04.细节梳理+学校生活+日记类-2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期写作万能模板与题型通关(新教材通用版)

04.细节梳理+学校生活+日记 写作语言基础：细节梳理 ▲如何开篇 必备技巧1：主旨设问更给力 I think it's very important for us to do sports. Why? Because it's good for our health and study. I think it's very important for us to protect environment. Why? Because it's good for living. I think it's very important for us to learn English. Why? Because it's the most-widely used language in the world. 必备技巧2：从我们到我 Different people have different _____, but / and I have / prefer _____ ▲如何写正文 句型变化1：表达观点要“自我” In my opinion, we should pay much more attention on the weak subjects! 句型变化2：两句之间要过渡 I left my pen at home. What was worse, the drugstore was closed that day. 句型变化3：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型 普通级句型：The environment is bad. 比较级句型：The environment is getting worse and worse. The environment is getting much worse than before. 最高级句型：I have never seen the worse environment. 句型变化4：表达作用多用it句式 Reading is a good way to relax myself. Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English. 句型变化5：增强情感转感叹 How beneficial it is for us to read! How important it is for students to do sports. 句型变化6：事情到感情句型 I was very happy that I got an A in English last term. It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term. 句型变化7：形容词句型升级 It was an unusual experience in my life. It was one of the most unusual experience in my life. 句型变化8：活用there be结合定从 Many reasons made me like reading. There are many reasons why I enjoy reading ▲如何结尾 1.各种号召——事不宜迟 Don't put it off. 2.各种越来越——多多益善 the+比较级+主谓，the +比较级+主谓 越…就越… The better we take care of the environment, the more beautiful the world will be. 3. 名言警句 学习类 Practice makes perfect. 运动类 Rome was not built in a day. 环保类 Nothing is impossible to a willing mind. 爱好类 Interest is the best teacher. 写作话题素材：学校生活 ▲介绍学校规则的句子 1. As students, we should keep safety in mind. 作为学生, 我们应该将安全记在心中。 2. Safety is the most important thing in our life. 在我们的生活中, 安全是最重要的事情。 3. If we are in danger, we must call the police for help so that we can keep ourselves safe. 如果我们处于危险中, 我们一定要给警察打电话求助以便我们可以让自己安全。 4. We should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. 在上学或回家的路上, 我们应该时刻注意交通(安全)。 5. We should try our best to make sure we are safe. 我们应该尽最大努力来确保我们是安全的。 ▲关于遵守学校规则的谚语 1. To change the rules of the world, we must first adapt to the rules of the world. 要想改变这个世界的规则, 我们必须先适应这个世界的规则。 2. Don’t blindly obey the rules. Learn to create the rules by yourself. 不要盲目服从规则, 要学会自己创造规则。 3. Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. 无规矩不成方圆。 【基础训练】 根据汉语意思和英文提示, 完成句子。 1. 现在我们有一个更大的操场和更多的篮球场。(basketball court) __________________________________________________ 2. 我们的学校像花园一样美丽, 一年到头树木葱郁。(as. . . as; with) __________________________________________________ 3. 我希望我们的校园变得更加美丽, 我们所有的人都有一个美好的未来。 (wish) __________________________________________________ 4. 自从我来到这儿, 我的老师们和同学们给了我很大的帮助。 (help a lot) __________________________________________________ 5. 这里的老师们热爱自己的工作, 也热爱自己的学生。(enjoy) __________________________________________________ 6. 学生们尊重老师, 与老师们相处得非常融洽。 (get on well with) __________________________________________________ 7. 我们学校的学生尽最大的努力保持校园的干净整洁。(try one’s best) __________________________________________________ 写作必备类型：日记 ▲开头句 1. It was a fine/nice day. 天气晴朗。 2. Today is... 今天是…… 3. I went to the park to... 我去公园…… 4. We decided to go out for a picnic today. 我们决定今天出去野餐。 5. My classmates and I went to the park to do some voluntary work. 我和我们班的同学去公园做义务劳动。 ▲中间句 1. First we were divided into three groups and then began working. 我们首先分成了三个组，然后开始工作。 2. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter and cleaning benches. 第二组的同学收集垃圾和清理长凳。 3. Group Three wiped all the equipment in the park. 第三组的同学擦洗公园里所有的设施。 ▲结尾句 1. I had a good time today. / I enjoyed myself today. 我今天玩得很高兴。 2. I will never forget it. 我永远不会忘记这件事。 3. What a warm and meaningful day! 这是多么温馨而又富有意义的一天！ 4. I will never forget the memorable day! 我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天！ 5. Although everyone was very tired, we felt very happy because we had done a meaningful job. 虽然大家都很累，但我们很开心，因为我们做了一件有意义的工作。 ▲写作模版 Day of the week Date Weather介绍今天是什么日子，引出事件 Today is ___________. I did some meaningful things ___________. In the morning, I ___________（事件一）. In the afternoon, I ___________（事件二）. After that, I ___________（事件三）.详细描写了今天所做的事情 What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day! / Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because ___________.表达感想 ▲范文赏析 尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德。东东的爸爸妈妈把乡下的爷爷接到了城里一起生活。假如你是东东，请结合图片提示，发挥你的想象，用英文写一篇80词左右的日记。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Today, Grandpa came to my house. We had a big dinner together. After dinner, Grandpa told interesting stories to my brother and me. We drank tea and played chess together. We had a good time. At about 9:00 in the evening, my mother told us it was time for bed. In order to help Grandpa sleep well, Mom decided to let him sleep in my room, and made me sleep with my brother. Looking after Grandpa is our duty. The better Grandpa lives, the happier we are. 【提升练习】 1．假如你叫李磊，请根据21世纪英文报的征稿写一封信给编辑Mr. Green，介绍你和你朋友的基本情况和校园生活。 要求： 1. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名或学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 Dear Mr. Green, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Lei 2．假如你叫李华，你的外国笔友Bill来信想了解你的学校生活，询问你在学校里能学到什么学科的课程，你最喜欢哪一门学科，以及你喜欢它的原因； 另外在学校还可以参加什么活动以及你从中的收获。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。 写作要求： 1. 写作内容必须包含以上所有内容，词数80个词左右。 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 3. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 Dear Bill, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．以日记形式描述一下自己经历过的印象最深的一次旅行或研学游。内容可参考下面的Mind Map的要点提示。 要求： 1. 字数不少于80词。 2. 不得出现真实姓名及学校。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．一个学期结束了，请你根据以下内容要点提示写一篇日记，回忆一下本学期的学习生活情况。 内容 收获 生活上 交到了许多好朋友，老师们经常帮助我 学习上 学了很多科目，有些科目有趣，有些科目很难 参加课外活动 参加俱乐部（至少补充一个） 下学期的期望 至少写一点 注意： 1. 词数不少于60字，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 January 15h, 2022 How time flies! It is the end of the term. What did I do in this term? Well, I did a lot and learned a lot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，描述一下你的学校。 提示： 1. 学校：又大又漂亮，有30个教室，大且明亮； 2. 新的操场：打篮球，踢足球； 3. 图书馆：又大又现代化；大厅：开会； 4. 老师：很友好，很受学生爱戴； 5. 住在离学校很远的地方，骑自行车上学，时间约为20分钟。 要求： 1. 80词左右，可适当发挥； 2. 语法正确，语句通顺。 My School ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是Alice，你的网友Tom想了解你学校的情况。请你根据以下提示，给Tom发一封电子邮件，告诉他有关你学校的情况。 提示：(1)在第一中学上学，学校很大，很漂亮，在学校很开心； (2)家离学校很近，经常步行去上学，到校大约花费5分钟； (3)学校有一个图书馆，图书馆里有两间阅览室……； (4)有一个大操场……； (5)老师们对我们很友好，我们很喜欢他们。 要求：80词左右，要点齐全，语句通顺，条理清晰，可适当补充细节，书写工整。 Dear Tom, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Alice 7．假如你是李明，你想要参加英语报开展的以“My Favourite School Day”为题的英语征文活动。你很喜欢你的学校生活，请你用英语写一篇文章进行投稿，介绍你自己喜欢的上学日、你喜欢这一天的原因以及你的感受。 要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 3. 70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Favourite School Day Hi! I’m Li Ming. I’m a middle school student in Grade Seven. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．英语课上，老师让同学们设计出自己认为最理想的一天的课程表。你会怎么安排呢？为什么？请你根据下面的课程表进行设计并用英语介绍一下。词数80左右。 提示词语：maths; interesting; love My Favorite School Day Time Class 8: 00—8: 40 8: 50—9: 30 9: 50—10: 30 10: 40—11: 20 14: 00—14: 40 14: 50—15: 30 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 京）股份有限公司 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 04.