Week 5 道歉信&冒险生活类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 5 道歉信&冒险生活类读后续写 Monday 如何写好道歉信 表明写作意图.对某事表示款意 道款信是因过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损 失，为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件」 布局谋篇 ,说明道款的具体原因，并提出补数措施 再次表明歉意，请求谅解 典题示例 假如你是李华，你接受了外教Hnry的邀请，去参加4月23日为庆祝“世界读书日”而举行的英语演讲比赛，现 你因故无法参加。请你给Hy写一封信，表达歉意并推荐你的好友王平参加。内容包括：l,表示款意：2.说明理由： 3.推荐王平。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 参考词汇世界读书日World Book Day 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 第一段和第三段为现在进行时和一般现在时，第二段主要是一般将来时 主题 道歉信 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：写信日的：第二段：道款的原因：第三段：再次道就 OStep Two 词汇运用 1.道款make an apology 6.遥远的distant 2.演讲比赛the speech contest 7,宏伟的，宏大的_rand 3.庆祝celebration 8.推荐recommend 4.农村countryside 9.聪颖的brilliant 5.亲戚relative 10.情况situation Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我写这封信是为不能参加演讲比赛而道款。 I'm writing to make an apology for not being able to attend the speech contest. (2)4月23日要举行演讲比赛，以庆祝“世界读书日”。 The speech contest will be held on April 23rd in celebration of World Book Day. (3)那天我们全家都要去乡下看望我的祖母 My whole family will go to the countryside to visit my grandmother on that day. (4)那天将是她的百岁生日 That day will be her 100th birthday. (5)我所有的亲戚都会从遥远的地方回来 All my relatives will come back from distant places. (6)那天将组织一个盛大的聚会。 A great party will be organized that day. 40 Week5道歉信&冒险生活类读后续写 (7)晚会是如此盛大的活动，我不能错过。 The party is such a grand event that I can't miss. (8)我可以推荐王平代替我吗？ Would it be possible for me to recommend Wang Ping to take my place? (9)王平是一个优秀的学生 Wang Ping is a brilliant student. (10)他擅长英语。 He is good at English. (11)我真减地希望您能理解我的处境，并接受我的道款。 I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. (12)我一直期待您的回复。 I am looking forward to your reply. 2.句式升级 (1)用过去分词作后置定语合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 I'm writing to make an apology for not being able to attend the speech contest to be held on April 23rd in celebration of World Book Day. (2)用becasue引导的原因状语从句合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。 My whole family will go to the countryside to visit my grandmother on that day,because it will be her 100th birthday. (3)用whih引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7) A great party will be organized that day,which is such a grand event that I can't miss. (4)用who引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(9)和句子(10) Wang Ping is a brilliant student.who is good at English. (5)用省略主语和谓语的形式升级句子(12)。 Looking forward to your reply. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Dear Henry, I'm writing to make an apology for not being able to attend the speech contest to be held on April 23rd in celebration of World Book Day. My whole family will go to the countryside to visit my grandmother on that day.because it will be her 100th birthday.All my relatives will come back from distant places.A great party will be organized that day. which is such a grand event that I can't miss.Would it be possible for me to recommend Wang Ping to take my place?Wang Ping is a brilliant student,who is good at English. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua Tuesday 道歉信满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 awfully.可怕地，十分，非常 delay.推迟 personal reason个人原因 apology n.道款 regret.遗憾 convenient adj.方便的，便利的 sincerely ad.由衷地，真诚地 express v.表达，表露 definitely ad,背定地，当然 situation,处境 schedule n.安排，预定 postpone,推迟，延缓 rearrange以.重新整理 genuine adj.真诚的，真心的 keep one's promise信守诺言 inconvenience n.不便，麻烦 cause.造成 appointment n.约定 cancel v.取消（计划好的事情），终止 available adj.可用的，有空的，有闲暇的 41 肩航英雷I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 :7.I want to know if it's convenient for you if we have our 话题句式 course next Wednesday..我想知道你是否方便我们下周 引出话题先声夺人 三上课。 