话题05 观点建议-【精彩三年】2024年中考英语书面表达配套word（外研版）

　观点建议 表达观点 be good for/at对……有好处/擅长……　different opinions不同的观点　in my opinion在我看来　 in a word总而言之 in this way通过这种方式　become better and better变得越来越好　be helpful to对……有帮助　be kind and helpful善良且乐于助人　no need to care about ．.. 没有必要担心……　change our lifestyle改变我们的生活方式　have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难　make our life more convenient使我们的生活更便利　feel bad感觉不舒服　because of由于think of认为；有……的想法　agree with赞同　had better do sth.最好做某事　share my views on ．.. 分享我对……的观点 提出建议 study/work hard努力学习　do housework做家务　share parents' work分担父母的工作　try our best尽我们最大的努力　pay attention to注意；关注　obey the rules遵守规则　get on well with与……相处得好　be polite to对……有礼貌 be always ready to do sth.时刻准备着做某事　keep healthy保持健康　be confident自信 　do different kinds of sports进行各种体育运动　have an online course上网课　have courage to face sb./sth.有勇气面对某人/某事　overcome your trouble克服你的困难　eat healthily/have a balanced diet健康饮食/有均衡的饮食　keep away from远离　get up early早起 exercise regularly有规律地锻炼　talk to sb.与某人谈话　keep practising坚持练习　get well prepared for为……做好准备　listen carefully to认真听……　help each other互相帮助　make friends交朋友　make you independent使你独立　learn from mistakes从错误中学习　make progress取得进步　ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 [表达观点] ·I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. [用and连接] ·Only__then__will__I__have a chance to achieve my dream. [用倒装句突出强调] ·I discovered that listening__to__something__interesting is the secret to language learning. [用动名词短语作主语] ·Unless we talk to someone, we'll certainly feel worse. [用unless说明条件] ·In__short,__follow what you learnt in school.You can be safe and you can also help save others.[运用总结性词语] ·So when is the best time to visit the US? Any time you like！[自问自答式表达观点] ·But in my opinion, man­made wonders are more__exciting__than natural ones.[运用比较级] ·Nothing is more enjoyable than playing tennis.[用比较级形式表示最高级含义] ·Generally__speaking,__I think life is better today.[运用总结性词语] 1．Teachers teach us a lot. They help us in many ways.[用and连接] __Teachers__teach__us__a__lot__and__help__us__in__many__ways.__ 2．When we lose our health, we realise how important it is.[用only倒装] __Only__when__we__lose__our__health__do__we__realise__how__important__it__is.__ 3．参加俱乐部可以使我们的学校生活更丰富。[用动名词短语作主语] __Joining__the__clubs__can__make__our__school__life__more__colourful.__ 4．The world will not become a better place for people to live in. [用unless扩写条件] __Unless__everyone__does__something__to__keep__the__air__clean,__the__world__will__not__become__a__better__place__for__people__to__live__in.__ [提出建议] ·It gets dark earlier, so it__is__important__not__to__be late for after­school practice. [用 It is ＋adj.＋(not) to do sth.句型提出建议] ·They should spend their time on schoolwork in__order__to get good grades and get into a good university. [用in order to说明目的] ·Why__don't__you__talk about these feelings with your family? [用Why don't you do ．..？句型提出建议] ·Let's__try to speak English as much as possible.[运用Let's do sth.句型] ·It's__a__good__idea__to__spell and pronounce new words aloud every day.[运用It's a good idea to do sth.句型] ·You don't need__to__understand every word.[运用need to do sth.] ·And don't__forget__to__write down the correct answers next to the mistakes.[运用Don't forget to do sth.句型] ·Then what__about__going by bike？[运用What about doing sth.句型] ·And you'd__better__not__have your hair cut during the Spring Festival month.[运用You'd better not do sth.句型] 5．We should take part in some outdoor activities with our friends or family.[分别用It is＋n.＋(not) to do ．.. 和Why don't you do ．..？句型升格] 　It is a good idea to take part in some outdoor activities with our friends or family. Why don't you take part in some outdoor activities with your friends or family？　 6．You should communicate with your parents often.[扩写目的] __You__should__communicate__with__your__parents__often__in__order__to__get__along__well__with__them.