Week 14 通知&优秀品行类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 14 通知&优秀品行类读后续写 Monday 如何写好通知 通知分为书面通知和口头通知。通知一般用于公布即将 点明通知的主题、目的 发生的事情，如宣布举行比赛，举办讲座、画展、晚会，召开研讨 告知必要信息（时间、地点， 会等。写通知的关键是明确地告知读者活动的必要信息，如时 局谋篇 报名方式及截止日期等) 间、地点、活动内容、报名方式及其他细节等。 号召大家积极参与 典题示例 假定你是李华，本周末你校英语俱乐部将组织果园采摘活动。请你用英文写则通知，内容包括：1.活动信息：2. 准备事项：3.表达期待。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Notice English Club 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 一般将来时 主题 通知 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题：第二段：具体内容；第三段：提出希望 OStep Two 词汇运用 l.通知inform 6.持续last 2.采摘葡萄pick grapes 7,参加take part in 3.体验大自然experience nature 8.积极地actively 4.目的地destination 9.户外活动outdoor activity 5.入场费entrance fee OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)本周末我校英语俱乐部将组织果园采摘活动。 This weekend,our school English club will organize an activity of picking fruits. (2)这个活动将使我们都体验大自然。 The activity will make us all experience nature. (3)我们需要在这个星期六六点钟在校门口集合。 We need to get together at the gate of our school at six o'clock on this Saturday. (4)集合结束后，我们将乘公共汽车。 After we finish gathering,we will take the bus. (5)我们到达目的地大约需要半个小时。 To get to the destination will take us about half an hour. (6)入场费是每人10元。 The entrance fee is 10 yuan per person. 启航演语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (7)每人可以买到5磅橙子。 Everyone can get about 5 pounds of oranges. (8)采摘时间为2小时。 The picking time will last 2 hours. (9)你可以带一个帽子和足够的水。 You can take a cap and enough water. (10)我们希望大家都能积极参与！ We hope everyone can take part in it actively! 2.句式升级 (1)用which引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 This weekend.our school English club will organize an activity of picking fruits.which will make us all experience nature. (2)用afer引导时间状语从句的省略形式升级上题中的句子(4)。 After finishing gathering.we will take the bus. (3)用t作形式主语的用法升级句子(5)。 It will take us about half an hour to get to the destination. (4)用and引导的并列句合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。 The entrance fee is 10 yuan per person and everyone can get about 5 pounds of oranges. (5)用so that引导的结果状语从句合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。 The picking time will last 2 hours so that you can take a cap and enough water. (6)用省略主语的形式升级句子(10)。 Hope everyone can take part in it actively Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Notice This weekend,our school English club will organize an activity of picking fruits,which will make us all experience nature. We need to get together at the gate of our school at six o'clock on this Saturday.After finishing gathering. we will take the bus.It will take us about half an hour to get to the destination.The entrance fee is 10 yuan per person and everyone can get about 5 pounds of oranges.The picking time will last 2 hours so that you can take a cap and enough water. Hope everyone can take part in it actively! English Club Tuesday 通知满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 inform通知 announcement n.通知 recruit v.招聘，招收 arouse.引起，激起 passion.激情，热情 competition n.竞争，比赛 focus on专注于 look forward to期待 participationm.参加，参与 enrich.使充实，使丰富 stimulate,.促进，激发 enthusiasm n.热情，热忱 schedule v.安排，预定 participate in参加 ahead of time提前 opportunity.时机，机会 widen v.拓展，扩展 purpose.目的，意图 enhance.增强，提高，改善 affection m.喜爱，关爱 punctually ad.准时地，如期地 visual feast视觉盛宴 arrive at到达 heme n.(谈话、书籍、电影等的)题日，主题 Week14通知&优秀品行类读后续写 hous.按照计划，比赛将在下周五上午8点在大讲堂进 话题句式 行，比赛将持续3个小时左右。 引出话题先声夺人 6.The activity is scheduled to be held from 3:00 p.m.to 1.A notice is given that some activities will be carried out to 4:30p.m.on our playground.