Week 14 通知&人与自然和谐类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高考英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 14 通知&人与自然和谐类读后续写 Monday 如何写好通知 ·明确通知形式：口头通知/ 通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众 书面通知 某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体，通常分为口头通知和书面通 知 ·通知内容：时间、地点 知两种。 人物、事由、注意事项等 ·结束语 典题示例 假定你叫李华，是班上的英语科代表。你班外教Pter请你代他在班上发一个关于课后作业的英语口头通知。内 容包括：1.写一篇关于中国茶文化的短文：2.与同桌交换并修改错误：3.上交作业的时间。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Boys and girls. May I have your attention,please? 思路点拨 O Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 一般现在时 主题 通知 人称 以第一人称为主，适当使用第二人称 结构 第一段：引出话题 第二段：具体内容 第三段：总结 OStep Two 词汇运用 L.安排，筹备：整理arrange 5.和…交换exchange with 2.代替instead of 6.改正correct 3.细节detail 7.应该做某事be supposed to do sth. 4.茶文化tea culture 8.最后期限，截止日期deadline OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我们的外教Peter今天让我替他安排写作练习 Our foreign teacher Peter asked me to arrange the writing exercise instead of him today. (2)这儿是一些细节。 Here are some details. (3)我们必须做某些事情。 We have to do something. (4)首先，我们的写作主题是关于中国茶文化。 First of all,the topic for our writing is about Chinese tea culture. (5)我们刚刚学了课文。 We have just learned the text. (6)其次，在我们完成它后，我们需要把它与我们的同桌交换，并纠正彼此的错误。 Secondly,after we finished it,we need to exchange it with our partner.and correct each other's mistakes. (7)这些错误是在文章中犯的 The mistakes are made in the essays. 6 Week14通知&人与自然和谐类读后续写 (8)顺便说一下，我们应该写一篇大约100词的文章 By the way.we are supposed to write the essay of about 100 words. (9)最后，上交它的最后期限是本周五上午。 Lastly,the deadline for handing it in is this Friday morning. (10)就这些。谢谢你的聆听。 That's all.Thanks for your listening. 2.句式升级 (1)用what引导的宾语从句合并上题中的句子(2)和句子(3)。 Here are some details about what we have to do. (2)用because引导的原因状语从句合并上题中的句子(4)和句子(5)。 First of all,the topic for our writing is about Chinese tea culture because we have just learned the text. (3)用after引导的时间状语从句的省略形式升级上题中的句子(6)。 Secondly,after finishing it.we need to exchange it with our partner.and correct each other's mistakes. (4)用whi©h引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。 Secondly,after finishing it,we need to exchange it with our partner,and correct each other's mistakes which are made in the essays. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Boys and girls. May I have your attention,please?Our foreign teacher Peter asked me to arrange the writing exercise instead of him today. Here are some details about what we have to do.First of all,the topic for our writing is about Chinese tea culture because we hove just learned the text.Secondly,after finishing it,we need to exchange it with our partner,and correct each other's mistakes which are made in the essays.By the way,we are supposed to write the essay of about 100 words.Lostly,the deadline for handing it in is this Friday morning. That's all.Thanks for your listening. Tuesday 满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 recruit招聘，招收 arouse引起，激起 passion激情，热情 competition竞争；比赛 focus on专注于 look forward to期待 participation参加，参与 enrich使充实，使丰富 stimulate促进，激发 enthusiasm热情，热忱 schedule安排，预定 participate in参加 ahead of time提前 opportunity时机，机会 widen拓展：扩展 purpose目的，意图 enhance增强，提高，改善 affection喜爱，关爱 punctual山y准时地，如期地 visual feast视觉盛宴 arrive at到达 theme(谈话、书籍、电影等的)题目，主题 :2.To arouse students'passion for nature and art,our School 「话题句式 English Newspaper will hold a painting creation competition on 1.In order to ensure the smooth running of the event,it is the theme of“The Beauty of Nature”,为了激发学生们对自然 necessary to recruit volunteers to provide quality services. 和艺术的热情，我们的学校英语报将举办一场以“自然之美” 为了保证活动的顺利进行，有必要招募志愿者提供优 为主题的绘画创作比赛。 质的服务。 