第六章读后续写解题策略与训练-【初高中·衔接直通车】2024年初升高英语衔接直通车（江苏专版）

初高中衔接直通车·英语 第六章 读后续写解题策略与训练 读后续写题型解读C。 读后续写是新高考中的第二篇写作，属 1.把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力 于新写作题型。原文所提供短文词数在350 学生需要了解给定短文的主要内容，清 左右，多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议 楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通过 续写短文表现出来。 类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但故 2.语言运用的准确性和丰富性 事线索的逻辑性比较强。读后续写任务要求 期望学生在词汇和语言结构的使用方面 根据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写 准确、恰当，能够根据内容需要使用较为高级 (150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料 的词汇和语言结构。 有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。续写 3.对语篇结构的把控能力 部分分为两段。 考查学生对上下文逻辑关系的掌握情 读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合 况，希望学生续写的短文语句连贯、有序。 4.创造性思维能力 的考查形式，旨在考查学生的综合语言运用 这是对学生续写短文内容得要求，期望 能力。与应用文不同，故事续写除了要求学 学生续写的短文具有较丰富的内容。该试题 生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的 具有一定的开放性，要求学生详细和生动地 内容构思和情节衔接的能力。主要聚焦在以 描述情景、态度和感情，符合课程标准的要求 下四个方面： 和学生的能力水平。 读后续写的特征©3 根据相关规定，读后续写阅卷时按5个 2.连接成分应用得当，寻求前文与续写 档次给分。参考最高档次第五档(21~25 段段首句之间的内在联系，站在作者的角度， 分)的描述并考虑写作部分评分的其他因素， 设计并发展情节，想象要合理，情节要连贯。 可以认为一篇优秀的读后续写具备以下 3.词汇丰富高级，语法准确多变（主被动 特征： 句式、各类从句、特殊句式、非谓语动词等的 1.内容丰富充实，与所给短文融洽连贯： 使用情况灵活恰当、不拘一格、游刃有余)： 后续情节一般为故事的高潮或延续，是原作 4.词数充分，150词左右。评分细则规 者声音的延续、态度的延伸，因此，要尽量符 定少于130词的，从总分中减去2分； 合原文思路，并求得与读者的心理共鸣，让读 5.拼写准确，英式或美式拼法皆可； 者回味无穷。 6.标点合理，使用得当。 82 第二篇初高能力衔接 读后续写解题策略G3 ◆◆◆ 读后续写的过程主要包括定位、设计、初 情的真、人性的善或拼搏的美，从而凸显主 稿、核查等四个步骤，具体如下。 题，升华精神。考虑利用抒情和议论等表达 1.定位 方式使得画龙点睛之处能够表露文章深处蕴 第一个步骤，是通过阅读定位所提供语 涵的主题意蕴、思想感情或人生哲理。 言材料的核心信息，包括核心单词、短语和句 (3)灵活运用各种描写手法，以帮助打造 子等，目的是梳理内容的发展脉络和推进方 鲜活灵动的人物形象和丰富充实的情节链 向。本步骤的关键在于高效的阅读，要求学： 条。以动作描写、语言描写和心理描写为主， 生在尽可能短的时间内，基于对某种语言的： 辅之以恰当的外貌描写和环境描写。情节的 掌握，利用分析综合、分类比较、归纳演绎、抽： 推动主要靠动作描写，要完整描绘每一动作 象概括等逻辑思维技能，调动知识体中的有 的前因和后果。语言描写包括独白和对话， 关部分，去洞穿语篇的文脉肌理，积极寻找 可以反映人物情感、行为动机、或预示和推动 信息。 故事情节的发展。心理描写聚焦于在某一境 所给短文的体裁应以记叙文为主，尤其： 况下人物的内心活动，可以细腻地展示人物 要关注记叙文的篇章结构和信息重点（人物、 跌宕起伏的心路历程。外貌描写和环境描写 情节、环境、人称、描写手法、主题意蕴等)。 的使用应根据情节发展和主题表达的实际 2.设计 需要。 第二个步骤，设计出与上下文内容连贯、 3.初稿 丰富充实、自然流畅、引人入胜的情节走势。 第三个步骤，按照情节链条进行初稿的 运用上核心词（以名词、动词、形容词、副词等 撰写。此过程应注意以下几点。 内容词为主)即可，无需完整句子。在设计过 (1)分析原文语言表达方面的显著特征， 程中，应充分考虑以下几点。 观察有无直接引语、各类从句、特殊句型、非 (1)续写第一段的内容设计既要考虑与： 谓语动词等。通过模仿和创造，尽量提高与 上文的融洽衔接，同时也要考虑本段和最后 原文的协同，力求在各个语言层次（关键词、 一段开头语的呼应和衔接，而后者是容易忽 短语和句型等)的表达风格上和原文保持 视的部分。简言之，第一段的内容设计要成 一致。 功搭建本段与前文、后文的桥梁。 (2)先在头脑里组织整个句子的语法结 (2)续写第二段是文章的结尾，要关注与 构和内容走势，然后动笔书写，从而下笔流 文章开头的遥相呼应，根据具体语境弘扬感： 畅、整洁美观，避免字字艰难、反复涂改。 83 初高中衔接直通车·英语 (3)对词汇的选择务必字斟句酌、精挑细 4.核查 选。文章是语言文字编成的织锦，词汇是构 第四个步骤，核查连接词、词数、语法词 汇和标点等四个方面。核查有无连接词的使 成文章唯一的材料，是文章的色彩和音色，要 用：如无，应增添连接词，以保持上下文的衔 确保围绕主题之下的词汇使用在理性思维引 接和连贯。词数控制在150~160词范围内 导下能够丰富多彩和恰当合理。 为佳。最后通读全文核查标点和语法词汇。 读后续写专练G ◆◆◆ A : heart sank at what I read.Someone was 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落 : searching for a lost puppy near our grade 开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 school.They sounded desperate.My hand When my daughters reached the third shook.I could not ask myself to pick up the and fourth grades,I sometimes allowed phone. them to walk to and from school alone if the Instead,I pretended I hadn't seen the weather permitted.One warm spring day,a ad.I quickly put the paper aside and tried to small friend followed them home after ignore it.I never say anything about it to school.This friend had short legs and long the kids