活动定于下午3点至4 celebrate Labor Day from April 27 to 29,according to our 点30分在我们的操场举行。 school schedule.4月27日至29日，根据学校安排，我校 7.In addition,whoever is interested can go to sign up at the 将开展庆祝劳动节的相关活动，特此通知。 Student Union office..此外，任何有兴趣的人都可以去学 2.May I have your attention,please?I have an 生会办公室报名。 announcement to make.请大家注意一下。我要宣布一 8.All the students who have affection for soccer games are 件事。 welcome to watch it..欢迎所有喜爱足球比赛的学生前 3.Attention,please!I have something important to tell you. 来观看。 请注意！我有重要的事要告诉你们。 首尾结合余音回味 4.Aimed at enriching campus life and stimulating students' 9.Those who are interested in the activity are welcome.欢迎那 enthusiasm for Chinese literature,the Classical Chinese 些对这项活动感兴趣的人。 Poetry Reciting Contest will be held in our school.为了丰l0.I am sure you will have a good time there..我相信你在 富校园生活，激发学生对中国文学的热情，我校将举办 那里会玩得很开心的。 中国古典诗词朗诵比赛 11.Please get everything ready ahead of time.Don't be late. 主题部分娓娓道来 请提前做好准备，不要迟到。 5.As scheduled,the contest will take place in the lecture I2.Looking forward to your participation..期待您的参与。 hall at 8 a.m.next Friday,which will last around 3 晨诵2◆背满分模板 NOTICE 模板中黑体字部分是横 The 2024 Student Volleyball Match is scheduled to be held in our school.In order to ensure the smooth running of the event,it is necessary to recruit 写通知时可以通用的部分，其 他部分可以根据写作要求灵 volunteers to provide quality service. The volunteers are required not only to be healthy and organized.but to be able 活处理。 主体部分往往是一般现 to respond to emergencies flexibly.In addition,the ones with genuine passion for 在时，有时也可以用一殷将 sports or related experience are preferred.Once accepted,the volunteers will receive 来时。 appropriate and efficient training in the gymnasium next weekend. 文章人称以第三人称 Looking forward to your application. 为主。 Students'Union Wednesday 通知写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆通知 周四下午，你校足球队将与光明中学举行一场足球友谊赛，请你为你校足球社团写一则通知。内容包括：L.比赛 的时间、地点：2.欢迎同学观赛助威：3.观赛注意事项。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Notice Football Club 133 肩航英雷I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 [范文] Notice There will be a friendly soccer match between our school and Guangming High School in the coming Thursday.whose purpose is to enrich our campus life,enhance communication between schools and improve our soccer skills.The activity is scheduled to be held from 3:00 p.m.to 4:30 p.m.on our playground. All the students who have affection for soccer games are welcome to watch it.Be sure to arrive at the playground punctually and offer your cheers to both teams.With each participating team making full preparations for the coming match.I'm sure this will be a visual feast for everyone.Above all,do keep it in mind that friendship must come first. Football Club 高分亮点 高分词汇：①purposen.目的，意图（②enhance.增强，提高，改善③affectionn.喜爱，关爱④arrive at到达 ⑤punctually ad.准时地，如期地⑥visual feast视觉盛宴 高分句型：（句型I)There will be a friendly socecer match between our school and Guangming High School in the coming Thursday,whose purpose is to enrich our campus life.enhance communication between schools and improve our soccer skills.(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句) (句型2)Above all,.do keep it in mind that friendship must come first,.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 跟踪训练2◆通知 前不久，你校学生一同观看了神舟十七号飞船发射直播，大家备受鼓舞。为使学生了解更多的航天知识，你校决 定举行一次关于航天科学的讲座。假设你是国际学校的学生会主席李华，请用英语写一则书面通知。内容包括：1. 讲座的时间、地点：2.讲座的目的及内容：3，希望同学们踊跃参加。