Week 11 人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 Monday 如何写好人物介绍 总体描述引出人物 近几年高考写作第一节考查范围越来越广，写人叙事类呈现上升趋 势。人物介绍主要涉及人物特征、突出的事迹，以及对个人或者社会的 描述人物的事迹 影响。 局谋篇 ·对人物的总结评价 典题示例 你校正在开展“向民族英雄学习”的活动。请你给学校英语报写一篇短文，谈谈你“心中的民族英雄”。内容包 括：1.英雄人物简介：2.成为你心中英雄的原因：3.向英雄学习」 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The National Hero in My Heart 思路点拨 O Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 说明文 时态 一股过去时和一殷现在时 主题 人物描写 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：基本信息：第二段：主要事迹：第三段：感想 Step Two词汇运用 I.民族英雄national hero 7.人类福祉well-being of mankind 2.致力于devote oneself to 8.坚韧不拔perseverance 3.水稻产量rice output 9.淡薄indifference 4.遭受suffer from l0.个人名利personal fame and fortune 5.饥饿，挨饿starvation 1l.美德virtue 6.奋斗，追求strive for OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我们都知道。 We all know. (2)大多数人心中都有一个或多个民族英雄。 Most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts. (3)对我来说，袁隆平就是我的民族英雄。 For me.Yuan Longping is actually my national hero. (4)袁博士致力于水稻产量的研究。 Dr.Yuan devoted himself to doing research on the rice output. (5)他很年轻。 He was very young. (6)随着新水稻的发展，这样的日子一去不复返了。 With the development of new rice.gone are the days. (7)在那些日子里，中国人遭受着可怕的饥饿。 Chinese people suffered from terrible starvation in those days. 700 Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 (8)世界上更多的国家能够种植更多的大米。 More countries of the world are able to grow more rice. (9)这些国家要养活不断增长的世界人口。 These countries will feed the growing world population. (10)我们应该学习他为人类的福祉而奋斗的精神。 We should learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind. (11)他的坚韧不拔，淡泊个人名利，对研究工作的投人和深刻的洞察力，也是伟大美德」 His perseverance,indifference to personal fame and fortune,his devotion to research work and profound insight are also great virtues. (12)我们应该效仿。 We should follow! 2.句式升级 (1)用s引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 As we all know.most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts. (2)用sice引导的时间状语从句合并上题中的句子(4)和句子(5)。 Dr.Yuan has devoted himself to doing research on the rice output since he was very young. (3)用when引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。 With the development of new rice,gone are the days when Chinese people suffered from terrible starvation. (4)用动词不定式作日的状语合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。 More countries of the world are able to grow more rice to feed the growing world population. (5)用ht引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(11)和句子(12)。 His perseverance.indifference to personal fame and fortune,his devotion to research work and profound insight are also great virtues that we should follow! Step Four连句成篇 [范文] The National Hero in My Heart As we all know,most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts.For me,Yuan Longping is actually my national hero. Dr.Yuan has devoted himself to doing research on the rice output since he was very young.With the development of new rice,gone are the days when Chinese people suffered from terrible starvation.More countries of the world are able to grow more rice to feed the growing world population. We should learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind.His perseverance,indifference to personal fome and fortune,his devotion to research work and profound insight are olso great virtues that we should follow! Tuesday 人物介绍满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 warm-hearted ad.热心肠的 lovely adj.可爱的 casy-going ad.随和的 clever adj聪明的 curious ad.好奇的 be popular with受…欢迎 be full of energy精力充沛 take part in参加 acquire.获得，得到 tirelessly ad.不倦地 play a role in在…发挥作用 creative ad.富有创造性（力）的 independent ad.独立的 willing ad.乐意的，愿意的 enthusiastic ad.热心的 be ready to help others乐于助人 be satisfied/content with对…满意 communicate with与…交流 be very patient with对…非常耐心 play an important role起着一个重要的作用 have a great influence on sb.对某人有着巨大影响 determined adj.决心的，坚定的 启航英语江】 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 :7.He was strict with everybody and in everything he did:as 话题句式 a result,he is deeply loved and respected.他对所有人及 引出话题先声夺人 自己所做的任何事情都严格要求，这让他深受人们的 1.Abraham Lincoln.the son of a poor family.was born in 爱戴和尊数。 Kentucky.亚伯拉罕·林肯，一个贫穷家庭的儿子，出生 8.He gained popularity in local areas,which caught 在背塔基州。 2.Zhong Nanshan,a famous medical expert,was born on attention of a famous Chinese singer.他在当地很有名气， October20th,1936 in Nanjing.著名医学专家钟南山于 这引起了一名中国著名歌唱家的注意。 1936年10月20日生于南京。 首尾结合余音回味 3.Born in Zhejiang,he has made great achievements in 9.Such is our teacher.respected and loved by everyone. exploring space..