内容正文:
Unit 5 Fun Clubs
Section B(2a-2b)
Writing
Aftre class, students can:
Language ability
Cultural awareness
Thinking ability
Learning strategy
*Write an application
for the club;
*Present abundant
reasons of joining
the club.
Have a better understanding of one’s own interest and talents;
Learn to use the mind map to brainstorm and summarize information;
*Improve the
thinking ability
of logic by
analyzing the
sample.
Lead-in
Part 1
假如你是李华,学校的读书社(the Book Club)正在招纳新成员。你很喜欢阅读,有很多想法,希望能加入这个社团。请写一封申请邮件给社团负责人Bill,申请加入社团。
What to write
Part 2
1.Brainstorm what to write and related expressions.
I’m writing to...
Learning that members are wanted for..., I’d love to...
I want to...
feel relaxed/calm/satisfied/ peaceful, be interested in, be curious about, fall in love with...
quiet reading corner
help each other, belong to the club, enjoy the friendship
can read fast/act out stories, be good at telling stories, be gifted in organizing activities
gain various kinds of knowledge,
achieve my dream of being...
2.Put the expressions into sentences.
(1)我写信来申请加入读书社。
___________________________________________________________________ (2)听说读书社在招募新社员,我想报名参加。
___________________________________________________________________ (3)我想加入读书社的原因如下。
___________________________________________________________________ (4)我喜欢阅读各种各样的书籍。
___________________________________________________________________
(5)我不仅阅读速度快,而且擅长讲故事。
___________________________________________________________________ (6)阅读的时候,我会感到很放松和平静,读书角能给我提供一个绝佳的地方。
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________ (7)加入读书社也是结交新朋友的一种好方式,这能让我有一种归属感。
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
(9)如果能加入读书社,我会组织丰富多彩的活动来让更多的同学爱上阅读。
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
(10)我梦想成为一名科学家,而阅读正是浇灌我梦想的甘露,让我的梦想开出绚
烂的花朵。
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Keys
(1)我写信来申请加入读书社。
I’m writing to apply to join the Book Club. (2)听说读书社在招募新社员,我想报名参加。
Learning that students are wanted for the Book Club, I’d love to sign up for it. (3)我想加入读书社的原因如下。
The reasons why I want to join the Book Club are as follows. (4)我喜欢阅读各种各样的书籍。
I really fall in love with reading all kinds of books.
(5)我不仅阅读速度快,而且擅长讲故事。
I can not only read fast, but I am also good at telling stories. (6)阅读的时候,我会感到很放松和平静,读书角能给我提供一个绝佳的地方。
When reading, I feel pretty relaxed and peaceful, and the reading corner is a perfect
place for me. (7)加入读书社也是结交新朋友的一种好方式,这能让我有一种归属感。
Being a member is a good way to make new friends, which gives me a sense of
belonging.
(9)如果能加入读书社,我会组织丰富多彩的活动来让更多的同学爱上阅读。
If I can join the Book Club, I will organize many colorful activities to make more
students fall in love with books.
(10)我梦想成为一名科学家,而阅读正是浇灌我梦想种子的甘露。
I dream of being a scientist, and reading is like the drops nourishing the seed of my
dream.
How to write
Part 2
General
Detailed
reasons
Summary
How can we organize the application?
Sample Analysis
Part 3
Analyze the sample from the aspects.
1
2
3
content
structure
language
Aim of writing
Reasons:
*feelings;
*abilities;
*benefits;
*dream job;
Comments & summary
Outline
Reasons from various angles
Summary
丰富短语表达
句式多样
过渡自然
比喻修辞
谚语增彩
Writing
Part 4
假如你是李华,学校的社团正在招纳新成员。请写一封申请邮件给其中一个社团,申请加入该社团。
Assessment checklist
1.Content --- all key points included; detailed
reasons and facts;
2.Language --- correct; rich expressions;
3.Structure --- clear levels; transition words;
Excellent
Good
To be improved
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