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Notice The Students Union [范文] Notice Aimed at enabling students to acquire more knowledge about space flight,a lecture themed on space science will be held in the school hall at 2 o'clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours. The lecture mainly consists of three parts,the first of which is a brief introduction of the history.recent launch as well as development trends of space flight in our country.The second part presented by the same experts will deal with the related scientific benefits.Additionally the third part highlights interaction,where participants can ask questions they are curious about. Those interested in the lecture are highly welcome to take part. The Students Union 高分亮点 高分词汇：①acquire v.获得②consist of组成③trend n.趋势，动态④additionally ad.另外，此外 ⑤interaction n.互动，交流 高分句型：（句型I)The lecture mainly consists of three parts,the first of which is a brief introduction of the history, recent launch as well as development trends of space flight in our country.(运用了介词+关系代词which引导的非限制 性定语从句) (2)Additionally the third part highlights interaction.where participants can ask questions they are curious about (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) 134 Week14通知&优秀品行类读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能14 如何提高续写中的动作描述 一、动作精准化 例2没有买到票。He didn't buy the ticket.. Part1细致描写 【句型升级】 试比较下面两句： Having queued for 3 hours.he was told that the ①The little boy said sorry to his mother.小男孩对他 tickets had been sold out.在排队等了3个小时后，他被告 妈妈说对不起。 知票已经卖完了。 2The little boy hung his head and mumbled an 例3孩子们哭了。The children cried, apology to his mother.小男孩垂着头，咕脓着向他母亲 Deeply moved by the story.the children began to cry. 道款。 们被这个故中深深感动了，于是开始哭了起来。 我们来具体分析一下：第一句中“said sorry to”不带 任何感情色彩，而第二句中使用了具体化的表示“说”的 跟踪练习 动词mumbled(咕哝)，从而使一个不愿意道歉又不得不 道款的小男孩的形象栩栩如生地浮现在读者脑海中。 【,根据提示进行句型升级（增加细节，注意逻辑关系和 Part2添加适当的修饰成分 语义的合理) 除了精准选用表示动作的词语，还要给动词加上适1.当母亲拿着杰克献给她的所有的野花时，她高兴极了 当的修饰成分。动作描写中最常见的修饰成分就是状 Mother was overjoyed when she held all the wild flowers 语，如副词、介词短语(wit讪+情感名词，wth+身体部位，n Jack had given to her. +名词)等。 (1)当母亲拿着杰克献给她的所有的野花时，她脸上洋溢 比如下面两句： 着幸福，热泪盈眶。(glow with happiness,.well up) DThe wolf also noticed them and turned its head Her face glowed with happiness,tears welling back,shouting at Paul and Becky.狼也注意到了他们，回 up in her eyes when the mother held all the wild 头朝保罗和贝基大叫。 flowers Jack had given to her. 2At the same time,the wolf also noticed them and (2)当母亲拿着杰克献给她的所有的野花时，一阵喜悦涌 fiercely turned its head back.shouting loudly at Paul and Becky.与此同时，狼也注意到了他们，恶狠狠地转过头， 遍全身，她喜极而泣。(sweep over,stream) 对保罗和贝基大叫。 A wave of happiness swept over her.and tears 我们来具体分析一下：第二句中加上了at the same of joy streamed down her cheeks when the mother time与此同时/fiercely恶狠狠地/loudly“大声地”这三个 held all the wild flowers Jack had given to her. 副词，把两个人遇到狼这个危险情况生动表达了出来 2.看到那个不幸的场景，她难过极了。 二、动作过程化 Seeing the unfortunate scene,she was so upset. 例1他上了车。He got into a taxi. (1)看到那个不幸的场景，她默默地站着，泪水顺着脸 【句型升级】 颠流了下来。(roll down,cheek) He stopped the taxi.jumped in with the suitcase and Seeing the unfortunate scene,she stood silently. told the driver,.“Go to the police station,please."他拦下 tears rolling down his cheeks. 了车，拿者箱子跳进了车里，然后对司机说，“请到警察 (2)看到那个不幸的场景，她痛苦地摇了摇头，嚎陶大 局去“ 哭。(miserably,burst into tears) 例2她会兴奋地下车。She would get off the car Seeing the unfortunate scene,she shook her head excitedly. miserably,bursting into tears 【句型升级】 Ⅱ，用所给提示完成句子 She would get off the car excitedly,laughing and dancing around.她会兴奋地下车，又笑又跳。 1他大发雷霆，用他那可怕的大眼睛瞪着我，大喊：“你真 三、高级语法动作表达 是个白痴。”(burn with anger) 例1老人静坐。The old man sat quietly. Burning with anger,he glanced at me with his big The old man sat under the sunset,reading the frightening eyes.yelling,"You are such an idiot." newspaper and listening to the radio.老人坐在夕阳下，看2.