他出生在浙江，在探索太空方面做出了 是我们的老师，受到大家的尊敬和爱戴。 巨大的贡献。 10.Now he has another dream-to break world records 4.When it comes to the one I'm grateful to,I will tell you again,and he is trying his best to realize it..现在他又有 without hesitation that it is my father..说到我感激的人，我会 了另一个梦想一一再次打破世界纪录，他正在努力实 毫不犹豫地告诉你，那就是我的父亲 现这个梦想。 主题部分娓娓道来 Il.Helen has set an excellent example to all of us.海伦给我 5.In her spare time,she spends lots of time reading famous 们大家树立了一个很好的榜样。 novels.在业余时间，她花了大量的时间阅读名著。 12.It is because of his care and consideration that I grow up 6.He is considered as an inspiring leader and is more and more popular with people.作为一个鼓舞人心的领导，他 happily and healthily.正是因为他的关心和照顾，我才 越来越受人欢迎。 健球快乐地成长。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 The Person I'm Grateful to When it comes to the one I'm grateful to,I will tell you without 模板中黑体字部分是人物描写时可以 hesitation that it is my father. No matter how busy he is,he will drive me to and from school, 通用的部分，其他部分可以根据写作要求灵 活处理。 rain or shine.When I am down or feel anxious about my grades,my father will take me to a park,or invite me to see a movie to help me 第一，三段往往是一般现在时，第二段 relaxed.What's more,he has a positive attitude to life,which has an 主体部分主要是一般过去时。 文章人称以第三人称为主，如果第三段 everlasting effect on me. 有作者的感悟，要用第一人称。 It is because of his care and consideration that I grow up happily and healthily.My gratitude to him is beyond description. Wednesday 人物介绍写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆人物介绍 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“我最喜欢的中国历史人物”为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：1.该人物及 其主要贡献简介：2.该人物对你的影响。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 My favorite figure in Chinese history [范文] My favorite figure in Chinese history When it comes to my fovorite figure in Chinese history,it must be Confucius. As is known to all,he is one of the greatest thinkers and educators in China.He established an educational system,which made an enormous impact on the development of Chinese traditional culture.Furthermore,he Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 made many wise sayings in ancient China that helped many people learn about nature,the world,and the human behavior. In fact,his thoughts always inspire me to pursue knowledge and I'd like to be a teacher like him one day. 一高分亮点 高分词汇：①educator n.教师：教有家②educational system教有制度3 make an enormous impact on对…产生 巨大的影响④furthermore ad,.此外；而且⑤pursuev.继续：追求 高分句型：（句型I)When it comes to my favorite figure in Chinese history,it must be Confucius.(运用了when引导的 时间状语从句) 2)He established an educational system,which made an enormous impact on the development of Chinese traditional culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 跟踪训练2◆人物介绍 《21世纪英文报》正在组织以“你身边值得感恩的人”为题的作文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：1，介绍 你要感恩的人物：2.说明感恩理由。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The Person I'm Grateful to [范文] The Person I'm Grateful to When it comes to the one I'm grateful to,I will tell you without hesitation that it is my mother.Not only does she take good care of me physically.but she also inspires me spiritually. Every morning,she gets up early to prepare a healthy breakfast for my family.No matter how busy she is, she will drive me to and from school,rain or shine.Besides,whatever difficulty I come across,my mother will do her utmost to support me,which always gives me enough courage.Moreover.such an optimistic person is she that I also hove a positive attitude to life. It is because of her care and consideration that I grow up happily and healthily.My gratitude to her is beyond description. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①hesitation n,犹豫；不情愿②physically ad.身体上地③spiritual山yad.精神上地④positive ad山.乐 观的：积极的⑤consideration m.考虑；斟酌 高分句型：（句型I)Not only does she take good care of me physically,but she also inspires me spiritually.(运用了not only,.:but also结构，not only在句首，后接的句子部分倒装) (句型2)Moreover,such an optimistic person is she that I also have a positive attitude to life.(运用了such位于句首引 起的部分倒装句) Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能11 用好高级语言提升应用文写作表达 英语的书面表达题是高考的重要组成部分，是对英：一、加强词汇学习，夯实英语基础 语学习综合运用能力进行考查的题目，在高考中占有相 英语词汇是英语最基本的单位，离开了单词，学英语 当大的比重，而许多学生，在此方面失分很多，以致影响 就成了无本之木，无源之水。词汇是写作的基础，记忆和 了最后总分。高考英语书面表达要求内容充实，句式丰 富，用词准确，行文连贯，思路清晰，过渡自然。要想达到 背诵是我们扩大词汇量最传统、最简单的方法。首先我 这一目的，语言的正确运用和表达是至关重要的。为此， 们要背诵高考词汇表：其次，要在老师的帮助下将单词、 我们可以从以下三个方面进行训练： 词组归纳整理，进行比较，强化记忆。 