细节梳理+学校生活+日记 写作语言基础：细节梳理 ▲如何开篇 必备技巧1：主旨设问更给力 I think it's very important for us to do sports. Why? Because it's good for our health and study. I think it's very important for us to protect environment. Why? Because it's good for living. I think it's very important for us to learn English. Why? Because it's the most-widely used language in the world. 必备技巧2：从我们到我 Different people have different _____, but / and I have / prefer _____ ▲如何写正文 句型变化1：表达观点要“自我” In my opinion, we should pay much more attention on the weak subjects! 句型变化2：两句之间要过渡 I left my pen at home. What was worse, the drugstore was closed that day. 句型变化3：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型 普通级句型：The environment is bad. 比较级句型：The environment is getting worse and worse. The environment is getting much worse than before. 最高级句型：I have never seen the worse environment. 句型变化4：表达作用多用it句式 Reading is a good way to relax myself. Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English. 句型变化5：增强情感转感叹 How beneficial it is for us to read! How important it is for students to do sports. 句型变化6：事情到感情句型 I was very happy that I got an A in English last term. It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term. 句型变化7：形容词句型升级 It was an unusual experience in my life. It was one of the most unusual experience in my life. 句型变化8：活用there be结合定从 Many reasons made me like reading. There are many reasons why I enjoy reading ▲如何结尾 1.各种号召——事不宜迟 Don't put it off. 2.各种越来越——多多益善 the+比较级+主谓，the +比较级+主谓 越…就越… The better we take care of the environment, the more beautiful the world will be. 3. 名言警句 学习类 Practice makes perfect. 运动类 Rome was not built in a day. 环保类 Nothing is impossible to a willing mind. 爱好类 Interest is the best teacher. 写作话题素材：学校生活 ▲介绍学校规则的句子 1. As students, we should keep safety in mind. 作为学生, 我们应该将安全记在心中。 2. Safety is the most important thing in our life. 在我们的生活中, 安全是最重要的事情。 3. If we are in danger, we must call the police for help so that we can keep ourselves safe. 如果我们处于危险中, 我们一定要给警察打电话求助以便我们可以让自己安全。 4. We should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. 在上学或回家的路上, 我们应该时刻注意交通(安全)。 5. We should try our best to make sure we are safe. 我们应该尽最大努力来确保我们是安全的。 ▲关于遵守学校规则的谚语 1. To change the rules of the world, we must first adapt to the rules of the world. 要想改变这个世界的规则, 我们必须先适应这个世界的规则。 2. Don’t blindly obey the rules. Learn to create the rules by yourself. 不要盲目服从规则, 要学会自己创造规则。 3. Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. 无规矩不成方圆。 【基础训练】 根据汉语意思和英文提示, 完成句子。 1. 现在我们有一个更大的操场和更多的篮球场。(basketball court) Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts.   2. 我们的学校像花园一样美丽, 一年到头树木葱郁。(as. . . as; with) Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round.   3. 我希望我们的校园变得更加美丽, 我们所有的人都有一个美好的未来。 (wish) I wish our school to be more beautiful and all of us a bright/wonderful future.   4. 自从我来到这儿, 我的老师们和同学们给了我很大的帮助。 (help a lot) My teachers and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here.   5. 这里的老师们热爱自己的工作, 也热爱自己的学生。(enjoy) The teachers here all enjoy their work and love their students.   6. 学生们尊重老师, 与老师们相处得非常融洽。 (get on well with) Students respect their teachers and get on very well with their teachers.   7. 我们学校的学生尽最大的努力保持校园的干净整洁。(try one’s best) The students in our school try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy.   写作必备类型：日记 ▲开头句 1. It was a fine/nice day. 天气晴朗。 2. Today is... 今天是…… 3. I went to the park to... 我去公园…… 4. We decided to go out for a picnic today. 我们决定今天出去野餐。 5. My classmates and I went to the park to do some voluntary work. 我和我们班的同学去公园做义务劳动。 ▲中间句 1. First we were divided into three groups and then began working. 我们首先分成了三个组，然后开始工作。 2. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter and cleaning benches. 第二组的同学收集垃圾和清理长凳。 3. Group Three wiped all the equipment in the park. 第三组的同学擦洗公园里所有的设施。 ▲结尾句 1. I had a good time today. / I enjoyed myself today. 