内容正文:
人物介绍
基本信息
name名字 first/given name名字 last/family name姓 English name英文名字
外貌特征
short/straight/curly hair短/直/卷发 long straight blonde hair金色的长直发 big eyes大眼睛 small mouth 小嘴巴 round face圆脸 look like看起来像 look the same 看起来一样 take after(外貌或行为)像 wear glasses戴眼镜 (be) of medium build/height中等身材/身高
性格特点与
个人品质
shy腼腆的 outgoing外向的 serious严肃的 quiet安静的;文静的 silent不说话的;沉默的 funny滑稽的;好笑的;有趣的 humorous有幽默感的 clever/smart/bright/wise聪明的 helpful乐于助人的 honest诚实的
kind善良的 strong坚强的 independent 独立的 brave勇敢的 polite有礼貌的;客气的 rude粗鲁的 lazy懒惰的 friendly友好的 hardworking勤奋的 make people laugh a lot逗得大家大笑不止 work as hard as sb. 和某人一样努力工作 stick to 坚持 be good with sb. 与某人相处得好
兴趣爱好
interest兴趣;爱好 habit习惯 hobby爱好 collect stamps收集邮票 favourite特别喜爱的 dance跳舞 prefer更喜欢 sport体育运动 enjoy享受;喜爱 skate滑冰 music音乐 be crazy about doing sth.对做某事很狂热 run fast跑得快 get excited about doing sth.对做某事感到兴奋 be good at擅长 have a strong interest in doing sth. 对做某事有浓厚的兴趣 book lover爱读书的人 be talented in (doing) sth. 在(做)某事方面有才能 play chess下国际象棋 play the guitar弹吉他
梦想与
实现
promise承诺;诺言 engineer工程师 violinist小提琴手 pilot飞行员 doctor医生 driver司机 scientist科学家
pianist钢琴家 race car driver赛车手 computer programmer计算机程序员 do/try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事 take acting class上表演课 practise the piano every day 每天练习钢琴 study math really hard很努力地学习数学 keep on writing stories坚持写故事 go to a cooking school 上烹饪学校 be able to do sth. 能够做某事 take up学着做;开始做 finish high school and college first先上完高中和大学 study computer science/medicine/education at a university 在大学里学计算机科学/医学/教育学
[外貌特征]
·He has short straight black hair__and big eyes. [用and连接并列成分]
·He is a tall man, wearing a pair of thick glasses.[用现在分词作伴随状语]
·I'm quite tall with__short__fair__hair,__and I wear glasses. [用with 短语表示人物特征]
1.He is very handsome.He has beautiful blue eyes. [用and连接并列成分]
__He__is__very__handsome__and__has__beautiful__blue__eyes.__
2.He is of medium height.He wears a hat. [用现在分词作伴随状语]
__He__is__of__medium__height,wearing__a__hat.__
3.Miss Li is tall.She has long hair. [用with短语表示人物特征]
__Miss__Li__is__tall__with__long__hair.__
[性格特点]
·My friend David is more hardworking than me, but I am funnier than him. [用than和but连接]
·Jeff is__less serious than most kids. [用less ... than作比较]
·Jeff and Yuan Li are both quiet. [用both表示“两者都”]
·Norman Bethune is one of the__most__famous heroes in China.[用最高级表示特征]
·Tom,the__hero__of__the__book,__lives with his aunt Polly.[用同位语介绍人物]
·He wrote many plays, novels and short stories about people's lives, and was__named__“the People's Artist”.[使用被动语态]
4.我的朋友比我更外向,但我比她更友好。[用than和but连接]
__My__friend__is__more__outgoing__than__me,but__I'm__friendlier__than__her.__
5.安不如我勤奋。[用less ... than作比较]
__Ann__is__less__hardworking__than__me.__
6.爱丽丝和朱迪都很有趣。[用both表示“两者都”]
__Alice__and__Judy__are__both__very__funny.__
[介绍兴趣爱好]
·My favourite subject is science, because it's interesting. [用because说明具体原因]
·My hobby doesn't cost as much as yours—I__collect__tickets,__bus__tickets__and__train__tickets! [说明具体活动]
·I love music that__I__can__sing__along__with. [用定语从句说明具体特点]
·The father, Johann__Strauss__the__elder,__wrote and played music for traditional dances, called the waltz.[用同位语介绍人物]
·He's the boy who won the photo competition last year![用定语从句介绍人物]
·David Smith is a student, and one of his hobbies is writing.[用并列句介绍职业和爱好]
7.I often do some reading in my spare time.[用because说明具体原因]
__I__often__do__some__reading__in__my__spare__time,because__it__helps__increase__my__knowledge.__
8.I like to stay at home on weekends.[说明具体活动]
__I__like__to__stay__at__home__on__weekends.__I__can__watch__TV__and__read__my__favourite__books.__
9.I prefer music.[用定语从句说明具体特点]
__I__prefer__music__that__I__can__dance__to.__
[人物变化]
·He__used__to wear glasses. [用used to 表示过去经常做某事]
·I didn't__use__to__be popular in school, but now I get tons of attention everywhere I go. [用didn't use to 和but表示变化]
·I'm taller now than I was two years ago. [用than表示变化]
10.我过去常常和我的朋友们在公园里打篮球。[用used to表示过去经常做某事]
__I__used__to__play__basketball__with__my__friends__in__the__park.__
11.他过去不喜欢做运动,但是现在他对跑步有浓厚的兴趣。[用didn't use to和but表示变化]
__He__didn't__use__to__like__doing__sports,__but__now__he__has__a__strong__interest__in__running.__
[梦想与实现]
·I want to be a writer.I'm__going__to__keep__on__writing__stories. [说明实现方法]
·I want to take guitar lessons.I__really__love__music.[说明原因]
·I want to be a teacher.I'm__going__to__study__hard__and__get__good__grades.[说明实现方法]
12.I want to be a reporter.[说明原因]
__I__want__to__be__a__reporter.Then__I__can__meet__a__lot__of__interesting__people__and__interview__some__famous__people.__
13.I want to be a guitar teacher at school.[说明原因]
__I__want__to__be__a__guitar__teacher__at__school.I__love__playing__the__guitar__with__kids.__
14.I want to get my driver's license.[说明实现方法]
__I__want__to__get__my__driver's__license.I'm__going__to__study__very__hard__and__pass__the__exam.__
[外貌特征]
“The man is of ①__medium__build__(中等身材) and young.He has ②__long__straight__black__hair__(黑色的长直发) and big eyes,” says one woman.Another woman says, “He is ③__tall__and__thin__(又高又瘦), and he has ④__curly__blonde__hair__(金色的卷发).He's about thirty years old.”