03 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 二、从基本词汇的运用着手，强化基本句型的训练 【经典句型2】Compared with letters and public phones, 在掌撵了基本词汇的基础上，反复训练，熟悉并掌握 mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more 五个基本句型 convenient. I.主语+系动词+表语：The farm looks like a large beautiful 【经典句型3】To keep fit,.we should have various healthy garden. diets. 2.主语+谓语（不及物）(+状语)：After visiting some 【经典句型4】With his help,we've learned how to places,we were singing and dancing in an open arca./ analyze and settle problems. Now great changes have taken place in our school. (4)倒装句 3.主语+谓语（及物）+宾语(+其他)：I want to borrow 【经典句型】Only in this way can we have enough energy some books from the library./I found (that)the driver to study better. was a woman. (5)省略句 4.主语+谓语（及物）+双宾语(+其他)：My English teacher While you are crossing the street,you should be careful. offered me some books on English study./Because -While crossing the street.you should be careful Mother''s Day is coming,【want to buy my mother a3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力 present. 【经典句型1】Now you are telling Jim how you 5.主语+谓语（及物）+宾语+宾语补足语：The teacher let understand this piece of art and what makes you think so. me have a try./He asked me to support him up./We 【经典句型2】Some of us often go to school without made Li Ming our monitor./Who had the windows breakfast:some like to have snacks:some others are broken？ particular about food:and still some eat or drink too 三、掌握几种表达优美的高级句式，优化句子结构 much. 1,改变句子的开头方式，使句子开头多样化 4.注意连接词与句子的运用 句子不是一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最 在回信的开头我们可以这样用：Thank you for your last 后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词作 letter asking about our library..这句话起承上启下的作 状语等。 用，使文章过渡自然 【经典句型I】Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one5.使用过渡词语 who impresses me most. 写好了每个句子，并不一定就是一篇好文章，因为作为 【经典句型2】It is reported that about100,000 people 一篇文章，还必须行文连贯。那么，如何使行文连贯呢？ will be chosen as volunteers for the 2024 Olympic Games 这就要求我们在组成篇章时，要用好过渡性词语。过 in Paris. 渡性词语就像是我们组装机械时使用的润滑剂一样， 【经典句型3】As we all know,we are what we eat. 起着润滑的作用。常用的过被词语主要有： Therefore,it's very important for us to form healthy 并列递进：and,also,as well as,besides,what's more, eating habits. furthermore,moreover,etc. 2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式 转折：but,yet,however,although,nevertheless,in spite 要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装 of.after all,etc 句、省略句等。 因果：because,as,for,since,for this reason,because (1)强调句 of,so,therefore,thus,as a result,etc. The dog has saved my little sister bravely.-It is the dog 对比：or,otherwise,like,unlike,on the contrary, that has saved my little sister bravely. while,on the other hand,instead of,etc. (2)主从复合句 总结：in all,.in brief,on the whole,in short,in general, 【经典句型I】When you get inside,you will see many in one word,etc. shelves full of books on different subjects.此处用一个状6.多用词组表达单个词义 语从句显然要比两个并列句效果要好。 The dog was killed in the accident.The dog lost his life 【经典句型2】Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful in the accident. lakes,of which the water is clear and looks colorful. 7.避免用相同词汇 (3)分词短语、不定式短语，由with或without引导的 My father likes reading and my mother likes cooking,but 短语 I like playing games. 【经典句型I】The next morning on his way home Li -.My father likes reading and my mother enjoys Ming saw some birds flying in the sky cooking,but I am fond of playing games. Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 :2.The meal was very nice.We all enjoyed it very much. 跟踪练习 The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. I.下面是一篇学生习作，通篇使用there be句式，让人感 3.We met at the school gate and went there together early in 到单调乏味，易产疲劳感。 the morning. There is a new classroom building on one side of the Early in the morning we met at the school gate and road.There used to be a playground on the other side went there together. before.But there is a library now.There are all kinds of 4.I studied Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and books.newspapers and magazines in the library.There is a new playground in front of the school.There are a lot of computer at school. trees in and around the school. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, 请运用多样化句式试着修改： maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer. 5.We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Some told stories.Some played chess. After a short rest,we had great fun singing and [范文] dancing,telling jokes and playing chess. On one side of the road there is a new classroom6.My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat building.On the other side,where the playground used to behind him. be.now stands another building-our library,in which you My brother was riding the bike with me sitting on the can find all kinds of books.newspapers and magazines.The seat behind. playground is now in front of the school.We have also 7.My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It had saved my little planted a lot of trees in and around the school. sister bravely Ⅱ.请仔细体会下面几组句子，试用高级句式改造句子 1.We had to stand there to catch the offender. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It was our brave Ah All we could do was to stand there,trying to catch the Fu who had saved my little sister. offender. Friday 读后续写示例指导11 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Pansy Takes a Trip Very excited,Anika hugged her favorite doll tight as she followed her parents through the airport.It was going to be her first time on an airplane..When she walked down the narrow aisle(走廊、过道)of the plane to find her seat,.a tall flight attendant(a服务人员)smiled at her and asked where they were going.“Walt Disney World,”Anika said with a smile."We'll be there for a week." “Have a wonderful trip,"replied the flight attendant,pointing to her name tag(名签)，“I'm Leanne,You let me know if you and your pretty doll friend need anything." "Thanks.I'm Anika,and this is Pansy,"said Anika,holding the doll up to show her,"Do you fly to Disney World every day?" Leanne shook her head."I get to fly all over the world.It can be fun to explore new places." The flight was going to be a few hours.Anika read a book with Pansy and did some puzzles her mother had packed for the trip.Soon she was getting a little tired and asked Leanne for a pillow ()The flight attendant returned with a pillow,a blanket,and a sleep mask to cover her eyes.Anika tucked Pansy under the blanket with her and fell asleep quickly.In no time,it seemed,she was being woken up again because it was time to land.They had arrived! "Already?"yawned (Anika.She wasn't quite awake yet.Her parents were busily packing up their bags and jackets.ready to leave the plane.Leanne walked past them,collecting the pillows and blankets from passengers as she went. 05 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 "Now you will have lots of energy to enjoy your visit to Disney World!"She smiled to Anika."I will see you next week on your return flight home." Anika was delighted to be in the new city.When her family got to the hotel,she couldn't wait to bring Pansy along to see all the amazing sights with her.She looked around,but she couldn't find her doll. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 She searched through the bags and jackets,but Pansy was nowhere to be found. Hugging Pansy tight again,Anika felt even more excited than she was on vacation last week. 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公Aika在一次坐飞机的旅途中丢失了自己心爱的洋娃娃，后来在空乘 Leanne的帮助下，成功地找到娃娃的故事。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Anika,her parents and Leanne. When:It was going to be her first time on an airplane. Where:The airport and the hotel. What:The journey of Anika and her parents. Why:Anika looked around,but she couldn't find her doll. (2)Details: DVery excited.Anika hugged her favorite doll tight as she followed her parents through the airport. Aika非常兴奋，紧紧地抱着她最喜欢的娃娃，跟着父母穿过机场。 本句为人物和背景描写，运用了s引导的时间状语从句、形容词短语作伴随状语来表达Aika的兴奋和她对洋娃 娃的喜爱。 ②When she walked down the narrow aisle(走廊，过道)of the plane to find her seat,.a tall flight attendant(服务人员) smiled at her and asked where they were going. 当她走过狭窄的过道去找她的座位时，一个高个子的空乘对她笑了笑，问她要去哪里。 本句为人物描写，运用了when引导的时间状语从句，两个动作smile at,ask和where引导的语从句，这些都呈现 了这个空乘的细心和周到。 3Anika read a book with Pansy and did some puzzles her mother had packed for the trip. Anika和Pansy一起读了一本书，还做了一些妈妈为旅行准备的拼图. 本句为动作和心情描写，运用了read和did some puzzles这两个动作，还有定语从句“her mother had packed for the tip”,通过这些动作表现了Anika和洋娃娃在一起时快乐的心情。 4When her family got to the hotel,she couldn't wait to bring Pansy along to see all the amazing sights with her. 当她的家人到达酒店时，她迫不及待地带着Pnsy一起去看所有令人惊叹的景点。 本句为背景描写，运用了whcn引导的时间状语从句，动词短语couldn'twait to do表达了Anika迫切要和她的洋娃 娃对新地方进行探索的心情。 2.找线索 (I)根据第一段中的“Very excited,Anika hugged her favorite doll tight as she followed her parents through the airport.”,第六段中的“Leanne walked past them,collecting the pillows and blankets from passengers as she went..”