Week 10 报道&家庭亲情类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 10 报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 Monday 如何写好报道 报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的 ·开篇：时间、地点、人物、事件 经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。高中生活离不开 布 目的（灵活处理】 各种各样的活动，而丰富多彩的活动能够培养学生的兴趣、 能力及创造力，从而促进学生全面、健康地发展。在高考英 主体：具体内容（目的、人员，流 程等) 语中，活动介绍是非常重要的考查方式之一，通过活动介绍 可以体现对交际能力的考查。 ·结尾：意义、反响、感受等 典题示例 假定你是李华。上周四你校高二年级开展了“高雅艺术进校园”的话动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包 括：1.活动目的：2.活动内容：3.活动反响。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Elegant Art into Campus 思路点拨 OStep One 审题谋篇 体裁 记叙文 时态 一般过去时和一般现在时 主题 报道校园活动 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题：第二段：详细报道陈述事实；第三段：感想评论 OStep Two 词汇运用 1.打算，想要intend 6.雄伟地，壮丽地superbly 2.可到达的，可进入的accessible 7,全世界的，通用的universal 3.专业艺术家professional artist 8.清楚的，显然的evident 4.结合，联合combination 9.高度评价be highly spoken of 5.音乐元素musical element 10.接触exposure OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)上周四，我们高二年级举办了“高雅艺术进校同”活动。 Last Thursday our Senior Two held the activity of Elegant Art into Campus. (2)这场活动旨在让高雅艺术更亲民。 The activity was intended to make elegant art more accessible. (3)我们邀请了一群当地的专业艺术家到这里。 We invited a group of local professional artists here. (4)在学校大厅里，精彩演出了中西合璧的（梁祝》。 Butterfly Lovers.a great combination of Chinese and Western musical elements,was superbly played in the school hall. (5)接者是一场以世界通用语言一音乐的基础知识为中心的讲座。 Then came a lecture which was centered on basic knowledge of the universal language-music. 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (6)很明显，这次活动组织得很好，受到了很高的评价。 It was evident that the activity was well organized and was highly spoken of. (7)它丰富了我们的学校生活 It enriched our school life (8)它也使我们更多地接触到了优雅的艺术。 It also enabled us to have more exposure to elegant art. 2.句式升级 (1)用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 Last Thursday our Grade Two held the activity of Elegant Art into Campus,which was intended to make elegant art more accessible. (2)用被动语态的用法升级句子(3)。 A group of local professional artists were invited here. (3)用地点状语放到句首的用法升级句子(4)。 In the school hall.Butterfly Lovers.a great combination of Chinese and Western musical elements,was superbly played. (4)用过去分词作后置定语的用法升级句子(5)。 Then came a lecture centered on basic knowledge of the universal language-music. (5)用because引导的原因状语从句和not only..but also句式合并上题中的句子(6)、(7)和句子(8)。 It was evident that the activity was well organized and was highly spoken of,because it not only enriched our school life but also enabled us to have more exposure to elegant art. OStep Four连句成篇 [范文] Elegant Art into Campus Last Thursday our Senior two held the activity of Elegant Art into Campus,which was intended to make elegant art more accessible. A group of local professional artists were invited here.In the school hall,Butterfly Lovers,a great combination of Chinese and Western musical elements,was superbly played.Then came a lecture centered on basic knowledge of the universal language-music. It was evident that the activity was well organized and was highly spoken of,because it not only enriched our school life but also enabled us to have more exposure to elegant art. Tuesday 报道满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 in order to为了 enrich".使充实，使丰富 intend.打算，想要 purpose n.目标，目的 benefit.受益 build up建立 arouse引起，激起 awareness n,认识，意识 take turns轮流 performance n.表演，演出 pplause n,掌声，喝彩 be highly spoken of高度评价 participate in参加 part from除了…之外 teenager n.青少年 be addicted to沉迷于 suggestion n,建议 in addition除此之外，另外 be of great importance重要的 pay more attention to更加关注 mentally and physically精神上和身体上 the school administration学校管理处 be divided into被分成，被划分为 assign.分派，布置（工作、任务） 92 Week10报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 5.Not only can take physical exercise be beneficial to 【话题句式 health.but it can also be good for character building. 引出话题先声夺人 行体育锻炼不仅有益健康，还有助于培养品格。 1.Aimed at enriching our experiences and exercising our 6.The exhibition is scheduled for this weekend,from 8:30 willpower,this activity is scheduled to take place from 7:00a.m.to5:00p.m.next Tuesday.为了丰富我们 a.m.to 5:30 p.m..It covers a wide range of contents. 