UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ Writing（Word教参）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语必修第二册（人教版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing [对应学生用书P83] 1．写作词汇再现 ①download下载 ②blog博客；写博客 ③delete删除 ④file文件；文件夹；档案 ⑤exactly精确地 ⑥automatic自动的 ⑦process加工；处理 ⑧intelligent智能的 ⑨digital数字的；数码的 ⑩function功能；作用；机能 ⑪instant立即的；即食的 ⑫drawback缺点；不利条件 ⑬advanced先进的；高级的 ⑭calculate计算；核算；推测 ⑮surf the Internet上网 ⑯break down发生故障 ⑰high­tech products高科技产品 ⑱electronic books电子图书 ⑲text message短信 ⑳be addicted to ...沉迷于…… shop on the Internet 网上购物 catch on 变得流行；理解 potential ability 潜能 change one's life 改变某人的生活 2．精彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子 ①With the development of society，computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. ②This app provides a platform for us to show our talent and release our pressure，which makes it more and more popular. ③The more(much) attention you pay to your safety online，the safer(safe) you will be. ④虽然我们习惯了有智能手机和互联网的生活，但我们不应该沉迷于它们。 Although we get used to living with smartphones and the Internet，we should not be addicted to them. ⑤今天我想写博客谈谈关于如何安全上网以及避免在互联网上遇到不愉快的经历的一些黄金法则。 Today I'd blog about some golden rules of how to stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet. ⑥保护你的隐私，不要将你的地址、电话等个人信息泄露给他人。 Protect your privacy，and never leak your personal information such as your address or phone number to others. Ⅰ　博文写作 写一篇关于网络安全的博客 [对应学生用书P84] ►文体感知 博客(blog)以网络为载体，通过它人们可以简易便捷地发布自己的心得，及时、有效、轻松地与他人进行交流。博客是一种集丰富多彩的个性化展示于一体的综合性写作形式，通常又被称为“网络日志”。博客大部分是议论文，是针对某一问题或事件进行分析、评论，表明自己观点的一种文体。 ►写作技巧 一篇完整的博客应包含标题(title)、介绍(introduction)、主体(body)和结语(ending)。 1．标题：简洁且有吸引力。概括主题，可以用动词短语、名词短语或问句作为标题； 2．介绍：引出博客的话题以及论点； 3．主体：分析、论证论点，提出建议，表明看法； 4．结语：邀请读者评论。 ►典例展示 随着网络和智能手机的普及，越来越多的人开始关注网络安全。在聊天室聊天已经成为人们生活中不可或缺的一部分。请就聊天室的网络安全写一篇英文博客，内容包括： 1．不要泄露个人隐私； 2．要有礼貌； 3．不与网友见面。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to Be Safe in a Chatroom? [审题谋篇] 确定体裁、话题 体裁：博客 话题：网络安全 确定时态、人称 时态：一般现在时 人称：第二人称为主 布局文章架构 首段：描述问题或现象 中段：聊天的注意事项 尾段：总结并邀请读者评论 列出核心要点 1.网络聊天对人们生活的影响 2．注意事项： (1)不泄露私人信息 (2)礼貌上网 (3)不与网友见面 3．注意个人安全 [实践应用] 1．完成句子 ①随着互联网和智能手机的普及，在聊天室聊天已经成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。(popularity; chat) With the popularity of the Internet and smartphones，chatting in a chatroom has become one indispensable part of our life. ②越来越多的人开始关注它的安全性。 More and more people begin to pay attention to its safety． ③你在聊天室聊天时，不应该把你的私人信息泄露给别人。 (leak) When you chat in a chatroom，you should not leak your private information to others． ④和别人礼貌地交谈。 Speak politely with others. ⑤你越有礼貌，越小心，你就会越安全。(the＋比较级 ...，the＋比较级 ...) The more polite and careful you are，the safer you will be. ⑥更重要的是，你应该拒绝和你在网上遇到的人见面。 More importantly，you should refuse to meet people you've met online. ⑦这可能会使你的生命处于危险之中。(in danger) This may put your life in danger． ⑧在网上聊天时，你有什么好的保持安全的建议吗？请在下面发表你的评论！ Do you have any good advice for staying safe when chatting online? Post your comments below! 2．句式升级 ⑨用动词­ing形式作状语升级句③ When chatting in a chatroom，you should not leak your private information to others. ⑩用定语从句合并句⑥和句⑦ More importantly，you should refuse to meet people you've met online，which may put your life in danger. 3．靓化成篇 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 How to Be Safe in a Chatroom? [参考范文] How to Be Safe in a Chatroom? With the popularity of the Internet and smartphones，chatting in a chatroom has become one indispensable part of our life.Meanwhile，more and more people begin to pay attention to its safety. First of all，when chatting in a chatroom，you should not leak your private information to others.Besides，speak politely with others.The more polite and careful you are，the safer you will be.More importantly，you should refuse to meet people you've met online，which may put your life in danger. Do you have any good advice for staying safe when chatting online? Post your comments below! ►实战演练 假定你是李华，是某中学的一个学生。