Unit 1 Know yourself. （同步写作讲义）英语译林版九年级上册

Unit 1 know yourself ! 单元写作指导与演练 【话题分析】 本单元的话题是“认识自己”有关该话题的写 作体裁一般是介绍人物的记叙文。写作内容一般包括人物的外貌、性格、能力、影响和评价等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 1.介绍具体人物时，应按照一定的顺序写作，最后给出总结性的评价； 2. 结合本单元的Task部分，学习如何写推荐信. 根据本章节话题内容：书面表达可以写下面有关话题 【自荐信】 【介绍他人】 【谈理想职业】 【单词短语积累】 介绍人物 外貌特征 height, build,tall,short, heavy, thin, beautiful/ pretty, handsome... 性格特点shy, quiet, helpful, silent, active, organized, smart,friendly,funny,serious,strict, patient, kind,outgoing, get on well with, be good at, be ready to help sb乐于帮助某人 职业爱好actor,artist, engi neer,scienti st, habit, hobby, favourite,be interested in,fall in love with... 连接词：not only…but also…不仅……而且…… neither…nor…既不…也不… Most importantly最重要的是 Both…and…. 【经典佳句】 【自荐和介绍他人】 开头句 1. I am writing to recommend myself as your English reporter. 2. I’m writing to recommend Daniel as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. 3. I think I am suitable for the job. 4.I write to express my interest in... 我写信是为了表达我对……的兴趣。 5. I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of... 我写这封信是想询问一下能否…… 中间句 1. I learned from the newspaper that your company needed a part-time English secretary. 我从报纸上看到您的公司需要一名兼职英语秘书。 2. I have a good command of... 我……掌握得很好。 3. In my spare time, I read a lot. 我在闲暇时经常读书。 4. Being good at playing with children, I can do my best to help the kids. 我非常擅长和孩子一起玩，我会尽我最大的努力帮助他们。 5. In my opinion, volunteer work is great because it can help many people. 我认为志愿者的工作很伟大，因为它可以帮助很多人。 6. I think the job can not only help me improve my English, but also help me know more about the society. 我认为这份工作不仅能帮我提高英语水平，而且能帮助我更好地了解社会。 结尾句 1. If I have the chance to do the job, I’ll try my best. 2.I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. 3. I shall be much grateful if you will offer me an opportunity to an interview. 如果您能给我提供一个面试机会，我将不胜感激。 4. I hope you'll let me join your volunteer group. 我希望您能准许我加入您的志愿者团队。 5. I'm looking forward to your reply. 期待您的回复。 常用句式 l. He has the ability to manage the company and keep everything in great order・ 2.Sally is as friendly as Cathy. I like playing with them. 3 He’s of medium height, neither too tall nor too short. 4. Suzy is a very helpful person. She is very creative and often comes up with good ideas. She is curious and interested in things around her. And she is also very patient. 5. Both my teacher and classmates think highly of my writing. And I have won prizes in a few writing competitions. 6. Besides, he is organized enough to keep everything in good order. 7. I am willing to devote some of my spare time to this job. I am a hard-working girl and I always spend a lot of time reading and writing. 【写作框架设计】 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一或第三人称。 写作思路： 1.说明信息来源，并陈述自己或他人能够胜任 2.介绍自己或他人，具体说明能胜任的原因。 3.表达期望，请求尽快回复并给予机会。 【实战演练】 【自荐信】 1 (2023·福建中考) 某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。 What kind of person you are friendly, active… What you are good at speak English, tell stories… What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners… 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2 （2023·湖北荆门统考） 湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会近期在荆门成功举办，其景区已向市民开放，现面向全市中学生招募志愿者。假如你是李华，请用英文写一封自荐信。 要点： 1. 性格开朗，待人友善； 2. 面对困难，勇于挑战； 3. 对园艺兴趣浓厚，了解园林文化； 4. 有做志愿者的经历； 5. …… 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥； 4. 词数：80—100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会；garden culture园林文化；gardening园艺 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. Can I have the chance to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 3 阅读沁润人心，启智增慧，我们的书香校园处处飘香，风景独好。一年一度的“书香班级（Literary Class）”评选活动于本周正式拉开帷幕。假如你是一班班长李华，请你代表班级写一封参评推荐信，谈谈你们班书香教室的布置、班级师生对书籍的热爱与良好的阅读习惯，以及阅读给大家带来的益处。 要求： 字数不少于80词，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考信息： 1.书香教室布置（a reading corner; a wall newspaper …） 2.班级阅读热情与习惯（bookcrossing（漂书）; group discussions…） 3.阅读益处（……） Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua from Class One. I am writing to recommend my class to be the “Literary Class”, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 假如你叫王华，你校将开展“最美青年”评选活动，你们班决定推选Sandy参加本次评选，你草拟了介绍 Sandy的思维导图，请根据下图用英文写一封推荐信。 要求： 1. 参考导图提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于80 词。 (开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) Dear Sir or Madam, We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Hua 5 向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，想参加此次活动，请根据以下信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封100词左右的自荐信，表达你的个人优势以及对参加活动的期待。 