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Week 3 邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 Monday 如何写好邀请信 激请信是激请亲朋好友等参加某项活动时所发出的 ·表明写作意图,向某人发出邀请 遨约性书信。邀请信一般包括此次活动的性质、活动内 容、发出邀请以及请求同意等。一般邀请信具有简洁、热 说明激请的具体原因和激请的内容 情的特点。 ·期待对方接受激请,并表示感说 典题示例 假定你是李华,你校近期成立了“孔子思想研究网上俱乐部(Confucianismonlineclub)”,你的朋友Tom对中国文 化很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,邀请他加入该俱乐部。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Tom. Yours. Li Hua I思路点拨 OStep One 审题谋篇 应用文 体裁 时态 一般现在时 主题 邀请信 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段:写信目的;第二段:该俱乐部的具体情况;第三段:期待回复 ostepTwo 词汇运用 1.极度,非常extremely 6.拥有,持有 possess 2.对......感兴趣 be keen on 7.特征,特点,特色characteristic 3.高兴 delighted 8.会议session 4.参加joinin 9.经常地,频繁地 frequently 5.建立,设立 establish 10.具有重大意义 be of great significance 2stepThree 句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我知道你非常喜欢中国文化 I know that you are extremely keen on Chinese culture. (2)我们学校最近成立了孔子思想研究在线俱乐部。 The Confucianism online club was established by our school recently. (3)我非常高兴地写信邀请你加人俱乐部。 I'm more than delighted to write to invite you to join in the club. (4)这个俱乐部有各种各样的特点。 The club possesses various characteristics. (5)首先,我们定期举行会议。 First of all. we hold regular sessions. (6)我们正在研究孔子的语录 We are studying the statements of Confucius. Week3 邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 (7)更重要的是,相关的教授经常被激请在网上做关于儒学的演讲 What's more, related professors are frequently invited to give speeches on Confucianism online. (8)这个俱乐部很有意义,可以帮助你更好地了解中国文化。 The club is of great significance and can help you gain a better understanding of Chinese culture. (9)我期待你的回复。 I am looking forward to your reply. 2.句式升级 (1)用现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)、(2)、(3)。 Knowing that you are extremely keen on Chinese culture. I'm more than delighted to write to invite you to join in the Confucianism online club, which was established by our school recently. (2)用现在分词作伴随状语合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 First of all, we hold regular sessions, studying the statements of Confucius. (3)加as far as I amconcerned升级句子(8),表达个人观点。 As far as I'm concerned, the club is of great significance and can help you gain a better understanding of Chinese culrure. (4)用省略主语和谓语的形式升级句(9)。 Looking forward to your reply. CstepFour 连句成篇 [范文] Dear Tom. Knowing that uou are extremelu keen on Chinese culture, I'm more than delighted to write to invite uou to join in the Confucionism online club, which was established bu our school recently The club possesses various characteristics. First of all we hold reqular sessions, studuing the statements of Confucius. Whot's more, related professors are freauentlu invited to give speeches on Confucianism online. As far as /m concerned. the club is of areat sianificance and can help uou gain a better understanding of Chinese culture. Looking forward to our replu Your LiHug Tuesday 邀请信满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1·常用词汇及话题句式 [常用词汇 improve v.提高 awarenessn.意识,了解,觉察 hostv主办 opportunityn.机会,时机 themen.主题,中心思想 sign up报名 charity n.慈善机构 stadiumn.体育场,运动场 varietyn.多样化,变化 benefitn.好处,益处 responsibilityn.责任,负责 delighted adj.高兴的 set aside 留出 take place举行 performance nI.表演,演出 invitationn.遨请 replyv.回答,答复 exhibitionn.展览,展出 information n.消息,资料 detailedadi.详尽的,详细的 feature v.以.....为特色 be enthusiastic about对......执心的 range from...to...范围从.....到..... sincerely adv.由衷地,真诚地 brilliant adj.巧妙的,使人印象深的 话题句式 2. I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth 引出话题 先声夺人 Festival.我想邀请您下周六重阳节和我们一起去拜访 1. It's my pleasure/a great honour to invite you to join us. 非 附近的养老院。 常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。 