Week 9 征文投稿&关爱动物类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 9 征文投稿&关爱动物类读后续写 Monday 如何写好征文投稿 总体阐述事件，问题或现象 征文投稿类文章一般都是就某个特定主题进行描写 和论述，以记叙文和议论文为多。 局谋篇 具体论述或描写相关情况 表达愿望、得出结论、体会或呼吁 典题示例 为庆祝创刊50周年，你校英文报以“The Power of Reading”为题举办征文活动。请你以此为题写一篇征文稿。 内容包括：1.阅读的意义：2.介绍一本你喜欢的书：3.你喜欢的理由。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The Power of Reading 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 议论文 时态 一股现在时为主 主题 以“The Power of Reading'”为题征文投稿 人称 第三人称为主 结构 第一段：总体阐述：第二段：具体论述：第三段：自己学习新技能的体验和感受 OStep Two 词汇运用 1.必不可少的，非常重要的essential 7.以…为背景set in 2.探讨，探究explore 8.永恒的杰作timeless masterpiece 3.想象力，想象imagination 9.种族主义和不公正racism and injustice 4.娱乐，娱乐表演entertainment 10.有意义的relevant 5.开阔眼界broaden horizon 1l.精通proficiency 6.经典小说classic novel Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)阅读是我们生活中必不可少的一部分 Reading is an essential part of our lives. (2)它使我们能够探索新的世界，获得知识，并发展我们的想象力 It allows us to explore new worlds,gain knowledge,and develop our imagination. (3)读书是一种娱乐 Reading is a source of entertainment. (4)阅读也是一种扩大我们思想和开阔我们视野的手段。 Reading is also a means to expand our minds and broaden our horizons. (5)我特别喜欢一本书。 I particularly enjoy one book. (6)这本书是哈珀·李的《杀死一只知更鸟》。 The book is To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee. 81 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (7)这部经典小说以20世纪30年代的美国南方为背景。 This classic novel is set in the 1930s American South. (8)这本书讲述了一个小女孩的成长和她父亲与种族主义和不公正作斗争的故事 The book tells the story of a young girl's growth and her father's battle against racism and injustice. (9)我喜欢这本书。 I love this book. (10)它是一部永恒的杰作，至今仍有意义。 It is a timeless masterpiece that is still relevant today. (11)让我们为快乐而读书.为精通而读书，为智慧而读书！ Let's read for pleasure,for proficiency and for wisdom! 2.句式升级 (1)用which引导定语从句的用法合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 Reading is an essential part of our lives,which allows us to explore new worlds.gain knowledge,and develop our imagination. (2)用not only.,but also句式合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。 Reading is not only a source of entertainment but also a means to expand our minds and broaden our horizons. (3)用ht引导定语从句的用法合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 One book that I particularly enjoy is "To Kill a Mockingbird"by Harper Lee. (4)用现在分词作状语的用法合并上题中的句子(7)和句子(8)。 This classic novel is set in the 1930s American South.telling the story of a young girl's growth and her father's battle against racism and injustice. (5)用同位语的手法合并上题中的句子(9)和句子(10)。 I love this book,a timeless masterpiece that is still relevant today. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] The Power of Reading Reading is an essential part of our lives.which allows us to explore new worlds,gain knowledge,and develop our imagination.Reading is not only a source of entertainment but also a means to expand our minds and broaden our horizons. One book that I particularly enjoy is "To Kill a Mockingbird"by Harper Lee.This classic novel is set in the 1930s American South,telling the story of a young girl's growth and her father's battle against racism and injustice.I love this book,a timeless masterpiece that is still relevant today. Let's read for pleasure,for proficiency and for wisdom! Tuesday 征文投稿满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 topic m.话题 theme n.主题 depress v.使抑郁 refresh.使精神抖擞 adversity n.困境，逆境 awareness n.意识，了解 take action采取行动 put into practical use付诸实践 be competent in在…有能力 independence n.独立，自主 practical ability实践能力 toughness n.韧性，坚韧 inevitably ad,可避免地，必然地 be optimistic about对于…感到乐观 environmental protection环境保护 attach even greater importance to更加重视 essential ad.基本的.必不可少的.根本的 82 Week9征文投稿&关爱动物类读后续写 6.To solve the problem,I asked my parents for help.and 话题句式 they offered some practical advice..