和第 Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 七段中的“She smiled to Anika.‘I will see you next week on your return flight home.,”可知，Anika非常喜欢她的洋 娃娃：Leanne从乘客那里收枕头和毯子时，说要和Anika下周在她回家的飞机上会再次相见。这些线索都可以在第 一段中呈现出来。 (2)根据第二段中的“I'm Leanne..You let me know if you and your pretty doll friend need anything,"和第四段中的 “Leanne shook her head.I get to fly all over the world.It can be fun to explore new places..'"可知，空乘Leanne是 个很友善的人，随时都可以帮助Aik,同时会跟随飞机到处飞行，这些线索可以在续写的第二段中呈现出来。 3.定思路 (I)由续写第一段开头语“She searched through the bags and jackets,but Pansy was nowhere to be found.”及续写第二 段开头语“Hugging Pansy tight again,Anika felt even more excited than she was on vacation last week.”可知，第一段 续写可描写Anika找不到Pansy后的心理变化的经过，以及最后突然发现了她的洋娃娃的过程。 (2)由续写第二段开头语“Hugging Pansy tight again,Anika felt even more excited than she was on vacation last week.”可知，第二段续写可描写洋娃娃是如何被找到的过程，Anika和空乘Leanne的对话及Anika经过这次事情的 内心感受」 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 She searched through the bags and jackets,but Pansy was nowhere to be found.On thinking Pansy might have been left behind along the way.Anika burst into tears.Seeing this,her porents comforted that Ponsy might turn up somewhere when they visited Disney World There seemed to be no better choice after all Anika went to Disney World enjoying all the fantastic views,but when she boarded the flight back a week later,she was missing Pansy in her deep heart It is when she walked down the narrow aisle that she saw Leanne smiling,reaching a doll to her.That was Pansu! Hugging Ponsy tight again,Anika felt even more excited than she was on vacation lost week.Leanne told Anika she found Pansy in the blanket and took Pansy to fly around the world along with her "She visited many beautiful places and couldn't wait to tell you all that she saw."Leanne gently patted Anika's hair "but never leave her olone aggin.for she is missing you so much Grateful and hoppy Anika nodded."Thank you for giving Pansy such a good trip."and she thought to herself that she would take all her trips with Pansy in the future Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 What It Means to Serve I didn't continue college after graduation.I moved out of my family.With little work experience,I served as a waitress.But during the five years'labor,I found myself burning calories running about only for a tip. I hadhad enough so I moved to a smaller town hoping to pursue a college degree.I promised I would never serve people again-at least not in such a way.It was time to serve myself.Luckily.I received a position as an afterschool program tutor at a local middle school.with the added benefit of completing English education degree.I had the opportunity to go big!The kid would need me-a role model and a trustworthy friend,I believed. But my first day was welcomed by the students'indifference ()The desks were messy and the whole room smelled of dirty gym socks.My excitement began to die down.I doubted whether the new job was a mistake.The playground activity was deafening while homework time was not much better.After my repeated persistence,they finally turned off the playground mode.But just a few minutes passed when I noticed two kids quarreling in the comer 707 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 I supposed it was another little incident but one kid named Jeremy bothered me.He shouted at me for coming at him. And when I asked them to return to their seats.he slammed (his backpack and grew mad as I tried to urge him to take the right attitude."I don't like you,homework and this afterschool program!All you guys do is yell at me.I'm never coming back."he walked out of the classroom,slamming the door. Naturally,I was so frustrated(挫败的）.I wondered why I am here.Most kids disrespected me！I paused to take a deep breath.Then suddenly I thought to myself."You said you would never serve people again,but you don't understand what these kids really need."At that moment,I remembered my middle-school life.I always had a poor attitude,never did my schoolwork,repeatedly got into fights,and disrespected my elders. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Realizing I was not different.I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy. At that moment,my heart broke for this boy and his family life. [语篇解读]本文以作者的经历为线素展开。作者高中毕业后，去做了一名服务员。五年之后，作者去一所中学担 当了一个课外活动的老师。在第一堂课上，作者遇见了一个非常暴躁的学生Jeremy。作者和Jeremy了解他的情况， 了解了他悲惨的家庭生活。之后作者一直布助Jeremy,并取得了成功。通过自已的经历，作者明白了为他人服务的 真谛。