的经历和锻炼我们的意志力，这次活动预定于下周二 展览会安排在本周末，从上午8点30到下午5点30 上午7点到下午5点进行。 展览内容包罗万象。 2.Last Thursday our Senior Two held the activity of Elegant 首尾结合余音回味 Art into Campus.which was intended to make elegant art:7.The event we held will enable us to gain a better more accessible.上周四，我们高二年级举办了“高雅艺 understanding of each other..我们举办的这次活动将使 术进校园”活动，旨在让高雅艺术更亲民。 我们能够更好地相互了解。 3.I am honored to have taken part in an activity called 8.The activity provides an opportunity for us to promote "Save the Earth",whose aim is to raise people's friendship and teamwork.Also,we'll develop our practical awareness of protecting the earth.我很荣幸地参加了一 项叫作“拯救地球”的活动，其目的是提高人们保护地 skills and sense of responsibility.此次活动给我们提供了 球的意识。 一次促进友谊和团队合作的机会。同时，也会培养我 主题部分娓娓道来 们的实践能力和责任感。 4.A wide variety of activities are offered including singing, 9.Doing voluntary work will make great contributions to the dancing and reading to excite/arouse students'interest in society,which is able to enrich my life as well,做志愿者 learning English.举办丰富多彩的活动，包括唱歌，跳舞 活动将会给社会带来巨大的贡献，也能丰富我的生活。 和阅读，目的是为了激发学生学习英语的兴趣。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 An Exciting Tug of War Aimed to inspire students to pay more attention to physical 模板中黑体字部分是报道描写时可 exercise,an exciting tug of war was held on our school playground last 以通用的部分，其他部分可以根据写作 Sunday. 要求灵活处理。 The activity.organized by Students'Union.attracted all Senior One 第一、二段往往是一殷过去时，第三 students.Twenty teams tried their best to win,with the rest cheering all the 段主要是一放过去时，也可以用其他 way.The activity lasted about two hours and drew to a successful close. 时态。 Through the activity,we benefited a lot mentally and physically. 文章人称以第三人称为主，如果第 Not only did it enrich our school life,but it also let us further realize 三段有作者的感悟，要用第一人称。 the importance of building up our body and working as a team. Wednesday 报道写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆报道 假如你是学校英语报的记者李华，上周你校举办了“社交媒体脱魔”活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包 括：1，活动目的：2.活动具体内容：3.活动反响。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 参考词汇脱瘾detox [范文] With the development of science and technology.there appear an increasing number of social media apps. Last week,our school held an activity called "social media detox,"aiming to make the students raising their awarness of making a wise use of social media. 93 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 To begin with,a lecture about the potential damages of social media was delivered by a professor,after which the students have a heated discussion about how to take control of screen time.Additionally,under the guidance of teachers,the students created some dramas to appeal to teenagers to use social media properly. arousing great reaction. The activity was well received,from which all the students benefited greatly. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①make a wise use of.明智利用②potential damages潜在危害③additionally此外④under the guidance of在…指导下⑤appeal to呼吁 高分句型：（句型I)Our school held an activity called.,aiming to.,(运用了非谓语动词） (句型2)To begin with,a lecture.·,after which.,(运用了非限制性定语从句) 跟踪训练2◆报道 假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了以“中国书法之美”为主题的展览活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包 括：1，参加活动人员：2.活动内容：3.活动反响。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The Beauty of Chinese Calligraphy [范文] The Beauty of Chinese Calligraphy A calligraphy exhibition,whose theme was "The Beauty of Chinese Calligraphy",was held by the students'union last Sunday,which attracted many calligraphy lovers,including teachers and students. The exhibition featured a wide range of works from famous people together with their background information.Visitors had a good taste of the traditional art of handwriting that has developed over many centuries and has been widely practiced in China.Over fifty works of our students were also on display. The cultural feast was highly regarded.Some students interviewed said they not only appreciated the beauty of Chinese characters,but also had a better understanding of its hidden meanings as well as writer's inner world. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①theme m.主题；（音乐的）主旋律②background m.