内容正文:
人物介绍
基本信息
name名字
first/given name名字 last/family name姓 English name英文名字
外貌特征
short/straight/curly hair短/直/卷发 long straight blonde hair金色的长直发 big eyes大眼睛 small mouth 小嘴巴 round face圆脸 look like看起来像 look the same 看起来一样 take after(外貌或行为)像 wear glasses戴眼镜 (be) of medium build/height中等身材/身高
性格特点与
个人品质
shy腼腆的 outgoing外向的 quiet安静的;文静的 silent不说话的;沉默的 funny滑稽的;好笑的;有趣的 humorous有幽默感的 clever/smart/bright/wise聪明的 helpful愿意帮忙的 honest诚实的 kind善良的 strong坚强的 independent 独立的 brave勇敢的 polite有礼貌的;客气的 lazy懒惰的 friendly友好的 hardworking勤奋的 serious严肃的
be good with sb. 与某人相处得好 make people laugh a lot逗得大家大笑不止 work as hard as sb. 和某人一样努力工作 stick to 坚持
兴趣爱好
interest兴趣;关注 habit习惯 hobby爱好 favorite特别喜爱的 dance跳舞 prefer更喜欢 sport体育运动 enjoy享受;喜爱 skate滑冰 music音乐
collect stamps收集邮票 be crazy about doing sth.对做某事很狂热 run fast跑得快 get excited about doing sth.对做某事感到兴奋 be good at擅长 have a strong interest in doing sth. 对做某事有浓厚的兴趣 book lover爱读书的人 be talented in (doing) sth. 在(做)某事方面有才能 play chess下国际象棋 play the guitar弹吉他
梦想与
实现
promise承诺;诺言 engineer工程师 violinist小提琴手 pilot飞行员 doctor医生 driver司机 scientist科学家
pianist钢琴家
race car driver赛车手 computer programmer计算机程序设计员 do/try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事 take acting lessons上表演课 practice the piano every day 每天练习钢琴 study math really hard很努力地学习数学 keep on writing stories坚持写故事 go to a cooking school 上烹饪学校 be able to do sth. 能够做某事 take up学着做;开始做 finish high school and college first先上完高中和大学 study computer science/medicine/education at a university 在一所大学里学计算机科学/医学/教育学
[外貌特征]
·He has short straight black hair__and big eyes. [用and连接]
·He is a tall man, wearing a pair of thick glasses.[用现在分词作伴随状语]
·My sister has a round face with__bright__eyes__and__a__small__mouth. [用with短语表示人物特征]
1.He is very handsome.He has beautiful blue eyes. [用and连接]
__He__is__very__handsome__and__has__beautiful__blue__eyes.__
2.He is of medium height.He wears a hat. [用现在分词作伴随状语]
__He__is__of__medium__height,__wearing__a__hat.__
3.Miss Li is tall.She has long hair. [用with短语表示人物特征]
__Miss__Li__is__tall__with__long__hair.__
[性格特点]
·My friend David is more hardworking than me, but I am funnier than him. [用than和but连接]
·Jeff is__less serious than most kids. [用less ... than作比较]
·Jeff and Yuan Li are both quiet. [用both表示“两者都”]
4.我的朋友比我更外向,但我比她更友好。[用than和but连接]
__My__friend__is__more__outgoing__than__me,__but__I'm__friendlier__than__her.__
5.安不如我勤奋。[用less ... than作比较]
__Ann__is__less__hardworking__than__me.__
6.爱丽丝和朱迪都很有趣。[用both表示“两者都”]
__Alice__and__Judy__are__both__very__funny.__
[介绍兴趣爱好]
·My favorite subject is science, because it's interesting. [用because说明具体原因]
·I like to spend time there on weekends. I__love__to__watch__the__monkeys__climbing__around. [说明具体活动]
·I love music that__I__can__sing__along__with. [用定语从句说明具体特点]
7.I often do some reading in my spare time.[用because说明具体原因]
__I__often__do__some__reading__in__my__spare__time,__because__it__can__improve__my__knowledge.__
8.I like to stay at home on weekends.[说明具体活动]
__I__like__to__stay__at__home__on__weekends.__I__can__watch__TV__and__read__my__favorite__books.__
9.I prefer music.[用定语从句说明具体特点]
__I__prefer__music__that__I__can__dance__to.__
[人物变化]
·He__used__to wear glasses. [用used to 表示过去经常做某事]
·I didn't__use__to__be popular in school, but now I get tons of attention everywhere I go. [用didn't use to 和but表示变化]
·I'm taller now than I was two years ago. [用than表示变化]
10.我过去常常和我的朋友们在公园里打篮球。[用used to表示过去经常做某事]
__I__used__to__play__basketball__with__my__friends__in__the__park.__
11.他过去不喜欢做运动,但是现在他对跑步有浓厚的兴趣。[用didn't use to和but表示变化]
__He__didn't__use__to__like__doing__sports,__but__now__he__has__a__strong__interest__in__running.__
[梦想与实现]
·I want to be a writer.I'm__going__to__keep__on__writing__stories. [说明实现方法]
·I want to take guitar lessons.I__really__love__music.[说明原因]
·I want to be a teacher.I'm__going__to__study__hard__and__get__good__grades.[说明实现方法]
12.I want to be a reporter.[扩写职业内容]
__I__want__to__be__a__reporter.Then__I__can__meet__a__lot__of__interesting__people__and__interview__some__famous__people.__
13.I want to be a guitar teacher in the school.[扩写原因]
__I__want__to__be__a__guitar__teacher__in__the__school.I__love__playing__the__guitar__with__kids.__
14.I want to get the teacher's license.[扩写实现方法]
__I__want__to__get__the__teacher's__license.__I'm__going__to__study__very__hard__and__pass__the__exam.__
[外貌特征]
“The man is of ①__medium__height__(中等身高) and young.He has ②__long__straight__brown__(长的直的棕色的)hair and big eyes,” says one woman.Another woman says, “He is ③__tall__and__thin__(又高又瘦), and he has ④__curly__blonde__(卷的金色的) hair.He's about thirty years old.”