1.I am terribly sorry that I didn't show up at your home to 8.I have just found that I have to attend an important class discuss the coming English speech contest as planned. 常抱歉，我没有按计划到你家去讨论即将到来的英语 meeting that afternoon,我刚发现那天下午我必须参加一 个重要的班会。 演讲比赛。 2.I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you 9.I wish it would be convenient for you to be our judge on Friday afternoon..很抱歉，周五下午我不能和你一起 then.我希望你届时方便的话来做我们的裁判。 去书店了。 首尾结合余音回味 3.I regret to say that I am unable to attend your birthday 10.I should be available any time after school next week.F party because my father is ill.很遗憾，我不能去参加你 周放学后我应该随时都有空。 的生日聚会，因为我的父亲病了。 Il.Please stay safe and stay in contact with me..请注意安 4.So I'm dropping you this line to express my sincere 全，并与我保持联系。 pologies,所以我给你写这封信米表达我减挚的款意。 12.I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and 主题部分娓娓道来 understand my situation..我真心希望你能接受我的道 5.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. 歉，并理解我的处境。 希望这个变化不会给您带来太多麻烦。 13.Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused by 6.The reason why I fail to show up is that I have something urgent to attend to.我未能出现的原因是我有急事要 my person reason.对于由我个人原因造成的不便我再 处理。 次表示款意。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear Miss White, I'm awfully sorry that I have to cancel the oral English online course next Monday for my personal reason. 模板中黑体字部分是描写 A friend that I haven't seen for a long time is coming to see me next Monday and I'm supposed to meet him at the railway station for it is the first time for him to 道款信时可以通用的部分，其他 部分可以根据写作要求灵活 travel to my city.I want to know if it's convenient for you if we have our course 处理。 next Wednesday? 时态往往是一搬现在时。 I sincerely hope you can accept my apology.Once again,I am sorry for 文章人称以第一人称为主。 any convenience caused by my personal reason. Yours. Li Hua Wednesday 道歉信写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆道歉信 假定你是校英语话剧社社长李华，原定于下周举行的英语话剧表演赛因故推迟，请给担任评委的外教Katherin心 写一封邮件。内容包括：1.表示歉意：2，推迟原因：3.后续调整。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 [范文] Dear Katherine. How are things going with you these days?I'm sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled to be held next week has been postponed. Week5道歉信&冒险生活类读后续写 The reason is that the lecture hall,where the competition is planned to take place,is to be redecorated from tomorrow on.Not until 3 weeks later,will the work be finished.I wish it would be convenient for you to be our judge then. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by the change.Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①drama n.剧本：戏剧②competition m.竞争，比赛③schedule v.安排：预定④postpone v.推迟，延缓 ⑤rearrange.重新安排 高分句型：（句型I)I'm sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled to be held next week has been postponed.(运用了hat引导的宾语从句) (句型2)Not until3 weeks later,will the work be finished.(运用了部分倒装) 跟踪训练2◆道歉信 假如你是李华，你和Jo约好这个周六在体育馆打篮球。由于你不慎将脚踝扭伤，不能履行诺言，请写一封英文 信，向他表达你的款意并说明原因。馨假快到了，你希望康复后你们能另约时间。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 参考词汇扭伤sprain刷烈运动strenuous exercise [范文] Dear John, I'm writing to express my genuine apologies for failing to keep my promise to play basketball with you in the gym this Saturday afternoon. Yesterday I walked to a bookstore nearby,but I slipped on the muddy road unexpectedly,making my ankle slightly sprained.My doctor suggested that I should take a rest for two weeks without any strenuous exercise.As the summer holiday is coming,can we make another appointment after my recovery then? Sorry again for any inconvenience that I've caused.Looking forward to our next meeting. Yours, LiHua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①genuine ad山.真诚的，真心的②keep one's promise信守诺言③muddy adj.泥泞的，多泥的 ④appointment m.约会，约定⑤inconvenience n.不便，麻烦 高分句型：（句型I)Yesterday I walked to a bookstore nearby,but I slipped on the muddy road unexpectedly,making my ankle slightly sprained..