出身背景③handwriting n,手写：书写④beon display在展出⑤cultural feast文化盛宴⑥interviewv.面谈：采访⑦character n.文字：字体 高分句型：（句型I)Visitors had a good taste of the traditional art of handwriting that has developed over many centuries and has been widely practiced in China..(运用了that引导的定语从句) (2)Some students interviewed said they not only appreciated the beauty of Chinese characters,but also had a better understanding of its hidden meanings as well as writer''s inner world.(适用了省略that的宾语从句) Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能10 巧用无灵主语出彩读后续写 无灵主语，即以没有生命的事物作主语，包括物品，短语deprived,of.,(使丧失)，句子一下子生动起来， 动作、情感，时间、地点等。无灵主语搭配表示动作的谓 凸显了“我”极其兴奋的情储，比以“我”为主语时的向子 语动词，为无生命体赋予了生命力，达到生动的表达效 (I was so excited that I lost the power of speech.)更富有表 果。在续写中运用无灵主语，不仅可以增加主语的多样 现力。 性，而且有出彩刻画人物情绪心理，渲染环境氛围等作用。 无灵主语句欣赏： Excitement deprived me of all power of speech. Anxiety tore the boy into pieces..这个男孩焦虑不安， 兴奋得说不出话来。 整个人都崩溃了。 解析：这句话直译为“兴奋使我丧失了说话的能力” The thick carpet killed the sound of my footsteps. 用表达情绪的抽象名词Excitement作主语，配合使用动词 在厚厚的地毯上，一点脚步声也没有。 94 Week10报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 The astonishment robbed me of the power to say3.由于动作迟级，他错过了机会。(lose) anything.我震惊得说不出话来。 His slowness lost him the chance. Suddenly the ground underneath opened up and4.我沮丧不堪。(seiz) swallowed him.突然，大地裂开，并将他吞噬。 Feelings of depression seized me All my confidence deserted me after I walked out of the5.他不期而至，我们都很惊讶。(astonish) exam room.走出考场后，我完全丧失了信心。 His unexpected arrival astonished all of us A sincere gratitude woke within me as I gazed at my6.突然之间，我有了一个一闪而过的主意。(strike) mother and father.我看者我的父母，一种真诚的感激之情 Suddenly,an idea struck me in a flash. 在我心中油然而生。 7.午夜的铃声吓了我一跳。(scare) Jerry's absence of mind during the drive nearly caused The ringing sound at midnight scared me an accident..杰瑞驾驶时心不在焉，差点儿出了车祸。 8.过了一会，他们来到茅草屋门前。(bing) A faint wind sighed through the woods and the red A few moments brought them to a cottage door leaves stirred and whispered.一阵微风拂过树林，犹如深沉9.他走上台时突然失去了自信。(escape) 的叹息：红叶沙沙作响，彼此窃窃私语。 His confidence escaped him when he walked on the The glow in her eyes has become deep and menacing, stage. and the red in her cheeks burns more and more warmly,她眼I0.新学校才开学一小时，我就成了全班同学的笑料。 里的光变得阴沉凶险，而她面颊的红晕也越来越炽热。 make) For a moment,small lines appeared above her sharply My first hour at the new school made me the traced black eyebrows,showing how hard she was thinking. laughing stock of the classroom. before a happy light played over her whole face..一时间，她Il,这幅画使我一下子想起了我的童年时光。(remind) 那轮郭分明的乌黑眉毛上出现了细小的纹路，显示出她 The painting immediately reminded me of my 在拼命思考，接着她的脸上闪出了一道愉快的光芒。 childhood. 12.疾病缠身，她失去了完成任务的信心。(rob of) 跟踪练习 Illness robbed her of the confidence in 根据提示的动词，用无灵主语恰当表达下列句子。 accomplishing the task. 1.此刻我无话可说。(fail) 13.她耗尽了热情，显得虚弱不堪，当她走下台阶时，步伐 Words fail me at the moment. 踉跄了。(cause) 2.嫉妒使他发狂。(drive) The weakness of exhausted passion caused her to Jealousy drives/drove him crazy totter as she descended the steps. Friday 读后续写示例指导10 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a Friday evening in December,two weeks before Christmas,I lost my job.I hadn't seen it coming.My daughter. Kristil.was 12 and I planned to get our Christmas tree.Then I listened to my voicemail,"We're sorry.but your work assignment has ended as of today.My heart sank. I wasn't just a single parent;I was the only parent.My paycheck was survival.I did everything I could to give Kristil a good life,but there were some things my love couldn't fix.The next day as we searched for our Christmas tree,I struggled to be cheerful as I eyed the Christmas tree prices. "Is everything OK?"Kristil asked."You seem worried. "I got some bad news yesterday,"I told her."But it is OK,honey.Please select your favorite Christmas tree!Let's take it home!"I didn't want my daughter to discover the fact that I was unemployed.She told me a few months ago that she wanted a Christmas tree "Daddy,is it too expensive?"She pointed to a Christmas tree and said to me cautiously. "Absolutely not,"I told her."Let's take it home!" I swiped my card and paid.quietly making up my mind to set off on my moneymaking pursuits.Over the next week,I crazily applied for jobs as my bank account grew smaller.However,there was no suitable position for me in this world.I felt as if the world was closing in on me. The day before Christmas,I dropped Kristil in a wealthy community for her friend's birthday party.I watched as she went in,surrounded by all the nice things that were expensive for me.When she was there,she looked so happy.At that moment,I even thought that she seemed to belong there,a fairy tale world decorated with extremely beautiful and carefully made desserts and beautiful decorations.I went back home defeatedly. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 95 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 After arriving home and seeing the Christmas tree,my heart sank to the bottom. After reading the card my daughter wrote,my eyes were filled with tears. 语篇解读 本文以人物为中心展开，主要讲述在圣诞节前两同，作者失业了，但是他早已经和女儿商量好要买一棵圣诞树 了。虽然钱不多了，但是作者并没有在女儿面前表现出来，而是照常买了女儿喜欢的圣诞树。后来女儿去她有钱的 朋友家给朋友过生日，作者觉得自己很失败。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:My daughter and me. When:On a Friday evening in December,two weeks before Christmas. Where:In my home. What:Two weeks before Christmas.I lost my job. Why:There was no suitable position for me in this world.I felt as if the world was closing in on me. 2)Details: DOn a Friday evening in December,two weeks before Christmas,I lost my job. 12月的一个星期五晚上，也就是圣诞节前两周，我丢了工作。 本句为背景描写，特别强调了是圣诞节前夕我失去了工作，为下面事情的展开提供了线索。 2I did everything I could to give Kristil a good life,but there were some things my love couldn't fix. 我尽我所能给Ksl一个美好的生活，但有些事情我的爱无法解决。 本句为人物描写，运用了省略ht的两个定语从句、but引导的并列句来表达我目前的艰难处境。尽管有爱，但经济 拮据，表现了作者无奈的心情 3I felt as if the world was closing in on me. 我觉得好像整个世界都在向我关闭。 本句为心理描写，运用了sf引导的表语从句，有利地表达了当时作者绝望的心情。 4I watched as she went in,surrounded by all the nice things that were expensive for me. 我看着她走进去，周围都是对我来说很贵的好东西。 本句为动作和心理描写，运用了watched、went in,surrounded这一系列动词表现了父亲对女儿的关注和爱，也运用 了定语从句“that were expensive for me”体现了当时作者对自己没有能力给女儿最好的美好生活的悲伤，这也为下 面文章的续写提供了思路。 2.找线索 (I)根据第一段中的“Then I listened to my voicemail,+We're sorry,but your work assignment has ended as of today.'My heart sank."和第四段中的“Please select your favorite Christmas tree!”可知，作者失去了工作后，心情很 是沉重，尽管经济困难，但是还是给女儿挑选了她喜欢的圣诞树。这些相关的线索在续写第一段中的细节中可呈 现出。 (2)根据第三段中的“·Is everything OK?'Kristil asked.You seem worried..'”和第五段中"·Daddy,is it too expensive??'She pointed to a Christmas tree and said to me cautiously."可知，女儿非常关心爸爸，担心购买的圣诞树 太贵，这一切都说明女儿对爸爸的爱，这些相关的线索在续写第二段中的细节中可呈现出。 3.定思路 (1)由续写第一段开头语“回到家看到圣诞树后，我的心沉了下米。”及续写第二段开头语“看完女儿写的卡片后，我热 泪盈眠。”可知，第一段可描写作者觉得自己失业了而感到很伤心：并提到了圣诞卡片的出现。 (2)由续写第二段开头语“看完女儿写的卡片后，我热泪盈眶。”可知，第二段可描写作者看到女儿的卡片之后的反 应和改变。 96 Week10报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临莘衡水体争抢满分作文 After arriving home and seeing the Christmas tree,my heart sank to the bottom.The tree stood there. decorated with beautiful lights but I couldn't help but feel a sense of emptiness inside.How could I provide the ioy and abundance that this season deserved for my daughter?The weight of unemploument pressed down on me casting a shadow over the holiday spirit.However as looked at the tree whose branches reached the ceiling.I suddenly saw a card hanging on the Christmas tree. After reading the cord my daughter wrote,my eyes were filled with tears.She wrote."Daddy.L love you. The best gift is not the tree but you No matter what difficulties uou encounter I believe you can alwous overcome them."In that moment I realized that no matter what challenges that lay ghead I would never aive up.even though it was difficult And t realized that the greatest oift I could aive her was mu unwavering support and devotion Together we would find a wau to make our Christmas meaninaful and filled with warmth Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Krone's interest in music began in middle school,and after repeated requests and a promise to study hard and get into the best high school,he got his parents to buy him a shabby old wooden guitar.He kept practicing,performing with others and composing his own songs.He loved music so much that he dropped out of college despite his parents'objections.After that.he participated in singing competitions and sent demos (to record companies.but they disappeared forever. Once,he got a chance to perform in front of a famous