Week 12 现象评论&体育运动类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 12 现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 Monday 如何写好现象评论 个人观点类文章属于议论文范畴，是就某一话题或热点问 首段：点明白己的观点 题阐述自己的观点和看法的文章。在写作过程中，要先明确自 己的观点，态度鲜明，不能模棱两可：还要围绕论点多角度论证， 局谋篇 中段：多角度论证自己的观点 论据要确切、充分，最后进行总结，重申白己的观点和立场。 ·尾段：重申自已的观点和立场 典题示例 假定你是李华，本月是你校的读书月，作为校报的记者，你做了一项调查，发现很多学生忙于作业，没有时间进行 课外阅读。请你就此用英文写一篇文章，阐述自己的看法。内容包括：1.阅读的好处：2.呼吁大家多读好书。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 思路点拨 OStep One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 般现在时 主题 个人观点 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题：第二段：论证自己的观点：第三段：重申观点 OStep Two 词汇运用 L.调查，了解look into 6.视野vision 2.进行，实施carry out 7.灵感inspiration 3.课外的，工作之外的extracurricular 8.鼓励encouragement 4.起着重要作用play an important part 9.阶梯ladder 5.开阁broaden 10.总之in conclusion Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我想了解学生的阅读情况。 I want to look into the students'reading situation. (2)上周，我对我们学校的课外阅读进行了调查。 Last week,I carried out a survey about extracurricular reading in our school. (3)我们都知道，阅读在我们的学习和生活中起着重要的作用。 Reading plays an important part in our study and life is well known. (4)首先，阅读可以开阔我们的视野。 First of all,reading can broaden our vision. (5)你可以从你所读的书中获得知识。 You can gain knowledge from the books you read. (6)你也可以得到灵感和鼓励 You can also get inspiration and encouragement. (7)如果你读更多的书，你会发现阅读更有吸引力。 If you read more books,you will find reading more attractive. 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (8)更重要的是，著名作家高尔基曾经说过。 What's more,the famous writer Gorky once said. (9)书籍是人类进步的阶梯。 Books are the ladder of human progress. (10)总之，阅读是非常有用的 In conclusion,reading is very useful. (1山)你每天可以抽出时间读一些好书。 You may spare your time to read some good books every day. (12)你会发现阅读给你的生活带来了不同。 You'll find reading makes a difference to your life. 2.句式升级 (1)用in order to作目的状语合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)， In order to look into the students'reading situation,last week,I carried out a survey about extracurricular reading in our school. (2)用t构成的形式主语升级句子(3)。 It is well known that reading plays an important part in our study and life. (3)用not only.,but also句式合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)，并注意用倒装句式。 Not only can you gain knowledge from the books you read.but also you can get inspiration and encouragement. (4)用the more.,the more句式升级句子(7)。 The more you read,the more attractive you may find reading is. (5)用s引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。 What's more,as the famous writer Gorky once said,"Books are the ladder of human progress." (6)用“祈使句+and+并列句”合并上题中的句子(11)和句子(12)。 Spare your time to read some good books every day.and you'll find reading makes a difference to your life. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] In order to look into the students'reading situation,last week,I carried out a survey about extracurricular reading in our school.It is well known that reading plays an important part in our study and life First of all,reading can broaden our vision.Not only can you gain knowledge from the books you read,but also you can get inspiration and encouragement.The more you read,the more attractive you may find reading is.What's more,as the famous writer Gorky once said,"Books are the ladder of human progress." In conclusion,reading is very useful.Spare your time to read some good books every day.and you'll find reading makes a difference to your life. Tuesday 现象评论满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 look into调查（问题） survey n.调查 carry out实施 convey.表达，传递 phenomenon n.现象 from my perspective在我看来 in conclusion总之 drowning n.溺水 alone adj.独自，单独 companion m.同伴 permission m.同意，许可 opinion.意见，看法 make full use of充分利用 take into consideration考虑 benefit n.好处，益处 essential adj.必不可少的，非常重要的 attach more importance to更加重视 precious ad.宝贵的，珍贵的 nevertheless ad.然而，不过 Week12现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 父母下班后的疲倦，而且能加强相互之间的关系，也有 【话题句式 助于培养劳动意识。 