(运用了现在分词作结果状语) (句型2)My doctor suggested that I should take a rest for【wo weeks without any strenuous exercise.(运用了叔语 气) 43 言航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能5 运用并列句和状语从句提升应用文写作表达 一、并列句 More healthy food,or you'll break down sooner or 并列句是由两个或两个以上并列而又独立的简单句later.多吃健康食品，不然你的身体迟早会垮掉。 构成。在并列句中，这些简单句常由并列连词连在一起 (3)when构成的句式 并列连词所连接的简单句被称为分句。 ①sb.was doing sth.when.,,某人正在做某事，这 (一)常见并列句的类型及并列连词 时… 类型 连词 Last Monday,I was walking in the street when I suddenly saw an old man fall off his bicycle.上周一，我正 并列关系 and,both...and....not only...but 在街上散步，这时突然看到一位老人从自行车上摔了 (递进关系) also...,neither...nor... 下来。 转折关系 but,yet,whereas ②sb.was about to do sth.when.,.某人正要做某事. 这时… 选择关系 or,otherwise,or else,either...or.... We were about to set off when it suddenly began to not...but... rain.我们正打算动身，突然下起雨来了。 因果关系 for,so ③sb.had just done sth.when.,,某人刚做完某事，这 时… 对比关系 while I had just finished sweeping the floor when the First.my English is very good and I'm open-minded telephone rang..我刚刚拖完地，这时电话铃响了。 and warm-hearted,so I'm getting along well with everyone. 二、状语从句 首先，我的英语很好，而且我性格外向、有一副热心肠，因 在英语写作中，状语从句的运用是高考英语高分作 此我和每个人都相处得很好。 文的必需条件，所以必须学会并熟练运用状语从句。 People can either give them as gifts or hang them in 引导状语从句的引导词分类 their houses.人们可以把它们当作礼物，或者挂在自己的 状语从句 引导词 房子里。 It not only gave us a chance to get close to nature,but when,whenever,as,while,(ever)since, also gave us relaxation from our study.它不仅给了我们接 before,after,till,until,as soon as, 近大自然的机会，而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。 时间 hardly...when...,no sooner...than..., So,from now on.let's not waste our time on scarcely...when....each time,every time. unimportant things but have a heart-to-heart chat with our the first time,the last time.the moment,the parents once in a while.因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一 minute,the second,the day,immediately 些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进 地点 where,wherever 行面对面的交流。 (二)并列连词构成的常用句式 if,unless,providing/provided that ) (I)and构成的句式 条件 supposing/suppose (that),given (that )as ①D祈使句+and+陈述句（祈使句相当于一个条件状语 long as,so long as,on condition (that),in 从句，and后面的句子相当于一个表示结果的主句)。 case,if only Work hard and you will succeed.(If you work hard, because,as,since,now that,seeing that you will succeed.)努力学习，你就会成功。 原因 considering that,in that ②名词词组+and+陈述句（名词词组相当于一个条件 状语从句，其中常含有mor心，another等词)。 though,although,even if,even though,as, Another try,and you'll make a success.再试一次，你 while,whatever,whoever,whenever.wherever. 让步 就会取得成功 however,.no matter+疑间词，whether(.,.) (2)or(clse)/otherwise构成的句式 or....whether...or not ①祈使句+or(else)/otherwise+陈述句. 比较 as,than,the same as,not so.·as.·, Seize the chance,or(else)you'l regret..抓住这次机 会，否则你会后悔的。 ②名词词组+or(else)/otherwise+陈述句。 方式 as if,as though,as 44 Week5道歉信&冒险生活类读后续写 )2.Start out right away.or/otherwise you'll miss the 状语从句 引导词 first train. 3.I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to that,in order that,so that,in case,for fear 目的 practicing it,but I failed to pass the mid-term that),lest examination. 结果 so that,so...that...,such...that... 4.About 9:00 last night,I was busy preparing for my tomorrow's test when suddenly loud noises came into I went on with my work until I finished washing all the clothes..我会继续工作，直到把所有的衣服洗完。 my room. Ever since my friend Xiaohua entered high school two 5.Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols. years ago,his mother has been pushing him hard in his while 48%of the boys favor sports stars. 6.Not only can students improve their writing ability in studies.自从我的朋友小华两年前进入高中，他的妈妈一 this way but also they can strengthen their self- 直在学习上给他施加很大的压力。 confidence. Whenever he didn't perform well in his studies,she Ⅱ.翻译句子 would blame him bitterly.expressing her disappointment in him.每当他在学习时做得不好，她总会训斥他，表达对他 1.好的习惯经常使得效率提高，而不好的习惯则使效果 的失望。 恰恰相反。 