内容正文:
日常活动
家庭活动
exercise 锻炼 shopping购物 swimming游泳 running跑步
go for a walk去散步 cook meals煮饭 make dinner做晚餐 wash/do the dishes洗碗 take out the rubbish倒垃圾
water flowers浇花 look after pets 照顾宠物 wash/fold clothes 洗/叠衣服 watch TV/the news 看电视/新闻节目
drink tea/coffee 喝茶/咖啡
周末活动
do homework 做作业 do some chores 做些家务 watch movies 看电影 go boating/camping 去划船/野营 read books/newspapers 读书/看报纸 play games 玩游戏 watch a soccer game/a talk show 看一场足球赛/脱口秀 go to the park/museum/beach 去公园/博物馆/沙滩 clean the room 打扫房间 go to the cinema/library/supermarket 去看电影/图书馆/超市 listen to music/CD 听音乐/光盘 play basketball/badminton 打篮球/羽毛球 learn a second language 学习第二语言 use the Internet 上网
活动观点
think/believe 认为 personally 就个人而言 fun/interesting 有趣的
in my opinion 在我看来 from my point of view 依我看 to tell the truth 说实话 be good/bad for 对……有好处/有害 It's important/necessary/difficult for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是重要的/必要的/困难的 play an important role in... 在……中起重要的作用
[家庭活动]
·His mom is making zongzi and his dad is watching the boat races on TV.[用and连接句子]
·Jane exercises and reads books every__day. [用every day说明频率]
·Her parents are not very happy because she hardly ever helps with housework and she never goes to the dentist for teeth cleaning. [用because说明原因]
1.He is watching TV. His sister is doing her homework. [用and连接句子]
__He__is__watching__TV__and__his__sister__is__doing__her__homework.__
2.He goes for a walk after dinner. [用every day说明频率]
__He__goes__for__a__walk__after__dinner__every__day.__
3.I enjoy reading the newspaper. I can know about what is going on around the world.[用because说明原因]
__I__enjoy__reading__the__newspaper__because__I__can__know__about__what__is__going__on__around__the__world.__
[周末活动]
·On Saturday, we went to the countryside and climbed a mountain. But the weather was so bad. It rained__and__rained all day long.[用叠词增加文采]
·At the fire station, I learned how__to__call the fire station and what__to__do when there is a fire.[用“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语]
·On__Saturday__morning,__I sang and played the guitar. In__the__afternoon,__I camped by the lake with my classmates, and at__night I went to the cinema.[用on Saturday morning、in the afternoon 和at night表达活动时间]
4.那个掉入井里的孩子不停地喊呀喊,终于有人听到呼救声把他救了上来。[用叠词增加文采]
__The__child__who__fell__into__the__well__shouted__and__shouted,__and__finally__someone__heard__the__cry__for__help__and__saved__him.__
5.他给我示范了如何使用这部新手机。[用“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语]
__He__showed__me__how__to__use__the__new__mobile__phone.__
[活动观点]
·Doing__exercise is good for both the mind and the body. [用动名词短语作主语]
·As__far__as__I'm__concerned,__staying up late does harm to your health. [用as far as I'm concerned表达观点]
·As a proverb says, “Old__habits__die__hard.” [用谚语表达观点]
6.听音乐使我放松。[用动名词短语作主语]
__Listening__to__music__makes__me__relaxed.__
7.就我而言,我希望能多陪伴我的家人和朋友。[用as far as I'm concerned表达观点]
__As__far__as__I'm__concerned,__I__hope__I__can__spend__more__time__with__my__family__and__friends.__
8.正如谚语说的那样:“善始者善终。” [用谚语表达观点]
__As__a__proverb__says,__“A__good__beginning__makes__a__good__ending.”__
[家庭活动]
There isn't a Dragon Boat Festival in the US, so it's like any other night for Zhu Hui and his ①__host__family__(寄宿家庭). The mother is ②__reading__a__story__(读故事) to her young children. The father is ③__watching__a__soccer__game__ (看一场足球赛) on TV. And what is Zhu Hui doing? He's talking on the phone to his cousin in Shenzhen.
[周末活动]
We ①__went__camping__(去野营) in a small village in India. First, we took a long bus ride to a lake ②__in__the__countryside__(在乡村). There we ③__put__up__our__tents__(支起我们的帐篷) and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just ④__sat__under__the__moon__(坐在月光下) and told each other stories.
