Unit 1 Writing 主题写作（同步课件）英语牛津上海版九年级上册

Writing Unit 1 Ancient Greece 1 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 Before you write 1 2 3 4 Look the following pictures about the story again. Find one or two sentences in the passage to describe each picture. 1 2 1 2 3 3 4 The soldier came down the stairs – two at a time. Outside the main gates of the city stood a huge wooden horse. So the Trojans dragged it into the city with ropes. 1 2 4 5 3 4 That night, in the main square, all the citizens of Troy celebrated. They sang and danced around the horse, and made jokes about their enemies, the stupid Greeks. Then, very quietly, they opened the secret door on the side of the horse and climbed out. 1 2 6 7 3 4 Now the army entered the city. The Greeks seized the captain. While you write 1 2 3 Imagine you were one of the six soldiers inside the wooden horse. After the war, you tell your story to your family. Part of the story is given below. Fill in the blanks with the words in brackets. A 1 2 3 left it outside the main gates did not go far away saw the horse was inside with five other soldiers 1 2 3 pulled the horse into the main square of the city celebrated made jokes about us made sure that the gates were locked went to sleep climbed out of the horse opened the gates entered the city seized him We took the captain away and put him in prison. _____ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 2 3 Work in pairs. Write a few more sentences to complete the story above. B For days, we went into all the houses and temples and took away everything that we could carry, but we didn’t kill the citizens of Troy. We found a lot of gold and jewels in the palace. When we had taken what we wanted, we returned home in our ships. After you write 1 2 Years later, the captain told his son what happened that night. Complete what he said, using the words in the box to help you. A in the wooden horse a big mistake fall asleep appear drag the horse put in prison celebrate seize 3 The present perfect tense is often used in letters that give recent news and in news bulletins. Now write a short letter or postcard telling a friend about your holiday in a resort. *B1 1 2 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Chen Ping We have been here for four days now. I have seen some temples and have been on a boat. On Tuesday, I swam most of the day. We have had some lovely seafood. We will return to Shanghai on Saturday. Guo Sheng 3 Write three headlines for an evening TV news bulletin using the present perfect tense. *B2 1 2 There has been an earthquake in the Philippines. Fifty people have been killed. There has been an accident near Nanjing Road. One man has been injured. In the USA, the President has said that he will visit Beijing next month. 3 Using 1． 寓言故事深受孩子们的喜爱，你一定读过乌鸦喝水这个寓言故事。请你根据右图提示，以“The Crow and the Pitcher”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，在学校广播站“英语之声”栏目播出。 要求： 1．语句通顺，没有语法错误； 2．包含图片全部要点； 3．从中你得到哪些启发，可适当发挥； 4．80词左右。 参考词汇： 乌鸦 crow；口渴的 thirsty；鹅卵石pebble；罐子 pitcher __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13 Sample article 【答案】例文： The Crow and the Pitcher It was a hot day. A crow felt so thirsty that he looked for water everywhere. Finally, he found a pitcher. But there wasn’t much water in it. His beak couldn’t reach it. He was very distressed. When he wanted to give up, he came up with an idea. He picked up a small stone and dropped it into the pitcher. Then he took another and dropped it in. Gradually, the water rose and he was able to drink the water. How clever the crow was! 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文。要为我们根据右图提示，以“The Crow and the Pitcher”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主。写作要包括故事的时间、人物、背景、经过及结果；写作时，首先简单介绍天气条件，提出乌鸦口渴想找水喝；其次描述乌鸦找到水后遇到的困难；最后说明乌鸦用怎样的方法喝到了水。在写故事时，可适当发挥。 14 Using 2．根据图片提示，展开合理想象，以“Plugging（堵塞，封堵）One’s Ears While Stealing a Bell”为题，写一篇英语短文。 提示词：bell，steal，touch，noise，cotton，pull，neighbor，catch 要求：（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。 （2）词数在80~100之间。 （3）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15 Sample article 【答案】例文： Plugging One’s Ears While Stealing a Bell One day a thief found the bell on his neighbor’s door so beautiful that he wanted to steal it. But as soon as he touched the bell, it made a very loud noise. Then he said to himself, “I must do something about the noise.” He thought and thought. At last he had an idea. “Ah, I’ll put some cotton in my ears. Then the noise can’t be heard any more.” Then he did so and pulled the bell hard. The bell rang loudly but the thief did not hear anything. With another hard pull he got the bell off. Just then the neighbors came out and caught him. The thief thought as long as he himself couldn’t hear the noise, neither could others. How foolish! 