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 3.With the aim of enriching campus life and stimulating 6.The activity is scheduled to be held from 3:00 p.m.to students'enthusiasm for Chinese literature,the Classical 4:30p.m.on our playground..活动定于下午3点至4 Chinese Poetry Reciting Contest will be held in our 点30分在我们的操场举行。 school..为了丰富校园生活，激发学生对中国文学的热 7.All the students who have affection for soccer games are welcome to watch it..欢迎所有喜爱足球比赛的学生前 情，将在我们学校举办中国古典诗词朗诵比赛。 来观看。 4.Its purpose is to enrich our campus life,enhance 8.To participate in it,you are supposed to select your poem communication between schools and improve our soccer and practice reciting it ahead of time.为了参加它，你应该 sks,它的目的是丰富我们的校园生活，加强学校之间 提前选择你的诗歌并练习背诵。 的交流，提高我们的足球技巧。 9.In addition,whoever is interested can go to sign up at the 5.As scheduled,the contest will take place in the lecture Students'Union office.此外，任何有兴趣的人都可以去 学生会办公室报名。 hall at 8 a.m.next Friday,which will last around 3 10.Be sure to arrive at the playground punctually to watch hours.按照计划，比赛将在下周五上午8点在大讲堂进 the match and offer your cheers to both teams..一定要准 行，比赛将持续3个小时左右。 时到达运动场观看比赛，并为两支球队加油。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 NOTICE The 2024 Student Volleyball Match is scheduled to be held in our school.In 模板中黑体字部分是写 order to ensure the smooth running of the event.it is necessary to recruit 通知时可以通用的部分，其他 volunteers to provide quality services. 部分可以根据写作要求灵活 The volunteers are required not only to be healthy and organized,but to be able 处理。 to respond to the emergencies in flexible approaches.In addition.the ones with 主体部分往往是一般现 genuine passion for sports or related experience are preferred.Once accepted,the 在时，有时也可以用一般将 volunteers will receive appropriate and efficient training in the gymnasium next 来时。 weekend. 文章人称以第三人称 Looking forward to your application. 为主。 The Students'Union Wednesday 应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆通知 假定你是学生会主席李华，你校英语报将举行主题为“The Beauty of Nature'”的绘画创作比赛。请你以学生会的 名义在你校“英语天地”写一则通知，内容包括：1.举办比赛目的：2.参赛作品要求：3.欢迎参赛。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 NOTICE [范文] NOTICE To arouse students'passion for nature and art,our School English Newspaper will hold a painting creation competition on the theme of "The Beauty of Nature". The entries of this competition are required to be pictures,and you can choose forms like traditional Chinese painting,pencil drawing,cartoon and so on.Whatever form you take,do remember that your work should focus on the beauty of nature.If you're interested and want to show your talent and love for nature, please send your entry at schoolnewspaper 126.com before 17 March. Looking forward to your active participation. The Students'Union Week14通知&人与自然和谐类读后续写 高分亮点 高分词汇：①arouse v.引起，激起②passion n.激情，热情③competition n.竞争：比赛④theme n.(谈话，书籍 电影等的)题目，主题⑤focus on专注于⑥look forward to期待⑦participation n.参加，参与 高分句型：（句型I)Whatever form you take,do remember that your work should focus on the beauty of nature..(运用了 whatever引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句) (2)If you're interested and want to show your talent and love for nature,please send your entry at schoolnewspaper 126.com before17 March.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 跟踪训练2◆通知 假定你是学生会主席李华，你校即将举办中国古诗词朗诵大赛(Classical Chinese Poetry Reciting Contes)。为鼓 励你校交换生参加比赛，请你代表学生会写一则通知发布到校英文网站，内容包括：1.比赛的目的：2.比赛的具体事 项（时间、地点、准备工作和报名方式）：3.欢迎参加。