当夜幕降临时，简坐在草地上，盯着广阔的天空，害怕 报纸，听收音机。 而饥饿。(doig,形容词短语作伴随状语) 启航语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 As night was beginning to fall.Jane sat on the grass, 退。(doing,doing)】 staring at the vast sky,frightened and hungry. Facing the four strong men,the wolf might feel 3.面对这四个强壮的人，狼可能会感到受到威胁，开始撤： threatened,starting to withdraw. Friday 读后续写示例指导14 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 "It's been potatoes all week,mom!Can't we go to the dinner for a burger and an ice cream?That's all I want for my birthday!"Eve's 8-year-old son Dylan threw his arms around her shoulders,looking at her hopefully.In her heart,she wanted to throw Dylan the biggest birthday party ever,with balloons and a delicious cake with 8 beautiful eandles on it.But in reality,Eve could afford none of that.After being let go from the third temporary job and paying the overdue bills,she didn't have enough money left. "Sorry,baby.I can't afford meals..."Eve said sadly.Seeing tears in his mother's eyes,Dylan quickly changed his tone ()He'd seen her struggling to make ends meet and couldn't stand hurting her."Actually,mom,that potato salad looks delicious!Can I have some more?"He asked her cheerfully. After the humble meal.Eve did housework.Dylan took out an envelope hidden on his bookshelf.He'd secretly saved a few dollars from the lunch money his mom had given him over the past few years.He counted the money."$28!"His eyes lit up."I can get a good meal for mom!" Dylan slid out with the envelope and walked to the next block,where he saw exactly what he'd expected-the mobile food truck!He'd seen it a few times and wondered why the place was always crowded.He waited until the crowd waiting to buy food at the counter cleared away. "Sir!Please give me everything I can get for $28!"Dylan requested eagerly.But Martin,the owner of the food truck,replied,"Sorry,kid.We're out of everything today!" Disappointed,Dylan was seated on the sidewalk,mumbling ()"It's my birthday,but I can't even treat her to a nice meal.She does so much for me.I thought,for once,I would do something nice for her."He kept talking out loud to himself.giving into his urge to cry. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 "Woah.happy birthday.boy!"Martin said,sitting down next to Dylan. The next morning,Eve woke up to find a food truck outside her house. 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Dy在生日这天想要改变伙食，但家庭条件无法负担，他不忍心伤害母亲，而后 他拿出自己攒下的钱跑去餐车处，想要在生日这天为母亲买一份大餐来感谢母亲的养育之情的故事。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Dylan,Eve and Martin. When:8-year-old Dylan's birthday. Where:In Dylan's house. What:Dylan treated his poor mother to a nice meal on his birthday. Why:"Sorry,kid.We're out of everything today!" 136 Week14通知&优秀品行类读后续写 (2)Details: DSeeing tears in his mother's eyes,Dylan quickly changed his tone. 看到母亲眼中的泪水，Dylan迅速改变了语气。 本句为人物描写，运用了现在分词作状语的用法来表达Dyn是一个心地善良，通情达理的好孩子。 2Dylan slid out with the envelope and walked to the next block,where he saw exactly what he'd expected-the mobile food truck! Dyla拿着信封溜了出来，走到下一个街区，在那里他看到了他所期待的一流动食品卡车！ 本句为动作描写，运用了slid out,walked to the next block,saw三个动作，where引导的定语从句，what引导的宾语 从句，这些都表达出了Dylan急切地想为母亲弄些好吃的东西的迫切心情。 3"Sir!Please give me everything I can get for $28!"Dylan requested eagerly.But Martin,the owner of the food truck,replied."Sorry,kid.We're out of everything today!" “先生！请把我能用28美元买到的东西都给我！”Dylan急切地问道。但是餐车的老板Martin回答说：“对不起，孩 子。我们今天什么都没有了！” 这两句为对话描写，运用了定语从句，副词eagerly,连词But和Somy,kid.这一系列表达，突出了Dylan为母亲购买 食物的急切心情和老板的善良。 4He kept talking out loud to himself,giving into his urge to cry. 他不停地自言自语，忍不住想哭。 