话题05 观点建议-【精彩三年】2024年中考英语书面表达配套word（人教版）

　观点建议 表达观点 be good for/at对……有好处/擅长……　different opinions不同的观点　in my opinion依我看来　 in a word总而言之 in this way通过这种方式　become better and better变得越来越好　be helpful to对……有帮助　be kind and helpful善良且乐于助人　no need to care about没有必要担心　change our lifestyle改变我们的生活方式　have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难　make our life more convenient使我们的生活更便利　feel bad感到愧疚　because of由于　 think of认为；有……的想法　agree with赞同　you'd better do sth.你最好做某事　share my views on ．.. 分享我对……的观点 提出建议 study/work hard努力学习　do housework做家务　share parents' work分担父母的工作　try our best尽我们最大的努力 pay attention to关注　obey the rules遵守规则　get on well with与……相处得好　be polite to对……有礼貌 be always ready to do sth.时刻准备着做某事　keep healthy保持健康　be confident自信 　do different kinds of sports进行各种体育运动　have an online course上网课　have courage to face sb./sth.有勇气面对某人/某事　overcome your trouble克服你的困难　eat healthily/have a balanced diet健康饮食/有均衡的饮食　keep away from远离　get up early早起 exercise regularly有规律地锻炼　talk to sb.与某人谈话　keep practicing坚持练习　get well prepared for为……做好准备　listen carefully to认真听……　help each other互相帮助　make friends交朋友　make you independent使你独立　learn from mistakes从错误中学习　make progress取得进步　ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 [表达观点] ·I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. [用and连接，扩大语义，增加节奏感] ·Only__then__will__I__have a chance to achieve my dream. [用倒装句突出强调 then] ·I discovered that listening__to__something__interesting is the secret to language learning. [用动名词短语作主语] ·Unless we talk to someone, we'll certainly feel worse. [用unless说明条件] 1．Teachers teach us a lot. They help us in many ways.[用and连接] __Teachers__teach__us__a__lot__and__help__us__in__many__ways.__ 2．When we lose our health, we realize how important it is.[用only倒装] __Only__when__we__lose__our__health__do__we__realize__how__important__it__is.__ 3．参加俱乐部可以使我们的学校生活更丰富。[用动名词短语作主语] __Joining__the__clubs__can__make__our__school__life__more__colorful.__ 4．The world will not become a better place for people to live in. [用unless扩写条件] __Unless__everyone__does__something__to__keep__the__air__clean,__the__world__will__not__become__a__better__place__for__people__to__live__in.__ [提出建议] ·It__is__best__not__to__run away from our problems. We should always try to solve them. [用It is＋adj.＋(not) to do ．.. 句型和should提出建议] ·They should spend their time on schoolwork in__order__to get good grades and get into a good university. [用in order to说明目的] ·The__more you read, the__faster you'll be. [用“the＋比较级，the＋比较级”句型作比较] ·Why__don't__you__talk about these feelings with your family? [用Why don't you do ．..？句型提出建议] 5．We should take part in some outdoor activities with our friends or family.[分别用It is＋adj./n.＋(not) to do ．.. 和Why don't you do ．..？句型升格] __It__is__a__good__idea__to__take__part__in__some__outdoor__activities__with__our__friends__or__family.__ __Why__don't__you__take__part__in__some__outdoor__activities__with__your__friends__or__family？__ 6．You should communicate with your parents often.[扩写目的] __You__should__communicate__with__your__parents__often__in__order__to__get__along__well__with__them.__ 7．我们克服的困难越多，我们就会变得越强大。[用“the＋比较级，the＋比较级”升格] __The__more__difficulties__we__overcome,__the__stronger__we__will__become.__ [表达观点] I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and ①__help__their__parents__with__housework__(帮助他们的父母做家务). It is not enough to just get good grades at school. Children these days ②__depend__on__their__parents__too__much__(依赖他们的父母太多). They are always asking, “Could you get this for me？” or “Could you help me with that？” ③__Doing__chores__(做家务) helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. It also helps them to ④__understand__the__idea__of__fairness__(理解公平的概念). Since they live in one house with their parents, they should know that everyone should ⑤__do__their__part__(尽他们的责任) in keeping it clean and tidy. [提出建议] It's not easy being your age, and it's normal to have these feelings. Why don't you talk about these feelings with your family? If your parents are ①__having__problems__(有问题), you should offer to help. Maybe you could ②__do__more__jobs__around__the__house__(在家里做更多的工作) so that they have more time for proper communication. Secondly, why don't you ③__sit__down__and__communicate__with__your__brother__(坐下来和你的哥哥沟通一下)? You should explain that you don't mind him watching TV all the time. However, he should let you watch your favorite show. I hope things will be better for you soon. 