我今天玩得很高兴。 2. I will never forget it. 我永远不会忘记这件事。 3. What a warm and meaningful day! 这是多么温馨而又富有意义的一天！ 4. I will never forget the memorable day! 我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天！ 5. Although everyone was very tired, we felt very happy because we had done a meaningful job. 虽然大家都很累，但我们很开心，因为我们做了一件有意义的工作。 ▲写作模版 Day of the week Date Weather介绍今天是什么日子，引出事件 Today is ___________. I did some meaningful things ___________. In the morning, I ___________（事件一）. In the afternoon, I ___________（事件二）. After that, I ___________（事件三）.详细描写了今天所做的事情 What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day! / Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because ___________.表达感想 ▲范文赏析 尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德。东东的爸爸妈妈把乡下的爷爷接到了城里一起生活。假如你是东东，请结合图片提示，发挥你的想象，用英文写一篇80词左右的日记。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Today, Grandpa came to my house. We had a big dinner together. After dinner, Grandpa told interesting stories to my brother and me. We drank tea and played chess together. We had a good time. At about 9:00 in the evening, my mother told us it was time for bed. In order to help Grandpa sleep well, Mom decided to let him sleep in my room, and made me sleep with my brother. Looking after Grandpa is our duty. The better Grandpa lives, the happier we are. 【提升练习】 1．假如你叫李磊，请根据21世纪英文报的征稿写一封信给编辑Mr. Green，介绍你和你朋友的基本情况和校园生活。 要求： 1. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名或学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 Dear Mr. Green, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Lei 2．假如你叫李华，你的外国笔友Bill来信想了解你的学校生活，询问你在学校里能学到什么学科的课程，你最喜欢哪一门学科，以及你喜欢它的原因； 另外在学校还可以参加什么活动以及你从中的收获。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。 写作要求： 1. 写作内容必须包含以上所有内容，词数80个词左右。 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 3. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 Dear Bill, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．以日记形式描述一下自己经历过的印象最深的一次旅行或研学游。内容可参考下面的Mind Map的要点提示。 要求： 1. 字数不少于80词。 2. 不得出现真实姓名及学校。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．一个学期结束了，请你根据以下内容要点提示写一篇日记，回忆一下本学期的学习生活情况。 内容 收获 生活上 交到了许多好朋友，老师们经常帮助我 学习上 学了很多科目，有些科目有趣，有些科目很难 参加课外活动 参加俱乐部（至少补充一个） 下学期的期望 至少写一点 注意： 1. 词数不少于60字，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 January 15h, 2022 How time flies! It is the end of the term. What did I do in this term? Well, I did a lot and learned a lot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，描述一下你的学校。 提示： 1. 学校：又大又漂亮，有30个教室，大且明亮； 2. 新的操场：打篮球，踢足球； 3. 图书馆：又大又现代化；大厅：开会； 4. 老师：很友好，很受学生爱戴； 5. 住在离学校很远的地方，骑自行车上学，时间约为20分钟。 要求： 1. 80词左右，可适当发挥； 2. 语法正确，语句通顺。 My School ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是Alice，你的网友Tom想了解你学校的情况。请你根据以下提示，给Tom发一封电子邮件，告诉他有关你学校的情况。 提示：(1)在第一中学上学，学校很大，很漂亮，在学校很开心； (2)家离学校很近，经常步行去上学，到校大约花费5分钟； (3)学校有一个图书馆，图书馆里有两间阅览室……； (4)有一个大操场……； (5)老师们对我们很友好，我们很喜欢他们。 要求：80词左右，要点齐全，语句通顺，条理清晰，可适当补充细节，书写工整。 Dear Tom, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Alice 7．假如你是李明，你想要参加英语报开展的以“My Favourite School Day”为题的英语征文活动。你很喜欢你的学校生活，请你用英语写一篇文章进行投稿，介绍你自己喜欢的上学日、你喜欢这一天的原因以及你的感受。 要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 3. 70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Favourite School Day Hi! I’m Li Ming. I’m a middle school student in Grade Seven. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．英语课上，老师让同学们设计出自己认为最理想的一天的课程表。你会怎么安排呢？为什么？请你根据下面的课程表进行设计并用英语介绍一下。词数80左右。 提示词语：maths; interesting; love My Favorite School Day Time Class 8: 00—8: 40 8: 50—9: 30 9: 50—10: 30 10: 40—11: 20 14: 00—14: 40 14: 50—15: 30 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．