要点提示： 1. Say something about yourself. 2. Why do you want to take part in the activity? 3. What do you hope to gain from the activity? 注意：1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.短文中不得泄露个人信息. Dear Mr. Yang, I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese Stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【介绍他人】 （2024·四川自贡） 学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括： 1. 人物简介(外貌，性格等)； 2. 他/她改变你的事件。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 短文标题已写好。 A Person Who Changes Me a Lot ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 榜样的力量是无穷的。你校九年六班的赵宇同学在学校2023年“榜样的力量” 评选活动中，荣获“新时代好少年” 的称号。作为校报记者，请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍他的事迹，并呼吁大家向他学习。 要求： 1. 内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥； 2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 至少含有两个复合句。 Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.__________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3 人生如旅，在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你，如：父母、老师、朋友、著名人物等。最近你市正举行“The person who has influenced me most”为题的英语征文活动，请你根据要点完成征文。 要点：1. 影响你最深的人是谁； 2. 为什么他/她对你影响最深（如：这个人的品质，他/她在哪方面帮助过你等等）； 3. 你的感想。 要求：1. 包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥； 2. 文中不能出现考生的真实校名、人名、地名等信息； 3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不记入总词数）。 The person who has influenced me most ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My Mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。 提示： 1．短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明； 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。 3．词数不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Mother We need love . We also need to love others . The person I love most is my mother. _______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【谈理想职业】 1 人生从来就离不开梦想。每个人都有自己理想中的工作，亲爱的同学，你理想中的工作是什么呢？让我们向自己设定的理想目标努力奋斗吧。请根据下面表格的提示，以“My dream job”为题，谈谈你理想中的工作以及选择这个工作的原因，并说明你会怎样努力去实现梦想。 Dream job Why What to do How to do A journalist (记者) ●get a lot of experience ●travel around the world …（考生自拟观点） ●write articles for magazines and newspapers ●…（考生自拟观点） ●go to university ●…（考生自拟观点） 要求： ①主题突出，要点齐全，条理清晰，语言规范； ②自拟观点切合主题，可适当发挥，80词左右； ③文中不得出现真实的学校、人名等信息。 My dream job _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 理想是人生导航的灯塔，它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。某英文报刊将举行以“理想”为主题的征文活动。请你以“My Dream Job”为题，结合下图提示及要求，写一篇英语短文投稿。 要求：1.用上图中提示的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My Dream Job It’s very important for us to be a middle school student with a dream. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 know yourself ! 单元写作指导与演练 【话题分析】 本单元的话题是“认识自己”有关该话题的写 作体裁一般是介绍人物的记叙文。写作内容一般包括人物的外貌、性格、能力、影响和评价等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 1.介绍具体人物时，应按照一定的顺序写作，最后给出总结性的评价； 2. 结合本单元的Task部分，学习如何写推荐信. 根据本章节话题内容：书面表达可以写下面有关话题 【自荐信】 【介绍他人】 【谈理想职业】 【单词短语积累】 介绍人物 外貌特征 height, build,tall,short, heavy, thin, beautiful/ pretty, handsome... 性格特点shy, quiet, helpful, silent, active, organized, smart,friendly,funny,serious,strict, patient, kind,outgoing, get on well with, be good at, be ready to help sb乐于帮助某人 职业爱好actor,artist, engi neer,scienti st, habit, hobby, favourite,be interested in,fall in love with... 连接词：not only…but also…不仅……而且…… neither…nor…既不…也不… Most importantly最重要的是 Both…and…. 【经典佳句】 【自荐和介绍他人】 开头句 1. I am writing to recommend myself as your English reporter. 2. I’m writing to recommend Daniel as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. 3. I think I am suitable for the job. 4.I write to express my interest in... 我写信是为了表达我对……的兴趣。 5. I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of... 我写这封信是想询问一下能否…… 中间句 1. I learned from the newspaper that your company needed a part-time English secretary. 我从报纸上看到您的公司需要一名兼职英语秘书。 2. I have a good command of... 我……掌握得很好。 3. In my spare time, I read a lot. 我在闲暇时经常读书。 4. Being good at playing with children, I can do my best to help the kids. 我非常擅长和孩子一起玩，我会尽我最大的努力帮助他们。 5. In my opinion, volunteer work is great because it can help many people. 我认为志愿者的工作很伟大，因为它可以帮助很多人。 6. I think the job can not only help me improve my English, but also help me know more about the society. 我认为这份工作不仅能帮我提高英语水平，而且能帮助我更好地了解社会。 结尾句 1. If I have the chance to do the job, I’ll try my best. 2.I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. 