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 NOTICE [范文] NOTICE With the aim of enriching campus life and stimulating students'enthusiasm for Chinese literature,the Classical Chinese Poetry Reciting Contest will be held in our school. As scheduled,the contest will take place in the lecture hall at 8 a.m.next Friday,which will last around 3 hours.To participate in it,you are supposed to select your poem and practice reciting it ahead of time.In addition.whoever is interested can go to sign up at the Students'Union office. This is definitely a good opportunity to enrich your knowledge as well as widen your vision.Your participation will be welcome. The Students'Union 高分亮点 高分词汇：①enrich.使充实，使丰富2 stimulatev.促进，激发③enthusiasm n.热情，热忧④schedule v.安排， 预定⑤participate in参加⑥ahead of time提前⑦opportunityn.时机，机会⑧widen v.拓展；扩展 高分句型：（句型1）As scheduled,the contest will take place in the lecture hall at8a.m.next Friday,which will last around3 hours.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) (句型2)In addition,whoever is interested can go to sign up at the Students''Union office.(运用了whoever引导的主 语从句)》 Thursday 读后续写写作技巧14 找准线索定好思路 在续写中找到线索和定思路是写作过程中的重要环节，它可以帮助我们更好地组织思维，展开论述。以下 些方法可以帮助你找到线索和定恩路： 】.复盘前文：在续写之前，仔细回顾前文的内容，包括主题、人物、情节等。这能帮助你重新熟悉故事背景和 故事情节，使续写与前文紧密衔接。 2.选择合适的观点：根据前文的发展，选择一个合适的角度或观点。关注前文中的问题、冲突或引人入胜的 细节，可以从中找到续写的切入点。 3.充分考虑人物发展：人物是故事的灵魂，他们的成长和转变可以成为续写的线索之一。思考前文人物的 性格、动机和目标，设想他们在接下来的情节中会面临什么样的挑战或变化。 4,创造新的情节：根据前文发展，自己设想并创造新的情节。可以通过引入新的人物、展开前文中的隐含冲 突、发展未完蓉的情节等方式，为续写提供新的线索和思路。 5.结合主题思考：考虑整篇作品的主题和目的，思考如何在续写中延续主题，使整个故事更加有逻辑性和完 整性。 49 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Danny's grandfather loved to keep pigeons,and Goldie was one of them.Goldie had goldeneyes.which was very rare in pigeons.Grandfather said he had never had a pigeon like her. Goldie was a champion racing pigeon and had won loads of cups.But once,around the time Goldie was released two hundred miles away for a race.Danny's grandfather was admitted to the hospital with a heart attack.The responsibility of waiting for Goldie and taking care of the other pigeons then fell on Danny. However.Goldie did not fly back on time as usual.In order not to upset his grandfather.while visiting him that night with his parents,Danny lied that Goldie had already returned and won the first place."I knew it",said Danny's grandfather,settling back on his pillows,"I always knew she was a winner.She's one in a million."Grandfather believed the lie. Sometimes Grandfather's racing pigeons got lost due to bad weather or got attacked by falcons()and never came back home,but those had never happened to Goldie.She always came home.right on time."Goldie must have been eaten by those falcons nesting in the quarry (on her way back home,"Danny thought to himself bitterly and his chest was burning.Danny swore to himself to take revenge."They are a threat,those falcons!I must get rid of them and pull down their nest." It only took Danny five minutes to reach the quarry.Danny looked around the quarry walls and found their nest on a steepest side.which was a long way up.He climbed fast-there were old tree roots to grab hold of.His hands were bleeding.But he didn't feel the pain.He was hanging on the rock wall with his finger-tips like a starfish.His arms were so weak and trembling,but he was finally there. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Just as he reached out his hand to destroy the falcons'nest,he suddenly saw the baby-falcons in it. Halfway down.he saw Goldie in a hole on the rock,wing-broken but still alive. 亮点再练 ①release.释放，放走②responsibility m.责任，负责③winner_m,获胜的人（或队、动 词汇积累 物等)，优胜者④bitterly ad.愤怒地，痛苦地⑤get rid of摆脱，除去 In order not to upset his grandfather,while visiting him that night with his parents.Danny lied that Goldie had already returned and won the first place. 长难句 分析：本句是复合句。主句为Danny lied:that Goldie had already returned and won the first place 分析 为宾语从句；In order not to upset his grandfather为不定式作目的状语；while visiting him that night with his parents为时间洗语从句的省略形式。 