启航汇 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 3. I'm writing to invite you to attend a photography including short musical performances, playing musical exhibition to be held in our school, whose theme is instruments, as well as a singing contest. 我们的音乐节将 “Impressive changes aroundme”.我写信是想邀请你参 包括各种各样的活动,包括音乐短剧表演,演奏乐器以 加即将在我们学校举办的摄影展,主题是“我身边令人 及一场歌唱比赛。 印象深刻的变化” 首尾结合 余音回味 主题部分 娓娓道来 7. I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is 4. Here are some details about the activity.这是一些关于这 convenient toyou.你方便的话我真心希望你能接受我 个活动的细节。 们/我的邀请。 5. The activity is scheduled at 8 :o0 a. m. on January 2oth in 8. We would appreciate it if you could confirm your the lecture hall and its theme is "Differences between participation at your earliest convenience. 如果你能在你 Eastern andWesternCustoms”.活动定于1月20日上午 方便时尽早确认参加,我们将不胜感激。 8点在报告厅举行,主题为“东西方习俗的差异”。 9. I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. 如果你 6. Our music festival will cover a wide range of activities, 能接受我的邀请,我将不胜感激。 晨诵2背满分模板 Dear Jimmy. How is it going? In order to improve teenagers' awareness of environment protection. the Students Union will host a practical activity themed "Promoting 模板中黑体字部分是描写 Eeotourism". 邀请信时可以通用的部分,其他 We will design posters to promote ecosystem and hand them out on the squares 部分可以根据写作要求灵活 or near schools. At the end of the activity. we will have an opportunity to watch 处理。 birds and take photos in the natural park, through which we can have fun and learn 主体部分往往是一般将来 a lot about nature. 时,其次是一般现在时。 Volunteers are needed. Would you like to join us? If so, you can sign up 文章人称以第一人称和第 on our school website or call at 8233686. Looking forward to your early reply. 二人称为主。 Yours. Li Hua Wednesday 邀请信写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1邀请信 你校近期要举办一场以“Impressivechangesaroundme”为主题的摄影展,请你代表学生会给外教Roy写封邮件遨 请他参加。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动特色;3.你的期待。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Roy, Yours sincerely, Students' Union [范文] Dear Roy. How is it qoing? fm writing to invite uou to attend a photoqraphu exhibition to be held in our school. whose theme is "lmpressive changes around me". Here is some detailed information The exhibition will begin gt 8 a. m. and last for about three hours in the school hall on Feb. 15th. in addition, the exhibition will feature about fifty students' works centering on the waus people live and work in this fost-developing citu. You will surelu be amazed bu the brilliant pictures and thus more fomiliar with the citu I would be very jouful if ou could come. f'm looking forward to your reply Yours sincerely. Students' Union Week 3 邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 高分亮点 高分词汇:①exhibitionn.展览,展出 ②detailedadj.详尽的,详细的③informationn. 消息,资料 ④feature v. 以......为特色 brilliantadj.巧妙的,使人印象深的 高分句型:(句型1)I'm writing to invite you to attend a photography exhibition to be held in our school. whose theme is “Impressive changes around me”.(运用了 whose 引导的非限制性定语从句) (句型2)Iwouldbe very joyful if you could come.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 跟踪训lI练2邀请信 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你们学校下个月将要举办主题为“寻找春天,拥抱自然”的踏青骑行活动,请 给你校的交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括:1.活动安排;2.准备事项。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Jim. Yours. Li Hua [范文] Dear Jim. Spring has come and our school is going to organize a cucling activitu themed" Greet Spring. Embrace Noture" on Aoril 1oth. I am writing to invite uou to join us. At 8:oo a. m.. we will gather at the school gote and then go to the famous cucling park in the suburbs After arriving there, we will rent road bikes and begin our cucling along the 10-kilometer-long route. After that. we will have a picnic. lt's a good chance to get some exercise and enjou the beautiful view in the countruside Don't forget to wear your helmet and protective gloves if gou come. You'd better bring your lunch pock with ou. lf ou are interested in it. just let me know Yours. Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇:①organizev.组织;筹备 ②themev.(休闲场所、活动)以......为主题 ③suburb n.城郊,近郊 ④picnic n.野餐;野餐活动 helmetn.头盛,安全帽 protective adj.保护的;防护的 高分句型:(句型1) After arriving there, we will rent road bikes and begin our cycling along the 10-kilometer-long route.(动名词作宾语) (句型 2) It's a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the beautiful view in the countryside.(it 作形式主语) Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能3 运用非谓语动词 提升应用文写作表达 众所周知,作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单 第一步:写出两个简单句。 调乏味,句子与句子之间的关系显得松散:而文章中过多 ①Consequently. some viewers began to turn away from 地出现复合句又显得累赘,读起来费劲。恰当地运用非cinemas. 谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换,不仅句型多样,句 ②It led to a slower growth 子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑,言简意明。 第二步:让句①作主句,用非谓语动词改写句②。 一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句 第三步:让句②作结果状语,由于其动词leadto与主 写作时,我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进 语it之间为主谓关系,故用现在分词短语作结果状语。 行转换,使其成为较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用以 Consequently. some viewers began to turn away from 下三步。 cinemas, leading to a slower growth. 启T 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 例1 I hear that you are recruiting some volunteers to 三、写作中非谓语动词的常用句型 welcome the coming foreign students. I am gladly writing to 1. remain to be done 有待于被.... apply for this job. Many questions have to be settled and much remains to be →Hearing that you are recruiting some volunteers to done inour educationalwork,我们的教育工作中还有许 welcome the coming foreign students. I am gladly writing to 多问题要解决,还有许多事情要去做。 apply for this job. 2. 连词when/while/once/unless/although...+doing/done 例2 Then there will be various fantastic performances When faced with the difficulties and failures. I must and they will be plaved by talented students. overcome them. →Then there will be various fantastic performances to be 面对困难和失败时,我必须战胜它们。 played by talented students. When searching for some information, we can operate by 二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句 touching the screen. 用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易 当查找一些信息时,我们可以通过触摸屏来操作 些,因为需转换的一般是从句部分,这时只需要判断用何3.comparedwith/to...与.....比较 种非谓语动词,再把握好时态和语态即可,所以只需以下 Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what 两步。 I did. 第一步:写出一个复合句。 与逃逸的司机相比,我为自已所做之事感到自豪 Since you have realised that your time is limited. vou'll 4. be said/reported/considered... to do..: 据说/报道/认 have to study for your goals without hesitation 为_.. 第二步:把since引导的原因状语从句转换为非谓语 A bus full of passengers was reported to have gone out of 动词,realise与you之间为主谓关系,且表示完成,故用现 control on a highway south of the city. 在分词的完成时作状语。 据报道,一辆满载乘客的公共汽车在城南的一条公路 Having realised that your time is limited, you'll have to 上失去了控制。 study for your goals without hesitation 5.with+宾语4宾语补足语 例1 If it is carried out continuously. it will benefit all Every runner tried their best to finish the task. with their of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress. classmates along the way giving them necessary help as →Carried out continuously. it will benefit all of us well as encouragement greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress 每位赛跑者都尽最大努力来完成此次任务,他们的同现 例2 As I have been exposed to foreign teachers since 同学在途中给他们提供必要的帮助和鼓励。 a young age, I can communicate freely with others in In the picture, a boy in worn clothes sits beside a wooden English. table with a pile of bamboo books on it. →Having been exposed to foreign teachers since a 在画中,一个穿着破旧衣服的男孩坐在木桌旁边,桌上 young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. 有一堆竹简。 