引出话题先声夺人 7.With fewer and fewer people using cash,non-cash 1.When it comes to how to succeed,many people may payments are becoming increasingly popular,especially think of the proverb "Where there is a will,there is a in China.随着使用现金的人越来越少，非现金支付变 wy.”当谈及如何成功时，很多人或许会想起谚语“有 得越来越受欢迎，尤其是在中国。 志者，事竞成。” 8.It happened not only to children but also to adults,which 2.Although everyone wants to succeed in what he tries, is really heartbreaking.这种事不仅发生在孩子身上，也 sometimes failure can't be avoided.虽然每个人都想在他 发生在成年人身上，真是令人心碎。 所尝试的事情中成功，但有时失败是不可避免的。 首尾结合余音回味 3.Nevertheless,.different people hold different opinions..然而， 9.Personally,doing the chores is absolutely a necessity. 不同的人持有不同的观点。 个人而言，做家务是绝对必要的。 4.Recently,there are many reports about drowning.最近， 10.So I feel we all should learn to protect ourselves when in 有很多关于溺水的报道。 or around water.所以我觉得我们都应该学会在水里或 主题部分娓娓道来 水周围保护自己。 5.Not surprisingly.most high school students seldom do11.We should focus on learning knowledge rather than housework for lack of time.不足为奇的是，大多数高中 WeChat study groups.我们应该专注于学习知识，而不 生很少做家务，因为时间不够。 是微信学习小组。 6.Not only can it relieve our parents'tiredness after work 12.Life is precious.We must value our lives and keep away and strengthen the mutual ties,but also it contributes to: from drowning.生命是宝贵的。我们必须珍惜生命，避 cultivating the awareness of labor.它不仅能减轻我们的 免湖水。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 A recent survey shows that most students are barely involved in doing housework at home.Here.I'm writing to convey my opinions about this phenomenon. 模板中黑体字部分是描写现象 From my perspective.being busy with study largely accounts for students" 评论时可以通用的部分，其他部分 absence from housework.However,while it's essential that we students should 可以根据写作要求灵活处理。 be devoted to our academic progress,we should also undertake some chores. 第一段往往是一殷现在时，第 Doing housework can equip us with necessary living skills.Besides.some hard 二、三段可以多用一般将来时。 housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise,strengthening our 文章人称以第三人称为主，有 physical qualities. 时也可以用第一人称。 In conclusion.doing housework should be attached more importance to. Let's embrace the joy of doing chores. Wednesday 现象评论写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆现象评论 假定你是李津，你在某英文网上论坛看到大家在讨论人们使用非现金支付越来越普遍的现象，你打算在论坛里 跟帖讨论。内容包括：1.非现金支付的好处：2.非现金支付的弊端：3.你的观点。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 [范文] With fewer and fewer people using cash,non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular,especially in China. 3 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Non-cash payment has many advantages.First of all,we can pay for whatever we buy with only a smart phone.Second,it reduces the risk of losing money.and it can prevent receiving counterfeit money.However. non-cash payment also has many disadvantages.The money can't arrive in time.It is not convenient for some elderly people who do not use mobile phones to use it.In addition,it cannot protect people's privacy. As for me,I prefer non-cash payment.I think it is an indispensable part of modern life. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①increasingly ad.越来越多地，不断增加地②advantage n.有利条件，优势③counterfeit adj.伪造的， 假冒的④however ad.然而，可是⑤as for至于⑥prefer v.更喜爱，宁可⑦indispensable adj.不可或缺的，必 需的 高分句型：（句型I)First of all,we can pay for whatever we buy with only a smart phone,(运用了whatever引导的宾 语从句) (句型2)It is not convenient for some elderly people who do not use mobile phones to use it..(运用了who引导的定语 从句和t作形式主语) 跟踪训练2◆现象评论 最近你在某英文报纸上读到一篇文章，文中说道，虽然现在的生活条件越来越好，青少年的快乐却少了。请你就 此话题写一篇短文，表达你的想法。内容包括：1.导致该现象的原因：2.提出相应的建议。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Recently,I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers,which said that [范文] Recently,I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers,which said that despite better living conditions, teenagers are becoming unhappier. Why are teenagers unhappier?For one thing,teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others for lack of time,which makes them feel lonely.For another,they suffer from too much pressure of study. making it easier for them to be depressed.Therefore,action must be taken to improve it.To begin with, teenagers should be encouraged to take activities to form harmonious interpersonal relationship.Besides, parents need to listen to their children more,which can show respect and promote understanding. I am convinced that with our joint efforts,the situation will be gradually improved. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①despite prep.尽管，即使②have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难③depressed adj.抑郁的，沮丧 的④therefore ad.因此⑤harmonious adj.和睦的，融洽的⑥interpersonal a.人际关系的，人际的 ⑦convince,.使确信，使信服 高分句型：（句型I)Recently,I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers,.which said that despite better living conditions,teenagers are becoming unhappier,(运用了which引导的定语从句) (句型2)I am convinced that with our joint effort心，the situation will be gradually improved.(运用了that引导的寒语从句) Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能12 如何提高续写中的心理活动描述 一、开心 解读：①句中shone like a diamond和②中lit up the 平庸版：He was happy. whole room形象地表现了高兴的程度，用这种比喻取得 升阶例句 了良好的表达效果。 ①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.t她脸上 二、伤心 的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 平庸版：He was sad. ②Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整 升阶例句 个房间。 Week12现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 ①He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks.他七、感谢 静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。 平庸版：I thanked my father, 2Hearing the news,so desperate was he that he 升阶例句 drowned sadness in wine..听到这个消息，他绝望地借酒 DI ran over to my father,reached out my hands and 消愁。 embraced him tightly,我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。 解读：①句中tears rolling down his cheeks和2中 2With grateful tears hanging in his eyes,he kept drowned sadness in wine更加突出了那种伤心无语和悲痛 extending(表达)his gratitude,“Thank you so much!”他 欲绝的心情。 眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！” 三，紧张 解读：①句中embraced him tightly和②中tears 平庸版：He was nervous.. hanging in his eyes这两个动作，形象地抓住了那种用语言 升阶例句 无法表达，而只能用肢体动作来体现的那种来自内心的 DStanding in the classroom,I became increasingly 感激。 nervous and could feel my heart beating wildly.站在教室 里，我越来越紧张，我能听见自己心跳加速的声音。 跟踪练习 2Before the competition,his palms were sweaty and 把下列句子进行表达升级： knees were soft.比赛前，他手心出汗，膝盖发软。 1,当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。 解读：①句中feel my heart beating wildly和②中 At the sight of the fierce wolf.I felt very scared. knees were soft深刻地刻画了当时的紧张表现，有力地突 -DAt the sight of the fierce wolf.I felt so scared that 出了人物内心那种室息的紧张不安。 my throat tightened and my knees felt weak_.(嗓子发 四、尴尬/羞愧 紧，膝盖发软) 平庸版：He was embarrassed/.ashamed, 2At the sight of the fierce wolf,I froze with terror. 升阶例句 too scared to move an inch,(吓呆了，不敢动弹) ①His face burned with embarrassment/shame.他因道 At the sight of the fierce wolf,I was seized by a 尬而满脸通红。/他窘得脸都红了。 strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. 2)She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face (被深深的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗) burning..她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。 2.当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。 解读：①句中burned with embarrassment/shame和② When the host announced that she won the prize,she was 中feel her face burning中burm用得很是巧妙，形象地表达 very excited. 了人物当时那种羞愧难当、无地自容的窘境。 -DWhen the host announced that she won the prize. 五、愤怒 her eyes twinkled with excitement.(她激动得两眼 平庸版：He was angry, 放光) 升阶例句 2)When the host announced that she won the prize. ①His face clouded with anger..他气得脸色阴沉。 her heart was thumping with excitement.(她激动得 ②He glared at me with burning eyes..他用灼热的目光 心怦怦跳) 怒视着我。 3 When the host announced that she won the prize, 解读：①句中face clouded和②中burning eyes真正 a wide excitement took hold of her,(她兴奋不能自 刻画了人物的生气程度和即将带来的后果，为下面的续 已) 写埋下了伏笔。 3.一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。 六、绝望 Upon hearing the bad news,she felt very sad. 平庙版：He felt hopeless/desperate. -(DUpon hearing the bad news,her heart ached,tears 升阶例句 streaming down her cheeks.