为了解决这个问题， 引出话题先声夺人 我向父母寻求帮助，他们提出了一些切实可行的建议。 1.When it comes to ocean,its pollution is becoming more 首尾结合余音回味 and more serious..说到海洋，它的污染越来越严重。 7.To change the habit,I am supposed to put more emphasis 2.At present our city is carrying out a campaign,the content on something more meaningful such as reading and taking of which is that anyone who is riding an electric bike must exercise,which are not only beneficial to my mental and wear a helmet..目前我市正在开展一项活动，活动内容 physical health but also can help me get rid of my bad 是骑电动自行车的人必须戴头盔。 habit.为了改变这个习惯，我应该把更多的精力放在 3.As a famous saying goes,"Life is not a bed of roses." 些更有意义的事情上，比如读书和锻炼，这些不仅有利 一句名言所说，“生活不是一张玫瑰的床。” 于我的身心健康，而且可以帮助我改掉坏习惯。 主题部分娓娓道来 8.My appeal is that all our students riding electric bikes 4.Moreover,as is known to all,setting too much time aside should wear helmets for the safety of themselves and other just for watching TV is a waste of time,.而且，众所周知， people.我的呼吁是，为了自己和他人的安全，我们所有 为看电视而留出太多时间是浪费时间。 骑电动自行车的学生都应该戴头盔。 5.The purpose of the campaign is to mitigate the9.As long as people can work together,we will leave consequence of such a traffic accident and reduce the behind a wonderful planet for future generations.只要人 death rate in an accident.这项运动的日的是减轻这类交 们一起努力，我们就会为子孙后代留下一个美好的 通事故的后果，降低事故中的死亡率。 星球。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 My First Try When it comes to the topic of "My First Try",my first attempt at adapting a novel I had read before for an English play is unforgettable. As a member of English Theater Club,I volunteered to be responsible for the 模板中黑体字部分是征文 script to be played in the approaching English Drama Festival.Consequently,I took 投稿时可以通用的部分，其他部 advantage of the Winter Vacation to prepare for the adaptation.The most challenging 分可以根据写作要求灵活处理。 but rewarding part was to overcome the language barriers.Fortunately,with nearly 文章一般是一般过去时，人 two weeks'effort,the lines were not only beautifully uttered but also easily 称以第一人称为主。 understood. It was not until I made the first try of adaptation that I realized language is never a helpful tool unless you put it into practical use. Wednesday 征文投稿写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆征文投稿 为培养学生的独立生活能力，你校英语俱乐部举办“我是生活小能手”征文活动，请你写一篇文章，介绍你拿手的 生活技能。内容包括：1.具体的一项生活技能：2.你在生活中获得的体验。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 I am competent in [范文] I am competent in cooking various delicious food.In our daily life,cooking by ourselves is an essential life skill,which will benefit us greatly. In my life,whenever my parents drag themselves tired from work,I will prepare a sumptuous dinner for them and welcome them back.At the same time,in the process of cooking,not only can I hone the quality of independence,but also I can exercise my practical ability.More importantly,it can make me clearly understand and experience the toughness of others. There is no doubt that the ability to cook is extremely important. 83 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 高分亮点 高分词汇：①essential adj.基本的：必不可少的：根本的②delicious ad.美味的：美妙的③sumptuous adj,豪华的： 奢侈的④independence n.独立：自主⑤practical ability实践能力⑥toughness n,韧性：坚韧 高分句型：（句型I)In our daily life,cooking by ourselves is an essential life skill,.which will benefit us greatly.(运月 了which引导的定语从句) (2)At the same time,in the process of cooking,not only can I hone the quality of independence,but also I can exercise my practical ability.(运用了部分倒装) 跟踪训练2◆征文投稿 你校英语俱乐部举行英语征文比赛，请以“How to Decide on Possible Future Careers”为题，写一篇短文参赛。内 容包括：1.职业选择的重要性：2.如何选择。