or my husband. floppy ears,with a furry coat and tiny spots By now we had named the puppy.She across her nose.She was the cutest puppy I looked like a Molly,so we called her Molly. had ever seen and my girls begged me to She followed the girls everywhere they keep her. went.When they went outside,she was one She was not more than twelve weeks step behind them.When they did old.She had no identifying marks of any housework she was there to help. sort.I didn't know what to do.I thought There was only one problem with this about running an ad in the lost and found perfect dog:my conscience(良心)was but I really didn't want to.It would break bothering me.I knew in my heart I had to the kids'hearts if someone should show up. call that number and see if our Molly was Besides,her owners should have watched the puppy they were desperately her more closely,I thought. looking for. By the end of the week she was part of 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 our family.She was very clever and good With mixed feelings,I finally picked up with the girls.The Following week the phone. something told me to check the lost and found section in the local paper.One particular ad caught my attention and my 84 第二篇初高能力衔接 Opening the door,I saw a woman with In the morning she went,but never a little girl sitting in a small wheelchair. came back-she died on the operating table.Since then Myra had been to see her mother three times,but her husband, Harold,never. The old lady was eighty today.She had B put on her best dress.Perhaps-perhaps 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落 Myra might come.After all,eighty was a 开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 special birthday,another decade lived or It was the old lady's birthday.She got tolerated just as you chose to look at it. up early to be ready for the post.From the Even if Myra did not come,she would send second floor flat she could see the postman a present.The old lady was sure of that. when he came down the street,and a little Two spots of colour brightened her cheeks. boy,Johnnie,brought up her letters from She was excited like a child.She would the ground floor on the rare occasions when enjoy her day! anything came. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Today she was sure there would be Now,she stood by the window, something.Myra wouldn't forget her watching. mother's birthday,even if she seldom wrote at other times.Of course Myra was busy. Her husband had been made an important position in the government and Myra herself had got a medal for her work for the aged. The old lady was proud of Myra,but Enid was the daughter she loved.Enid had Almost unwillingly she tore the never married,but had seemed happy to live envelope open. with her mother and teach in a primary school round the corner. One evening,however,Enid said, "I've arranged for Mrs.Morrison to look after you for a few days,Mother. Tomorrow I have to go into hospital-just a minor operation.I'll be home. 85初高中衔接直通车·英语 er things beneficial to us.It is believed that the her daughter,who was left crippled for life in an club can make our campus life colorful and reward- accident..