(她心痛，眼泪直流】 DUpon hearing the bad news,he was suddenly thrown 2Upon hearing the bad news,she.numb with grief, into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.听到这 had trouble speaking..(悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话) 个坏消息，他突然被投人黑暗世界，陷入绝望。 -3Upon hearing the bad news,she felt seized by a 2He felt left out and was getting desperate with burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly. loneliness.他感觉被遗弃了，孤独使他感到绝望。 一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣) 解读：①句中thrown into a world of darkness和②中4.当妈妈亲吻他时，小婴儿开心极了 felt left out让读者一下就体会到了那种真正的绝望，欲哭 When his mother kissed him on the cheek.the baby was 无泪，生无可恋。 very happy. 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 →①When his mother kissed him on the cheek, 6.Sheldon感到非常生气。 it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world Sheldon felt very angry (小婴儿好像在世界之巅，非常开心) DSheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the -2When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek,he room.slamming the door violently behind him. beamed and his bright smile lit up the room.(他眉开 生气以至于他冲出房间，狠狠摔门) 眼笑，笑容照亮房间) 2 Boiling with rage.Sheldon shook his fist at me. -3When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek,he (怒火中烧) danced with joy and sweetness_,(款欣雀跃) 3Filled with anger/fury,Sheldon was unable to utter 5.她感到非常羞愧。 a single word.(说不出话) She felt ashamed 7.Tony感到很绝望。 -1 She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face Tony felt hopeless/desperate. burning.(如此羞愧，脸上滚烫) DAs the result of an accident,Tony was suddenly -2So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood thrown into a world of darkness and sank into ush to her face·(感到血液浦上脸颊) hopelessness.(被投人黑暗之中，陷入绝望) →③So ashamed did she feel that_she was close to 2 Tony felt left out and was getting desperate with tears.(她快哭了) loneliness.(感觉被遗忘，忽视) Friday 读后续写示例指导12 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The football season was almost over.Sally had been playing football all summer.She really enjoyed running around with the other players in her bright orange uniform,chasing the black and white ball across the grassy field.As much as she tried,though.Sally still had not scored one single goal. Before each game,they had a practice session.The coach showed Sally and her team how to pass the ball to each other and take shots at the goal.Sally was pretty good at passing the ball,but even during practices.she couldn't kick the ball past the goalkeeper.She wondered if she should quit football and join a different club. “Don't give up,”said the coach.But it was half-time,and Sally was feeling frustrated(诅丧).She was trying！Every time she got a chance to kick the ball,it would go in the wrong direction or a player from the other team would take control of it.She sipped at her cola and pouted ) The break was over and the referee blew his whistle to start the game again.The two teams walked back onto the field. both determined to win.Sally bent,tied up her shoelace and heard her mother whisper in her ear."Stay focused.Keep your eyes on the ball.Look for an opportunity to get the ball.You can do it." Sally stood up and took a deep breath.Even if she didn't get one goal all summer.she knew that she had tried her best. That was something to be proud of.So she smiled at her mother and headed to her position.The whistle blew,and the game continued. The score was tied with one goal each.The green team was pretty good,but Sally's orange team was fast.The girls' ponytails bounced as they ran,with many feet kicking frantically at the ball when it came near them.It was a rather boring game and Sally's heart was no longer in it. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答 Sally started daydreaming about joining other school clubs. Recalling her mother's words,Sally was woken from her daydream. 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Sly是一名足球队队员，非常热爱足球，但是她一个球也设有进过。教练鼓励 她，母素告诉她“保持专注。眼晴可着球。寻找机会得到球。你可以的。”