3. I shall be much grateful if you will offer me an opportunity to an interview. 如果您能给我提供一个面试机会，我将不胜感激。 4. I hope you'll let me join your volunteer group. 我希望您能准许我加入您的志愿者团队。 5. I'm looking forward to your reply. 期待您的回复。 常用句式 l. He has the ability to manage the company and keep everything in great order・ 2.Sally is as friendly as Cathy. I like playing with them. 3 He’s of medium height, neither too tall nor too short. 4. Suzy is a very helpful person. She is very creative and often comes up with good ideas. She is curious and interested in things around her. And she is also very patient. 5. Both my teacher and classmates think highly of my writing. And I have won prizes in a few writing competitions. 6. Besides, he is organized enough to keep everything in good order. 7. I am willing to devote some of my spare time to this job. I am a hard-working girl and I always spend a lot of time reading and writing. 【写作框架设计】 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一或第三人称。 写作思路： 1.说明信息来源，并陈述自己或他人能够胜任 2.介绍自己或他人，具体说明能胜任的原因。 3.表达期望，请求尽快回复并给予机会。 【实战演练】 【自荐信】 1 (2023·福建中考) 某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。 What kind of person you are friendly, active… What you are good at speak English, tell stories… What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners… 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I am suitable for the job. First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better understand the life of the village. I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封自荐信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 【写作步骤】 第一步，承接开头，介绍自己想成为“美丽乡村”项目的英语小导游； 第二步，具体阐述自己具备的品质和擅长做的事； 第三步，最后书写结尾，再次表达希望成为小导游中的一员。 【亮点词汇】 ①be suitable for适合于…… ②introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某物 ③Most importantly最重要的是 【高分句型】 ①I think I am suitable for the job.（省略that的宾语从句） ②I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.（if引导的条件状语从句；被动语态） 2 （2023·湖北荆门统考） 湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会近期在荆门成功举办，其景区已向市民开放，现面向全市中学生招募志愿者。假如你是李华，请用英文写一封自荐信。 要点： 1. 性格开朗，待人友善； 2. 面对困难，勇于挑战； 3. 对园艺兴趣浓厚，了解园林文化； 4. 有做志愿者的经历； 5. …… 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥； 4. 词数：80—100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会；garden culture园林文化；gardening园艺 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. Can I have the chance to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. Can I have the chance to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province? As a volunteer, not only can I help people in need, but also I can learn a lot from the experience. Outgoing and energetic, I get on well with others. When facing challenges in life, I always choose to deal with them bravely instead of staying behind. Gardening is exactly what I’m fond of and I have a good knowledge of different garden cultures which are quite helpful for the job. Last but not least, my experience of being a volunteer in the Flower Expo last year won high praise from others. I hope to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province so as to help people know more about the different garden cultures in Hubei Province. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容写一封自荐信介绍自己的情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，表明写作意图，申请做第三届（荆门）园林博览会的志愿者； 第二步，介绍自己的相关情况和优势； 第三步，书写结语。 【亮点词汇】 ①get on well with与……相处融洽 ②deal with处理 ③be fond of喜欢 ④Last but not least最后但同样重要的 【高分句型】 ①As a volunteer, not only can I help people in need, but also I can learn a lot from the experience.（not only...but also...连接并列句） ②Gardening is exactly what I’m fond of and I have a good knowledge of different garden cultures which are quite helpful for the job.（what引导的表语从句和which引导的定语从句） 3 阅读沁润人心，启智增慧，我们的书香校园处处飘香，风景独好。一年一度的“书香班级（Literary Class）”评选活动于本周正式拉开帷幕。假如你是一班班长李华，请你代表班级写一封参评推荐信，谈谈你们班书香教室的布置、班级师生对书籍的热爱与良好的阅读习惯，以及阅读给大家带来的益处。 要求： 字数不少于80词，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考信息： 1.书香教室布置（a reading corner; a wall newspaper …） 2.班级阅读热情与习惯（bookcrossing（漂书）; group discussions…） 3.