the festival and when it is celebrated. Then talk about what people do and eat. Finally, explain why you like it best and how it makes you feel. Beginning 引话题 Body 具体的学习方法 Ending 祝愿 My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It is celebrated on the first day of the first lunar month. It is my favorite festival because it’s a time for all the family members to get together. It makes me feel happy and warm. On the eve of the Spring Festival, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. After the meal we watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. All the family stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year. On the first day of the new year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. When meeting others outside, we send greetings to each other. All of us have a good time during the festival. Step 4---连 在有把握的情况下灵活使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想，使文增色. Step 5 ---美 1. My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals as well as my favorite. 2. It makes me feel happy and warm. It can not only make me feel love and happiness, but also let me know the importance of home and family. 用词方面: 代词主格,宾格； 名词单复数； 动词搭配；副词位置 句子方面: 篇章方面: 细节方面: 句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态； 连词使用 内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理 单词拼写；标点符号；大小写 Step 6---查 a festival activities food name symbols stories date Let’s talk about how to write a passage about a festival. opinions /reasons What’s the name of the festival? When is the festival? What do people eat on this festival? What do people do on this festival？ Are there any traditional stories about this festival? What are the symbols of this festival? What do you think of this festival? Why do you like it so much? My Favorite Festival Beginning: Introduce the festival and when it is celebrated. My favorite Chinese festival is…/ I like …best./ ….is a traditional festival in China. It is celebrated in/on …(in Chinese lunar calendar) It comes/falls in/on… Body: Talk about what people do and eat. Before/During/After this festival, people usually…. Children…. Ending: Explain why you like it best and how it makes you feel. It’s my favorite festival because I can/enjoy…. It’s a time to do sth./for sth. It makes me feel happy/warm/sad/…. 用上衔接词: Also, What’s more, Besides, Moreover, More importantly 等。 About writing… 写作注意点: 1. 开门见山  2. 短语的使用应给予重视 3. 句式的多样性 4. 注意句子的衔接 并列关系：and, or, either...or,both...and, not only...but also, as well as  转折关系：but, however, yet, although  条件关系：if, whether, unless  时间关系：when, as, before, after, while, until, since, as soon as  原因关系：because, as, since, for Dear Sue, My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar. Before the festival, our houses have to be cleaned and we need to buy new clothes for a new year’s coming. On the eve, my family goes to my grandparents’ home for a reunion dinner. Our family usually has jiaozi, fish, niangao and a great many dishes. Sample writing: On the first day of our New Year, people wear their new clothes and visit family and friends. Children will receive red packets filled with “lucky” money. That’s one of my favorite parts of this festival. It’s my favorite festival because I enjoy spending time with my relatives. It makes me feel very happy and loved to be with my family! Yours truly, Mei Li 【实例分析】 假设你是李华，今天正逢端午节，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封回信。 1. 中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史(the Dragon Boat Festival; one of the Chinese traditional festivals; two thousand years of history); 2. 为了纪念著名诗人屈原(honor the great poet Qu Yuan); 3. 中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗(Dragon Boat races); 4. 家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食(eat zongzi and other delicious food); 5. 有三天假期，可以外出旅游(a 3-day holiday)。 要求： 1. 80词左右，书信格式； 2. 内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。 注意：不得出现学校，姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。 1. 审题：文体，时态，人称。 2. 抓要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。 3. 扩句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。 4. 连句成文：合理使用连词。 5. 改错误：拼写、语法(时态、主谓一致等)，连词是否恰当等。 6. 誊写：注意书写工整美观整洁。 六步法 体裁：应用文(书信)；书信的主体部分为说明文  时态：一般现在时 人称：以第三人称为主 注意书信格式。 注意不要遗漏给出的要点。 注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，运用合适的连接词和过渡词，语意要连贯。 I’m very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan people often get together with their family We have a 3-day holiday How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is Dear Jack, How’s it going? I’m very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. The festival is one of the Chinese traditional festivals. It has over two thousand years of history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to Chinese lunar calendar. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. To celebrate the festival, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious food. In the southern parts of China, people often have the Dragon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is and I like it very much. Best wishes!                                                                         Yours,                                                                         Li Hua 中考真题 （浙江温州）年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕( New Year cake)、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题,写一篇约10词的短文,向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭,让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。注意:文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出,不计入总词数。The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve 【参考范文】 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner. There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better" in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means "having more than we need". Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years. Every festival carries people’s good wishes for life! When we celebrate a festival, we should think about the culture and meaning behind it. As a Chinese, it’s our duty to introduce our traditional culture to our foreign friends. 初中英语 36 Lavf58.12.100 $$