翻译：为了不让他的爷爷生气，那天晚上当他和他的父母一起去看望他的时候，Danny撒谎说Goldie 已经回来了，而且赢得了第一名。 1.As parents we have a responsibility (responsible)to give our children a sense of belonging 跟踪练习 2.Making a completely clean break with the past,the couple got rid of all their old furniture. 3._In order not to be tired,I have been actively taking part in after-school activities.为了不累，我 直在积极地参加课外活动。 ☆语篇解读 本文为一篇记叙文，属于人与自然主题语境下的自然生态主题群。本文讲述了Day的爷爷养了很多鸽子，其 中Goldie是最好的一只。一天爷爷生病住院了，照顾鸽子的责任落在了Danny身上，但是Danny发现Goldie没有回 来，以为它被猎膨杀死了，所以Danny决定摧毁猎鹰的巢穴帮Goldie报仇，但是当他看到巢中的小猎度时，他放弃了 复仇，却发现了受伤的Goldie,最后救下了Goldie。 750 Week14通知&人与自然和谐类读后续写 写作步骤 。第一步读文本 (1)Elements: who:Danny,Danny's grandfather.pigeon Goldie and the baby-falcons where:the quarry what:Goldie was a champion racing pigeon and had won loads of cups.However.Goldie did not fly back on time as usual. why:They are a threat,those falcons!I must get rid of them and pull down their nest. (2)Details: Goldie had goldeneyes,which was very rare in pigeons. Goldie有着金黄色的眼睛，这在鸽子中非常罕见。 本句为动物的外貌描写，句中运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句表达Goldic的与众不同，也为它以后没有按 时回来增加了悬念。 In order not to upset his grandfather.while visiting him that night with his parents,Danny lied that Goldie had already returned and won the first place. 为了不让他的爷爷生气，那天晚上当他和他的父母去看望他时，Dany撤谎说Goldie已经回来，而且赢得了第 一名。 本句为人物描写，句中运用了不定式短语作目的状语，时间状语从句的省略形式、，tht引导的宾语从句来表达出 主人公Danny是一个善解人意的善良孩子。 "Goldie must have been eaten by those falcons nesting in the quarry on her way back home,Danny thought to himself bitterly and his chest was burning. “Goldie一定是在回家的路上被那些在采石场筑巢的猎鹰吃掉了。”Danny痛苦地想，他的胸膛在燃烧 本句为心理描写，本句中运用了情态动词的完成时、现在分词作后置定语和ad连接的并列句等形象地描写了 Danny当时的悲愤欲绝、怒发冲冠的心情。 Danny looked around the quarry walls and found their nest on a steepest side,which was a long way up. Dnny环顾采石场的墙壁，发现他们的巢在最陡峭的一侧，还有一段很长的路。 本句为环境描写，本句运用了双谓语动词、wih引导的非限制性定语从句来表达巢所在地方的危险性。 He was hanging on the rock wall with his finger-tips like a starfish. 他像海星一样悬挂在岩墙上。 本句为动作描写，本句中运用了with的复合结构来表达Danny动作的敏捷。 Q第二步找线索 (I)根据第三段中的“In order not to upset his grandfather,while visiting him that night with his parents,Danny lied that Goldie had already returned and won the first place."和第五段中的“His hands were bleeding.But he didn't feel the pain.”可知，Danny是一个非常善解人意的孩子，同时由于Goldie遭遇不幸，又急于为其复仇，在续写的第一段中可星 现出这些。 (2)根据第二段中的“Goldie was a champion racing pigeon and had won loads of cups.”和第四段中的“Sometimes Grandfather's racing pigeons got lost due to bad weather or got attacked by falcons()and never came back home,but those had never happened to Goldie."可知，Goldie经验丰富，生存能力极强，遇险的概率极低，因此生存的机会较大，在 续写的第二段中可呈现出这些，最后表现出和谐的自然，无论是Goldi©还是那些猎鹰都不要受到伤害，以凸显人与自 然的和谐主题 Q第三步定思路 (I)由第一段续写首句"Just as he reached out his hand to destroy the falcons'nest,he suddenly saw the baby-falcons ini北.”可知，第一段可描写Dany看到小猎密而触动了他内心的善良从而放弃复仇，保护了那些小猎鹰们。开头的第 一句可以尝试用上面的提示写好开头。根据本段的首句我们可以用状语从句和形容词短语来写开头句子：“H suddenly remembered Goldie when she was little,shaggy and helpless." (2)由第二段首句“Halfway down,he saw Goldie in a hole on the rock,wing-broken but still alive.."可知，第二段可 描写Dany如何救下Goldie,并庆幸自己没有冲动复仇，同时结合前面对爷爷的善意谎言，可知爷爷也健康出院，见到 了心爱的Goldie。 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 Just as he reached out his hand to destroy the falcons'nest,he suddenly saw the baby-falcons in it.He suddenly remembered Goldie when she was little,shaggy and helpless.The feeling of anger vanished like water running down a drain,and the feeling of revenge was thrown out of the window Danny realizes that if he destrous the falcons'nest the young falcons will fall to the ground Only death awaits them But Danny,who was not a bad boy by nature.did not do so.Without harming the young. helpless falcon he continued to climb over the top of the hill Halfway