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“意识到我没有什么不一样，我走出去进入大厅，赶上了Jeremy。”可知，第一 段可描写作者和Jeremy聊天，了解他的情况的过程。②由续写第二段首句内容“在那一刻，我为这个男孩和他的家庭 生活心碎了。”可知，第二段可描写作者帮助Jer心my,鼓励他，并且最终获得成功的故事。 [范文] Realizing I was not different,I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy."I'm sorry,Jeremy.Could I have a talk with you?"I said,trying to be calm and sincere.He turned around,looked at me for a moment and nodded,"OK.""Jeremy,could you tell me what have happened to you?"I asked.Hesitantly.Jeremy began to share with me about his story.From what he said,I knew his mother was killed in a car accident three months before.Worse still,his father,who was in deep sorrow.lost his job at the same time.After that,his father became bad-tempered and often shouted at him.ignoring all his requests.As he told me what was happening. he began to cry. At that moment,my heart broke for this boy and his family life.I gently hugged him and patted him on the back. Then I walked him home and encouraged him to face life in a positive way.After that,I often chatted with Jeremy and helped him deal with his troubles.I even paid a visit to his father several times.As time went by. Jeremy behaved better and better and smiles often appeared on his face.At the end of the program,Jeremy hugged me tightly and thanked me again and again.At that moment,I suddenly realized what it meant to serve-Get to know a person from the bottom of your heart and give what he needs. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①hesitantly ad.迟疑地；踌躇地②bad-tempered a山，脾气不好的：易怒的③ignore v.佯装未见；不理 睬④pay a visit to拜访⑤from the bottom of米自于底部 高分句型：（句型I)I said,trying to be calm and sincere,.(现在分词作状语） (句型2)Worse still,his father,who was in deep sorrow,lost his job at the same time.(由关系代词who引导的非限 制性定语从句) (句型3)I suddenly realized what it meant to serve.(what引导的宾语从句) 108 Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 在你成长的过程中，总有那么一个人，他或她对你的思想和行为产生过重大的影响。请写一篇短文给学校广播 站投稿，内容包括：1，人物简介：2.如何影响你。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The person who influences me most Many people do have a great influence on me. [范文] The person who influences me most Many people do have a great influence on me,but I think no one can be compared with my mother.Her attitude towards life will never stop influencing my thoughts and actions. She doesn't appear to be extraordinary in any way.but just works faithfully and devotedly;at the same time,she never puts her family aside.It is my mother who teaches me to be curious,kind.optimistic and persistent.When I come across someone in need,I'm willing to give a helping hand within my ability.When I encounter difficulties in life,I always hove a positive attitude and constantly seek for approaches to addressing them. She is not only my mother,but also my life mentor.Indeed,she is just the person affecting me greatly. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①have a great influence on对…有巨大影响②compare with与…相比③extraordinary adj.异平寻 常的，令人惊奇的：非凡的④devotedlyad.忠实地；一心一意地⑤persistent ad.坚持不懈的 高分句型：（句型I)is my mother who teaches me to be curious,kind,optimistic and persistent.(强调句的运用） (句型2)When I come across someone in need,I'm willing to give a helping hand within my ability.(时间状语从句的 运用) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Josibelk Aponte considers herself lucky.Few people get to meet their guardian angels(守护天使）. Aponte has a special place in her heart for retired Hartford police officer Peter Getz,who stood with her as if she were his own child,as she graduated from Eastern Connecticut State University on Tuesday. "There are only a few moments that are so important in life,"Aponte said."I wanted to share my graduation with everyone who's important to me,who has been there for me,and who helped me through tough times. Getz certainly fits that description:He saved Aponte on June 25.2004.a day the 23-year-old describes as the"best and worst day"of her life. "I almost died,but I was given a second chance at life,"she said."And it was because of Peter and all the kind people who came to help that day.They were my heroes." A fire in the Aponte family's apartment broke out as Josibelk,then 5 years old,was home with her uncle Jofrey.She tried,in vain,to wake up Jofrey.Then,darkness.Meanwhile.Getz,a policeman.got there in time to see a firefighter pull a small girl from the building.In his rush to get back inside to put out the flames.the firefighter threw Aponte into Getz's arms 09