Friday 读后续写示例指导3 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My baby Reese started screaming and I struggled to hold him in my arms as we pushed our way through the crowd to the side of the taekwondo(拳道) studio, where I would send my boy for the training. I looked up, and that is when I saw the photo on a poster. a woman with a bright white smile surrounded by her daughters."OUR MOM NEEDS A KIDNEY(督脏)." it said above the photo."My name is Vonchelle Knight. and I have polyeystic kidney disease," it said below."I am a single mother of two girls and have been on the transplant waitlist for eight years." As I continued to read, I thought about how desperately this momma needed a kidney. And then the idea struck me.I wanted to donate my kidney to the woman whom I had never met. On the drive home, I told my husband I wanted to donate my kidney to a stranger. By the look on his face, he clearly thought I had lost my mind. I was a busy mom of two boys working a full-time job as a sales account manager. I had a calendar filled with sporting events, group fitness and volunteer church hours. Week 3 邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 "Where is this coming from?" he asked. I was excited and slightly terrified as I explained the poster. I told him I wanted to at least call Vonchelle's nurse and get more information. Several weeks later, the results were in. We were a perfect match! The nervous excitement filled my body. Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life. Vonchelle had already waited eight years and obviously didn't have any family members who could donate. I told my husband that the doctor could do the transplant on January twenty-fifth in the hospital. His eyes filled with tears, he stared at me and nodded. Vonchelle's daughter worked at my son's taekwondo studio, so I shared the news with her. One day before the donation, the doctors scheduled me to meet Vonchelle in the hospital. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 As she walked through the door of the meeting room, I walked up to her, my heart beating wildly. After the successful transplant, Vonchelle was recovering well. 语篇解读 本文是一篇记叙文,属于“人与自我”主题语境下的“做人与做事”主题群。文章讲述了作者在带孩子去蹈拳道赛 场现场比赛的时候,无意间看到了一个贤脏捐赠的传单。一位名叫VonchelleKnight的单身母亲患有贤病,已经在等 待移植的名单上等待了八年。读完她的经历后,作者决定为这个陌生人捐赠自已的贤脏。虽然丈夫一开始不理解, 但是作者依旧下了这个决定,联系医护人员,得到匹配成功的结果。医生安排好移植手术后,作者的丈夫最终同意。 手术前的一天,作者与Vonchelle在医院会面。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who: Vonchelle. my husband and me Where: taekwondo studio. home. hospital When: When I sent my boy to the taekwondo studio. What: As I continued to read, I thought about how desperately this momma needed a kidney. And then the idea strucl me. I wanted to donate my kidney to the woman whom I had never met. Why: Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life (2)Details: ①My baby Reese started screaming and I struggled to hold him in my arms as we pushed our way through the crowd to the side of the taekwondo studio, where I would send my boy for the training 我的孩子Reese开始尖叫起来,我努力着把他抱在怀里,我们穿过人群,挤到路拳道工作室那里,我将送我的儿子去 那里训练。 本句为动作描写,主句运用了and连接的并列句,从句运用了as引导的时间状语从句和where引导的非限制性定语 从句。该句表达了我在送孩子去蹈拳道训练时的忙碌状态。 ②I looked up, and that is when I saw the photo on a poster, a woman with a bright white smile surrounded by her daughters. 我抬起头,看到了一张海报上的照片,一个带着灿烂笑容的女人被她的女儿们包围着。 本句为人物描写,运用了连词and引导并列句,surrounded过去分词为后置定语,表达出这个女人的幸福状态 ③I was excited and slightly terrified as I explained the poster. 当我解释海报时,我既兴奋又有点害怕。 本句为心理描写,句中运用了as引导的时间状语从句。 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 ④Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life 当我意识到我有能力让这位妈妈重获新生时,思绪在我的脑海里盘旋。 本句为心理描写,表达我当时意识到那位妈妈会因为我的帮助而重获新生时的激动心情。 His eyes filled with tears, he stared at me and nodded 他盯着我,点了点头,眼里充满了泪水。 