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 How to Decide on Possible Future Careers [范文] How to Decide on Possible Future Careers As we know,a suitable career is to a person what water is to fish.However,it may not always be easy to choose a proper one.Here are some tips on how to decide on possible future careers. To begin with,it's necessary to take some time to really think through the things you are interested in and good at.Besides,focus on your own ambitions,rather than societal expectations,which means you should let go of other people's expectations of you and think about what you truly want to do. All in all,choosing a career path should be a personal decision based on o thorough knowledge of your own strengths,weaknesses,interests,and values. 一高分亮点 高分词汇：①suitable adj.合适的②to begin with首先③ambition m.抱负④societal adj.社会的⑤be based on 以…为基础⑥horough adj.彻底的，全面的 高分句型：（句型I)As we know,a suitable career is to a person what water is to fish.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语 从句以及“A is to B what C is to D”句型，表类比) (2)Besides,focus on your own ambitions,rather than societal expectations.which means you should let go of other people's expectations of you and think about what you truly want to do.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从 句，what引导的宾语从句) Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能9 运用名词性从句提升应用文写作表达 名词性从句是重要的语法项目之一，也是写作中常用的高级表达之一。它包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和 同位语从句。 一、名词性从句的连接词 了解并正确使用连接词是写好名词性从句的关键。引导名词性从句的连接词的分类、词义和用法见下表： 类别 词义 在从句中的作用 连接词：that 无任何意义 仅起连接作用，不作成分 连接词：whether,if 是否 起连接作用，不作成分 连接代词：what,which,who,whom,whose 有各自含义 起连接作用，并在从句中充当主语、表语、 whatever,whoever,whomever,whichever 宾语、定语 连接副词：how,when,why,where,however,. 有各自含义 起连接作用，并在从句中作状语 whenever,wherever 84 Week9征文投稿&关爱动物类读后续写 [名师指津] 表语从句还可由asif,as though,how,because等词引导。 I have bought a robot who looks as if he were a real person..我买了一个看起来像真人的机器人。 This is how I am thinking about the picture.我就是这样看待这幅画的。 I know that it is because I don't spend much time memorizing them after class.我知道是因为我在课后没有花大量时 间记忆它们。 二、名词性从句的写法 和定语从句一样.名同性从句也是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句.在写作时同样可采用”三步法”： 第一步：写出两个简单句。 第二步：让一个简单句作从句，要注意和另一个句子的关联性 第三步：把两个句子合成复合句，要特别注意关联词的选择和从句的语序 [示例] 第一步：写出两个简单句 DHe said a lot at the meeting. 2His words were very attractive. 第二步：让句①作主语从句，可转换为“他在会上所说的话”，即what he said at the meeting。 第三步：把句①转换的主语从句和句②连在一起。 What he said at the meeting were very attractive. 三、作形式主语或形式宾语的高级句型 1.it作形式主语的常用句型 (I)lt+系动词+形容词(necessary/right//likely/unlikely/.wrong/important/certain等)+that.,. (2)It+be+名词（短语）(a pity/a shame/,no wonder/,one's desire等)+that., (3)It+bce+过去分词(said/told/reported/decided等)+that.. (4)lt+特殊动词(seems,appears,happens,matters)+hat., (5)It doesn't matter who/whether/if... It's our desire that you should provide some money to fund our program,as well as offer us some practical suggestions. 我们褐望你能为我们的项目提供一些资金，还能提供一些实用的建议 2.t作形式宾语的常用句型 (I)动词ind,fecl,think,consider,makc,believe,guess,suppose,assume等后有宾语补足语时，则需要用it作形 式宾语，而将宾语后置。 (2)有些动词（短语）带宾语从句时，需要在宾语从句前加it,这类动词（短语）主要有：hate,ike,owe,have, appreciate,see to等。 I would appreciate it if you could take my applicatin into consideration.如果您能考虑我的申请我会感激不尽。 跟踪练习 I.完成句子 1.我为白己在爸爸不在家时的表现感到自豪。 I took pride in what I had done in the absence of my father. 2.我在想你是否能够到机场去接他。 I am wondering whether you can pick him up at the airport. 3.据报道，大约30名至少18岁的志愿者将从世界各地被选出来于2025年前奔赴火星 It's reported that about 30 volunteers who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all over the world to be sent to the Mars by the year of 2025. 4.如果你们能以每个10美元的价格卖这些中国结，我将不胜感激。 I would appreciate it if you could sell the knots for 10 dollars each. Ⅱ，请按以下内容要点写一篇有关Ad山y的英语微写作，尽可能多地使用名词性从句。 1.大家都知道Ady是位有名的作家.但没有人知道她来自何处而且她是否出生于1961年仍然是个谜」 2.大家对她了解的是穷人都喜欢她，因为她总是帮助那些急需钱的人。 3.Andy很慷慨而且乐于助人，但有些人认为她想出名 4.Ad小y说她不明白为什么他们那么心胸狭窄，但别人怎么想对她无所谓，她只是想做自己认为正确的事。 5.我认为那就是生命意义之所在。 