话题04 健康安全-【精彩三年】2024年中考英语书面表达配套word（人教版）

　健康安全 保持健康 food食物　meat肉　sleep睡觉　fruit水果　milk牛奶　health健康　illness疾病　egg鸡蛋　eat吃　drink喝 exercise锻炼　vegetable蔬菜　rest休息；放松　toothache牙疼　healthy/fine健康的　stomachache胃疼 keep sb. in good health使某人保持健康　pay attention to关注　take care of/look after照顾　 hot tea with honey 蜂蜜热茶　take a break 休息　eating habits 饮食习惯　a large bowl of 一大碗……　lie down 躺下　eat a healthy dinner 吃一顿健康的晚餐　go to the dentist 去看牙医　have a big dinner 吃大餐　have a cold/fever 感冒/发烧　be good for对……有好处　get enough sleep 充足的睡眠　take one's temperature 量体温　 保证自身安全 safety安全　danger危险　action行动　accident事故　protect保护　warn警告　save挽救　shout喊叫　prevent阻止　stop阻止　hurt受伤　cheat欺骗　burn烧伤　safe安全的　attention注意力　wound创伤；伤口 dangerous危险的　harmful有害的　careful小心的 in danger处于危险中　save one's life挽救某人的生命　obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则　hurt oneself 伤害某人自己　stay away from ．.. 远离……　be careful of 小心……；注意　keep calm 保持冷静　call ．.. for help 打电话给……寻求帮助　be hurt 受伤的　prevent/stop/keep ．..from使……免于……(危险) [保持健康] ·But my mother wants me to drink it. She__says__it's__good__for__my__health. [用宾语从句说明原因] ·It is good to relax by using the Internet or watching game shows, but__we__think__the__best__way__to__relax__is__through__exercise. [用but引出个人观点] ·Exercise such__as playing sports is fun, and you can spend time with your friends and family as you play together. [用such as举例子] 1．像鸡蛋这样的食物对你的健康有好处。[用such as举例子] __Food__such__as__eggs__is__good__for__your__health.__ 2．We should have a balanced diet.[扩写原因] __We__should__have__a__balanced__diet.__My__mother__says__it's__good__for__our__health.__ 3．There are many ways to keep healthy.[扩写个人观点] __There__are__many__ways__to__keep__healthy,__but__I__think__the__best__way__to__keep__healthy__is__to__develop__good__eating__habits.__ [保证自身安全] ·When__you__cut__yourself,__you should put some medicine on it. [用when说明时间] ·Thanks__to__Mr.__Wang__and__the__passengers,__the man was saved by the doctors in time. [用thanks to短语说明原因] ·A woman next to him was shouting__for__help．[用shout for help表示呼救] 4．当我路过时，我听到一个男孩在大声呼救。[用shout for help升格] __I__heard__a__boy__shouting__for__help__when__I__passed__by.__ 5．当我们做运动的时候，我们应该确保不要伤害到自己。[用when说明时间] __When__we__do__exercise,__we__should__make__sure__not__to__hurt__ourselves.__ 6．多亏了我的老师和同学们，我被及时送到医院。[用thanks to说明原因] __Thanks__to__my__teacher__and__my__classmates,__I__was__sent__to__the__hospital__in__time.__ [保持健康] ①__It__is__good__to__relax__(放松是有好处的) by using the Internet or watching game shows, but we think ②__the__best__way__(最好的方式) to relax is through exercise. It is healthy for the mind and the body. Exercise such as ③__playing__sports__(做运动) is fun, and you can ④__spend__time__with__your__friends__and__family__as__you__play__together__(在与朋友和家人一起做运动时与他们共度时光). And remember, “Old habits die hard.” So start exercising before it's too late! [保证自身安全] Danger is around us. So we must learn how to ①__keep__away__from__the__danger__(远离危险). First, we mustn't ②__go__swimming__(去游泳) without our parents' or teachers' permission. And we are supposed to wear life jackets while swimming. Second, ③__do__not__go__out__alone__(不要独自外出) at night. Third, we are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. ④__It__is__dangerous__to__(……是危险的) play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. ⑤__In__a__word__(总之), we must try our best to keep ourselves safe! 上周，你们班举行了一次以“初中生使用微信的利与弊”为主题的班会，同学们各抒己见。你针对同学们的不同意见，做了以下记录。请你根据表格内容，以“The Opinions on Using WeChat”为题写一篇英语短文。 利 弊 1.提供交流的平台 1.过度沉迷、影响学习 2.认识更多的朋友 2.交友不慎、上当受骗 3.学习更多的东西 3.长期使用、影响视力 …… …… 　　注意： 1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 参考词汇：platform 平台；trick 欺骗；eyesight 视力 WeChat is widely used among middle school students with the development of science and technology. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 思路与解析 第一步　审　　　　　　　　　　　　第二步　列 　体裁：议论文 时态：以一般现在时为主 人称：以第三人称为主 内容要点：关于学生使用微信的利与弊的观点(①利②弊) 写作框架：总—分—总　 高分范文 The Opinions on Using WeChat WeChat is widely used among middle school students with the development of science and technology. Last week, we had a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of using WeChat. Different students have different opinions. ①Some__students__think__WeChat__is__a__very__useful__tool. It can provide them with a platform to communicate with their friends. ②Besides,__they can make more friends and get more knowledge through WeChat. ②In__a__word,__WeChat has made their life more colorful. ②However,__some students think WeChat will affect their study ①if__they__spend__too__much__time__on__it. And they may be easily tricked by strange online friends. ②Last__but__not__least,__it will also result in poor eyesight ①if__they__use__WeChat__for__a__long__time. In my opinion, we should use WeChat properly by not using it for more than two hours a day, and make sure that we don't use it when we are studying. ②In__addition,__③we__shouldn't__add__strangers__or__meet__online__friends__without__telling__parents__or__our__true__friends. 高分点评 ①句式高级多变。宾语从句、条件状语从句等多种句式的熟练运用，不仅准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现了考生很强的逻辑思维能力和深厚的语言功底。 ②丰富的衔接词 besides, in a word, however, last but not least, in addition 由浅入深，层层递进，使要点之间过渡自然、文章条理清晰明了。 ③要点齐全，且适当拓展，使文章丰满充实。 ④作为议论性短文，语言风格较为正式，分段清晰，符合议论文的文本特征。 现如今学生每天长时间看书和写作业。你认为学生该如何科学用眼来缓解眼疲劳？请写一篇英语短文谈谈你的想法。 How to Protect Our Eyesight Situations Solutions ●reading and doing homework ●Smartphones and computer screens ●No time to relax ●Take a break every 20 minutes ●Control the screen time ●．.. 　　要求：1.短文必须包含上表所有信息，可适当增加细节； 2．解决方案再补充至少一条； 3．词数80左右，短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：eyesight 视力，short­sighted 近视的； outdoor activities户外活动 How to Protect Our Eyesight A large number of students and young adults have poor eyesight.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 思路与解析 第一步　审和列 1．　审写作元素　　　　　　　　　　　2.列写作要点 主题： How to Protect Our Eyesight 体裁：__说明文__ 时态：__一般现在时__ 人称：__以第一人称为主__　　　　　 第二步　扩和连 Opening：__A__large__number__of__students__and__young__adults__have__poor__eyesight.That's__because__students__have__formed__bad__habits__of__using__eyes.__For__example,__many__of__us__．..__We__have__．..__In__our__free__time,__most__of__us__．..__ Body：__Now__it's__time__to__do__something__to__protect__our__eyes.__First,__．..__Second,__．..__To__relax__ourselves,__we'd__better__．..____Last__but__not__least,__it's__also__helpful__to__．..__ Closing：__In__a__word,__let's__take__action__to__take__care__of__our__eyes__immediately__so__that__we__can__have__a__bright__future.__ 第三步　查和抄 How to Protect Our Eyesight A large number of students and young adults have poor eyesight.__That's__because__students__have__formed__bad__habits__of__using__eyes.__For__example,__many__of__us__spend__much__time__reading__and__doing__homework__without__having__a__rest.__We__have__little__time__to__relax.__In__our__free__time,__most__of__us__prefer__to__use__the__smartphones__or__play__computer__games.__ __Now__it's__time__to__do__something__to__protect__our__eyes.__First,__take__a__break__every__20__minutes__while__reading.__Second,__control__the__screen__time.__To__relax__ourselves,__we'd__better__take__part__in__outdoor__activities.__Last__but__not__least,__it's__also__helpful__to__relax__our__eyes__by__looking__at____some__green__trees__or__doing__eye__exercises__from__time__to__time.__ __In__a__word,__let's__take__action__to__take__care__of__our__eyes__immediately__so__that__we__can__have__a__bright__future.__ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$