musician,but the musician told him directly that his voice and composition were not unique enough to make him a professional singer. His grandmother died,and his sister Mary repeatedly asked him to attend the funeral ()On the way home,Mary asked him about his plans for the future,and he began to feel that he was not confident enough to take up a career in music, and his father's poor health did not allow him to leave home again. After arriving home,Krone saw the thin and weak father,who argued a few words about his future,which made him feel that his father would not understand him.Later,his sister told him that,in fact,dad supported his free development,so Krone decided to talk to dad again.But when he walked back home and looked at his father through the window,he saw that his father had placed the family knives away,as if feeling sorry for not passing on the family business started by grandfather with the shop named"Fish Song".Krone felt guilty and sad.Should he inherit the family business,or find a way to develop the fish business? Next morning.Mary shook Krone out of his sleep and told him that father fainted in the market.The doctor thought that father should take a few more days off,but he didn't agree.He really didn't want to close the shop. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Krone offered to help,which surprised everyone,especially father. It was time for Krone to make up the decision. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索晨开，讲述喜欢音乐的Koe为了追求自已的梦想，不顾家长反对而放弃了上大学。 他希望通过个人不断的务力来实现自己的梦想，结果却接连碰壁。在参加完祖母的葬礼之后，他见到了虚弱却一直 在强撑着的父亲，父亲的身体状况让他陷入了进退两难的地步一是继续追求个人的梦想，还是回家继承家族的店 铺？病榻上父亲的话让他找到了答案。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句“Kroe主动提出帮忙，这让每个人都感到惊讶，尤其是父亲。”可知，第一段可写 父亲听到Krone主动提出帮忙时的反应，Krone的态度及父亲的支持和鼓励。②由续写第二段首句“Krone是时候做 出决定了。”可知，第二段可写Kone的决定以及他的心理活动及行动。 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 [范文] Krone offered to help,which surprised everyone,especially father."So,giving up your music dream?"osked father."I just want to help out for a few days,"Krone answered.Father looked at his son intently and continued,"Don't think too much about me.Go fight one more time,and if you lose,it doesn't matter.At least you left your footprints.Don't come back until you've done that."Hand pressing chest,father smiled in a weak but firm voice. It was time for Krone to make up the decision.Back in the room,Krone immediately began to pack.He put everything in the room in good order.It was time to get ready for the challenge."I don't think this room will ever be used again.It can be given to my sister,"Krone said to himself.Stepping out of the house.Krone looked back at the family.With his father's words echoing in his heart,Krone turned around and left."It doesn't matter if you lose the battle.At least you left your footprints." 高分亮点 高分词汇：①intently ad.专心地，一心一意地②footprint.脚印，足迹③echo,.回响，发出回声④turn around 转身⑤at least至少 高分句型：（句型I)Krone offered to help,which surprised everyone,especially father.(使用了which引导的非限制性 定语从句) (句型2)Hand pressing chest,father smiled in a weak but firm voice.(使用了独立主格结构) (句型3)Stepping out of the house,Krone looked back at the family.(使用了现在分词短语作状语) Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假定你是李华，上周你们学校组织学生们参观了动物关爱中心，请你给校英文报写一篇文章，报道这次活动。内 容包括：1.活动目的：2活动内容：3.个人感受。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear editor. [范文] Dear editor, I am writing to tell you about the activity our school held last week.We went to the Animal Care Center located in the mountains. The activity aims to improve the students'awareness of wildlife protection.On arriving,we attended a lecture given by an expert on rare animals and their habitats.Next,we watched o short video about the endangered animals.What attracted me most was the visit to the panda research center,where I saw several newly-born baby pandas.They were so cute! All of us found the activity educational,inspiring and highly rewarding. With best regards. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①be located in位于·②awareness n.认识，意识③habitat n.(动i物的)生活环境，牺息地 ④endangered ad.(动植物)濒危的⑤inspiring ad.鼓舞人心的，有激励作用的 高分句型：（句型I)What attracted me most was the visit to the panda research center,where I saw several newly-bom baby pandas.