话题13 事件经历-【精彩三年】2024年中考英语书面表达配套PPT（外研版）

话题十三 　事件经历 事件经 历介绍 (天气、 时间、 地点、 人物)   rain 下雨　rainy 多雨的　snow 下雪　snowy 下雪的　sunny 晴朗的　storm 暴风雨　cloudy多云的　warm 温暖的　cold 冷的　hot 热的　cool 凉爽的　holiday/vacation假期　weekend周末　visit the science/history/art/space/nature museum 参观科技/历史/美术/太空/自然博物馆　go to the farm去农场　 go to the countryside去乡下　go to the mountains 去爬山　go to the summer camp 去夏令营　go to the beach去海滩　go to the amusement park 去游乐园　go to the zoo 去动物园　go to the water park 去水上公园　go to the old people's home去敬老院　a good place to do sth.一个做某事的好地方　a relaxing and peaceful place一个令人放松且宁静的地方　the best time to do sth.做某事的最好时机 事件经 历描述 sing 唱歌　dance 跳舞　play basketball/football/volleyball/badminton打篮球/踢足球/打排球/打羽毛球play the guitar/piano/violin/drums 弹吉他/弹钢琴/拉小提琴/敲鼓　draw 画画　play chess 下国际象棋　tell stories讲故事　go boating 去划船　go camping 去野营　go fishing去钓鱼　climb a mountain爬山　go on a trip去旅行　 be on a vacation 在度假　go skating 去滑冰　go for a walk 去散步　sit by the pool 坐在游泳池边　milk a cow 挤牛奶　 ride a horse 骑马　feed chickens 喂鸡　grow apples 种苹果　pick strawberries 摘草莓　buy some gifts 买一些礼物　do one's homework 做作业　go to the cinema 去看电影　put up a tent 搭帐篷　stay at home 待在家里　buy something special 买一些特别的东西　meet someone interesting 见有趣的人　go to the Great Wall 去长城　visit the Palace Museum 参观故宫博物院　stay up late to do sth.熬夜做某事　cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来　give out food 分发食物　come up with a plan 想出计划　put up signs 张贴标语　hand out notices 分发通知　give away 捐赠　fall asleep 入睡　wake up 醒来 事件经 历感受 popular受欢迎的　excellent极好的　relaxed 感到放松的　bored 无聊的　terrible糟糕的　hungry饿的　 enjoyable 令人愉快的　moved 感动的　unusual 不同寻常的　embarrassed尴尬的　kind of tired 有点累　completely shocked 彻底震惊的　an exciting day令人兴奋的一天　be interested in 对……感兴趣　tired but happy疲惫但开心　interesting but scary 有趣但可怕　so much/a lot of fun 如此多/很多乐趣　have fun/have a great time/enjoy oneself玩得开心　leave soft and sweet memories留下温馨且甜蜜的回忆 [介绍事件] ·Today I went on a school trip. We__visited__the__science__museum__and__it__was__really__interesting.__[用具体活动和感受扩写] ·My sister finished high school two weeks ago. As a gift, our parents took us to India. Last__weekend__was__interesting__but__scary.__[用感受扩写] ·Last__year I went to the Hangzhou National Tea Museum. It's__a__relaxing__and__peaceful__place__near__a__lake. [用时间和具体信息扩写] ·We are training harder than usual because the other team beat us last year.[用because从句扩写] ·When I was thirteen years old, a girl gave me an important gift.It__was__a__smile.[用时间状语从句和具体内容扩写] ·Even__though__all of the photos are excellent, we are sorry to say that we cannot give prizes to everyone.[用让步状语从句扩写] 1．I camped in the mountains with some friends. [用具体活动和感受扩 写] ______________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．We took the train to the museum. [用感受扩写] _______________________________________________________________ 3．I went to the Mount Taishan. [用时间和具体信息扩写] _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ I camped in the mountains with some friends.We put up the tent and cooked outside and we were tired but happy. We took the train to the museum.It was so hot on the slow train. Last month I went to the Mount Taishan with my friends. The trip was so exciting, especially when we saw the sun rising from the east. [描述经历] ·I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents. [用and连接两项活动] ·There were lots of tourists, so first of all, we had to wait in line for an hour, and then we went to the top. [用so说明结果] ·I was so tired that I went to sleep early. [用so ．.. that ．.. 表示结果] ·She passed me and then turned back.She looked at me and, without a word, smiled．[运用一系列的动作描写] ·The girl with the bright smile has become my best friend now,__and we stick together like glue.[用now作对比， 用like作比喻] ·It seemed that they were speaking not to lots of listeners but to me in person.[用not ．.. but ．..否定前者，肯定后者] ·As I grew older, my interest in radio grew.