请以“How to Be a Civilized Netizen？”为题写一篇英文博客，谈谈作为中学生如何文明上网。内容包括： 1．远离网上的有害信息； 2．不沉迷于网络； 3．文明礼貌用语； 4．欢迎网友留言。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [参考范文] How to Be a Civilized Netizen? I am Li Hua，a senior high school student.Today I thought I'd blog about how to be a civilized netizen. First of all，keep away from the harmful information on the Internet.If you see or read something that makes you uncomfortable，leave the site immediately.Second，we should make good use of our time and not become addicted to the Internet.What we should do now is to concentrate more on our study.Third，express our ideas online politely.Don't post comments that are mean to others.The more polite we are，the more likely it is we will be respected. Do you have any good advice for being a civilized netizen? Your ideas are welcomed below！Ⅱ　读后续写 [对应学生用书P85] 读文章，根据提示补全后面续写的语段，并完成随后的提能训练。 My 12th birthday came at last.What a wonderful feeling it was to know that I turned twelve and that I might possibly get the thing I wanted most. I saw my mom and dad coming towards me with a small box wrapped up(包装) with nice pink paper with flowers on it.When I removed the paper and opened the box，I couldn't believe my eyes.I had got a cellphone！I ran to give my mom and dad the biggest hug ever，and said，“Thank you！I love you！” “You're welcome.We knew this was going to make you happy.But we give you this not only because you have turned twelve but also because you are doing well in school.We expect you to keep getting good grades.” I said confidently that I would.As soon as I got to school the next morning，I was showing off my phone and asking everyone for their number.It was cool how I got so many contacts(联系人) on the first day.It felt like I didn't even exist in that class any more.I didn't pay much attention to the teachers because I was too busy on my phone.I texted my friends，surfed the Internet for stories or played games. A week later we took a test and I failed.What's worse，my parents had to sign the test. When seeing my test result，they couldn't believe it.They asked me why I failed the test.I didn't dare to tell a lie，and told them the truth. [精阅读·理文脉] 作者在12岁生日时获得了一部手机，并且渐渐地沉迷于手机导致成绩下降，最终被她的父母发现，作者只能告诉父母成绩下降的原因是玩手机…… [根据汉语提示补全短文] My mom ①had ants in her pants，adding，“Let us help you keep your cellphone until you're old enough.” ②Although I was unwilling to do it(尽管我不愿意这么做)，I still took my phone out of my pocket and handed it to my parents.During the first days without the cellphone，I felt ③my backpack weighed a ton. But eventually ④I got used to it(我已经习惯了)，and my life，especially my school life，became normal again.In class，I'd listen carefully as before.After school，⑤I'd be devoted to finishing my homework(我会专心完成作业).Gradually，my school performance improved and ⑥I obtained good grades again(我又取得了好成绩). [提能训练1] 　猜测词义 1．had ants in her pants心急如焚 2．my backpack weighed a ton我的背包很重 [微技能·大妙用] 人物描写之修辞链 夸张是为了达到某种表达效果的需要，对事物的形象、特征、作用、程度等方面刻意夸大或缩小的修辞手法。建立夸张的修辞链方法如下： 1．使用数词或量词 She was half dead with fear. 她吓得半死。 I've told you a million times. 我已经告诉你很多次了。 2．使用动词(短语) The young girl brought the house down with her performance. 这位年轻姑娘的表演博得了满堂喝彩。 3．使用形容词或副词 He is amazingly delighted. 他非常高兴。 4．使用介词短语 I laughed from ear to ear. 我笑得合不拢嘴。 She went home in a flood of tears. 她泪如泉涌地回家了。 5．情感上 I sat there still, frozen/seized with fear. 我坐在那里一动不动，吓得不知所措。 6．程度上 Today's homework is piling up like a mountain. 今天的家庭作业堆积如山。 [提能训练2] 　在上面尾段标注序号的句子中找出相应的表达 1．使用介词短语 ①(in her pants) 2．使用数词或量词 ③(weighed a ton) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$