85 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 [范文] Everyone knows that Andy is a famous writer,but no one knows where she comes from and whether she was born in 1961 is still a mystery.What they do know was that she is loved by poor people because she always helps whoever is in need of money.Andy is generous and helpful,but some people think she is chasing fame.Andy said she didn't understand why they were so narrow-minded,but it doesn't matter what others will think of her.She just wants to do what she thinks is right. I think that is where the meaning of life lies. Friday 读后续写示例指导9 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Danny's grandfather loved to keep pigeons,and Goldie was one of them.Goldie had golden eyes,which was very rare in pigeons.Grandfather said he had never had a pigeon like her. Goldie was a champion racing pigeon and had won loads of cups.But once,around the time Goldie was released two hundred miles away for a race,Danny's grandfather was hospitalized with a heart attack.The responsibility of waiting for Goldie and taking care of the other pigeons then fell on Danny. However.Goldie did not fly back on time as usual.In order not to upset his grandfather,while visiting him that night with his parents.Danny lied that Goldie had already returned and won the first place."I knew it,"said Danny's grandfather,settling back on his pillows,"I always knew she was a winner.She's one in a million."Grandfather believed the lie. Sometimes grandfather's racing pigeons got lost due to bad weather or got attacked by falcons (and never came back home,but those had never happened to Goldie.She always came home,right on time."Goldie must have been eaten by those falcons nesting in the quarry (on her way back home,"Danny thought to himself bitterly and his chest was burning.Danny swore to himself to take revenge."They are a threat,those falcons!I must get rid of them and pull down their nest." It only took Danny five minutes to reach the quarry.Danny looked around the quarry walls and found their nest on a steepest side,which was a long way up.He climbed fast-there were old tree roots to grab hold of.His hands were bleeding.But he didn't feel the pain.He was hanging on the rock wall with his finger-tips like a starfish.His arms were so weak and trembling,but he was finally there. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Just as he reached out his hand to destroy the falcons'nest,he suddenly saw the baby-falcons in it. Halfway down.he saw Goldie in a hole on the rock.wing-broken but still alive. 语篇解读 本文为记叙文，属于“人与自然”主题语境下的“人与动物和谐共处”主愿群。本文讲述了Day的爷爷养了很多 鸽子，其中Goldie是最好的一只。一天爷爷生病住院了，照顾笃子的责任落在了Danny身上，但是Danny发现Goldie 没有回来，以为它被猎湾桑死了。Dany决定摧毁猎鹰的巢穴帮Goldie报仇，但是当他看到巢中的小猎鹰时，他放弃 了复仇，却发现了受伤的Goldie,最后教下了Goldie。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Danny,Danny's grandfather,pigeon Goldie and the baby-falcons. When:Goldie did not fly back on time as usual and Danny's grandfather was in hospital. Where:The quarry. What:Goldie was a champion racing pigeon and had won loads of cups.However,Goldie did not fly back on time as usual. Why:They are a threat,those falcons!I must get rid of them and pull down their nest. 86 Week9征文投稿&关爱动物类读后续写 (2)Details: DGoldie had golden eyes,which was very rare in pigeons. Goldie有着金黄色的眼睛，这在鸽子中非常罕见。 本句为动物的外貌描写，运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句表达Goldie的与众不同。 2In order not to upset his grandfather,while visiting him that night with his parents,Danny lied that Goldie had already returned and won the first place. 为了不让他的祖父难过，那天晚上当他和父母去看望祖父时，Danny说谎说Goldie已经回来并赢得了第一名。 本句为人物描写，运用了不定式短语作目的状语，时间状语从句的省略，tht引导的宾语从句来表达出主人公 Danny是一个善解人意的善良的孩子。 