阅读益处（……） Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua from Class One. I am writing to recommend my class to be the “Literary Class”, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua from Class One. I am writing to recommend my class to be the “Literary Class”, There is a reading corner in our class, and there are different kinds of books so that students can read any time. There is also a wall newspaper. There are some calligraphy tablets there. We often read books three times a week and we often work group to discuss what we have read. There is also bookcrossing, which enables us to read different kinds of books. Reading has a lot of benefits. It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge, and it makes us wiser in life. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示内容推荐自己班级为“书香班级”，适当增加细节。 【写作步骤】 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己班书香教室的布置、班级阅读热情与习惯； 第三步，介绍阅读的益处。 【亮点词汇】 ①different kinds of各种各样的 ②enable sb. to do sth.使某人能够做某事 ③be full of充满 【高分句型】 ①There is a reading corner in our class, and there are different kinds of books so that students can read any time.(so that引导的目的状语从句) ②We often read books three times a week and we often work group to discuss what we have read.(what引导的宾语从句) ③There is also bookcrossing, which enables us to read different kinds of books.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) 4 假如你叫王华，你校将开展“最美青年”评选活动，你们班决定推选Sandy参加本次评选，你草拟了介绍 Sandy的思维导图，请根据下图用英文写一封推荐信。 要求： 1. 参考导图提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于80 词。 (开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) Dear Sir or Madam, We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Sir or Madam, We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school. As the monitor in our class, Sandy often wears a smile on her face and looks very confident, who is always ready to help other students. She is interested in movies and she is good at decorating the house. Meanwhile, she has a strong sense of duty. Several months ago, after we finished the final exam, our teacher asked some volunteers to clean the classroom. She stood up immediately, and began to clean the classroom. Then it was certain that we were so touched by her unselfish behavior that almost all of my classmates began to help her to clean the classroom. Her sense of duty is the most important thing that a good monitor should have. Her motto is “Plan for the worst and hope for the best”. We think Sandy is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us. Yours, Wang Hua 【详解】【总体分析】 ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 【写作步骤】 第一步，开头已给出； 第二步，根据提示可知介绍Sandy的个人信息； 第三步，最后希望对方可以同意自己的请求。 【亮点词汇】 ①be ready to do乐意做 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③sense of duty责任感 【高分句型】 ①Sandy often wears a smile on her face and looks very confident, who is always ready to help other students.（who引导的非限制性定语从句） ②Her sense of duty is the most important thing that a good monitor should have.（that引导的定语从句） 5 向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，想参加此次活动，请根据以下信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封100词左右的自荐信，表达你的个人优势以及对参加活动的期待。 要点提示： 1. Say something about yourself. 2. Why do you want to take part in the activity? 3. What do you hope to gain from the activity? 注意：1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.短文中不得泄露个人信息. Dear Mr. Yang, I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese Stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear Mr. Yang, I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese Stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. It’s my great honor to introduce myself. I’m a boy from Class One, Grade Nine. My name is Li Hua and I’m 15 years old. I’m an outgoing boy. I have many hobbies, especially reading. I have read a lot of classics on Chinese history, so I’m familiar with Chinese history and culture. I want to take part in the activity because it is very meaningful. I can build up my culture confidence through the activity. Besides, I will feel proud that the world know more about China with my efforts. I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】【总体分析】 ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 【写作步骤】 第一步，介绍自己的一些情况； 第二步，介绍你为什么要参加这个活动； 第三步，最后表达你希望从这次活动中得到什么。 【亮点词汇】 ①be familiar with对……熟悉 ②take part in参加 ③look forward to期待 【高分句型】 ①I want to take part in the activity because it is very meaningful.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②Besides, I will feel proud that the world know more about China with my efforts.（that引导的宾语从句） 【介绍他人】 （2024·四川自贡） 学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括： 1. 人物简介(外貌，性格等)； 2. 他/她改变你的事件。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 短文标题已写好。 