本句为心理描写，运用了动词短语kept talking out loud to himself和giving into his urge to cry,现在分词作伴随状 语，表达了Dylan在不能为母亲购买食品后的悲伤心情。 2.找线索 (I)根据第三段中的“I can get a good meal for mom!"和第六段中的“I thought,for once,I would do something nice for her.."可知，Dylan是一个非常有爱心、品德优良的孩子，他一定要在他生日这天为母亲做些事情，这些线素在续 写的第一段中可呈现出来。 (2)根据第三段中的“I can get a good meal for mom!"和第五段中的"But Martin,the owner of the food truck, replied,‘Sory,kid.We're out of everything today！'"可知，Dylan决定为他的母亲弄一顿美餐，但是餐车的老板 Martin遗憾地告诉他，食品已经没有了，这些线索可在续写的第二段中呈现出老板Main的善良，Dylan的爱心，母 亲的感动等，以此来凸显主题。 3.定思路 (1)由续写第一段首句内容“·哇，生日快乐，孩子！'Martin坐在Dylan旁边说。”及续写第二段首句内容“第二天早 上，Eve醒来时发现屋外有一辆食品车。"可知，第一段可描写Martin了解到今天是Dylan的生日以及通过谈话得知 了Dylan的真正打算。 (2)由续写第二段首句内容“第二天早上，Ev©醒来时发现屋外有一辆食品车。”可知，第二段可描写Ev心看到孩子 为她购买的大餐后的喜悦以及最后的感悟：孝心无价。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 "Woah.happy birthday.boy!"Martin said.sitting down next to Dylan.With kindness in his heart,he asked patiently in a soft voice to get to know the intention of the little boy who only got s28.Hearing what happened to Dulan,Martin took him outside to purchase some fresh cooking materials for the big meal which would be prepared for Dulan's mother Dulan was thankful to express his gratitude by aiving all his moneu to the food truck owner. The next morning,Eve woke up to find a food truck outside her house."Hellol It's Martin."Opening the door confused with all the delicious food in the food truck.Eve couldn't believe her eues and felt like a dream "It was your son Dulon who prepared all these food for you Enioy it"Touched by these words,Eve pulling Dulan into her arms burst into tears.They sat together and enioued the meal surprised to discover a note with $28 under a plate reading "Filial pietu is priceless" 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I live in a small but lovely neighborhood.Our house is neither large nor luxurious,but it has a fairly big garden.My father loves his garden.He planted some seeds in it and took good care of the plants.watering them,applying fertilizer. weeding and getting rid of bugs.He was never tired of doing all that stuff.But at that time,I didn't understand why working in the dirt excited him so much. Unfortunately,in the summer vacation before senior high school,my father was seriously injured in an accident.He had to stay in bed for a while.My mother had several business trips,so she couldn't take care of the garden.I didn't want my father to worry.I said that I would take care of his garden until he recovered.I assumed that the little plants would continue to grow as long as they had water,and luckily it rained fairly often,so I didn't think much about the garden. One Saturday morning,my father said to me,"Christine,the vegetables should be about ready to be picked.Let's have a salad today !I went out to the garden and was upset to see that many of the lettuce (leaves and carrots had been half eaten by bugs.There were hundreds of bugs all over them! I panicked for a moment but then I quietly went to the nearest supermarket to buy some vegetables.When I was making the salad,my mother came home and saw the bag from the supermarket in the kitchen.I was embarrassed and admitted, "Dad would like a salad,but the garden is a disaster.I don't want to disappoint him,so I went to the store and bought some vegetables."My mother smiled,saying."Honey,you know what is the right thing to do." 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him. Feeling guilty,I decided to do the right thing. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线崇晨开，讲述了作者爸爸一直悉心照料着莱园，有一天受伤之后就交给作者来照料，但 作者却没有花心思去做好，结果菜园里的蔬菜都被虫糟罩了。