话题09 居住环境-【精彩三年】2024年中考英语书面表达配套word（外研版）

　居住环境 居住环境 home town家乡　neighbourhood社区　like喜欢　dislike不喜欢　goods商品　environment环境　cheap便宜的 fresh新鲜的　noisy嘈杂的　garden花园　turn green变绿　woods树林　transportation交通　underground地铁　pool游泳池　parking lot停车场　chat聊天　harmonious和谐的　convenient方便的　welcome欢迎　live居住　far from远离　downtown在市中心　across from在……对面　find找到　rent租金　a friendly and helpful neighbour一个友好且乐于助人的邻居　the best town to go 最值得去的小镇　the oldest building最古老的建筑 the most crowded place最拥挤的地方 家乡旅游 rainy 下雨的　sunny 晴朗的　windy 有风的　frozen 结冰的　foggy 有雾的　temperature 温度　lie in the southeast of China 位于中国东南部　Broken Bridge 断桥　The West Lake 西湖　Leifeng Tower雷峰塔　Liangzhu Ruins Park良渚遗址公园　Hangzhou National Tea Museum 杭州国家茶博物馆　Dongpo Pork 东坡肉 West Lake Fish in Vinegar Gravy 西湖醋鱼　Longjing Tea 龙井茶 家乡变化 great changes 巨大的变化　used to do sth. 过去常常做某事　have done sth. 已经做过某事　a brand­new school一所崭新的学校　a narrow/wide road一条窄/宽的路　a dirty/clean river 一条脏/干净的河　with the development of随着……的发展　regard with great interest how their home towns have changed 带着极大的兴趣关注他们的家乡是如何变化的 [居住环境] ·The park is a crowded place on weekends because almost everyone goes there to see the street performers. [用because表示原因] ·Even__though it is old, it is full of interesting places to go and things to do. [用even though表示让步] ·My home town is especially famous__for its university.[用be famous for说明特点] ·Whether you like Indian food, Western food or Japanese food, you'll find it all in Singapore.[用whether ．.. or ．.. 表示让步] ·Behind the house, there was a big garden with lots of trees and there was a small lake with fish in it.[用with描述特征] ·However,__it was expensive to live in the city centre, so the government built flats outside the centre.[用however表示转折，用so表示结果] 1．My neighbourhood is a warm place. [用because 扩写原因] __My__neighbourhood__is__a__warm__place__because__people__are__always__ready__to__offer__their__help__to__each__other.__ 2．I don't know any of my neighbours. They are always ready to help me. [用even though表示让步] __Even__though__I__don't__know__any__of__my__neighbours,__they__are__always__ready__to__help__me.__ 3．My town is famous. [用be famous for说明特点] __My__town__is__famous__for__its__beautiful__scenery.__ 4．无论你喜欢漂亮的景色还是享受美食，你都能在杭州玩得开心。[用whether ．.. or ．.. 表示让步] __Whether__you__like__beautiful__scenery__or__enjoy__delicious__food,__you__can__always__have__fun__in__Hangzhou.__ [家乡变化] ·The country road used__to be narrow. [用used to表示过去的情况] ·I am glad to__see these changes happen. [用不定式作原因状语] ·The government has done a lot to__make our home town a modern town.[用不定式作目的状语] ·Transport and travel are easier today.[用形容词作表语] ·When I was young, I went everywhere on__foot or sometimes by__bike．[用介词短语作方式状语] 5．The villagers were very poor in the past. [用used to表示过去的情况] __The__villagers__used__to__be__very__poor.__ 6．I am proud. I see my home town has developed a lot.[用不定式合并成一个句子] __I__am__proud__to__see__my__home__town__has__developed__a__lot.__ 7．New schools are built. They provide a better environment for students.[用不定式合并成一个句子] __New__schools__are__built__to__provide__a__better__environment__for__students.__ [居住环境] (1)Greenwood Park is ①__the__best__place__to__go__(最好的可去的地方) on weekends ②__because__there__is__something__(因为那里有某物) for everyone. I always finish my breakfast fast on Saturdays because I want to get to Greenwood Park before 10 a．m. to meet my friends. The park is a crowded place on weekends because almost everyone goes there to ③__see__the__street__performers__(看街头表演的艺人). Some people think they are boring, but I think they are creative people. However, the place ④__where__you__can__enjoy__your__time__quietly__(那里你可以安静地享受时光) is at one of the small coffee shops near the park. You can read or relax there. (2)①__Have__you__ever__tried__(你曾尝试过) Chinese food outside of China? Maybe you fear that you won't be able to find anything good to eat when you travel. In Singapore, however, you'll find a lot of food from China; you won't ②__have__any__problem__getting__rice__(有任何困难得到米饭), noodles or dumplings. Singapore is also ③__an__excellent__place__to__try__new__food__(一个尝试新食物的很棒的地方). ④__Whether__you__like__Indian__food,__Western__food__or__Japanese__food__(无论你喜欢印度菜、西餐还是日本料理), you'll find it all in Singapore. [家乡变化] How time flies! Since I moved to the big cities, I ①__haven't__been__back__to__my__home__town__for__a__long__time__(已经很久没回过我的家乡了). In the past few years, ②__great__changes__have__taken__place__(发生了巨大的变化) in my home town. In the past, there ③__used__to__be__(曾经有) old houses, dirty rivers and narrow roads. People used to go to work on foot or by bike. But now, I ④__regard__with__great__interest__how__my__home__town__has__changed__(以极大的兴趣看待我的家乡是如何变化的). There are many tall buildings in my home town. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many wide streets and people usually take the subway or drive a car to work. 某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文比赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据要点提示，写一篇以“My Beautiful Home Town”为题的英语短文投稿。 要点提示： 1．过去的家乡：荒山、肮脏的河流、垃圾……； 2．现在的家乡：青山、绿水、清新的空气、花鸟……； 3．你的感想。 注意： 1．文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥； 2．条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80； 3．文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。 My Beautiful Home Town ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 思路与解析 第一步　审　　　　　　　　　　　　　第二步　列 　体裁：说明文 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时 人称：第一人称和第三人称 内容要点：①过去的家乡；②现在的家乡；③感想 写作框架：总—分—总　　 高分范文 My Beautiful Home Town ①My__home__town__is__a__beautiful__place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. There have been a lot of changes in my home town. ②There__used__to__be__several__barren__mountains__and__a__dirty__river__in__my__home__town. There was much rubbish and people lived a hard life. It was a poor and backward little town. ②But__now,__there are ③green__mountains,__clean__water,__fresh__air__and__lots__of__birds__and__flowers. ③The__streets have been widened. ③Factories,__schools,__hospitals,__cinemas__and__theatres have sprung up one after another. ③The__life__of__the__people has greatly improved. I love my home town and its people. We are working hard so as to make it much richer and more beautiful. 高分点评 ①本文运用了开门见山的写法，直奔主题。 ②There used to be ．.. 和But now ．.. 承上启下过渡句的使用，使得文章层次分明。 ③从mountains, water, air, birds, flowers, streets, factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas, theatres 等方面举例说明家乡的变化，使内容表达更为丰富。 ④语言得体自然，符合征文稿件的语言特点。 假如你是李平，请你根据以下电子邮件的内容提示，给你的笔友Mary回复一封电子邮件。 Dear Li Ping， How is everything going with you? I'm going to Hangzhou for a visit this September. I plan to stay in Hangzhou for several days. I really hope you can give me some advice. Where can I go for a visit? What special food is worth trying in Hangzhou? Also, I wonder what kind of clothing I should bring. Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Mary 　　要求：1.包含以上邮件所给提示信息，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．80词左右。 思路与解析 第一步　审和列 1．审写作元素　　　　　　　　　　2.列写作要点 　主题：__A__visit__to__Hangzhou__ 体裁：__应用文(电子邮件)__ 时态：__以一般现在时为主__ 人称：__以第一人称和第二人称为主__　　　 第二步　扩和连 Opening：__I__am__so__excited__to__hear__that__you__are__coming__to__my__city.__Here__are__my__suggestions__for__you. Body：　You can bring ．.. and ．.. since ．.. As for places to visit，．.. is an excellent place to go where you can ．.. If you are interested in ．.., ．.. is a good choice. Have you eaten ．.. and ．..? I highly recommend that you have a try! 　 Closing：__When__will__you__arrive?__I__can__pick__you__up__and__show__you__around__if__you__want.__I__really__look__forward__to__your__coming.__ 第三步　查和抄 Dear Mary， I am so excited to hear that you are coming to my city. Here are my suggestions for you. You can bring two overcoats and some comfortable T­shirts since the temperature changes a lot throughout a day in September. As__for__places__to__visit,__the__West__Lake__is__an__excellent__place__to__go__where__you__can__enjoy__beautiful__and__quiet__scenery. If__you__are__interested__in__museums,__Hangzhou National Tea Museum is a good choice. Have you eaten Dongpo Pork and West Lake Fish in Vinegar Gravy? I__highly__recommend__that__you__have__a__try! When will you arrive? I can pick you up and show you around if you want. I really look forward to your coming. __Yours， __Li__Ping 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$