[活动观点]
①__It__is__good__to__relax__(放松是好的) by using the Internet or watching game shows, but we think ②__the__best__way__to__relax__(放松的最好方式) is through exercise. It is healthy for both the mind and the body. Exercise such as playing sports is fun, and you can spend time with your friends and family ③__as/when__you__play__together__(当你们一起玩的时候). And remember, “Old habits die hard.” So start exercising before it's too late!
[2023·绍兴中考]你校英语文化节举办了主题为“Sharing My Hometown”的短视频征集活动,你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿,在英语课上分享你们的创作历程及收获。
Process
Gains
●make a plan
●collect information
●create a video
●understand local culture better
●...
注意:1.发言稿必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;
2.你们的收获至少两条;
3.词数:80—100;
4.发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:收获gain
Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with, ________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
思路与解析
第一步 审 第二步 列
体裁:应用文(发言稿)
时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
人称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:①分享创作历程②谈收获
写作框架:总—分—总
高分范文
③Hi,__everyone!__I__am__happy__here__to__share__our__experience__in__making__a__video__of__Sharing__My__Hometown. ①To__start__with,__we had a heated discussion ②and made a plan carefully. ①After__that,__we made every effort to collect information in different ways. For example, we talked to our elders, ②who__told__us__stories__about__traditional__food__and__famous__people. ②Using__the__information we had collected, we created an English video, ②which__was__later__chosen__as__one__of__the__best__work__to__introduce__our__hometown.
From this experience, we have gained a lot. ①Above__all,__we now understand our local culture better. ①In__addition,__our English has improved greatly. ①Last__but__not__least,__we've realized how important good teamwork is!
③Thanks__for__your__listening!
高分点评
①要点齐全,语意连贯,逻辑清楚,使用丰富的短语如to start with, after that, above all, in addition, last but not least来梳理逻辑。
②句式丰富,能用and表示并列关系,用动词现在分词作状语,运用定语从句丰富句意。
③作为一篇发言稿,文本风格正式,措辞规范得体。
假如你是李华,上周六,你们班全体同学在特殊教育学校做了一次志愿者活动。请你根据下表中提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿。
What you see
What you do
How you feel
●school: clean and tidy
●students: blind, deaf, speak/read/write, difficult to follow the teachers, carefully
●play games
●learn paper cutting
●give books, snacks, toys ...
...
注意:1.短文中须包含要点提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻译),并适当发挥;
2.短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
3.词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
思路与解析
第一步 审和列
1.审写作元素 2.列写作要点
主题:__Weekend__activity__
体裁:__记叙文__
时态:__以一般过去时为主__
人称:__第一人称、第三人称__
第二步 扩和连
Opening: Last Saturday, our class ...
As soon as I arrived ... The students there are blind or deaf.
Body: ... it's hard for ...
During our time there, we played games and learned paper cutting with them, which could bring them ...
Before we left, we gave them ... in order to drive away their ...
Closing:__I__was__deeply__touched__by__their__positive__and__optimistic__attitude__towards__life.____In__my__view,__it's__of__great__importance__to__care__about__those__disabled__children__and__give__them__warmth__...__
第三步 查和抄
Last Saturday, our class went to the Special Education School to take part in a volunteer activity.__As__soon__as__I__arrived,__a__clean__and__tidy__school__caught__my__eye.__The__students__there__are__blind__or__deaf.____
__Without__doubt,__it's__hard__for__them__to__follow__the__teachers,__but__they__still__spared__no__effort__to__learn__well.__Not__until__then__did__I__realize__we__should__face__difficulties__positively__like__them.__During__our__time__there,__we__played__games__and__learned__paper__cutting__with__them,__which__could__bring__them__happiness__and__warmth.__Before__we__left,__we__gave__them__books,__snacks__and__toys__in__order__to__drive__away__their__loneliness.__
__I__was__deeply__touched__by__their__positive__and__optimistic__attitude__towards__life.__In__my__view,__it's__of__great__importance__to__care__about__those__disabled__children__and__give__them__warmth.__I__hope__everyone__can__do__their__part__to__make__a__difference__to__the__world.__
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