假设你是Sammy，你的朋友韩梅最近碰到了一些麻烦。请根据韩梅在电子邮件中提到的内容给她回一封电子邮件。词数80左右。 From：Han Mei To：Sammy Subject：How are you？ Dear Sammy， I'm afraid I've got some big problems recently. ①I__failed__my__English__exam__last__week__and__I__don't__know__how__to__improve__my__English. What's more, ②my__mother__talks__too__much__to__me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school？” and so on. I'm really annoyed. What should I do? Yours， Han Mei 思路与解析 第一步　审　　　　　　　　　　　第二步　列 　体裁：应用文(电子邮件) 时态：一般现在时 人称：以第二人称为主 内容要点：解决问题(①英语学习②亲子关系) 写作框架：总—分—总 高分范文 Dear Han Mei， I'm glad to help you solve these problems. ①I__think__that__it's__not__easy__being__your__age,__so you should be calm. And I have some advice for you. ②On__the__one__hand，①there__is__no__doubt__that__you__should__do__your__best__to__study__English__well. ③You__can__develop__some__good__habits__such__as__doing__exercises,__learning__from__mistakes,__reading__aloud__and__taking__notes. ②On__the__other__hand,__①it__is__important__for__you__to__be__patient__with__your__mother__and__often__communicate__with__her. In this way, she can understand your feelings and problems. ①You'd__better__listen__to__your__mother__patiently__so__that__you__can__do__these__things__well． Hope things work out. Best wishes! Yours， Sammy 高分点评 ①句式高级多变。宾语从句、同位语从句、并列句、提建议等多种句式的熟练运用，不仅准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现了考生扎实的英语基础和娴熟的语言表达能力。 ②衔接词 on the one hand，on the other hand 自然流畅，层次分明，使文章条理清晰。 ③给出的solution有一定的支撑。 ④作为为朋友提供解决问题的办法的电子邮件文本，语言朴实自然，符合读写双方的身份特征。 某校学生会策划了主题为“Walk for Trees”的十公里徒步活动。假设你是该学生会成员，请写一篇英语短文，在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。 要点提示如下： WALK FOR TREES Activities Benefits(益处) Suggestions ●walk for 10 kilometers ●raise money to plant more trees ●．.. ●be good for health ●．.. ●wear comfortable shoes ●．.. 　　注意：1.短文必须包含表中所有信息，并适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3．词数：80—100；短文首句仅供参考选择使用，不计入总词数。 On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 思路与解析 第一步　审和列 1．审写作元素　　　　　　　　　　　　2.列写作要点 　主题：__School__activity__ 体裁：__应用文(表格)__ 时态：__一般将来时和一般现在时__ 人称：__第一人称和第二人称__　　　　　 第二步　扩和连 Opening：__On__May__6th,__we__will__have__an__activity__called__Walk__for__Trees.__During__the__activities,__we__will__．..__and__．..__ Body：　Walking is good for ．.. It is really a good chance to ．.. In order to have a good experience, it's a good idea to ．.. What's more, you should ．..　 Closing：__Honestly__wish__our__activity__a__great__success__and__all__of__us__have__a__good__time.__ 第三步　查和抄 On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees.During__the__activities,__we__will__walk__for__10__kilometers__and__raise__money__to__plant__more__trees.__ __Walking__is__good__for__our__health__and__will__strengthen__our__endurance.__It__is__really__a__good__chance__to__make__us__better__understand__environmental__protection__and__keep__ourselves__fit.In__order__to__have__a__good__experience,__it's__a__good__idea__to__wear__comfortable__shoes.__Or__your__feet__will__be__hurt__and__you__may__not__finish__the__10__kilometers'__walk.__What's__more,__you__should__prepare__some__water__and__not__eat__too__much__before__the__activity.__ __Honestly__wish__our__activity__a__great__success__and__all__of__us__have__a__good__time.__ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$