【参考范文】 Dear Mr. Green, My name is Li Lei. I’m 12 years old. My birthday is on February 20th. I have a healthy eating habit. I like fruit and vegetables best, such as apples, bananas and so on. Lucy is my best friend. She is a lovely girl. Her favorite subject is English because she thinks it is very interesting. She likes English party best. She thinks she can improve her English and make many new friends. She also likes sports very much. She has a basketball and three volleyballs. After school, she always plays volleyball with me. We are very happy. Yours, Li Lei [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要是介绍你和你朋友的基本情况和校园生活。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的个人信息； 第二步，介绍朋友的个人信息以及学校生活。 [亮点词汇] ①eating habit饮食习惯 ②such as例如 ③make friends交朋友 [高分句型] ①Her favorite subject is English because she thinks it is very interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②She thinks she can improve her English and make many new friends. (宾语从句) 2．【参考范文】 Dear Bill, I am glad to hear from you. I will tell you something about my school life. I have ten subjects at school. I have Chinese and math every day. My favourite subject is music because it is so interesting. Besides, there are many interesting activities in my school. We have an English party every month and we can talk with each other in English. I like my school life and I always have a good time. How about your school life? Can you tell me? Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据信件中的问题介绍自己的学校生活，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的学科以及原因； 第三步，介绍学校的活动。 [亮点词汇] ①hear from收到……的来信 ②each other彼此 ③have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①My favourite subject is music because it is so interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②Besides, there are many interesting activities in my school.(there be句型) 3．【参考范文】 My School Trip I went to the ChangBai Mountain with my classmates for my school trip last Saturday. It was very exciting. We met at 7:30 on Saturday morning. Then we took the school bus there. We sang songs on the bus, and the bus went fast. At about 8:30 we arrived there. We went climbing, played games, danced and so on. It was sunny, and the mountain was very beautiful, so we took a lot of photos. When I got home, I was very tired but happy and excited. 1. 题干解读：本文要求写一篇日记，根据思维导图介绍自己印象最深的一次旅行或研学游。包含参加人员、目的地、时间、交通方式以及活动内容。 2. 写作指导：本文采用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段主要介绍旅行的参加人员、目的地、旅行时间、交通方式；第二段主要介绍活动内容；最后一段表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 4．【参考范文】 January 15h, 2022 How time flies! It is the end of the term. What did I do in this term? Well, I did a lot and learned a lot. First, I made friends with my classmates and my teachers helped me a lot in my daily life. Second, I learned a lot from different subjects. Some subjects were interesting, some subjects were difficult. But my favourite subject was English, because I learned it well. And there were so many activities in our free time, we could join in the clubs and different teams. Such as football team, basketball team and so on. I joined in the football team. Because I like football. Now, I hope I can try my best to study well and become a good football player in the next term. 1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据提示的内容要点，写一篇日记，介绍自己本学期的学习生活情况和下学期的期望，属于应用文写作。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇日记应以第一人称和一般过去时为主。写作中要承接开头，紧扣提示的内容要点，先介绍自己本学期在内容上、学习上、课外活动上的一些收获，接着介绍了下学期的愿望。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 5．参考范文 My School My school is big and beautiful. We have thirty classrooms. They are big and bright. Our school has a new playground. The students in my school often play basketball and football there. We have a big and modern library with all kinds of books. We have a hall and we often have meetings there. Our teachers are all very kind. We like them very much. I live far away from the school. I go to school by bike. It takes me about twenty minutes to get to school. Do you like my school? [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示描述一下学校，包括学校的建筑、老师以及上学的方式等内容，写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，先总体介绍学校的概况； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍学校的建筑——教室、图书馆、礼堂等，然后介绍老师。 