内容正文:
事件经历
事件经历介绍
(天气、时间、
地点、人物)
rain 下雨 rainy 多雨的 snow 下雪 snowy 下雪的 sunny 晴朗的 storm 暴风雨 cloudy多云的 warm 温暖的 cold 冷的 hot 热的 cool 凉爽的 holiday/vacation假期 weekend周末 visit the science/history/art/space/nature museum 参观科技/历史/美术/太空/自然博物馆 go to the farm去农场 go to the countryside去乡下 go to the mountains 去爬山 go to the summer camp 去夏令营 go to the beach去海滩 go to the amusement park 去游乐园 go to the zoo 去动物园 go to the water park 去水上公园 go to the old people's home去敬老院 a good place to do sth.一个做某事的好地方 a relaxing and peaceful place一个令人放松且宁静的地方 the best time to do sth.做某事的最好时机
事件经历描述
sing 唱歌 dance 跳舞 play basketball/football/volleyball/badminton打篮球/踢足球/打排球/打羽毛球play the guitar/piano/violin/drums 弹吉他/弹钢琴/拉小提琴/敲鼓 draw 画画 play chess 下国际象棋 tell stories讲故事 go boating 去划船 go camping 去野营 go fishing去钓鱼 climb a mountain爬山 go on a trip去旅行 be on a vacation 在度假 go skating 去滑冰 go for a walk 去散步 sit by the pool 坐在游泳池边 milk a cow 挤牛奶 ride a horse 骑马 feed chickens 喂鸡 grow apples 种苹果 pick strawberries 摘草莓 buy some gifts 买一些礼物 do one's homework 做作业 go to the cinema 去看电影 put up a tent 搭帐篷 stay at home 待在家里 buy something special 买一些特别的东西 meet someone interesting 见有趣的人 go to the Great Wall 去长城 visit the Palace Museum 参观故宫博物院 stay up late to do sth.熬夜做某事 cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来 give out food 分发食物 come up with a plan 想出计划 put up signs 张贴标语 hand out notices 分发通知 give away 捐赠 fall asleep 入睡 wake up 醒来
事件经历感受
popular受欢迎的 excellent极好的 relaxed 感到放松的 bored 无聊的 terrible糟糕的 hungry饿的 enjoyable 令人愉快的 moved 感动的 unusual 不同寻常的 embarrassed尴尬的 kind of tired 有点累 completely shocked 彻底震惊的 an exciting day令人兴奋的一天 be interested in 对……感兴趣 tired but happy疲惫但开心 interesting but scary 有趣但可怕 so much/a lot of fun 如此多/很多乐趣 have fun/have a great time/enjoy oneself玩得开心 leave soft and sweet memories留下温馨且甜蜜的回忆
[介绍事件]
·Today I went on a school trip. We__visited__the__science__museum__and__it__was__really__interesting.__[用具体活动和感受扩写]
·My sister finished high school two weeks ago. As a gift, our parents took us to India. Last__weekend__was__interesting__but__scary.__[用感受扩写]
·Last__year I went to the Hangzhou National Tea Museum. It's__a__relaxing__and__peaceful__place__near__a__lake. [用时间和具体信息扩写]
·We are training harder than usual because the other team beat us last year.[用because从句扩写]
·When I was thirteen years old, a girl gave me an important gift.It__was__a__smile.[用时间状语从句和具体内容扩写]
·Even__though__all of the photos are excellent, we are sorry to say that we cannot give prizes to everyone.[用让步状语从句扩写]
1.I camped in the mountains with some friends. [用具体活动和感受扩写]
__I__camped__in__the__mountains__with__some__friends.We__put__up__the__tent__and__cooked__outside__and__we__were__tired__but__happy.__
2.We took the train to the museum. [用感受扩写]
__We__took__the__train__to__the__museum.It__was__so__hot__on__the__slow__train.__
3.I went to the Mount Taishan. [用时间和具体信息扩写]
__Last__month__I__went__to__the__Mount__Taishan__with__my__friends.__The__trip__was__so__exciting,__especially__when__we__saw__the__sun__rising__from__the__east.__
[描述经历]
·I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents. [用and连接两项活动]
·There were lots of tourists, so first of all, we had to wait in line for an hour, and then we went to the top. [用so说明结果]
·I was so tired that I went to sleep early. [用so ... that ... 表示结果]
·She passed me and then turned back.She looked at me and, without a word, smiled.[运用一系列的动作描写]
·The girl with the bright smile has become my best friend now,__and we stick together like glue.[用now作对比, 用like作比喻]
·It seemed that they were speaking not to lots of listeners but to me in person.[用not ... but ...否定前者,肯定后者]
·As I grew older, my interest in radio grew.[用as从句描述过程]
4.My father and I watched a soccer game. My father and I went to the park to fly kites. [用and连接两项活动]
__My__father__and__I__watched__a__soccer__game__and__went__to__the__park__to__fly__kites.__
5.The food tastes great. [用so说明结果]
__The__food__tastes__great,__so__it's__popular__with__children.__
6.My legs were tired. I wanted to stop to have a rest. [用so ... that ... 升格]
__My__legs__were__so__tired__that__I__wanted__to__stop__to__have__a__rest.__
[表达感受]
·I'm having__a__great__time__visiting__my aunt in Canada. [用have a great time doing sth.表达感受]
·All in all, it's a__great__way__to__spend a Saturday afternoon. [用a+adj.+way+to do sth.表达感受]
·I am so__happy__to__see them again. [用“be+adj.+to do sth.”表达感受]
·What a lucky/an unlucky day! [用感叹句表达感受]
7.我和家人一起去爬山,玩得很开心。[用have a great time doing sth.表达感受]
__I'm__having__a__great__time__going__to__the__mountains__with__my__family.__
8.总之,这是度过暑假的一个有意义的方法。[用a+adj.+way+to do sth.表达感受]
__All__in__all,__it__is__a__meaningful__way__to__spend__the__summer__vacation.__
9.周末能和我最好的朋友一起去溜冰,我很兴奋。[用be+adj.+to do sth.表达感受]
__I'm__really/quite__excited__to__go__skating__with__my__best__friend__on__weekends.__
10.一天的差异是多么大呀![用感叹句表达感受]
__What__a__difference__a__day__makes!__
[介绍事件]
At 9:00 a.m.yesterday, bus No.26 was going along Zhonghua Road when the driver saw an old man ①__lying__on__the__side__of__the__road__(正躺在路边上). A woman next to him was ②__shouting__for__help__(呼救).