3"Goldie must have been eaten by those falcons nesting in the quarry on her way back home,Danny thought to himself bitterly and his chest was burning. “Goldie一定是在回家的路上被那些在采石场筑巢的猎鹰吃掉了。"Danny痛苦地想，他的胸膛在燃烧。 本句为心理描写，运用了情态动词的完成时的用法，现在分词作后置定语，ad前后为并列句等表达形象地描写了 Danny当时的悲愤欲绝，怒发冲冠的心情。 4Danny looked around the quarry walls and found their nest on a steepest side.which was a long way up. Dany环顾采石场的墙壁，发现它们的巢在最陡峭的一侧，还有一段很长的路。 本句为环境描写，运用了两个并列的谓语动词，which引导的非限制性定语从句来表达巢所在地方的危险性。 5 He was hanging on the rock wall with his finger-tips like a starfish. 他像海星一样悬挂在岩墙上。 本句为动作描写，运用了with的复合结构来表达Danny动作的敏捷 2.找线索 (I)根据第三段中的“In order not to upset his grandfather,while visiting him that night with his parents,Danny lied that Goldie had already returned and won the first place."和第五段中的“His hands were bleeding.But he didn't feel the pain.”可知，Danny是一个非常善解人意的孩子，同时由于认为Goldie遭遇不幸，急于为其复仇，在续写的第一段中 可呈现出这些。 (2)根据第二段中的“Goldie was a champion racing pigeon and had won loads of cups.”和第四段中的“Sometimes grandfather's racing pigeons got lost due to bad weather or got attacked by falcons()and never came back home. but those had never happened to Goldie..”可知，Goldie经验丰富，生存能力极强，遇险的概率极低，因此生存的机会较 大，在续写的第二段中可呈现出这些。最后表现出和谐的自然，无论是Goldie还是那些猎鹰，都不要受到伤害，以 凸显人与自然的和谐主题。 3.定思路 (I)由第一段续写首句“Just as he reached out his hand to destroy the falcons'nest,he suddenly saw the baby-falcons in it.”可知，第一段可描写Day看到小猎鹰而触动了他内心的善良，从而放弃复仇，保护了那些小猎鹰们。 (2)由第二段续写首句"Halfway down,he saw Goldie in a hole on the rock,wing-broken but still alive."可知，第二段 可描写Danny如何救下Goldie,并庆幸自己没有冲动复仇，同时结合前面对爷爷的善意谎言，可知爷爷也健康出院. 见到了心爱的Goldie。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 Just as he reached out his hand to destroy the falcons'nest,he suddenly saw the baby-folcons in it.He suddenly remembered Goldie when she was little,fuffy and helpless.The feeling of anger vanished like water running down a drain,and the feeling of revenge was thrown out of the window.Donny realized that if he destroued the falcons'nest the young falcons would foll to the ground only death awaited them But Danny. who was not a bad bou bu nature.did not do so.Without harming the uouna.helpless falcon.he continued to climb over the ton of the hill Halfway down,he saw Goldie in a hole on the rock,wing-broken but still alive.The moment he caught siaht of the scene Dannu's face lit up with deliaht Without hesitation.Dannu carefullu lifted Goldie out and cushed him to the hospital as auicklu as he could Luckilu with Dannu's care Goldie's iniuru was cured and Grandoo returned home Dannu was fortunate not to be carried awau bu anger and did somethina he regretted The adventure would be deeply rooted in his mind 87 启皖英语虹 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One morning,my family and I woke up and went to eat breakfast-until we heard barking and scratching at the door. When my mom opened the door,we saw a puppy ()We looked around to see if we saw its owner,but there was no one.We took it inside and fed it. Regardless of how badly I wanted to keep the puppy.we decided to look for the owner.We looked all day,but we failed.We talked about whether we should keep looking or if we should look the next day.We all agreed to look for its owner the next day. So,the next day my family and I looked for the dog's owner.It was so hard looking for its owner.We were looking for flyers()that involved the puppy,but no luck.We wouldn't have quit because it's a puppy. "We won't stop looking."my mom and dad said.We were going to take care of the puppy until we found its owner. When we woke up in the morning.we went to a pet shop to buy the puppy some dog food.After that we went back home to feed the puppy the dog food that we had just bought.After we fed the puppy,we gave it a nice bath.It was so dirty that the fur was black and sticky,but after we gave it a bath,it turned white.And I noticed there was a collar (on him,which said "Coby".After we gave him a bath,we went to look for the puppy's owner,but my mom stayed at home, and it was only my dad and me this time. We continued looking more and more until we found flyers.We looked at one of them It said:"Lost Dog:Please Help if Found."Then we looked at the picture;it looked exactly like Coby.We were all happy we found a flyer that was for Cody. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 There was a phone number on the flyer. We found the lady's house.and then we knocked on the door. [语篇解读】本文以小狗为线索展开，讲述了作者一家人在一天旱上，在自家的门口发现了一只没有主人的小狗。 全家精心照顾小狗，并开始寻找它的主人。作者注意到它身上有个项困，上面写着“科比”。作者和爸爸继续找，直到 看到寻狗的传单。他们看了看，上面写着：“走失的狗：找到请帮忙。”然后他们看了看照片，它看起来和科此一模 样。他们都很高兴看到了找科比的传单。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“传单上有个电话号码。”可知，第一段可描写作者和爸爸给狗的主人打了电 话，他们要把狗送还给主人。主人立刻把她的地址告诉了他们，然后他们一起去送狗。②由续写第二段首句内容“我 们找到了那位女土的家，然后敲了敲门。”可知，第二段可描写作者将狗还给了主人，女主人想感谢作者他们以及作者 家人和这位女士成了朋友。 [范文] There was a phone number on the flyer.My dad called it and someone answered;it was a lady.My dad asked whether she was the one who put out the flyers.She said "Yes!"with excitement and told us Coby,who was very dear to her,had been gone days before.Then we told her that we had her puppy and we would take him to her.She told us her address ot once;then we took Coby to head for its owner's house. We found the lady's house,and then we knocked on the door.A lady opened the door,and when she sow the puppy,she screamed with joy.We handed her the puppy,feeling relieved and proud.She wanted to give us a reward for taking care of her puppy,but we said it was OK because we were really happy to help.So we went home,tired but content,telling my mom the whole thing.Since then,my family have been friends with the lady. and it's Coby that bridged our friendship. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①put out散发②excitement m.令人激动（或兴奋）的事；激动：兴奋③scream v.(因伤痛、害怕，激动 等)尖叫④reward n.奖励：回报：报偿⑤take care of照料 高分句型：（句型1）My dad asked whether she was the one who put out the flyers..(由who引导的定语从句) (句型2)Since then,my family have been friends with the lady,and it's Coby that bridged our friendship.(强调句 式)》 88 Week9征文投稿&关爱动物类读后续写 Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 你校英语角正在举办主题为“我最崇拜的运动员”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文参加该活动，内容包括：1.该运 动员的个人信息：2.该运动员所取得的成就（列举1到2个）：3.你崇拜他/她的理由。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The athlete I admire most [范文] The athlete I admire most Su Bingtian,the track and field athlete I admire most,was born in 1989 in Zhongshan.He is an experienced athlete who competes in the sprints. In 2021,Su Bingtian sprinted to secure a place in the 100 m men's final at the Olympic Games in Tokyo. He has become the first Chinese and only Asian runner to compete in the final round of the event since 1932. I admire him,because he overcame all the difficulties and became a legend with his amazing skills and perseverance His spirit will push me to work hard to achieve my goal. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①athlete m.运动员②experienced adj.熟练的，有经验的③overcome.克服④legend m.传说，传奇 人物⑤perseverance n.毅力，不屈不挠的精神 高分句型：（句型l)He is an experienced athlete who competes in the sprints.(运用了who引导的定语从句） 2)I admire him,because he overcame all the difficulties and became a legend with his amazing skills and perseverance.