[用as从句描述过程] 4．My father and I watched a soccer game. My father and I went to the park to fly kites. [用and连接两项活动] _______________________________________________________________ ___________ My father and I watched a soccer game and went to the park to fly kites. 5．The food tastes great. [用so说明结果] ___________________________________________________ 6．My legs were tired. I wanted to stop to have a rest. [用so ．.. that ．.. 升格] ___________________________________________________________ [表达感受] ·I'm having__a__great__time__visiting__my aunt in Canada. [用have a great time doing sth.表达感受] The food tastes great, so it's popular with children. My legs were so tired that I wanted to stop to have a rest. ·All in all, it's a__great__way__to__spend a Saturday afternoon. [用a＋adj.＋way＋to do sth.表达感受] ·I am so__happy__to__see them again. [用“be＋adj.＋to do sth.”表达感受] ·What a lucky/an unlucky day! [用感叹句表达感受] 7．我和家人一起去爬山，玩得很开心。[用have a great time doing sth.表达感受] _______________________________________________________________ 8．总之，这是度过暑假的一个有意义的方法。[用a＋adj.＋way＋to do I'm having a great time going to the mountains with my family. sth.表达感受] _______________________________________________________________ 9．周末能和我最好的朋友一起去溜冰，我很兴奋。[用be＋adj.＋to do sth.表达感受] _______________________________________________________________ ___________ 10．一天的差异是多么大呀！[用感叹句表达感受] ____________________________________ All in all, it is a meaningful way to spend the summer vacation. I'm really/quite excited to go skating with my best friend on weekends. What a difference a day makes！ [介绍事件] At 9：00 a．m.yesterday, bus No.26 was going along Zhonghua Road when the driver saw an old man ①____________________________________(正躺在路边上). A woman next to him was ②_______________________(呼救). The bus driver, 24­-year­-old Wang Ping, ③______________________________________________(想都没想就停下了公交车). He got off and asked the woman what happened. She said that the man had a heart problem and should go to the hospital. Mr.Wang lying on the side of the road shouting for help stopped the bus without thinking twice knew he ④____________________________(必须赶快行动). He told the passengers that he must ⑤___________________________________(把这个男人送到医院). He expected most or all of the passengers to get off and wait for the next bus. But to his surprise, they all agreed to go with him. Some passengers helped Mr.Wang to ⑥_________________________________(把这个男人移到公交车上). [描述经历] I'm having a great time visiting my aunt in Canada. She's working here and ①___________________________________(我将要去暑期学校). I'm had to act quickly take the man to the hospital move the man onto the bus I'm going to summer school studying English and I'm __learning a lot. I'm ②____________________________________________(也拜访了我的一些老朋友). I'm so happy to see them again. It's afternoon right now, and I'm ③______________________________________________________(正坐在泳池边喝橙汁). It's warm and sunny, and it's very relaxing here. [表达感受] ①_______________(多亏了) Mr.Wang and the passengers, the man ②_________________________________________(被医生及时救活). “③__________________(令人伤心的是) many people don't want to help also visiting some of my old friends sitting by the pool and drinking orange juice Thanks to was saved by the doctors in time It's sad that others because they don't want any trouble，” says one passenger. “But the driver didn't think about himself. He ④_______________________(只考虑) saving a life.” only thought about [2023·宁波中考]为了弘扬传统文化，你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日(中国旅游日)开展了丰富多彩的文化活动(cultural activities)。假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。 注意： 1．短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3．