本句为动作描写,运用stared和nodded两个并列动词以及独立主格结构表现出丈夫在得知我做手术时的担忧的 状态。 2.找线索 (1)根据第二段中的"'I am a single mother of two girls and have been on the transplant waitlist for eight years.'"和第 六段中的"Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life."可知,要 捐助的对象是一个快乐幸福的女士,而我又是一个心地善良的人,会为能让对方重生而激动,在续写的第一段中可 呈现出这些内容。 (2)根据第二段中的"I looked up, and that is when I saw the photo on a poster,a woman with a bright white smile surrounded by her daughters."和第三段中的"I wanted to donate my kidney to the woman whom I had never met."可 知,病人在手术后一定会恢复往日的活力和健康,而作为一个陌生人,作者所做的这一切体现了她无私奉献的高尚 品质,凸显了人与人之间美好的互助力量这个主题。 3.定思路 (1)由续写第一段首句"As she walked through the door of the meeting room, I walked up to her, my heart beating wildly.”可知,第一段可描写作者见到Vonchelle的印象和感受,两人会面的表现和交流。 (2)由续写第二段首句“After the successful transplant,Vonchelle was recovering well.”可知,第二段可描写作者去看 望Vonchelle恢复的情况,作者内心的体会和感悟 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案: 高效临摹衡水体。 争抢满分作文 As she wolked through the door of the meeting room. I walked up to her. mu heort beating wildlu, Her pale but briaht smile wos infectious and I couldn't heln hut feel o sense of admiration at the woman before me. Here wos the person who had heen waiting eight long ueors for o kidneu and now because of mu decision to donate she had a chance at a new life We hugged tiahtl tears streaming down hoth our faces as we exchanged words of aratitude and hope ln that moment I knew I had made the rioht decision and that the hond hetweenus would he unhreakable. After the successful transplant, Vonchelle was recovering well. Lvisited her in the hosnital wotching as she slowl reaained her strength and vitalit Her daughters were bu her side, holding her hand and smiling through their tears. As I looked at them I felt o sense of fulfillment that I had never experienced before In giving Vonchelle the qift of life I had also given muself a giffthe knowledge that even in the darkest of times there s alwaus hooe alwaus o chance for something heautiful to emerge And as I left the hospital that do I knew that the experience would stau with me forever, a reminder of the power of human connection and the beaut of selfless givirng Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On February 21. 2o18. Christine Cheers' world fell apart. Someone on the other end of the phone had said the words that bring parents to their knees: "There's been an accident." Her 32-year-old Navy flight surgeon James was injured in a training mission. At hospital. Christine and her husband David were told that he would never breathe on his own and he would never smile at them again 26 Week 3 邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 It was time for Christine to honor the spirit of her son who had switched his major from commerce engineering to premed(医学预科) because he wanted to help people. It was time to make her every worst day some stranger's best one She instructed the hospital to begin the organ donation process. Christine Cheers wasn't leaving the hospital until every last one of her son's organs left the building. She and David watched hospital employees cary coolers from the operation room The last one was his heart."That was the one I cared about most." Christine says,"With bravery and selflessness, James had such an amazing heart." Seeing James's heart leave the building. Christine fell into a sadness so deep that climbing out seemed impossible. Her only comfort would be to find out that James's organs had helped people, so she wrote each receiver a letter just to know if they were doing all right. Mike Cohen, a cyclist. had a heart transplant (移植). James's heart! Two months after the surgery. Mike got a call from the organization that arranged the transplant. They had a letter for him from James's mother. As he read Christine's letter. Mike began to understand just how special his new heart was. Eager to know more about James, Mike googled him He found they had a lot in common. They were both athletic and practically the same age. Another thing he learned about lames: His grave site(墓地) was in Jacksonville-the other side of the country. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Upon recovery, Mike announced on social media to take a cross-country trip Mike got off his bike and walked straight to Christine, who was waiting at the grave site. [语篇解读]本文以心脏为线索展开,讲述了James让父母在他去世后,将所有器官捐给需要的人,心脏捐给了 Mike。Mike在收到James母亲的信后,开始了解James并发现了James与自已有很多相似之处。他想要亲自去拜访 James的父母表示感谢和敬佩,随后便骑自行车来到国家的另一端-James的家。 [段落续写] ①由续写第一段首句内容“康复后,Mike在社交媒体上宣布要进行横跨全国的旅行。”可知,第一段可 描写Mike为骑行做的准备及大家在媒体上对此事的看法。②由续写第二段首句内容“Mike下了自行车,径直走向在 蓦地等候的Christine。”可知,第二段可描写Mike见到James父母后,向他们表达感激和敬意,并在James墓前承诺好 好照顾他的心脏 [范文] Upon recovery, Mike announced on social media to take a cross-country trip. He wanted to cucle to Jomes's grave site to pau his respects in person. lt seemed fitting to make the journeu bu bike-to show how transformative the heart was. Mike was back to cucling and araduallu built up his bodu. Blessings for the ride flooded in on social media."What a biker with a big heart." someone commented. Hearing about Mike's decision, Christine and David decided theu would meet him there when he arrived Mike got off his bike and walked straight to Christine, who was waiting at the grave site." Thank uou. Thanks for coming." said Christine as theu folded into a deep hug. Then came the tears. They were not the deep weeping tears of grief, but tears of relief from a mother who knew she'd done right. At James's heodstone, Mike squatted down and took o deep breath, feeling the strong pulse of James's heart in his chest. He told James how thankful he was and promised to take care of his heart 高分亮点 ②transformative adj.有改革能力的,起改造作用的 高分词汇:①inperson亲自,当面 ③buildup锻炼 ④griefnt. 悲伤,悲痛squatv.蹲坐 高分句型:(句型1) Hearing about Mike's decision, Christine and David decided they would meet him there when he armived.(运用了现在分词作状语及when引导的时间状语从句) (句型 2) They were not the deep weeping tears of grief, but tears of relief from a mother who knew she'd done right.(运 用了who引导的定语从句) 厨 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 第一节应用文写作 假定你是校报编辑李华,想邀请你的美国朋友Jordan为专栏“Teenage life aroundtheworld”撰写一篇稿件。内 容包括:1.发出遨请;2.稿件要求(内容、字数等);3.表示感谢。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 [范文] Dear Jordan. I'm writing to sincerelu invite uou to write an article for" Teenager life around the world". a new column of our school newspoper To begin with. uour article is welcome to focus both on uour life and studu on campus, which makes it possible for us teenogers to have a better understanding of teenagers in uour countru. Meanwhile, uou can also involve some speciol occasions or activities, thus enobling us to have o deep insight to authentic Americon culture. ln addition, attention should be poid to the number of words. ranging from 3oo to 4oo or so I would appreciate it if ou could accept mu invitation. Looking forward to our prompt repl Yours. LiHud 高分亮点 高分词汇:①sincerely adv.由衷地,真诚地 ②tobegin with首先 ③involvev.(使)参加,加人;使承担,使面对 ④authentic adi.真正的,真迹的prompt adj.迅速的,立刻的 高分句型:(句型1)To begin with, your article is welcome to focus both on your life and study on campus, which makes it possible for us teenagers to have a better understanding of teenagers in your country.(运用了 which 引导的非限制性 定语从句) (句型2)Iwould appreciate it if you couldaccept myinvitation.