“Lucy gave her a reason to live,”she ing.There goes the plan. choked.Suddenly I felt relieved.As they pulled It is arranged that we will see English films in out of the driveway,I smiled,knowing I had done the auditorium on Tuesday evening.Apart from the right thing-that puppy was exactly where she that,there is going to be an English debate or dis- belonged. cussion on Saturday evening;yet,the specific top- B ics haven't been settled.If you have wonderful ide- 【参考范文】 as and suggestions,please let us know. Now,she stood by the window,watching. B The postman turned round the corner on his bicy- 【参考范文】 cle.Her heart beat fast.Then clatter(咔嗒声)， How to Keep Healthy clatter up the stairs.Finally,she got her post-a Nowadays,more and more people are con- closed envelope,in Myra's writing.The old lady cerned about their health.Different people have felt a sharp pain of disappointment.There was no different ways to keep healthy. parcel for her!Maybe the parcel was too large to In my opinion,there are basic principles to come by letter post.That was it.It would come keep healthy,such as a reasonable diet,regular later by parcel post.She said to herself.She must work and rest time,appropriate exercise and a be patient. good mood.On the one hand,I think a reasonable Almost unwillingly she tore the envelope diet can keep us healthy;appropriate exercise can open.Folded in the card was a piece of paper. strengthen our body and keep diseases away from Written on the card was a message under the prin- us.On the other hand,keeping a good mood is al- ted Happy Birthday-Buy yourself something so essential for us to keep fit. nice with the cheque,Myra and Harold.The In short,we have different methods to keep cheque moved quickly to and fro in the air to the healthy.If we know the importance of health,we floor like a bird with a broken wing.Slowly the can find good ways to keep fit. old lady struggled to pick it up.Her present!Her 第六章读后续写解题策略与训练 lovely present!With trembling fingers she tore it 读后续写专练 into little bits. 第三篇 【参考范文】 With mired feelings,I finally picked up the 高一入学成效检测卷 phone.Secretly I was praying no one would an- 第一部分 阅读 swer,but a woman did.As I described the dog to 第一节 her in detail,her voice shook with excitement and she wanted to come right over.Within minutes I 【语篇导读】本文是一篇应用文。文章介绍了四 heard a vehicle pull up at the driveway and some 个美国最受欢迎的冲浪目的地。 footsteps stop at the door.Head cradled in my 1.C细节理解题。根据第二段的最后一句“So plan- hands and heart hammering,a thousand thoughts ning a visit and joining in the popular Summer Vibes crossed my mind:I could pretend I wasn't home or Festival for some beach fun every September can be tell her,"I'm sorry,you have the wrong address." your best choice.(所以，每年9月计划一次游览，参 But it was too late:the bell rang and Molly was 加受欢迎的夏日氛围节，享受一些海滩乐趣是你最 barking. 好的选择。)”可知，九月是冲浪者在特拉华州享受海 Opening the door,I saw a woman with a lit- 滩乐趣的最佳时间。故选C。 tle girl sitting in a small wheelchair.One look at 2.C细节理解题。根据第四段的句子“Be sure to Molly,and the little girl's face lit up."Here,Lu- come in winter with a wet suit or you can rent cy,”she yelled..“Come here!”Molly instantly o- one,while summer brings much warmer water beyed,wagging her tail wildly.My heart sank. temperatures.(一定要在冬天带着潜水服来，或 Seemingly sensing my feelings,the woman ex- 者你可以租一套，而夏天的水温要高得多。)”可 plained that Lucy was more than just a puppy to 知，冬天去罗卡威时你能租一套潜水服。故选C。 104