A Person Who Changes Me a Lot ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Person Who Changes Me a Lot In the past three years, my English teacher Mrs Xu have played an important role in my life. She changes me a lot. She is of medium height. She always has a smile on her face. She is kind to us. When I was a seventh-grade student, I was weak in English. I was afraid of speaking English in front of the classmates. Our school held an English speech competition. She encouraged me to take part in it and gave me some advice on how to learn English well. She gave me the strength to overcome the difficulty. With her help, I finished the speech successfully and won the third place. From then on, I became interested in English and made great progress. Thank to her, I realize that I should face the difficulties bravely. As long as I work hard, I will succeed. 【详解】【总体分析】   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   【写作步骤】   第一步，介绍改变自己的人是谁；   第二步，介绍她对自己的影响。   【亮点词汇】   ①play a role in在……中扮演角色   ②be of medium height中等身材 ③be weak in不擅长 ④be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事 ⑤take part in参加 【高分句型】 ①She encouraged me to take part in it and gave me some advice on how to learn English well.（疑问词+动词不定式结构） ②As long as I work hard, I will succeed.（条件状语从句） 2 榜样的力量是无穷的。你校九年六班的赵宇同学在学校2023年“榜样的力量” 评选活动中，荣获“新时代好少年” 的称号。作为校报记者，请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍他的事迹，并呼吁大家向他学习。 要求： 1. 内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥； 2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 至少含有两个复合句。 Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.__________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you. Zhao Yu is 15 years old. He is in Class Six, Grade Nine. He has some hobbies. He likes playing ping-pong. He thinks it’s relaxing. He is also good at playing the erhu. Zhao Yu is very creative and he has invented some small things. He even won two prizes for his inventions. Zhao Yu is helpful. When he is free, he usually works as a volunteer in the community. Also, he is active. He often takes part in many meaningful activities. Zhao Yu is so kind that all his classmates like him. Zhao Yu is an excellent boy. Let’s learn from him. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“新时代好少年”赵宇同学的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点；注意文中要包含两个以上的复合句。 【写作步骤】 第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）； 第二步，具体介绍赵宇的个人信息和事迹； 第三步，做出评价，并呼吁大家一起向他学习。 【亮点词汇】 ①be good at擅长 ②work as以……身份而工作 ③take part in参加 ④learn from sb向某人学习 【高分句型】 ①He thinks it’s relaxing.  (宾语从句) ②When he is free, he usually works as a volunteer in the community.(when引导的时间状语从句) ③Zhao Yu is so kind that all his classmates like him.(so...that引导的结果状语从句) 3 人生如旅，在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你，如：父母、老师、朋友、著名人物等。最近你市正举行“The person who has influenced me most”为题的英语征文活动，请你根据要点完成征文。 要点：1. 影响你最深的人是谁； 2. 为什么他/她对你影响最深（如：这个人的品质，他/她在哪方面帮助过你等等）； 3. 你的感想。 要求：1. 包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥； 2. 文中不能出现考生的真实校名、人名、地名等信息； 3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不记入总词数）。 The person who has influenced me most ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 The person who has influenced me most     The person who has influenced me most is my mother, and I think she is the greatest person in my heart.      I have respected my mother since I was a little child. My mother is an excellent teacher. She is strict with her students. At the same time, she loves her students.     Also, my mother always cares about me in her way. When I have problems at school or fail in exams, she always encourages me to solve them by myself.     Moreover, my mother is full of love. She has been a volunteer as a teacher in a poor area for a year. She often tries her best to help the children in need.     My mother was not only a kind mother but also a good teacher. I will love her forever, and I want to be a person like her. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇征文，为材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”。 ③提示：文章为第三人称，介绍影响自己最深的人，题目中给出的要点描述完整，适当增加细节，注意过渡词的衔接。 【写作步骤】 第一步，介绍妈妈是对自己影响最深的人； 第二步，具体介绍妈妈从哪些方面影响了自己，阐述其做了哪些事情，有哪些品质； 第三步，总结，表达自己对妈妈的爱。 【亮点词汇】 ① not only but also不仅……而且 ② be strict with对某人严格 ③ At the same time与此同时 ④ care about关心 ⑤ encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ⑥ be full of充满 ⑦ try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事 ⑧ in need困难中的 ⑨ Moreover此外 ⑩ by oneself独自 【高分句型】 ①The person who has influenced me most is my mother, and I think she is the greatest person in my heart.