(运用了because引l导的原因状语从句) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 "Sun,sun,sun,here it comes..." Danny sang while his fingers pressed and pulled skillfully at the guitar strings,delivering a slow and peaceful tune.A circle of audience had formed,nodding and moving slowly to the song. Lying at the feet of the street performer was his most adoring fan:One-Eyed.a white stray ()dog with pieces of brown.Danny felt the name was suitable considering its physical disability.Usually.One-Eyed would bark loudly as Danny performed.Much to his annoyance,people often mistook the pair as owner and pet.At this time,Danny would reply."My dog?No!"eyes rolling at the idea.How he wished the dog would leave him alone instead! On a snowy night,while Danny was performing,a bird flew downward,landing into the midst of the crowd.It cooed happily as if to harmonize with Danny.Unfortunately.that did not sit well with One-Eyed,which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately. The unexpected chaos upturned Danny's hat,which could have been filled with notes and coins from his appreciative audience,leaving it ignored on the ground."Argh!The hateful dog!"Danny broke down.thinking to himself."Either the dog goes or I go!" 89 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 On the next night.Danny tried to find a new place and chanced upon the park.For a while his earnings were good unsurprisingly as there was a steady flow of visitors.However,that didn't last long.One-Eyed came along and appointed itself as Danny's guardian."Argh!Here comes the hateful dog again!"That night,Danny hadn't made enough money he should have,all thanks to the troublesome dog. Danny was almost mad with One-Eyed."What should I do?Call an animal shelter?"Torn by this problem,he walked aimlessly by the lake of the park.With all his mind focused on how to get rid of the dog.Danny didn't watch his steps. Suddenly,he slipped and fell into the lake accidentally.Struggling in the icy water,he cried for help desperately,almost choking to death.Sensing the approach of death,Danny got into overwhelming panic. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Just then,a familiar barking was heard in the distance. "My hero!Thank you for saving me,"Danny said gratefully with watery eyes. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一只叫“独眼”的流浪狗一直跟着街头表演者Dany,其他人以为他们 是主人和老物的关系，而Danny为此感到很苦恼，不想“独眼”跟着他。Dny一心想着如何摆脱这只狗，却没有注意 他的脚步，他掉进了湖里，极度恐慌。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“就在这时，远处传来熟悉的狗叫声。”可知，第一段可描写“独眼”如何救 Dany。②由续写第二段首句内容“·我的英雄！谢谢你救了我，'丹尼含泪感激地说。”可知，第二段可措写Danny被 “独眼”救起后他们之间关系的改变。 [范文] Just then,a familiar barking was heard in the distance.In a split second,a splash of brown,out of breath,quickly jumped into the lake.It was One-Eyed!It barked,swimming toward Danny with all its might.On spotting One- Eyed,Danny seemed to see a ray of hope,attempting to move towards it instantly.Instinctively,Danny grabbed the tail of One-Eyed.Ultimately.they managed to climb ashore,exhausted.Gazing at One-Eyed in disbelief,Danny patted it tenderly in return.One-Eyed was no longer troublesome;instead,it became a"hero" in his heart. "My hero!Thank you for saving me,"Danny said gratefully with watery eyes."You're my brave guardian angel!"Since that night,"One-Eyed"was nonexistent while "Hero",as the dog was re-named,became a part of Danny's performance.So attached were they to each other that they became genuine partners.Danny would include his pet as he engaged the audience.Hero also had its own place to lie on-the feet of Danny. While Danny played the guitar.Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner.What a perfect match! 高分亮点 高分词汇：①instinctively ad.本能地，凭直觉地②ultimately ad.最终，最后，根本上③climb ashore爬上岸 ④exhausted adj.筋疲力尽的⑤nonexistent ad山.不存在的⑥re-name改名 高分句型：（句型I)So attached were they to each other that they became genuine partners.(so位于句首引起的部分倒 装句) (句型2)While Danny played the guitar,Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner..(由while引导的时间 状语从句) 90