down,he saw Goldie in a hole on the rock,wing-broken but still alive.The moment he caught sight of the scene,Danny's face lit up with delight.Without hesitation,Danny carefully lifted Goldie out and rushed him to the hospital as quickly as he could Luckily.with Danny's care.Goldie's injury was cured and Grandpa returned home Danny was fortunate not to be carried away by anger and did something he regretted.The adventure would be deeplu rooted in his mind. Friday 读后续写话题跟踪训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Maria and Peter lived in a coastal city.The greatest pleasure in summer for them was to swim at their local beach after school.But one day,they started to lose their enthusiasm for swimming in the waters.More often than not,they would find plastic bags thrown on the beach.Worse still,as they swam in the water,some plastic bags would float around them and even stick to their legs when they walked to the shore. They were upset and decided something needed to be done to stop the beautiful sea becoming consumed by waste.One weekend,Maria and Peter brought a big bag to the beach and determined to clean it up.Sweat streamed down from their forehead while they bent down and picked up the plastic bags.To their disappointment,after a day's hard work,there were still many plastic bags lying on the beach or floating in the water.Going home with aching legs and arms,Maria and Peter were almost defeated by a strong sense of failure. That night over dinner with their parents,the pair ate silently.Noticing their low spirits,Mother asked gently,"You two looked so down.What happened?"Exchanging glances with Peter.Maria replied in a low voice,"It's those annoying plastic bags.We tried to clean up,but it was just impossible."Understanding the pair's disappointment.their father patted them on the back and comforted,"Well,it's really hard for just two of you to fix such a big problem.""Just two of us." complained Maria and Peter,looking at each other.Suddenly,an idea flashed through their minds,their eyes shining with excitement."Yes,that's the point!We should make more people aware of the problem and encourage them to take action!" the pair said in chorus. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Quickly finishing their dinner,the pair went upstairs and started planning. Excited and nervous,they posted the video and article on WeChat. 152 Week14通知&人与自然和谐类读后续写 亮点再练 ①coastal adj.沿海的②enthusiasm_n,热情，热忱③determine_,查明；测定 词汇积累 ④disappointment.失望；扫兴⑤annoying adj.令人生气的 Worse still.as they swam in the water,some plastic bags would float around them and even stick to their legs when they walked to the shore. 长难句 分析：本句是复合_句。主句为some plastic bags would float around them and even stick to their 分析 legs;as they swam in the water为时间状语从句：when they walked to the shore为时间状语 从句。 翻译：更糟糕的是，当他们在水里游泳时，一些塑料袋会漂浮在他们周围，甚至在他们走到岸边时粘 在他们的腿上。 1.Through this experience,I have a deeper understanding of how hard it is to have the present peaceful days and I am determined (determine)to cherish every day from now on. 跟踪练习 2.The film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning,which was rather annoying(annoy）. 3.Finally.you should trust those people who help you when you are in trouble,because a friend in need is a friend indeed,最后，你应该相信那些在你困难时帮助你的人，因为患难见真情。 [语篇解读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了住在沿海城市的Maria和Peter发现望料袋被扔在海滩上，对此很苦恼， 决定要做点什么来阻止美丽的大海被级掉。于是他们决定通过在网上制作视频、写文章来呼吁大家一起爱护环境。 视频和文章得到了人们积极响应。在大家的共同和持续努力下，海岸恢复了美丽。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“两人很快吃完晚饭，上楼开始计划。”可知，第一段可描写Maria和Peer商量对 策，决定在网上制作视颜、写文章来呼吁大家一起爱护环境。②由第二段首句内容“他们既兴奋又紧张，在微信上发 布了这段视频和文章。”