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Plugging One’s Ears While Stealing a Bell”为题，结合图片内容讲述掩耳盗铃的故事。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般过去时。要根据图片中内容发挥自己的想象来讲述这个故事。故事讲一个人想要偷铃铛，但怕铃铛响了，就用棉花把自己的耳朵塞住，自己听不到铃铛响了，以为别人也听不到，结果被抓了。这是中国传统寓言故事，写作时要做到语言连贯，无单词拼写和语法错误。 16 Using 3．请根据以下图片及关键词，用英语讲述《丑小鸭》这个童话故事。 要求： 1. 80词左右；可适当发挥； 2. 故事内容合理、完整；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 It was a long time before Mother Duck’s last egg broke. When Ugly Duckling was born, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17 Sample article 【答案】例文 It was a long time before Mother Duck’s last egg broke. When Ugly Duckling was born, he looked very different from his brothers and sisters. He was much bigger than them and he was grey. Because he was so different, all the ducks hated him and bit him. Ugly Duckling wanted to play games with them, but they pushed him away from their games. He became so unhappy that he cried sadly and left the lake. As time went by, Ugly Duckling grew bigger and he was no longer a terrible grey thing that nobody liked. His neck grew long and his body turned white. He became a swan. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于看图作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及关键词已经给出，按照提示的关键词和图片逐点讲述故事，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，继续讲述故事； 第二步，根据提示的关键词，按照图片所示故事情节讲述《丑小鸭》的故事。 [亮点词汇] ①push sb away把某人推开 ②as time went by随着时间的推移 ③no longer不再 [高分句型] ①Because he was so different, all the ducks hated him and bit him.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②He became so unhappy that he cried sadly and left the lake.（so…that引导的结果状语从句） ③As time went by, Ugly Duckling grew bigger and he was no longer a terrible grey thing that nobody liked.（that引导的限制性定语从句） 18 Using 4．寓言故事给我们带来很多启迪，其中《龟兔赛跑》的故事耐人寻味。请以“The rabbit and the tortoise”为题，根据下面的图片和要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。 要点提示： 1. Describe the story of “The rabbit and the tortoise”. 2. Explain the influences that the story has on you. 写作要求： 1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当拓展； 2. 词数100左右。要求表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。 The rabbit and the tortoise ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 19 Sample article 【答案】例文 The rabbit and the tortoise One day, a rabbit and a tortoise decided to have a race to see who was faster than the other. They agreed that the one who first got to the big tree in the distance was the winner. So they started at the same time. The rabbit thought he was sure to be the winner. But the tortoise was never discouraged and kept on moving forward as fast as he could. As the rabbit turned round a corner, he found the tortoise far behind him. He decided to have a rest. Unluckily, he fell asleep and the tortoise went beyond him. After reading this story, I have learnt a lot from the tortoise. I am not good at my studies. But I will never give up. Besides, the story also tells me I shouldn’t look down on anyone else. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇寓言故事，为看图作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍寓言故事《龟兔赛跑》； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，逐一描述图片内容； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己从这个故事中所获。 [亮点词汇] ①at the same time同时 ②kept on moving forward继续前行 [高分句型] ①One day, a rabbit and a tortoise decided to have a race to see who was faster than the other. （who引导的宾语从句） ②They agreed that the one who first got to the big tree in the distance was the winner. （that引导的宾语从句） 20 Using 5．请根据下列图片展开合理的想象，以“The Ant and the Grasshopper”为题写一个故事。 要求：1.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 2字数：110词左右。 The Ant and the Grasshopper ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 21 Sample article 【答案】例文 The Ant and the Grasshopper It is in summer. It is very hot. The ant works hard. He carries food home. He is thirsty and tired. The grasshopper laughs at him. “You’re so foolish. The weather is so hot. Why don’t you have a rest?” Autumn comes, and the ant goes on carrying food home. However, the grasshopper sings all day. Winter comes, it’s windy and cold. The ant stays at home. His home is warm and comfortable. He has a lot of food to eat. However, the grasshopper is cold and hungry. He doesn’t have any food at home. The ant comes out. He doesn’t see the grasshopper. He is dead because of his laziness. 【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。描述一只蚂蚁和蚱蜢的故事。 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。结合图片并按照时间顺序进行描述，写作时要保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，做到无语法和标点错误。 22 see you again $$