浙江省嘉兴 2023-2024 学年高二下学期期末检测读后续写家的蜕变：从破败到温馨讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At the far end of town, next to a dark forest, sat an old white house. It looked like a Spook House from a story, which might sound interesting if it weren’t where I lived with my mom and little brother, Andy. The house wasn’t so horrible, but the outside might make you think twice about entering. Peeling(脱落的) paint revealed black images underneath that looked like bats.And weeds and long grass wrapped the house. When Mom rented it, I thought she was crazy, “Are you kidding, Mom? You really want to live in this place? It’s ugly." Mom looked hurt, and I regretted my words. I knew she was doing the best she could, Obviously, this house wouldn't be her first choice if money were no object. Mom cleaned every room and painted the inside, I must admit the fresh paint made a difference. “Can I paint the outside?” I asked her, “]’l ask Mr, Dudley to paint it,” Mom replied. Our landlord, Mr, Dudley agreed, but he always had thousands of excuses, Mom didn’t seem concerned, She was busy planning for my grandma to live with us, Having my grandma watch Andy while Mom worked would save on daycare expenses. One morning I told my grandma that I was joining a history study group at Justine's house after school and would be late getting home. “Just be home before dark," she said. That afternoon I walked with a girl and a boy to Justine’s house-a big, beautiful house with columns, The inside was furnished like a decorator magazine, with elegant furniture. “I love your house, Justine,” I said, trying not to scream, She smiled, “Thanks. You’ll have to come over again,” I was delighted and surprised that Justine wanted me to comeback, I would definitely take her up on her offer, I just couldn't invite her to my house. Noway did I want anyone to see my house. 注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 When the sun was near setting, Justine's mom said she would drive us home. ______________________________________________________________________________ The following week, we started the paint job. __________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意： 这篇文章讲述了一个家庭搬进了一个位于城镇边缘、靠近黑暗森林的老旧白色房子里。房子的外观破败不堪，让作者一开始感到尴尬和不情愿。尽管如此，母亲尽力打扫和粉刷新房子的内部，使得居住环境有所改善。作者对母亲选择这样的房子感到不解，但也逐渐理解了母亲的苦衷和努力。在参加完同学Justine家的聚会后，作者意识到自己家的不足，并决心改变。随后，全家一起动手粉刷房子，不仅改善了外观，也提升了家庭的凝聚力和幸福感。这个过程象征着家庭面对困难时的团结和积极向上的精神。 设置伏笔 1. 环境描述：在开头描述房子的环境，暗示其潜在的变化可能性。 2. 角色心理：描绘主角对房子的复杂情感，为后续的改变做铺垫。 3. 社会背景：提及邻居和社区对房子的看法，为后续的社区参与和反响埋下伏笔。 4. 家庭动态：展示家庭成员之间的关系和互动，为团结协作改造房子设置基础。 5. 内心转变：主角在Justine家的经历激发了对家的重新认识，为后续的行动埋下心理伏笔。 回应伏笔 1. 行动启动：家庭成员开始实施改造计划，回应了之前对家的复杂情感和决心。 2. 角色成长：主角在改造过程中的成长和变化，回应了之前的内心转变。 3. 社区互动：邻居的积极反响和参与，回应了之前社区对房子的看法。 4. 家庭团结：家庭成员在改造过程中的团结合作，回应了家庭动态的伏笔。 5. 结局展望：通过改造房子，家庭获得了新生，回应了主角对未来的展望和希望。 续写要点： 第一段：家庭团结与改造计划 1. 家庭成员的参与：描述家庭成员如何团结起来，共同面对改造房子的挑战。 2. 情感变化：阐述作者对家的感情从尴尬和不情愿转变为希望和决心。 3. 改造计划的启动：讲述家庭如何制定改造计划，包括选择颜色和分配任务。 4. 邻居的反响：提及邻居对改造工程的积极评价，以及这些评价如何增强了家庭的改造决心。 5. 改造的初步成果：概述改造初期所取得的成果，以及这些成果对家庭成员心态的积极影响。 第二段：改造完成与家庭的新生 1. 改造的最终效果：描述经过一周的努力后，房子外观的显著变化。 2. 家庭成员的成就感：表达家庭成员在看到改造成果后的自豪感和满足感。 3. 社区的认同：讨论改造后的房子如何获得社区更广泛的认可和赞赏。 4. 家庭关系的加强：分析通过共同的努力和挑战，家庭成员之间的关系如何得到加强。 5. 对未来的展望：展望家庭在克服了改造房子这一挑战后，对未来生活的美好期待和信心。 