__ [表达观点] I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and ①__help__their__parents__with__housework__(帮助他们的父母做家务). It is not enough to just get good grades at school. Children these days ②__depend__on__their__parents__too__much__(依赖他们的父母太多). They are always asking, “Could you get this for me？” or “Could you help me with that？” ③__Doing__chores__(做家务) helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. It also helps them to ④__understand__the__idea__of__fairness__(理解公平的概念). Since they live in one house with their parents, they should know that everyone should ⑤__do__their__part__(尽他们的责任) in keeping it clean and tidy. [提出建议] It's not easy being your age, and it's normal to have these feelings. Why don't you talk about these feelings with your family? If your parents are ①__having__problems__(有问题), you should offer to help. Maybe you could ②__do__more__jobs__around__the__house__(在家里做更多的工作)so that they have more time for proper communication. Secondly, why don't you ③__sit__down__and__communicate__with__your__brother__(坐下来和你的哥哥沟通一下)? You should explain that you don't mind him watching TV all the time. However, he should let you watch your favourite show. I hope things will be better for you soon. 健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。 注意： 1．文章必须包含以下表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息； 3．词数80左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 should (√) shouldn't (×) ★do sports every day ★keep a balanced diet ★eat fruit and vegetables ★have enough sleep ★keep happy ．.. ★refuse to exercise ★have too much junk food ★stay up too late ★play computer games a lot ★sit for a long time ．.. How to Keep Healthy Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health.It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 思路与解析 第一步　审　　　　　　　　　　　　第二步　列 　体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时和一般将来时 人称：以第一人称为主 内容要点：①应该做的事；②不应该做的事 写作框架：总—分—总　 高分范文 How to Keep Healthy Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. ①Here__are__some__things__that__we__should__do. ②First,__we should do sports every day and keep a balanced diet. ③As__for__food,__we should eat more fruit and vegetables. ②Besides,__we should have enough sleep; it's good for our health. The most important is that we should keep happy every day. ②On__the__other__side,__there're some things we shouldn't do to keep healthy. ③For__example,__we shouldn't refuse to exercise, or have too much junk food. Then we shouldn't play computer games a lot, sitting for a long time. ②What's__more,__we shouldn't stay up too late, because it's very dangerous for us. ①All__in__all,__if__we__follow__these__ways,__each__of__us__will__have__a__healthy__body． 高分点评 ①过渡句以及结尾总结句的使用，使得文章层次分明，逻辑清晰。 ②熟练运用衔接词使语言表达自然流畅、文章结构清晰明了。 ③举例说明让作者的建议更具体。 ④要点齐全，语言得体自然，符合报刊稿件的语言特点。 你校学生会策划了主题为“Walk for Trees”的十千米徒步活动。假设你是学生会成员，请写一篇英语短文，在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。 要点提示如下： WALK FOR TREES Activities ●walk for 10 kilometres ●raise money to plant more trees ●．.. Benefits(益处) ●be good for health ●．.. Suggestions ●wear comfortable shoes ●．.. 　　注意： 1．短文必须包含表中所有信息，并适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3．词数：80—100； 4．短文首句仅供参考选择使用，不计入总词数。 On 6th May, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 思路与解析 第一步　审和列 1．审写作元素　　　　　　　　　2.列写作要点 　主题：__The__school__activity__ 体裁：__说明文__ 时态：__一般将来时和一般现在时__ 人称：__以第一人称为主__　　 第二步　扩和连 Opening：__On__May__6th,__we__will__have__an__activity__called__Walk__for__Trees.__ Body：　During the activity, we will ．.. and ．.. Walking is good for ．.. It is really a good chance to ．.. In order to have a good experience, it's a good idea to ．.. What's more, you should ．..　 Closing：__Wish__our__activity__a__great__success.__ 第三步　查和抄 On__6th__May,__we__will__have__an__activity__called__Walk__for__Trees.During__the__activity,__we__will__walk__for__10__kilometres__and__raise__money__to__plant__more__trees.Walking__is__good__for__our__health and will strengthen our endurance.It__is__really__a__good__chance__to__make__us__better__understand__environmental__protection__and__keep__fit． In order to have a good experience, it's__a__good__idea__to__wear__comfortable__shoes．Or your feet will hurt badly and you will not finish the 10 kilometres' walk.What's more, you should prepare some water and not eat too much. Wish our activity a great success.　 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$