词数80—100；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Experiences of Traditional Culture On May 19, our school organized___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When What I did What I learned Feelings in the morning visit Ningbo Museum the long history of the city ．.. at noon make Ningbo Tangyuan a symbol of family get­togethers in the afternoon ．.. ．.. 思路与解析 第一步　审　　　　　　　　　　　 体裁：记叙文 时态：以一般过去时为主 人称：以第一人称为主 内容要点：传统文化活动(①活动和所学；②活动感受) 写作框架：总—分—总　　　 第二步　列 高分范文 My Experiences of Traditional Culture On May 19, our school organized many traditional cultural activities. I was happy that I learned a lot. ①In__the__morning,__I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates ③and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts. Everyone ②was__excited__to__learn about the long history of the city. ①At__noon,__we made Ningbo Tangyuan (Dumplings). We learned it was ②a__symbol__of family get­togethers. ①In__the__afternoon,__we read many ancient local stories ③and shared them in the story­telling competition, ③learning__about__the__traditional__values__of our city. These activities have ③not__only helped me ②have__a__better__understanding__of our city, ③but__also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind. 高分点评 ①文章结构清晰，针对题目要点一一阐述， 且能按时间顺序有序描述活动内容。 ②多处使用高阶词汇，如be excited to do, a symbol of, have a better understanding of等，为文章增色不少。 ③句式结构多样，描述活动内容时两次用到and连接两个并列结构，同时，还能够用到动词现在分词作伴随状语。结尾处用not only ．.. but also ．.. 结构来表达活动意义。 假如你是李华，请你根据以下邮件信息，用英语给你的好朋友李明回复一封电子邮件。 Dear Li Hua， How is everything going with you? I heard that you held a charity sale for Children's Home with your classmates. Can you share what you exactly did and what you learned from it with me? I also want to do something meaningful like you. Thank you! Yours， Li Ming 注意：1.包含以上邮件中所给提示信息，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．词数：80—100。 思路与解析 第一步　审和列 1．审写作元素　　　　　　　　　 主题：____________________ 体裁：____________________ 时态：____________________ 人称：__________________　　 A charity sale 应用文(电子邮件) 以一般过去时为主 以第一人称为主 2.列写作要点 I'm willing to share ... Our class held a charity sale. Two days before the sale, we handed out notices to ... Then we made different things like ... When ... started to ... all the things were sold out ... Then we gave away ... From the meaningful activity, I not only develop .. but also learned ... 第二步　扩和连 Opening：____________________________ Body：　______________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ____________________________________________ ______________________________________ ____________________________________________ I'm willing to share ．.. Last month, our class held ．.. Two days before the ．.., we ．.. Then we ．... It was so much fun. When everything was ready, we started to ．.. To our surprise, all the things were ．.. Then we gave away the money we made to ．..　 Closing：______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ From the meaningful activity, I not only developed my life skills but also learned how to communicate with others well. 第三步　查和抄 ______________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Dear Li Ming， I'm willing to share my experience of having a charity sale. Last month, our class held a charity sale. Two days before the sale, we handed out notices to make our sale known by others. Then we made different things like food and toys. It was so much fun. When everything was ready, we started to sell the things. To our surprise, all the things were sold out in a short time. Then we gave away the money we made to _________________ _____________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________ _________ _________ Children's Home. From the meaningful activity, I not only developed my life skills but also learned how to communicate with others well. Looking forward to your sharing something meaningful you have done.　 Yours， Li Hua 感谢聆听，再见！ $$