第三步，最后介绍上学方式。 [亮点词汇] ①all kind of各种各样的 ②have meetings开会 ③far away from远离…… [高分句型] ①There are all kinds of books in it.（用there be句型表示某地有某物） ②I go to school by bike.（用“by+交通工具”表达出行方式） ③It takes me about twenty minutes to get to school.（用“It takes sb. some time to do sth.”表达做某事花费某人多少时间） 6．【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I study at No. 1 Middle School now. My school is very big and beautiful. I have fun at school. I live near my school so I often go to school on foot. It takes me about five minutes to get there. There is a library in my school. There are two reading rooms in the library. We often read books there. We also have a big playground. We usually play basketball in the playground. Our teachers are very kind to us. We like them very much. This is my school. I love it. Yours, Alice [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明自己所在的学校，以及家里距离学校远近，交通方式等信息； 第二步，具体阐述学校设施和学校人员； 第三步，最后表达对于这个学校的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①have fun玩得高兴 ②be kind to对……友好 ③like...very much非常喜欢…… [高分句型] ①I live near my school so I often go to school on foot.（so连接的因果并列句） ②It takes me about five minutes to get there.（it固定句型） 7．【参考范文】 My Favourite School Day Hi! I’m Li Ming. I’m a middle school student in Grade Seven. I go to school from Monday to Friday. My favourite school day is Friday because we have history and science lessons on Friday morning. They are my favourite subjects because they are interesting. On Friday afternoon, there are only three classes, so I can go back home earlier. Besides, I don’t have to do my homework on Friday night. So after dinner, I often take a walk with my family. It’s a great school day—relaxing and fun. I like my school life. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：考生应注意不要漏写你的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明你自己喜欢的上学日是哪一天； 第二步，介绍你喜欢这一天的原因； 第三步，谈谈你的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①interesting有趣的 ②take a walk散步 ③relaxing令人放松的 [高分句型] ①My favourite school day is Friday because we have history and science lessons on Friday morning. They are my favourite subjects because they are interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句） 8．参考范文 My Favorite School Day I’d like to introduce my favorite school day to you all. The first class is from 8: 00 to 8: 40. And it is math, because math is very interesting. From 8: 50 to 9: 30 is the Chinese class. I also love Chinese. From 9: 50 to 10: 30 is the music class, which is my favorite subject. Our English class is from 10: 40 to 11: 20. Our lunch is from 11: 20 to 14: 00. After lunch, I can have a good rest. The art class is from 14: 00 to 14: 40, and we can relax ourselves. Our science class is from 14: 50 to 15: 30. It is boring, so I want to make it the last class of the day. After that, we can do sports for an hour. We can play ball games, such as playing soccer, basketball and badminton. About 16: 30, it’s time for us to go home. This is my favorite school day. What do you think of it? [总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，开门见山，介绍自己最喜欢的一天的课程表； 第二步，按表格提示，逐一陈述，适当拓展； 第三步，书写总结。 ［亮点词汇］ ① such as 例如 ② from … to… 从……到…… ［高分句型］ ① From 9: 50 to 10: 30 is the music class, which is my favorite subject. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ② It is boring, so I want to make it the last class of the day. (so引导并列复合句) 京）股份有限公司 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$