但是在比赛的时侯，Sy走神了。 16 Week12现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Sally,the coach and her mother. When:The football season was almost over Where:On the football field. What:Sally had been playing football all summer.Much as she tried,though,Sally still had not scored one single goal. Why:It was a rather boring game and Sally's heart was no longer in it. (2)Details: DShe really enjoyed running around with the other players in her bright orange uniform,chasing the black and white ball across the grassy field. 她真的很喜欢穿着鲜艳的橙色制服和其他球员一起跑来跑去，在草地上追逐黑白相间的球。 本句为人物描写，运用了enjoy doing,现在分词作伴随状语来表达Sa山y真的很喜欢足球，也很敬业。 2Every time she got a chance to kick the ball,it would go in the wrong direction or a player from the other team would take control of it.She sipped at her cola and pouted () 每当她有机会踢球时，球就会飞向错误的方向，或者被对方队员控制住。她抿了一口可乐，撕若嘴。 这两句为心理和动作描写，第一句中运用了Every time引导的时间状语从句，第二句通过动作呈现了Sally的沮丧 心情。 3Sally stood up and took a deep breath. Sally站起来，深吸了一口气。 本句为动作描写，运用了stood up和took a deep breath这两个动词表现Sally当时的无奈。 4The girls'ponytails bounced as they ran.with many feet kicking frantically (at the ball when it came near them. 女孩们跑着，马尾辫弹跳着，当球靠近她们时，许多脚疯狂地踢着球。 本句为背景和动作描写，运用了bounced,ran,kicking等一系列动作、s引导的时间状语从句，with复合结构和 when引导的时间状语从句表达了比赛当时的激烈程度。 2.找线索 (I)根据第二段中的“She wondered if she should quit football and join a different club."和第四段中的“Sally bent, tied up her shoelace and heard her mother whisper in her ear.‘Stay focused.,"可知，Sally正处于迷花之中，不想再踢 足球了，准备加入其他俱乐部。而正当她准备要放弃的时候，她回想起妈妈叮嘱她的话，这些线索都可以在续写的 第一段中呈现出来。 (2)根据第一段中的“Much as she tried,though,Sally still had not scored one single goal."第四段中的“Sally bent, tied up her shoelace and heard her mother whisper in her ear.‘Stay focused.'”可知，尽管Saly非常努力，但是一个球 也没有踢进正当她要放弃的时候，她想起了妈妈的话，在续写的第二段中可呈现出Sy振奋精神，终于进球了，帮 助球队赢得了比赛。 3.定思路 (1)由续写第-一段首句内容“Say开始做参加其他学校俱乐部的白日梦。”及第二段首句内容“Sy想起母亲的 话，从白日梦中醒来。”可知，第一段可描写Sy脑子里想象的内容，同时，她想起了母亲的话。 (2)由第二段首句内容“Saly想起母亲的话，从白日梦中醒来。”可知，第二段可描写Sly从白日梦中清醒过来，专 注踢球的过程，最后进球，帮助球队赢得了比赛。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临萃衡水体争抢满分作文 Sally started doydreaming about joining other school clubs.She could be a member of the hip hop club, which her best friend kept talking about She imagined herself doncing on stage of a big ouditorium with thousands of people cheering for her.She could also try a different sport.like jogging or cucling.Anyway. foothall would be her lost choice lust as her mind was wandering she saw a familiar face in the crowd it was her mother "Stau focused you can do it" 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Recalling her mother's words,Sally was woken from her daydream.At that very moment her teammate passed the ball to her.She took control of it and dribbled it between her feet,moving forword toward the net of the green team She passed a few players and was soon positioned right in front of the net Focused on the ball she kicked it as hard as she could The referee blew her whistle "Goall"Sally's team won Her mom was right.All she had to do was stoy focused. Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The gym teacher blew the whistle (and four students dived into the swimming pool.racing to the other side. Then the next four were up,but only three stood on the diving board."Where is Ren?"the gym teacher asked in concern. Ren's face turned red,and he was unsteady.He looked at the pool and stepped back."You cannot make me do this!" he said. Sadie patted him on the back gently."You can do it!I will help you if you need it."Ren stared into Sadie's eyes and he calmed down. "You can do it.You need to pass this class."The gym teacher said.Ren stepped on the diving board,putting his goggles (over his eyes,and the blue cap hid his red hair.The whistle blew and Ren stood there as the other three swam away.Then one boy ran and pushed Ren into the water. Sadie glared at the boy."Why would you do that?"A minute passed by and Ren still wasn't coming up.Sadie jumped in and pulled him out of the water.She gave him CPR(心肺复a苏)，and it took a while until water came out of his lungs. Then finally he spat out the water and sat up.feeling dizzy. Ren looked over at Sadie,who breathed a sigh of relief."Oh,thank goodness!Why didn't you use your arms or legs?"Ren stared away from Sadie,looking at the bottom of the blue pool,then looking up at the gym teacher who rolled his eyes."I can't swim.My parents never taught me as a kid.We are afraid of water. Sadie put her hand on his shoulder."Don't worry.I will teach you how to swim.The water is my favourite place to be in."Ren thought for a while,and nodded gently. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Ren and Sadie finished gym class and walked home together. The gym teacher blew the whistle and this time Ren dived bravely. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了体有深的游泳考试中，不会游泳的Rcn被其他同学推进水中，Sadie把 Ren救上来并准备教他游泳的故事。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“Ren和Sadie上完体有课一起走回家。”可知，第一段可以描写回家途中Ren 告知Sadie害怕水的原因，以及Sadie教Ren游泳的过程。②由续写第二段首句内容“体育老师吹响了哨子，这次Ren 勇政地跳人水中。”可知，第二段可以描写Ren经过努力练习后通过了考试，老师和Sadie的表现以及通过这件事情所 得到的感悟。 [范文] Ren and Sadie finished gym class and walked home together.Sadie said to Ren gently and sincerely."As your friend,I hope you can tell me why you are afraid of water."Hesitating for a second,he shared an experience that he was once narrowly drowned in the river."Let's face and overcome it together."Sadie soid firmly.From then on,Sadie tried all means to help Ren.Gradually Ren overcame his fear and he swam freely in the pool. Sadie even encouraged him to take part in the coming swimming race.When that day came,Ren stepped on the diving board and he kept calm and attentive. The gym teacher blew the whistle and this time Ren dived bravely.He swam with incredible speed and technique. "Incredible,Ren!"The gym teacher helped him out of the water,shaking his hand excitedly and cheerfully. 18 Week12现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 "Congratulations!You pass!"Ren held his fist tight and waved to Sadie gratefully with tears in eyes. Sometimes,it is the encouragement and support from your loved ones that help you step out of your comfort zone and overcome yourself,to develop the potential to the fullest. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①sincerely ad.由衷地，真诚地②narrowly ad业，几乎，勉强地③attentive adj.注意的，专心的，贴心的 ④incredible ad.不可思议的，难以置信的⑤potential ad.潜在的，可能的 高分句型：（句型I)Hesitating for a second,he shared an experience that he was once narrowly drowned in the river. (hat引亭的同位语从句及现在分词作状语) (2)Sometimes,it is the encouragement and support from your loved ones that help you step out of your comfort zone and overcome yourself,to develop the potential to the fullest.(强调句句型) Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 通过问卷调查发现，学校里有三分之一的同学有不良的饮食习惯，如不吃早餐，爱吃垃圾食品等。请你针对这一 现象，写一篇关于养成良好饮食习惯的短文。内容要点如下：1.良好饮食习惯的重要性：2.注意平衡的饮食结构：3.保 持规律的饮食。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 [范文] A recent survey shows that some students have formed a variety of unhealthy eating habits,such as not having breakfast,eating too much junk food and so on,which will surely do harm to their health. As we all know,health is closely connected with what we eat.Therefore,it's important for us to have a balanced diet.To keep fit,we should have a healthy diet.We should not only have different kinds of food,like fish,meat,vegetables,fruit as well as rice,noodles,but also have the food regularly and properly Personally.I think it is important to keep a healthy diet,which is beneficial to a strong body. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①a variety of许多②junk food垃圾食品③do harm to对…有害④keep fit保持身体健康 5 beneficial adi,有益的，有利的 高分句型：（句型I)A recent survey shows that some students have formed a variety of unhealthy eating habits,such as not having breakfast,eating too much junk food and so on,which will surely do harm to their health.(运用了非限制性 定语从句) (句型2)Personally,I think it is important to keep a healthy diet,which is beneficial to a strong body.