有一天，作者父亲想吃自己种的蔬莱做的沙拉，作者怕 爸爸伤心，于是偷偷去商店买了蔬菜，后来被妈妈发现了。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句“当我把沙拉递给父亲时，父亲似乎很高兴。”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：爸爸 品尝沙拉并表扬我将菜园照顺得很好，而我却非常尷尬和羞愧。（学生也有可能在第一段续写父亲发现了端倪，揭穿 了我，这样第二段的ight thing就是我决定将功补过，在菜园辛勤劳作，只要能自圆其说也可以。)②由续写第二段首 句“感到内疚，我决定做正确的事。”可以预测：我向爸爸坦白了一切，而爸爸鼓励我将功补过。我学着父亲的样子在 菜园劳作，同时也在这次经历中获得成长。 [范文] My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him."It looks so good.Your salad makes my mouth water,"Dad couldn't wait to try it.He forked a piece into his mouth and chewed slowly.his face spreading in a satisfied smile.Giving me a thumbs-up,he said,"Little did I know you are so good at gardening.You are a man of your word."My father kept praising me.which made my ears burning.Feeling bad about what I had done,I forced a bitter smile.How could I cheat my father? Feeling guilty,I decided to do the right thing.With tears welling up in my eyes,I told my fother I didn't live up to his expectations and that the garden was a mess.To my surprise,instead of scolding me,my father patted me on the shoulder gently and told me to turn to him if I needed any help.Under his guidance,I learned to apply fertilizer,weed and remove bugs.The vegetables became better and better day by day,and so did my father.I began to enjoy taking care of vegetables and I finally understood my father's pleasure of working in the dirt. 38 Week14通知&优秀品行类读后续写 高分亮点 高分词汇：①chew.咀嚼，嚼碎②foreed a bitter smile强颜欢笑③live up to达到，实现④expectation m.期待： 顶期⑤fertilizern.肥料，化肥 高分句型：（句型I)My father kept praising me,which made my ears burning..(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从 句) (句型2)Feeling bad about what I had done,I forced a bitter smile,.(运用了非谓语动词和what引导的宾语从句) Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假如你是李华，是学校英语协会的负责人。最近，你校准备邀请英国心理学专家Curry Smith就学习减压举行一 个讲座，请你用英语出一则通知。要点：1.讲座地点、时间：2.讲座专家，内容：3.注意事项。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Notice School English Society [范文] Notice A lecture concerning relieving study pressure is scheduled to be held at the school auditorium from 3:00 p.m.to 5:00 p.m.this Friday. As planned,a famous English psychologist named Curry Smith is going to deliver the lecture,in which he will help us analyse the causes of study pressure.Additionally,he intends to offer us some relaxing and interesting ways to reduce pressure.Definitely,every attendee is welcome to ask questions. During the course of the lecture,being polite and active is a must.Also,it is crucial not to litter or make noise.You are bound to benefit a lot from it. School English Society 高分亮点 高分词汇：①schedulev.安排，顶定②auditorium n.观众席；礼堂，会堂③deliver the lecture发表演讲④analyse .分析，细察⑤pressure n.压力⑥definitely adv,肯定地，当然⑦crucial adj.重要的 高分句型：（句型l)A famous English psychologist named Curry Smith is going to deliver the lecture,in which he will help us analyse the causes of study pressure.(运用了“介词+美系代词”结构的非限制性定语从句) (句型2)During the course of the lecture,being polite and active is a must.(运用了动名词作主语) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When Anna thought she finally knew what life was all about,it dealt her a heavy blow.Her husband passed away suddenly.They had been making plans to get away on a dream trip to France.Now it was too late,and Anna wept over all the memories they wouldn't be sharing.She was heartbroken. "I'm so worried about Mom,"Anna's daughter Clara said to her son,Ron,one day."It's been over six months,and she's still sad.She won't leave the house,not for anything." Ron,a fourteen-year-old boy who had been