The bus driver, 24yearold Wang Ping, ③__stopped__the__bus__without__thinking__twice__(想都没想就停下了公交车). He got off and asked the woman what happened. She said that the man had a heart problem and should go to the hospital. Mr.Wang knew he ④__had__to__act__quickly__(必须赶快行动). He told the passengers that he must ⑤__take__the__man__to__the__hospital__(把这个男人送到医院). He expected most or all of the passengers to get off and wait for the next bus. But to his surprise, they all agreed to go with him. Some passengers helped Mr.Wang to ⑥__move__the__man__onto__the__bus__(把这个男人移到公交车上).
[描述经历]
I'm having a great time visiting my aunt in Canada. She's working here and ①__I'm__going__to__summer__school__(我将要去暑期学校). I'm studying English and I'm __learning a lot. I'm ②__also__visiting__some__of__my__old__friends__(也拜访了我的一些老朋友). I'm so happy to see them again. It's afternoon right now, and I'm ③__sitting__by__the__pool__and__drinking__orange__juice__(正坐在泳池边喝橙汁). It's warm and sunny, and it's very relaxing here.
[表达感受]
①__Thanks__to__(多亏了) Mr.Wang and the passengers, the man ②__was__saved__by__the__doctors__in__time__(被医生及时救活). “③__It's__sad__that__(令人伤心的是) many people don't want to help others because they don't want any trouble,” says one passenger. “But the driver didn't think about himself. He ④__only__thought__about__(只考虑) saving a life.”
[2023·宁波中考]为了弘扬传统文化,你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日(中国旅游日)开展了丰富多彩的文化活动(cultural activities)。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
注意:
1.短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数80—100;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
When
What I did
What I learned
Feelings
in the morning
visit Ningbo Museum
the long history of the city
...
at noon
make Ningbo Tangyuan
a symbol of family gettogethers
in the afternoon
...
...
My Experiences of Traditional Culture
On May 19, our school organized________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
思路与解析
第一步 审
体裁:记叙文
时态:以一般过去时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:传统文化活动(①活动和所学;②活动感受)
写作框架:总—分—总
第二步 列
高分范文
My Experiences of Traditional Culture
On May 19, our school organized many traditional cultural activities. I was happy that I learned a lot.
①In__the__morning,__I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates ③and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts. Everyone ②was__excited__to__learn about the long history of the city. ①At__noon,__we made Ningbo Tangyuan (Dumplings). We learned it was ②a__symbol__of family gettogethers. ①In__the__afternoon,__we read many ancient local stories ③and shared them in the storytelling competition, ③learning__about__the__traditional__values__of our city.
These activities have ③not__only helped me ②have__a__better__understanding__of our city, ③but__also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind.
高分点评
①文章结构清晰,针对题目要点一一阐述, 且能按时间顺序有序描述活动内容。
②多处使用高阶词汇,如be excited to do, a symbol of, have a better understanding of等,为文章增色不少。
③句式结构多样,描述活动内容时两次用到and连接两个并列结构,同时,还能够用到动词现在分词作伴随状语。结尾处用not only ... but also ... 结构来表达活动意义。
假如你是李华,请你根据以下邮件信息,用英语给你的好朋友李明回复一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going with you? I heard that you held a charity sale for Children's Home with your classmates. Can you share what you exactly did and what you learned from it with me? I also want to do something meaningful like you. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Ming
注意:1.包含以上邮件中所给提示信息,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.词数:80—100。
思路与解析
第一步 审和列
1.审写作元素
主题:__A__charity__sale__
体裁:__应用文(电子邮件)__
时态:__以一般过去时为主__
人称:__以第一人称为主__
2.列写作要点
第二步 扩和连
Opening:__I'm__willing__to__share__...__
Body: Last month, our class held ...
Two days before the ..., we ...
Then we .... It was so much fun.
When everything was ready, we started to ...
To our surprise, all the things were ...
Then we gave away the money we made to ...
Closing:__From__the__meaningful__activity,__I__not__only__developed__my__life__skills__but__also__learned__how__to__communicate__with__others__well.__
第三步 查和抄
Dear Li Ming,
I'm willing to share my experience of having a charity sale.
Last month, our class held__a__charity__sale. Two__days__before__the__sale,__we handed out notices to make our sale known by others. Then we made different things like food and toys. It was so much fun. When__everything__was__ready,__we started to sell the things. To our surprise, all the things were sold out in a short time. Then we gave away the money we made to Children's Home.
From the meaningful activity, I not only developed my life skills but also learned how to communicate with others well. Looking forward to your sharing something meaningful you have done.
__Yours,
__Li__Hua
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