As I was busy preparing for my final exam.I didn't Good habits always lead to high efficiency,while bad reply to your email as soon as I received it.因为我正忙者 ones lead to the opposite. 准备期末考试，我没有一收到信就给你回信。 2.当谈及选择时，我喜欢去旅游。 Although cleaning street is no more than an ordinary: When it comes to a choice.I prefer to go travelling. job,it contributes to the society,尽管清扫大街只是一个非 3.如果方便的话，你可以在上午11点半到机场去接他吗？ 常普通的工作，但对社会做出了贡献。 If it is convenient for you,can you pick him up at the Whatever the result is,we should accept it with a airport at11:30a.m.？ smile,because we have tried our best..无论结果怎样，我们4.无论我做什么，我都会尽力做好。 都要微笑着接受，因为我们已经尽了全力。 No matter what I do,I will try my best to do it well. 5.另外，我会告诉他你长得什么样，以便你们可以容易地 跟踪练习 找到对方。 【,用适当的词填空 Besides.I will tell him what you look like so that you 1.Stand over there and you'll be able to see the oil can find each other easily. painting better. Friday 读后续写示例指导5 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文 It was a sunny summer morning,the breeze blowing gently.As planned,Jackson took a trip into the remote wilds near Olom Village,in the Sakha Republic,Russia.His four-year-old daughter,Karina,found her dad leaving and wanted to follow him to give him a surprise.She slipped out of the house.with nobody realizing it,even Jackson. Unfortunately,she walked too slowly on her way and soon she was lost in the vast,dangerous Siberian wilderness. Luckily for her,her dog,Naida,followed Karina just as the girl followed her father.The two suddenly found themselves walking with no one in sight,drifting away from their home as the hours went by. Night fell.Karina's father returned home,and it didn't take long after that for the whole family to realize what had happened.They couldn't find Karina anywhere.They turned to the police for help immediately.And they took action at once in search of the lost girl. A whole week had gone by and there was no progress of the rescue in sight.The whole family was stuck in desperation,but Karina's mum never lost hope."Many stopped believing that she was alive,but as a mother I felt that she would be found soon." In fact,Karina did survive.Although Siberia is an extremely dangerous place even for adults due to its wildlife and climate,she made it.She survived by eating wild fruits and drinking water from nearby rivers,and she faced the freezing nighttime temperatures by cozying up in a bed of grass.Naida did its best too,scaring away the wild animals and keeping each other warm by sleeping close together at night. 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 After nine days struggling to survive,seared and alone,Karina could only be grateful about one thing:her good friend was by her side.Naida gave its strength,and actively helped the four-year-old to stay alive for that long. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 This morning,Naida suddenly walked away and headed back into town,ignoring Karina's hopeless cry and leaving her completely alone Naida did what it could to lead the rescue team to where Karina was. 语篇解读 本文是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自然”主避语境下的“和谐相处”主题群。文章讲述了四岁的Kina和自己的狗 一起迷失在广阔而危险的西伯利亚荒野中，但是Karina和地的狗却奇迹叔地活了下来。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Karina,her mother,her father and her dog,Naida. When:It was a sunny summer morning Where:In the vast.dangerous Siberian wilderness. What:Unfortunately,she walked too slowly on her way and soon she was lost in the vast,dangerous Siberian wilderness.Luckily for her,her dog,Naida,followed Karina just as the girl followed her father.A whole week had gone,by and there was no progress of the rescue in sight. Why:The whole family was stuck in desperation,but Karina's mum never lost hope. (2)Details: DIt was a sunny summer morning,the breeze blowing gently. 那是一个阳光明媚的夏日早晨，微风轻轻地吹拂着。 