(运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Edward walked slowly past the school blacktop where his older brother.Leon,was playing basketball with his friends. Leon didn't notice Edward until he turned to shoot the ball.Leon really loved basketball and was good at it.But Edward was another story. Edward would beg to play with them but Leon's friends complained a lot.For some reason,in that last game. Edward's playing was worse than ever.He couldn't do anything right.He was completely unable to keep possession of the ball.He missed even the easy rebounds.His dribbling was useless,and none of his throws were anywhere near the basket. Leon had to turn his brother away. 19 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Edward was always a whiz at math.He was so advanced that he already knew how to solve long division problems before he was taught in school.Word problems,even the complicated ones with several steps,were no problem. One day,Leon's math teacher,pulled him aside."You need to do better.a lot better,or you're not going to pass this class.There's a big test coming up." Leon's heart sank.When he got home,he talked with Edward about it.The boys agreed that over the next two weeks they intended to spend an hour each day after school working on math problems and then an hour playing basketball. "Here is a good one,"Edward said and pointed to a word problem."Why don't you read it?" Leon looked at the book for several seconds."I'm dizzy already!"He exclaimed. "Do you know what the first step is?"asked Edward."The first step is to stay cool and focused."Edward talked Leon through the problem."Think about what you need to find out.Don't let the problem trick you."Step by step,together they figured it out and got the right answer.Leon soon discovered that Edward was really good at helping him. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Soon it was time for basketball practice. The morning of the math test came all too soon for Leon. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Edwd是数学小天才，但不擅长打篮球。每天晚上放学后看到哥哥与 朋友们在篮球场挥汗淋漓，很是羡慕。Edwr阳恳求与哥哥一起打篮球，但表现实在槽糕，运球、传球，投篮，样样都差， 受到哥哥朋友们的蝴笑。Leon迫于朋友的压力，拒绝弟第一起打篮球。哥哥Lon虽然擅长篮球，但数学课最差。一 天，Lon接到数学老师最后通牒，数学学习必须务力，在下次考试中必须过关，否则这学期数学课可能挂科。Lom沮 丧之下，想到与弟弟互布互助。经过共同努力，两人分别在篮球和数学上得到提高，实现了双赢：而且在这个过程中， 兄弟情谊得以加深。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“很快就到了篮球训练的时间。”可知，第一段写Lεon帮助Edward练习篮球。 ②由续写第二段首句内容“数学考试的那天早上对Lcon来说来得太快了。”可知，第二段描写Leon的数学取得很大 的进步，Edward的篮球技巧也提升很大。 [范文] Soon it was time for basketball practice.Edward held the ball with sweaty hands,standing on the court nervously."Stay cool and stay focused.Those rules work in basketball,too."Leon said."Let's start from the basics."With Leon's potient instructions,Edward started to practice dribbling.At first,Edward would get frustrated because he couldn't remember all the steps.But after attentive practice,his performance changed for the better.The next two weeks saw the two brothers inspiring each other and making progress steadily. Edward learned how to shoot,pass and rebound;Leon was able to solve more and more complicated word problems. The morning of the math test eame all too soon for Leon."Stay cool and focused!"With Edward's encouraging words echoing in his mind,Leon calmed down and buried himself in the questions.Eventually,he finished the paper with flying colors.The bell ringing.Leon handed in the paper,darted out of the classroom and went to Edward.He invited Edward to play basketball with him after school.At the court,Leon's friends were amozed by how much Edward had improved.They had so much fun!"That was pretty good basketball for a math whiz,"said Leon as he and Edward headed home."Just like your math grade!It was a pretty good grade for a basketball all-star." 高分亮点 高分词汇：①sweaty adj.出汗的，吃力的②dribble.运球③frustrated adj.懊恼的，沮丧的④steadily ad.逐渐 地，稳步地⑤complicated adj,复杂的，难处理的⑥eventually ad.最终，结果 高分句型：（句型I)At first,Edward would get frustrated because he couldn't remember all the steps.(because引导的 原因秋语从句) (句型2)Leon's friends were amazed by how much Edward had improved.(how much引导的宾语从句)