参考范文： When the sun was near setting, Justine's mom said she would drive us home. The contrast between Justine's house and mine was striking, and I felt a pang of embarrassment as we approached my old white house. But Justine's mother was kind and didn't comment on the exterior. As we pulled up, she said, "What a charming house with so much character!" I smiled weakly, appreciating her politeness but knowing the truth. As I got out of the car, I made a silent vow to do something about the house's appearance, not just for my sake but for my family's as well. The following week, we started the paint job. Mr. Dudley arrived with buckets of paint and brushes, and to my surprise, he seemed genuinely enthusiastic about the task. My brother Andy and I helped Mom and Mr. Dudley to prepare the house for a fresh coat of paint. We scraped off the peeling layers, revealing the true wood beneath, and then began to apply the new color. It was hard work, but there was a sense of unity and purpose that brought us closer together. By the end of the day, even though we were only halfway done, the house already looked better, and I felt a surge of pride. Our efforts were transforming not just the house, but also our outlook on life in it. 下水文1 When the sun was near setting, Justine's mom said she would drive us home. The sky was painted with hues of orange and pink as we made our way to my house. I couldn't help but feel a sense of dread, knowing how Justine's pristine home contrasted with the dilapidated state of my own. As we pulled up, I braced myself for her reaction, but instead of the expected shock or pity, she simply said, "It has a certain charm, doesn't it?" I nodded, my heart swelling with gratitude for her kindness. That evening, as I watched the last light fade behind the silhouette of our old house, I resolved to change its appearance, to make it a place I could be proud to call home. The following week, we started the paint job. The air was filled with the scent of fresh paint and the sound of laughter as we tackled the task at hand. My brother, Mom, and I worked alongside Mr. Dudley, who surprisingly had a knack for painting and a good sense of humor. We painted the trim in a crisp white and chose a soft blue for the main body of the house, a color that reminded me of a clear sky. Each brushstroke was a step towards a brighter future, a symbol of our determination to improve our living conditions. By the time we finished, the house looked transformed, and so did our spirits. The once intimidating Spook House was now a welcoming haven, a testament to the power of hard work and a united family. 下水文2 When the sun was near setting, Justine's mom said she would drive us home. The journey back was filled with a mix of emotions. I was eager to share the warmth of Justine's home with my family but also anxious about how my own home would be perceived. As we turned the corner and my house came into view, I felt a knot in my stomach. However, Justine's mom's reaction was unexpected. She remarked on the unique architecture and the potential the house had. Her words sparked a glimmer of hope within me, and I realized that with a little effort, our home could shine too. The following week, we started the paint job. It was a family affair, with each of us contributing to the transformation. My brother Andy, usually the quiet one, surprised us with his enthusiasm for the project. Mom, with her keen eye for color, chose a warm, inviting shade of yellow for the exterior. Mr. Dudley, true to his word, lent his expertise and made the process smoother. As we worked, the house began to come alive with new colors, and so did our spirits. Neighbors passing by stopped to comment on the change, and their positive remarks fueled our determination. By the end of the week, the once gloomy exterior was replaced with a cheery facade that reflected the warmth and resilience of our family. It was more than just a paint job; it was a new beginning for us all. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$