本句为环境描写，句中出现了独立主格结构the breeze blowing gently凸显出清晨的安静，也预示着接下来要发生打 破这沉静的不同寻常的事情。 2His four-year-old daughter,Karina,found her dad leaving and wanted to follow him to give him a surprise. 他四岁的女儿Karina发现爸爸离开了，她想跟着他，给他一个惊喜。 本句为人物描写，句中运用了同位语，dsb.doing sth.句式，不定式作目的状语。通过本句的描写，形象地展示了 调皮可爱，不知危险的Karina。 3Luckily for her,her dog,Naida,followed Karina just as the girl followed her father. 幸运的是，Karina的狗Naida跟若她，就像Karina跟着她的父亲一样。 本句为细节描写，句中运用了as引导的方式状语从句表达了Karina的狗Naida一直跟着她，保护着她，安慰着她的 动人的情景。 4 The two suddenly found themselves walking with no one in sight,drifting away from their home as the hours went by. 他们俩突然发现自己走着走着，一个人也看不见，随着时间的流逝，他们渐渐远离了家。 本句为动作描写，句中运用了现在分词作宾语补足语，s引导的时间状语从句和几个动作的描写，表达了小主人和 狗迷路的当时的绝望情境。 5 The whole family was stuck in desperation,but Karina's mum never lost hope. 他们全家都陷人了绝望之中，但Karina的妈妈从未失去过希望。 本句为心理描写，运用了并列句。连词but前后为转折关系，描述了全家人在Karina失踪后既绝望无助，又心存希 望的心情。 2.找线索 (I)根据第二段中的“Luckily for her,her dog,Naida,followed Karina just as the girl followed her father.,"和第四段 中的“The whole family was stuck in desperation.but Karina's mum never lost hope."可知.Karina和她的狗一直在一 起，并且Kaia的妈妈从未失去过希望，在续写的第一段中可呈现出狗的行为让妈妈希望更清晰。 (2)根据第三段中的“They turned to the police for help immediately.”和第六段中的“Naida gave its strength,and actively helped the four-year-old to stay alive for that long.”可知，救援一定会到来，而她的狗绝对不会放弃她，在续写 的第二段中可呈现出这些，来突出主题。 Week5道歉信&冒险生活类读后续写 3.定思路 (I)由续写第一段首句"This morning,Naida suddenly walked away and headed back into town,ignoring Karina's hopeless cry and leaving her completely alone.”可知，第一段可描写Naida如何返回镇上并找到救援者。 (2)由续写第二段首句“Naida did what it could to lead the rescue team to where Karina was."可知，第二段可描写救 援者如何在Naida的带领下找到Karina和Karina对她的狗的感激之情。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 This morning.Naida suddenly walked away and headed back into town,ignoring Karina's hopeless cry and leaving her completely olone.The poor little girl cried with fear,tears rolling down her cheeks.She curled up in a tight ball wondering what was waiting for her.At the same time,Naida found its way back home. When Karina's mum saw it she was excited hugging it tightly with tears filling her eyes.She was more convinced that Karing was still alive.The rescue efforts were restarted aiving hope to the family. Naida did what it could to lead the rescue team to where Karina was.Thanks to Naido the rescuers spotted the little girl in an overgrown grassy field Karing was luing there hiding herself from danger and keeping herself warm on seeing her beloved doughter.Karing's mum rushed to pull her into her arms eagerly. tears rolling down wildly.Karing threw her arms around her dear mum's neck,hugging her tightly,her loyal companion,Naido.circling around in excitement which moved everubody How Naida protected Karing is indeed an amazing proof to the loualty that our four-leaged friends con show Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文 Neesha,an 8-year-old golden retriever,is a lucky dog.After spending a fortnight on her own without food or real shelter,the tough dog was accidentally spotted by a couple,who,in spite of the cold weather,were hiking the range and came across her. Two weeks earlier,Neesha's owners had taken her and their other dog,a German shepherd named Harley,for some outdoor exercise.Frightened by a deer.both dogs ran away.Harley found his way back to the parking lot the next day,but Neesha did not. The family made a thorough search.They left a laundry basket of unwashed clothing near the spot where they'd last seen Neesha in the hope that she'd head straight towards the familiar smell marker.They even turned to the Interet for help in finding Neesha-but there was still no sign of her. "We posted our experience on social media.Then a weekend later,we were still looking for her.We were starting to give up hope."the pet's owner Erina O'Shea Goetelen told The Irish