（who引导定语从句+并列句+that引导宾语从句） ②I have respected my mother since I was a little child.（since引导时间状语从句） ③When I have problems at school or fail in exams, she always encourages me to solve them by myself.（when引导时间状语从句） 4 母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My Mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。 提示： 1．短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明； 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。 3．词数不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Mother We need love . We also need to love others . The person I love most is my mother. _______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My mother We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food. She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me. When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think. 【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。 写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 考点：提纲作文。 【谈理想职业】 1 人生从来就离不开梦想。每个人都有自己理想中的工作，亲爱的同学，你理想中的工作是什么呢？让我们向自己设定的理想目标努力奋斗吧。请根据下面表格的提示，以“My dream job”为题，谈谈你理想中的工作以及选择这个工作的原因，并说明你会怎样努力去实现梦想。 Dream job Why What to do How to do A journalist (记者) ●get a lot of experience ●travel around the world …（考生自拟观点） ●write articles for magazines and newspapers ●…（考生自拟观点） ●go to university ●…（考生自拟观点） 要求： ①主题突出，要点齐全，条理清晰，语言规范； ②自拟观点切合主题，可适当发挥，80词左右； ③文中不得出现真实的学校、人名等信息。 My dream job _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream Job Rich or poor, young or old, we all dream about our future jobs once. As for me, my dream job is to be a journalist when I grow up. The reason why I want to do this is that I want to get a lot of experience and travel around the world. And I enjoy meeting different kinds of people and sharing their stories with others. In order to make my dream come true, I’m going to do the following things step by step. First, I will read many books and practice writing every day. Then, I’m going to write articles for magazines and newspapers. What’s more, I am going to study in Beijing after high school. Last but not least, I want to work at a TV station and travel all over the world for self-improvement. All in all, at the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say only if I hold on to my dream can I make it come true. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：要求根据表格内容谈谈你理想中的工作以及选择这个工作的原因，并说明你会怎样努力去实现梦想。学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 【写作步骤】 第一步，首先介绍你理想中的工作是什么； 第二步，具体阐述选择这个工作的原因； 第三步，谈谈你会怎样努力去实现梦想。 【亮点词汇】 ①grow up长大 ②different kinds of各种各样的 ③In order to为了 ④All in all总而言之 【高分句型】 ①All in all, at the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say only if I hold on to my dream can I make it come true.（倒装句） 2 理想是人生导航的灯塔，它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。某英文报刊将举行以“理想”为主题的征文活动。请你以“My Dream Job”为题，结合下图提示及要求，写一篇英语短文投稿。 要求：1.用上图中提示的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My Dream Job It’s very important for us to be a middle school student with a dream. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version My Dream Job It’s very important for us to be a middle school student with a dream. My dream is to become an excellent doctor. Illness makes many people’s lives terrible. It’s a great thing to make them be healthy and live better. I am patient and careful. I think I can be a good doctor. To realize my dream is not easy. First, I must study hard all the time and never give up. I may meet difficulties, but I won’t be afraid of them. Success belongs to the person who has courage to overcome difficulties. Second, I must be confident. As the saying goes, “Being confident is half of success.” Confidence will help me learn medicine better. Third, I need to have the courage to explore. It will make me better and better. I must be a good doctor and bring health to people. Hope my dream can come true one day. 【详解】【总体分析】 ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，介绍梦想的工作是什么； 第二步，具体介绍其中的原因； 第三步，最后说明如何实现梦想。 【亮点词汇】 ①give up放弃 ②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③come true实现 【高分句型】 ①My dream is to become an excellent doctor.（动词不定式作表语） ②Success belongs to the person who has courage to overcome difficulties.（who引导定语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$