[性格特点]
I'm quieter and ①__more__serious__(更严肃的) than most kids.That's why I like reading books and I ②__study__harder__(更努力地学习) in class.My best friend Yuan Li is quiet, too, so we enjoy ③__studying__together__(一起学习).I'm shy so it's not easy for me to ④__make__friends__(交朋友).
[兴趣爱好]
Sally loves reading.In the morning, she ①__reads__the__newspaper__(读报纸) and in the evening she reads books.She has already read ②__more__than__(多于) 100 different books!Her ③__favorite__kind__of__books__(最喜欢的一类书) is science fiction.She ④ __is__interested__in__(对……感兴趣) science and technology and ⑤__loves__to__imagine__(喜欢去想象) what the world will be like in 50 years.
[梦想与实现]
I want to be a teacher when I ①__grow__up__(长大).First, I like to ②__play__with__(和……玩)children.Besides,being a teacher is also my mother's dream.To make my dream ③__come__true__(实现), I will study hard and go to a good university.If I ④__realize/achieve__my__dream__(实现我的梦想), I will be very happy.
假设你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件,以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数80左右。
From:Linda
To:Li Ping
...
I'm really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer.I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! ①How__old__is__he? ②What__does__he__look__like? ③What__kind__of__person__is__he and ④what's__he__interested__in?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
Linda
From:Li Ping
To:Linda
Dear Linda,
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Li Ping
思路与解析
第一步 审 第二步 列
体裁:应用文(电子邮件)
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:以第三人称为主
内容要点:人物介绍(①年龄
②外貌③性格④兴趣)
写作框架:总—分—总
高分范文
Dear Linda,
How is everything going? ⑤Thanks a lot for agreeing to show my brother James around Rome. I must tell you something about him ①so__that__you__can__form__a__close__friendship__with__him__more__quickly.
James is a fifteenyearold boy ①who__is__outgoing__and__talented__in__music. If you see a boy in black singing popular songs and dancing at the airport, that must be him.①I'm__sure__you__will__like__him__at__first__glance. Like many teenagers, ①he__has__big__eyes,__short__black__hair__and__he__is__a__bit__tall. ②“Rome__cannot__be__built__in__one__day.” is his favorite motto ①which__encourages__him__to__become__a__persistent__boy.
⑤Thank__you__again for your help and have a great time!
Love,
Li Ping
高分点评
①句式高级多变。目的状语从句、定语从句、宾语从句、并列句等多种句式的熟练运用,不仅准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息,而且体现了考生不俗的语言能力和文采。
②恰当地引用名言警句增加了文章的高级感。
③要点齐全,且适当拓展,使文章丰满充实。
④词汇、语句符合作者与写作对象的年龄和关系特征,使文章自然、得体。
⑤开头使用thanks表达感谢,结尾再次使用thank you again 表达真诚情感,也是一种首尾呼应。
在人生漫漫旅途中,总会有这样一些人,他们或令我们感动,或让我们崇敬,或令我们难忘……他们牵动我们的思绪,占据我们内心深处的记忆。某英文报社正在开展以“令我难忘的人”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈令你难忘的人。
要点提示:
*Who is the person you will never forget?
*What did he/she do?
*What did you learn from him/her?
...
注意:1.短文必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数:80—100,短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。
In our lives, we may meet different people. The person I will never forget is________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
思路与解析
第一步 审和列
1.审写作元素 2.列写作要点
主题: The person
I will never forget
体裁:__记叙文__
时态: 一般现在时和
一般过去时
人称:__以第三人称为主__
第二步 扩和连
Opening:__In__our__lives,__we__may__meet__different__people.__The__person__I__will__never__forget__is__...__He's__...__He__likes__...__
Body:__About__two__years__ago,__...__noticed__that__...__
Closing:__I__will__never__forget__his__kindness__and__I__can__learn__that__the__key__to__success__is__to__be__brave__when__facing__difficulties__and__be__brave__to__ask__for__help.__
第三步 查和抄
In our lives, we may meet different people. The person I will never forget is__Mr.__Li,__my__English__teacher.__He's__a__tall__man__with__thick__glasses.__He__likes__sports__and__often__plays__football__and__basketball__with__us.__He's__humorous__and__always__makes__his__classes__lively__and__interesting.__He's__kind__but__strict__with__us.__
__About__two__years__ago,__Mr.__Li__noticed__that__I__was__worried__about__my__poor__pronunciation.__So__he__offered__me__many__suggestions__to__improve__it,__and__he__also__gave__me__every__chance__possible__to__speak__in__class.__Thanks__to__him,__my__pronunciation__has__greatly__improved.____
__I__will__never__forget__his__kindness__and__I__have__learned__that__the__key__to__success__is__to__be__brave__when__facing__difficulties__and__be__brave__to__ask__for__help.__
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