(运用了what引导的主语从句，同时用where引导了非限制性定语从句) (句型2)All of us found the activity educational,inspiring and highly rewarding.(运用了三个形客词educational, inspiring and highly rewarding作found的宾语补足语) 98 Week10报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Shoveling (the snow had always been the best part about winter.Not that I thought it was fun,but my dad's reaction to a clean driveway kept me going.He hated shoveling snow more than anything.So,I took it upon myself at eight years old to do it for him.Every time I saw snow fall from the sky,I knew the universe was ready to put me to work. I would run and put on my jacket,snow boots to prepare myself for the work ahead.But every single time,before I went outside,I would stop by my older sister's room to see if she wanted to help me.I knew she would say no,but I always asked anyway. One day there was a lot of snow,and there was no way I would be able to clean it all up myself.It was getting dark. and I hated the thought of my dad having to shovel the snow after a long day of work.So I did the routine and knocked on my sister's door.As I expected,she gave me the same old"no".Annoyed,I asked again.Without saying anything further. she got up,pushed me out of the room and slammed(a砰地关上)the door in my face,. I stood there silently for a second.Then,I turned around,went out of the house,and set out in the cold to tackle the enemy that lay in my driveway.But I couldn't calm down.I was really angry that she would leave me to battle this alone. All I wanted was some help.The more I remembered every "no"she had ever said to me,the angrier I became. I fought tirelessly,my short arms swinging from side to side while the wind cut against my cheeks.After one long hour.I was not even halfway done.Looking at the victorious snow.I thought of Dad's disappointment. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Feeling bitter and desperate,I couldn't stop my tears. My sister and I went outside. [语篇解读]文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的爸爸不喜欢铲雪，于是作者自己担负起这项工作。每次下雪，他 都会主动为爸爸铲雪。有一次下了很大的雪，他一个人不可能在爸爸下班之前完成，于是寻求姐姐的帮助，但是被拒 绝了。作者不知疲倦地战斗着，却还没有完成一半，他感到很生气，也因为想到爸爸在工作了一天之后还要去铲雪感 到失望。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“我感到痛苦和绝望，无法停止我的眼泪。”可知，第一段可描写作者因为难过 去姐姐房间哭泣，表达自已对她不帮自己铲雪的不满的过程。②由续写第二段首句内容“我姐姐和我出去了。”可知， 第二段可描写姐弟俩携手铲雪的过程和作者内心的感受。 范文」 Feeling bitter and desperate,I couldn't stop my tears.My inner anger was like a growing monster, uncontrollably driving me to the edge of madness.Before I realized it,I was sobbing in my sister's room,with bullets of words firing through my mouth,expressing my long-buried dissatisfaction towards her absence from my snow shoveling experiences.The house seemed to be holding its breath when I stopped my accusation,still weeping."Please don't cry.Every teardrop of yours is a reminder of how selfish I was.I'm sorry.Would you give me another chance to go shoveling with you?"said my sister with gentleness and sincerity in her voice. My sister and I went outside.More than half of the driveway was still blanketed in white but I wasn't alone in this battle any more.Every shovel of snow was a witness to the energy and excitement in me.By the time we finished,my back was aching,muscles sore,and body exhousted.However,deep inside me was a brother,who was so overcome with happiness that he felt on top of the world.That was the beauty of companionship.And from the bright smile blooming on my sister's face,I could tell that she felt the same.Arm in arm,we walked inside as darkness fell,waiting for father to come home. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①uncontrollably ad.控制不住地②dissatisfaction n.不满，不悦③accusation n.控告，指责 ④sincerity m.真诚，真挚⑤witness m.目击，目睹，见证⑥companionship m.情谊，友谊 高分句型：（句型I)Before I realized it,I was sobbing in my sister's room,with bullets of words firing through my mouth,expressing my long-buried dissatisfaction towards her absence from my snow shoveling experiences.(before 的时间状语从句，expressing现在分词作状语) 2)However,deep inside me was a brother,who was so overcome with happiness that he felt on top of the world. 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