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U1 Writing
Suppose you are a tourist guide. Now you are on a sight-seeing bus and showing some foreigners around Shanghai/Beijing. You can introduce some places of interest,food, culture ,etc. (假设你是一名导游,你正在一辆观光巴士上并向外国友人介绍一些上海/北京的特色景点,食物,文化等)
Write an introduction of at least 60 words about the topic.(根据以上话题写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格)
U2 writing
Suppose you are an spca member,please write a proposal to protect animals(dogs)
(假设你是一名SPCA成员,写一封倡议书呼吁大家来保护动物/狗)
Write an introduction of at least 60 words about the topic.(根据以上话题写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格)
假设你是Andy,你打算在寒假期间去某个城市旅行,现在你正在写一封电子邮件给你的笔友Bob讲述旅行计划。
首先把空格1补充完整,正文不少于50个词,标点符号不占格。
From: Andy
To: Bob
Subject: A plan of my trip to __1__
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter. I am writing to you about ______________
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Yours,
Andy
Beijing/ Shanghai
last
my plan to Beijing
my plan of the trip to Beijing
寒假期间
旅行计划
笔友
Main problems
流水账
On the first day… on the second day…
First…Then….
How to improve?
分类!
visit some famous places…
eat local foods…
have special activities …
句式单一
I will go to sp. (to do…)
I can …
I will go to Tiananmen Square to see soldiers raising the national flag.
I can learn a lot about Chinese history.
How to improve?
I plan to …
I think doing sth. will be a best choice for me to …
I think visiting the Palace Museum will be a best choice for me to learn the history of china.
It will be adj. to do sth…
It will be wonder to see soldiers raising the national flag at Tiananmen Square.
Main problems
缺少互动 (尤其结尾处)
Level 1:
If you are a history lover, the Palace Museum is the place you must visit.
Level 2:
I am a history lover so the Palace Museum is the place I must visit.
Level 3:
You know, I am a history lover so I will visit the Palace Museum first.
Main problems
缺少互动 (尤其结尾处)
Main problems
It is nice to enjoy the night view at the Bund.
I remember you told me Peking Duck is one of the most famous local foods there.
It is nice to enjoy the night view at the Bund, isn’t it?
Peking Duck is one of the most famous local foods there.
Level 1:(“经典”结尾)
I think I will have a wonderful time there.
I am sure it will be a nice and meaningful trip.
Level 2:( “经典”结尾+突兀结尾)
I think I will enjoy myself there. I am eager to get your reply.
Level 3:
I am really looking forward to the trip. What are you going to do this winter holiday? Please write to me soon.
I will send some photos to you. Looking forward to your reply.
What do you think of my plan. Please write to me soon.
Main problems
Model
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter. I am writing to you about my trip to Beijing. During my winter holidays, My parents and I will go to Beijing by train because it is cheaper and more interesting to enjoy the view on the way. You know, I am a history lover so first I would like to visit all the historical places of interest, such as Palace Museum and the Summer Palace. I think it is a good way to learn the history of China. I remember you told me Peking Duck is one of the most famous local foods. We will surely have a try. Besides, it is also wonderful to see soldiers raising our flag at Tiananmen Square every morning, isn’t it? I am really looking forward to the trip. What do you think of my plan. I am eager to get your reply.
Yours,
Andy
As we all know, shopping is an action that many people enjoy it. In my opinion, shopping online is a good idea. First, it is convenient to buy things online that you just need to stay at home for a few days, then you can get the thing you need. Second, most things on Internet are on sale, and you can buy things with fewer money. Finally, you can choose the style of the things you need just like in shops, and almost everything you buy online are the same as you buy them in shops. I hope Internet will make our lives easier in many ways in the future.
In my opinion, shopping online is a good idea.
First, it is convenient to buy things online.
What we need to do is just to click the mouse and the goods we order will arrive in a few days.
Second, most goods on Internet are cheaper.
It means we can buy the same things as the ones in shops with less money.
That’s why I prefer to shop online.
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