[性格特点]
I'm quieter and ①__more__serious__(更严肃的) than most kids.That's why I like reading books and I ②__study__harder__(更努力地学习) in class.My best friend Yuan Li is quiet, too, so we enjoy ③__studying__together__(一起学习).I'm shy so it's not easy for me to ④__make__friends__(交朋友).
[兴趣爱好]
Sally loves reading.In the morning, she ①__reads__the__newspaper__(读报纸) and in the evening she reads books.She has already read ②__more__than__(多于) 100 different books!Her ③__favourite__kind__of__books__ (最喜欢的一类书) is science fiction.She ④__is__interested__in__(对……感兴趣) science and technology and ⑤__loves__to__imagine__(喜欢去想象) what the world will be like in 50 years.
[梦想与实现]
I want to be a teacher when I ①__grow__up__(长大), because I like to ②__play__with__(和……玩)children.Besides,being a teacher is also my mother's dream.To make my dream ③__come__true__(实现), I will study hard and go to a good university.If I ④__realise/achieve__my__dream__(实现我的梦想), I will be very happy.
榜样,就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人,他们为我们指引前进的方向。在你的成长过程中,一定有很多值得你学习的榜样,比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友…… 假如你是李华,学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire(钦佩)”的演讲比赛,请你根据要点提示,写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。
要点提示:
What does he/she look like?
What is he/she like?
Why do you admire him/her?
注意:
1.文章必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
2.词数:80左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua.The person I admire most is ________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
思路与解析
第一步 审 第二步 列
体裁:应用文(演讲稿)
时态:一般现在时和一般将来时
人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:①外貌特征;②性格特点;③钦佩的理由
写作框架:总—分—总
高分范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties with short straight hair. ③She__is__②not__only__a__great__mother__②but__also__a__good__doctor. ①When__I__have__trouble__with__my__study,__she always②listens__to my problems patiently. And she tells me how to solve them and ②encourages__me__to__believe__in__myself. And I always ②succeed__in__solving them. ③As a doctor, she often says she ②can't__be__too__careful. She ②sets__a__good__example for me. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work.
①I__hope__I__can__be__a__person__like__her.__I'm__sure__I__can__②achieve__my__dream__one__day. ①I__also__hope__she__will__pay__more__attention__to__her__own__health. She'd better have more time to relax herself.
Thanks for listening.
高分点评
①句式多样,时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句的使用体现了考生优秀的语言知识应用水平。
②熟练运用多个高分短语,如not only ... but also ...,listen to, encourage sb. to do sth.,succeed in doing sth., can't be too careful,set a good example,achieve one's dream等,使语言表达更为丰富。
③作者从两方面描写了妈妈,层次分明、流畅自然。
④语言得体自然,符合演讲稿的语言特点。
在人生漫漫旅途中,总会有这样一些人,他们或令我们感动,或让我们崇敬,或使我们难忘……他们牵动我们的思维,占据我们内心深处的记忆。
某英文报社正在开展以“我难忘的人”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈令你难忘的人。
*Who is the person you will never forget?
*What did he/she do?
*What can you learn from him/her?
...
注意:1.征文必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数:80~100。短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。
In our lives, we may meet different people. The person I will never forget is________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
思路与解析
第一步 审和列
1.审写作元素 2.列写作要点
主题: The person
I will never forget
体裁:__记叙文__
时态: 一般现在时和
一般过去时
人称:__以第三人称为主__
第二步 扩和连
Opening:__In__our__lives,__we__may__meet__different__people.__The__person__I__will__never__forget__is__...__
Body: He's ... He likes ... He's ...
About two years ago, ... noticed that ...
Closing: __I__will__never__forget__his__kindness__and__I__learn__from__him__that__the__key__to__success__is__to__be__brave__when__facing__difficulties.__
第三步 查和抄
In__our__lives,__we__may__meet__different__people.__The__person__I__will__never__forget is Mr. Li, my English teacher. He's a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He's kind but strict with us.
About two years ago, Mr.__Li__noticed__that__I__was__worried__about__my__poor__pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance to speak in class. Thanks__to__him,__my__pronunciation__has__greatly__improved.
I will never forget his kindness and I__learn__from__him__that__the__key__to__success__is__to__be__brave__when__facing__difficulties.
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