(运用了形式宾语用法 第二节·读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文 School volunteers don't get paid. but sometimes we receive special gifts. One morning, just before Christmas vacation. I was selling tickets to our grade school's last evening performance of The Nutcracker. One of my customers that day was a parent."I think it's awful that I have to pay to see my own child perform,"she announced. yanking (猛址) a wallet from her purse. “The school asks for a voluntary donation to help pay for scenery and costumes," I explained, "but no one has to pay. You're welcome to all the tickets you need." “Oh. I'll pay,"she said unhappily."Two adults and a child."She plunked down(猛地放下) a ten-dollar bill. I gave her the change and her tickets. She stepped aside. holding her purse. That's when the boy waiting behind her emptied a pocketful of change onto the table. “How many tickets?" I asked “I don't need tickets,"he said."I'm paying."He pushed the coins across the table."But you'll need tickets to see the show tonight." He shook his head."I've already seen the show." Week3 邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 I pushed the pile of nickels, dimes, and quarters back."You don't have to pay to see the show with vour class." I tole him.“That's free." "No,"the boy insisted."I saw it last night. My brother and I arrived late. We couldn't find anyone to buy tickets from. so we just walked in." Lots of people in that crowd had probably " just walked in". The few volunteers present couldn't check everyone for a ticket. Anyway. it's OK. As I'd told the parent ahead of this boy. the donation was voluntary. He pushed his money back to me."I'm paying now, for last night,"he said. I knew this boy and his brother must have squeezed into the back of that crowd. And being late to the hall, they couldn't possibly have seen the whole show. I hated to take his money. A pile of coins in a kid's hand is usually carefully saved allowance money 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 So I decided to make some efforts to persuade him to give up paying Our conversation somewhat affected the woman who had complained about buying tickets. [语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了身为校园志愿者的作者在圣诞前夕的义演募捐活动中先后遇到的两个 人:一位学生家长不太情愿付钱买票,但还是出钱了;一个小男孩则带着一堆零钱表示已经看过演出,执意要补票。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“所以我决定付出一些努力来劝他放弃付钱。”可知,第一段可描写作者试图 劝小男孩放弃付钱,但在他的执意要求下接受了他的善意。②由续写第二段首句内容”我们的对话有些影响到之前 那位抱怨买票的女士。”可知,第二段可描写那位家长转变了态度,理解了募捐活动的好意并做出了实际行动。 [范文] So I decided to make some efforts to persuade him to give up paying."lf the ticket table was closed when uou qot there. uou couldn't pau." I reasoned."Don't worru about it." I assured him. Thinking the matter was settled. started to push the coins bock. However, stubborn. he put his hand on mine."I must pau for the show." For g moment our hands bridqed the moneu. Realizing I was whable to persuade the bou. I spoke. "OK, it's up to uou. Two tickets cost two dollars." The pile of coins added up to the correct amount." Thank uou." I said. The bou smiled. turned awou and was gone Our conversation somewhat affected the woman who had complained about buying tickets."Excuse me."I looked up. surprised to see the woman who had bought her own tickets moments earlier. She was still there, purse open, change and tickets in hand." The scenery is beautiful. and those costumes couldn't have been cheap You'd better keep the chanqe." She said quietlu. handing me o few dollar bills, and left. Little did that bou know thgt he had given us our first gift of the Christmas season 高分亮点 高分词汇:①assurev.使确信;向...保证 ②addupto总计,合计;达到 ③purse n.钱包,手袋 ④sceneryn.风 景,景色costume n.服装,装束 高分句型:(句型1)Thinking the matter was settled, I started to push the coins back.(运用了现在分词作状语) (句型2)I looked up, surprised to see the woman who had bought her own tickets moments earlier.(运用了关系代词 who引导的定语从句) (句型3)Little did that boy know that he had given us our first gift of the Christmas season.(运用了 little 在句首引寻的 部分倒装)