close to his grandparents,was upset."Poor grandma!"he sighed.He knew his grandpa was her world.Ron wondered how he could cheer his grandma up."What if I start taking her out in the afternoon for walks the way she and Grandpa used to do?"he asked."That's a great idea,Ron!"his mother said. 39 启航演语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 So the next day,Ron showed up at his grandma's house an hour before sunset."Hey,grandma,"he said."How about walking down to the lake and watching the sunset?"Anna turned her face away so her grandson couldn't see her tears and said."Why would I want to do a stupid thing like that?Don't bother me!" Ron was hurt by his grandmother's words,but what he didn't know was that Anna was just as upset."Why did I say that to the poor boy?"she asked herself."He was only trying to help." That night Ron told his mom what had happened."Maybe she doesn't want our help."he said sadly.Clara replied. "She definitely needs it.Your grandpa would hope she could continue to love life.He once always brought her red roses and she loved them very much!" That was when a brilliant idea struck Ron.He decided to buy his grandma roses like his grandpa used to do.Maybe the daily reminder that she was loved would tur things around.But first,he needed to earn money to buy roses,which weren't cheap.Ron decided that he wasn't going to say a word to his mom.He was going to do this for his grandmother,all by himself. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The next Saturday morning,he tried to find a part-time job. When Ron arrived at his grandma's house,he saw her holding the roses and smiling. [语篇解读】本文以人物为线素晨开，讲述了Anna在丈夫去世后很伤心，女儿Clar很担，心母亲。Clara的儿子Ron 和爷爷奶奶关系很好，他学着爷谷的样子道请奶奶Aa出去散步，但遭到了奶奶的拒绝。后来他想到一个好主意， 想要学着爷谷的样子给奶奶买玫瑰，但他需要先赚钱，并打算独自完成这件事。 [段落续写】①由续写第一段首句内容“第二个星期六早上，他想找一份兼职工作。”可知，第一段可描写Ron用兼 职工作赚得的薪水为奶奶买了花，并打算去看望奶奶。②由续写第二段首句内容“当Ro来到奶奶家时，他看到她拿 着玫瑰微笑着。”可知，第二段可描写奶奶收到花后情绪好转，逐渐恢复了对生活的热情。 [范文] The next Saturday moming,he tried to find a part-time job.After many efforts,he managed to land a port-time job in a grocery store on weekends.Eager to help his grandma,Ron worked hard.And to save money,he stopped eating out and buying snacks.Finally,he received his first salary.Ron went to the local flower store and ordered some flowers to be delivered to Anna's house that afternoon.Then he decided to visit his grandma to see if the flowers would help and to see if his hord work was worth it. When Ron arrived at his grandma's house.he saw her holding the roses and smiling."Look,Ron!"she cried in delight."Someone sent me flowers.just like your grandfather used to do.."She said that these flowers brought her good memories back.He said,"It's so good to see you look better,Grandma."Ron was even more determined to keep those flowers coming.Anna slowly recovered her passion for life.And she was planning the trip to France she always dreamed of with her daughter and her son-in-law.She never found out who was sending the flowers,and Ron is still keeping that secret. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①grocery n.食品杂货店②snack n.零食，点心3 in delight高兴地④determined adj.下定决心的，坚 定的⑤recover.恢复（健康，精神，体力）⑥passion m.热情，酷爱 高分句型：（句型I)Then he decided to visit his grandma to see if the flowers would help and to see if his hard work was worth it.(由连接词if引导的宾语从句作sce的宾语) (句型2)And she was planning the trip to France she always dreamed of with her daughter and her son-in-law.(省略关 系代词的定语从句)】 (句型3)She never found out who was sending the flowers,and Ron is still keeping that secret.(由连接代词who引导 的宾语从句作found out的宾语) 140