Times. Eventually,the family began to accept that Neesha might not be coming home."We just thought she is 8,and it's been two weeks.There was no way she could survive. Doctors Ciara Nolan and Jean Francois Bonnet must truly be crazy hikers.They braved the elements on the freezing day when the couple decided to reach one of Wicklow's peaks.As they neared the top,Nolan was shocked to see a dog shaking in the snow. "She was frightened,freezing cold.She didn't have enough energy to bark or stand,"Bonnet said in an interview. "We tried to get her to walk,but she couldn't stand.So we covered her with our spare clothes and gave her some food." 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Bonnet lifted Neesha onto his back for the long path down the mountain. Neesha's owners could hardly believe it when they learned their dog had been found alive. [语篇解读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了8岁的金毛Neesha是一只幸运的狗。一天，Neesha跟着主人去户外锻 炼，因被一只鹿惊吓跑丢了。在没有食物也没有真正的栖身之所的情况下，Neesha独自生活了两周，在老奄一息的时 候，被两位爬山的医生发现。 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“Bonnet把Neesha背在背上，沿着长长的山路往山下走去。”可知，第一段可 描写两位医生如何把Neesha带下山以及他们如何安置Neesha。②由续写第二段首句内容“当Neesha的主人得知他 们的狗还活着时，他们简直不敢相信。”可知，第二段可描写Neesha的主人在获悉Neesha获救之后的感受以及对医生 夫妇的感激之情。 [范文] Bonnet lifted Neesha onto his back for the long path down the mountain.After the dog and the man fell several times,Bonnet thought of a good wau to hold Neesha.He wrapped her in a scarf.As soon as they reached level ground,the couple took the dog to an animal rescue shelter.The dog lost a great deal of weight and was very weak,but surprisingly except for a few cuts and scrapes,the tough dog was in good condition.The couple contacted her owner via the information on the Internet. Neesha's owners could hardly believe it when they learned their dog had been found alive."We had thought we would have lost her forever and were very sad.But now,we are so relieved and happy."Erina said. "Thousands of words can't express our gratitude to them for their great efforts to bring Neesha back home. They are so nice.Neesha is really a lucky dog."said the excited woman.A random act of love may make the world a warmer place. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①wrap v.要②rescue shelter收容所③surprisingly ad.惊人地，出人意料地 ④contact.联系 5 random ad.任意的，随机的 高分句型：（句型1）As soon as they reached level ground,the couple took the dog to an animal rescue shelter.(运用了 由As soon as引导的时间状语从句) (句型2)We had thought we would have lost her forever and were very sad.(运用了由that引导的宾语从句，省略了 that) Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假定你是李华。你原定下个月去英国参加笔友Kevi加的高中毕业典礼，现因故无法成行。请给他发一封电子邮 件，内容包括：1.深表款意：2.解释原因：3.衷心祝福。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Kevin. Yours. Li Hua [范文] Dear Kevin, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I can't go to your graduation ceremony. Hearing that you would graduate from high school,I had intended to attend your graduation ceremony. However,my little brother suddenly fell ill and needed to stay in hospital for a week.What's worse,my parents are so busy that they don't have time to look after him,so I must take care of him there.Therefore,I can't meet you in Britain.I hold the belief that you will accept my apology and understand my situation. I hope you have a good time at the graduation ceremony and wish you all the best. Yours. Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①awfully ad.十分；非常②graduation ceremony毕业典礼③graduate from毕业于…④take car心 of照料⑤have a good time玩得愉快 高分句型：（句型I)Hearing that you would graduate from high school,I had intended to attend your graduation ceremony.(运用了现在分词作状语，hat引导的宾语从句) 2)What's worse,my parents are so busy that they don't have time to look after him,so I must take care of him here.