可知，第二段可描写视频和文章在网上发布后得到的反应以及大家的行动和结果 [范文] Quickly finishing their dinner,the pair went upstairs and started planning.Maria and Peter decided to take advantage of the Internet."Maybe we can write an article to arouse people's owareness."Maria proposed. "Good idea!We can also make a video!"Peter added.The next few hours witnessed their heated discussion and growing confidence in a clean and beautiful coast.The next day,they went to the beach and filmed a short video showing plastic bags lying on the beach and floating in the sea.Peter,who was good at writing,wrote an article talking about the present situation of the beach and asking people to take part in the clean-up. Excited and nervous.they posted the video and article on WeChat.To their amozement,their post went wildly online immediately.Countless comments flooded in saying how heartbroken they were when looking at the polluted beach and ocean.What amazed Maria and Peter more was that numerous people in their community, encouraged by their efforts,offered to join in their clean-up.More and more people come to the beach to collect plastic bags,and they also appealed to others to avoid throwing or using plastic bags.A year later,with their joint and continuous effort,the coast regained its beauty and Maria and Peter regained their long-awaited pleasure. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①take advantage of利用②propose,.提议；打算③witness.日击，目睹④amazement n.惊奇，诧异 ⑤countless ad.无数的，多得数不清的⑥heartbroken a.悲伤的 高分句型：（句型I)Peter,.who was good at writing,wrote an article talking about the present situation of the beach and asking people to take part in the clean-up.(运用了who引导的非限定性定语从句) 2)Countless comments flooded in saying how heartbroken they were when looking at the polluted beach and ocean.(由连接词how引导的宾语从句作saying的宾语) (3)What amazed Maria and Peter more was that numerous people in their community,encouraged by their efforts. offered to join in their clean-up.(运用了what引导的主语从句和hat引导的表语从句) 03 言航英语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 写作基本功讲练结合 环境描写讲练结合 在续写中，环境描写往往可以衬托出人物心情和事三、日月星辰景色描写 件性质。如果是个人经历的话，环境变化一般都是用来L.The moon was shining brightly on the snow,and in the 衬托心情变化。比如，风和日丽、和风细雨能够衬托出人 cold still air not a leaf moved on the trees. 物快乐幸福的心情或美好的事物：漆黑的夜晚，那主角一 月亮在雪地上闪闪发光，在寒冷的空气中，树上没有叶 定是感到害怕。如果是写一个事件的话，环境变化也预 子在动。 示或者暗示事态变化。比如，阴转晴，那么事态就是往 2.Tom lay in the warm sunshine,which cast a warm 个好的方向发展，如符合主角利益或者符合道义等。总 golden glow on his face. 的来说，“环境多次变化”就是烘托气氛，为文章做铺垫 汤姆躺在温暖的阳光中，阳光在他的脸上投射出温暖 表示情节走向，还有对主角心理的衬托。 的金色光芒。 一、天气描写 3.Sparkling stars dotted in the sky blinked at us. 1.The sky was cloudless and a full moon hung in the sky 星星点缀在空中，对着我们臣眼睛。 天上没有一丝云彩，一轮满月挂在天空。 4.The sky was a billion pure eyes of light.and the grass 2.The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. green underfoot,it was as if night and day had become 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。 one beautiful moment.Dawn had come. 3.The moon was a sharply defined crescent and the sky 天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草， was perfectly clear. 仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经 天空异常明净，一轮弯月挂在天上，轮廓十分清晰。 来临。 4.The frost on the glass,frozen by the cold,changed 5.The lingering sunlight was swept by the rapidly falling colors in the moonlight,and flickered faintly night,resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over 玻璃上因寒冷而凝结起的冰霜，在月光下变幻着色彩， the sky. 若隐若现地闪烁着。 逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除， 5.A refreshing breeze brushed the mountain top,miles of 就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。 trees spread out below us and birds chirped between branches. 跟踪练习 清爽的微风拂过山顶，几英里长的树木在我们脚下伸 1,完成句子 展开来，鸟儿在树枝间啁啾。 1.