Unit2 Numbers 课时5 写作-【宝典训练】2023-2024学年八年级上册英语高效课堂课件(沪教牛津版)

Unit 2　Numbers 课时5 写作 目 录 01 预习感知 02 课时精讲 03 课时过关 01 预习感知 朗读下列文章，组内讨论一下如何描述图表。 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 Recently we've made a survey of Sky English Club．It can be seen from the graph that fifty-one percent of the students want to practise their spoken English by using the Internet．Twenty-five percent like watching English movies, which can make their holiday life better．Eighteen percent would like to read more English classics because they are interested in them．Six percent hope that they can learn more foreign culture, such as good manners and western festivals． 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 As far as I know, it's very helpful to improve English by learning English songs．Maybe we can invite foreigners to introduce good ways to learn English．I'm sure all of us will have fun in Sky English Club. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 02 课时精讲 熟记本单元常用写作句型或短语。 1．make a survey of… 做了关于……的调查 2．It can be seen from the graph that… 从图表可以看出…… 图表类书面表达，需要学生分析图上的数字分别表示什么内容。这是一份调查报告，所以句子的时态应该用一般现在时。首先列出提纲，然后再用一些连词，使用高级词汇和句式来增加文章的亮点。此篇写作主要用第三人称和一般现在时来表达。在写作的过程中，注意句子与句子之间的衔接，语句要通顺，词汇要书写无误。 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 03 课时过关 请根据以下交通事故因素(factors)统计图表，以“Major causes of traffic accidents”为题，用英语写一篇简短的分析报告。 注意：1．报告需逐条陈述上面 pie chart (饼图) 和 bar chart (柱状图) 中呈现的主要内容。(至少 5 点) 2．提出你对交通安全的看法。(至少 2 点) 3．词数： 80 词左右，所给标题不计入总词数。 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 写作方法指导与操练 第一步：确定时态，简单介绍，图表展示的是什么： Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspaper, TV news and so on．As a result, it's important for us to analyze the major causes．The following are two reports： 第二步：描述饼图的结论： According to the pie chart，________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ there are mainly three factors: 85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is road environment factors. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 写作方法指导与操练 第三步：描述柱状图的结论。 Another bar chart points that ____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第四步：我的分析。 In my opinion, _______________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ◆联想：写作本篇作文需要的词汇和短语 reach; drop to; increase; rise to; rebound to there are 4 reasons to cause it, including speeding which is 50%, drunk driving which holds 10%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 15%. everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life．At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 【我的完整作品——要求：书写美观，可适当发挥】 Major causes of traffic accidents ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspaper, TV news and so on．As a result, it's important for us to analyze the major causes．The following are two reports： 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors: 85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is road environment factors．Another bar chart points that there are 4 reasons to cause it, including speeding which is 50%, drunk driving which holds 10%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 15%. In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life．At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 本节内容到此结束！ logo $$ Unit 2 Numbers 课时5 写作 【课时过关】 【写作方法指导与操练】 第二步： there are mainly three factors: 85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is road environment factors. 第三步：there are 4 reasons to cause it, including speeding which is 50%, drunk driving which holds 10%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 15%. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回首页 第四步：everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回首页 [我的完整作品] One possible version： Major causes of traffic accidents Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspaper, TV news and so on. As a result, it's important for us to analyze the major causes. The following are two reports： 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回首页 According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors: 85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is road environment factors. Another bar chart points that there are 4 reasons to cause it, including speeding which is 50%, drunk driving which holds 10%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 15%. In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回首页 本节内容到此结束！ logo $$