(运用了so.,hat引导的结果状语从句) 48 Week5道歉信&冒险生活类读后续写 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was 11:30 a.m.,and the fishing so far had been a failure.Still,floating on the water 40 miles off the North Carolina coast was a great way to spend a lazy July day.It was really relaxing with calm seas,clear skies,and a breeze around them.There was not another boat in sight until now.Suddenly,Andrew Sherman,a 50-year-old father from Roanoke,Virginia,saw a spot in the distance.As the spot approached,it started to look like a boat."Jack,"he yelled to his 21-year-old son."someone's headed straight at us!" Strangely,the boat was about to crash into the side of their boat.Andrew sped their boat up as quickly as he could to avoid being crashed.The Shermans stared incredibly.Four fishing lines out.music playing-an average recreational fishing boat,except there wasn't a person in sight.The boat owner must have gone below into the cabin,leaving his boat travelling along at 10 mph. "We must follow it."Andrew said. As their boat got close to it,they shouted,"Hey!Hey!"But there was no response.A horrifying new thought flashed into their mind:The boat owner had gone below and suffered a heart attack,or fell into the water. Andrew moved their boat alongside the other while Jack leaped onto the other boat.He managed to bring the boat to a stop and rushed down into the cabin.He came back up a moment later."Empty,"he said. Astonished.father and son said at the same time,"What happened?" The two men could have left it at that moment,but they were curious.Locating the boat's GPS system,they searched its history log(航海日志)，The missing owner had marked points along his route indicating good fishing spots..Then the points suddenly stopped a few miles back. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Immediately,they headed for that last point To their relief,the boat owner came to life [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Andrew Sherman和儿子出海捕鱼，发现了一条没有人的渔船在航行， 出于好奇，他们跟上了这条船，最终找到了船主并救了他。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“他们立刻朝着最后一个点前进。”可知，第一段可描写他们在海上搜寻的经 过。②由续写第二段首句内容“让他们松了一口气的是，船主活过来了。”可知，第二段可描写船主得救后的反应。 [范文] Immediately,they headed for that last point.From there,the two boats made ever-enlarging circles for the next hour.With Jack almost giving up hope,Andrew persevered in continuing the search.a journey no easier than looking for a needle in a haystack.He couldn't ignore the fact that the lost captain would probably be alive and was growing weary minute by minute in the endless sea.He kept going on,running north a bit,then south.And then he ran back up north again and then south again.Another hour later,his persistence paid off.Andrew eventually spotted a struggling figure in the distant water. To their relief,the boat owner came to life.When Andrew finally reached the man he and his son had been seeking for about two hours,a relieved smile rippled round his lips."You have no idea how happy I am to see you,"he said.They hauled him aboard.Only then did it dawn on the captain:"This is my boat!"The two men embraced each other as if they had known each other for ages and burst into hearty laughter together.Other than leg cramps,the captain was fine.He'd been saved from drowning and was grateful that the Shermans had taken the time to search for him."Had it not been for their perseverance in looking for me,"he says."I would have died." 高分亮点 高分词汇：①persevere.锲而不舍，坚持不懈②ignore,.佯装未见，不理睬③weary adj.疲劳的，疲倦的 ④persistence n.维持，坚持不懈⑤pay off回报，获得好结果⑥haul,.(用力)拖，拉 高分句型：（句型I)He couldn't ignore the fact that the lost captain would probably be alive and was growing weary minute by minute in the endless sea.(运用了that引导的同位语从句) (2)When Andrew finally reached the man he and his son had been seeking for about two hours,a relieved smile rippled round his lips.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略whom的定语从句) 49