山云似乎向他们滚滚而来，又黑又急，像一条河。 二、季节描写 The mountain-cloud seemed to roll towards them,dark 1.The spring rains quickened the earth. and rapid,like a river. 春雨让大地复苏 2.由于天气槽糕，尽管她未生病，但她感到恶心。 2.The lotus flowers are now in full bloom.The rose gives Because of the ill weather,she felt sick though she out a sweet smell. wasn't ill. 荷花现在盛开了。玫瑰散发出甜美的气味。 3.太阳火辣辣地烤着大地，不远处传米知了的声音。 3.The icy water pierced my skin with needle-like chill. The sun was burning,and there was a sound of the 冰冷的水像针一样刺穿我的皮肤。 cicadas. 4.It was autumn,and the land was dotted with the gold and 4.天气冷极了，地面都冻硬了。 red and yellow of the changing leaves. It was bitterly cold and the ground was frozen hard. 秋天到了，金色、红色和黄色的落叶点缀着大地 5.那时夜空中的星星像钻石一样闪闪发光。 5.Summer sees the mountains turn bright green with The stars in the night sky sparkled like diamonds at growing rice.During autumn,these same mountains are that time. nash gold,and in winter they are covered in sheets of6.在安详而金灿灿的夕阳的余晖中，天地间非常壮美， white frost. 难以言表。 夏天，水稻生长群山绿意盎然。秋天漫山铺金，冬天银 In the light of calm and golden sunset,it becomes 装素裹。 lovely beyond expression Week14通知&人与自然和谐类读后续写 Ⅱ.情景描写 Ⅲ，句式升级 1.这是美丽的春季，雪冰融化，植物生长，森林动物从冬1.在早晨的阳光里，薄雾涣然消散了。 天的睡眠中醒来。 The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun. It was beautiful spring weather.The snow and ice were .With the morning sun seeing,the mist melted melting;the plants were growing,and the forest rapidly.(with的复合结构) animals were waking from their winter sleep. 2.日落时分，一道红霞笼罩在西山上。 At sunset,a red glow hung over the western mountains. 2.对这儿潮湿阴沉的气候来说，今天的天气已够好了。 As the sun went down gently,there was a bar of It is lovely weather today for a wet and cloudy red over the western hills.(as引导时间状语从句) climate here. 3.随着时间的流逝，春草迅速生长。 3.这片荒野春天和夏天都开满了花，可爱极了，连空气都 The new spring grass shot up as time itself had sped up. 是甜的。那儿的空气新鲜极了，鸟也叫得那么动听。 With time itself speeding up,the new spring grass The moor is lovely in spring and summer when there are shot up.(with的复合结构) flowers.It always smells so sweet.The air's so fresh, 4.落叶在中秋凉爽的空气中翩翩起舞，告别甜蜜的夏天， and the birds sing so beautifully. 迎接秋天的到来。 4.一股势不可挡的热浪在大气中涌动，充满了令人不安 Fallen leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air so that they bade farewell to sweet summer and welcomed the 的不适 autumn in. An overwhelming torrent of heat flew through the -.Fallen leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air. atmosphere,filled with uneasy discomfort bidding farewell to sweet summer and welcoming the 5.月亮斜挂在天空，笑盈盈的，星星挤满了银河，眨巴着 autumn in.(现在分词作状语) 银睛。 5.晴空万里，火热的太阳晒得我后背发烫。 The moon hung in the sky,smiling,full of stars in the Blue sky stood tall and far,and the sun was searing my Milky Way,blinking. back. 6.太阳升起，像一个金色的天篷，在蓝色的天空中闪闪发 -Blue sky stood tall and far so that the sun was searing 光，让星星们休息。随若黑暗的消退，每一种颜色都从 my back.(s0that引导结果状语从句) 木炭色变得充满活力。 6.夕阳反射在窗户上，花园看起来很美。 As the setting sun reflected in the windows,the garden The sun rises as a canopy of gold,bright amid the blue, looked so beautiful. bidding the stars to take their nightly rest.As -The garden looked so beautiful with the setting sun darkness surrenders,every color changes from tinges of reflected in the windows·(with的复合结构) charcoal to the vibrancy. Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 周四下午，你校足球队将与光明中学举行一场足球友谊赛，请你为你校足球社团写一则通知，内容包括：1，比赛 的时间、地点：2.欢迎同学观赛助威：3.观赛注意事项。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 NOTICE Football Club [范文] NOTICE There will be a friendly soccer match between our school and Guangming High School in the coming Thursday,whose purpose is to enrich our campus life,enhance communication between schools and improve our soccer skills.The activity is scheduled to be held from 3:00 p.m.to 4:30 p.m.on our playground.