读后续写--勇敢的舞台：玛丽的自我超越之旅讲义 -湖南天壹名校联盟2024届高三入学摸底考试英语试题

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the first and second grades, I was extremely shy. I had friends, but it just wasn't in my personality to be very outgoing, even if I knew someone well. I was even quieter with strangers, and so I wasn't very good at meeting new people. I was afraid that I would do or say something wrong. So in our school's annual grand play, I usually sat in a secluded（僻静的） corner to watch the performance alone. I hoped to sit in the background and watch the actors sweat in front of all those pairs of eyes. One day in the third grade, my teacher Mrs. Sally called me into her office and said, "Oh, Mary, you're great at memorizing things, and you have such a sweet personality. Perfect for Jenny!" But I bowed my head and dared not speak. The teacher saw this and then said, "Of course, plenty of girls would love the role, and I could find somebody else. But I hope you could try it for me. I had you in mind for Jenny while writing the play! If you really don't want to, I won't force you. It's your choice. " My mind was spinning faster than the windmill（风车） on the school playground. Mrs. Sally, whom I loved and admired, wanted me to play this role. She believed in me. My eyes moved across the room to a poster I had never noticed before. It showed a shooting star and read, "If you reach for the stars, you might at least grab a piece of the moon. " I looked into Mrs. Sally's shining blue eyes and said, "Okay, I'll try. " I realized it was time to throw off my shy mask and show the world who I really was. In the following five months, the teacher taught me how to set, put on makeup, memorize lines, create costumes and so on. Gradually, I mastered my lines and songs. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The big day came at last. _____________________________________________________________ At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check-up and noticed my nervousness. _____________________________________________________________ 文章梗概： 玛丽是一个天性害羞的学生，老师莎莉夫人鼓励她走出舒适区，在校园剧中饰演珍妮一角。尽管最初感到害怕，玛丽被一张励志海报和老师对她的信任所鼓舞。在接下来的五个月里，她学习了各种表演技巧，并逐渐增强了自信。在表演当天，凭借老师的支持和自己的决心，玛丽克服了舞台恐惧，成功地完成了表演，这标志着她个人成长和转变的重要时刻。 本文的故事山结构如下： 引子（Exposition）： 描述了玛丽在小学低年级时的极度害羞，她不善于与人交往，尤其是在陌生人面前。 上升阶段（Rising Action）： 0. 玛丽通常独自一人在角落里观看学校的年度大戏，她害怕成为众人注意的焦点。 0. 第三年级时，老师莎莉夫人邀请玛丽参与戏剧表演，并给了她一个角色。 高潮（Climax）： 玛丽在老师的鼓励下，经过激烈的内心斗争，决定接受挑战，参与表演。 高潮后的发展（Aftermath of Climax）： 玛丽在接下来的几个月里学习表演技能，包括记忆台词、化妆、制作服装等，并逐渐掌握了自己的角色 下降阶段（Falling Action）： 表演当天，玛丽感到紧张，但在老师和同学们的支持下，她准备克服自己的恐惧。 结局（Resolution）： 玛丽在舞台上成功地完成了表演，她克服了害羞，实现了个人成长和自我发现。 主题（Theme）：故事的主题是勇气、成长和自我超越。通过玛丽的故事，展示了面对挑战时内心的斗争和最终的突破。 续写要点： 第一段：表演前的准备和内心斗争 · 描述玛丽在表演当天的准备过程，包括化妆、穿上戏服以及在后台的最后排练。 · 叙述玛丽感到的紧张和焦虑，以及她如何回想起老师的话和自己的练习来安抚情绪。 · 强调玛丽在后台看到观众席逐渐填满时的感受，以及她如何通过深呼吸来控制紧张情绪。 第二段：表演过程和成功克服害羞 · 叙述表演开始时的情景，玛丽如何鼓起勇气走上舞台，面对观众。 · 描述玛丽在表演中的表现，她如何将台词和歌曲表现得淋漓尽致，以及观众的反应。 · 强调表演结束后，观众的热烈掌声和玛丽感受到的成就感和自信，以及她如何意识到自己已经克服了害羞。 故事主题： · 故事的主题是个人成长和克服内心的恐惧。玛丽的故事展示了通过勇气和决心，每个人都能够超越自我限制，实现自我突破。 One possible version: The big day came at last. I jogged all the way to the backstage of the school hall. Cameras were lighting up in all directions. Looking back on the five months of practice， I seemed to have confidence in myself. I found a new person inside me， a much more daring and outgoing person who had been hidden all along. However， when I was about to go on stage， my heart was pounding so hard that my throat tightened and my knees . At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check-up and noticed my nervousness. She placed a hand on my shoulder, her touch a comforting presence in the whirlwind of my anxiety. "Mary," she whispered, "the stage is just another room, and the audience is just a crowd of friends who can't wait to see what you have to offer." Her belief in me was like a lighthouse in a storm, guiding me through my fears. I nodded, took a deep breath, and as the cue sounded, I stepped onto the stage with newfound confidence. The moment the first words left my lips, the shyness that had once bound me melted away, replaced by the joy of performance and the thrill of connecting with the audience. 下水文1 The big day came at last. The excitement in the auditorium was palpable as the audience took their seats, the murmur of their conversations filling the air. My heart pounded in my chest like a drum, but with each deep breath, I felt a growing sense of determination. As I stood backstage, I could hear the whispers of my classmates and the rustling of the curtains. The moment I had been both dreading and eagerly awaiting was finally here. I thought of Mrs. Sally's faith in me and the countless hours of practice that had led to this point. With a final check of my costume and a quiet recitation of my opening lines, I steeled myself for the spotlight. At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check-up and noticed my nervousness. She approached with a gentle smile, her eyes warm with understanding and encouragement. "Mary," she said softly, "remember, this stage is your canvas, and you are the artist. Show them the talent you've been hiding." Her words, like a balm, soothed my jitters. She gave my hand a reassuring squeeze before taking her place in the wings. As the lights dimmed and the curtain rose, I stepped forward, no longer the shy girl in the corner but a performer ready to share her story with the world. The applause at the end of my performance was music to my ears, and I knew I had taken the first step in a journey of self-discovery and growth. 下水文2 The big day came at last. The air was electric with the murmurs of the audience as they settled into their seats, the scent of popcorn mingling with the anticipation of the performance. My heart thrummed in my chest, a rhythm that matched the beat of my impending debut. I could feel the eyes of my fellow cast members on me, their silent support as tangible as the script in my hands. At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check-up and noticed my nervousness. Her eyes met mine, a mirror reflecting the same excitement and vulnerability. "Mary," she said, her voice a soothing balm to my frayed nerves, "this is your moment. Embrace it. You've got the wings; now, it's time to fly." Her words were a spark, igniting the courage within me. As the orchestra began the opening notes, I took my place center stage, ready to shed my cocoon of shyness and take flight into the role of Jenny. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$