Unit 2 Morals and Virtues 读后续写作业设计-2023-2024学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第三册

Book 3 Unit 2 Morals and Virtues读后续写作业设计 I 课文素材库 微技能 语料 出处 动作描写 1. Thinking of all the people still in need of help, Dr Lin opened a private clinic. 2. The new People’s Republic China saw Dr Lin Qiaozhi playing a key role. 3. He crashed into the stone, spilling the milk everywhere. 4. After a while, a group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head. 5. I took her suitcase and gave her my arm. 6. Sometimes she asked me to just slow down while she sat staring into the darkness, saying nothing. 1. Page 16 Para 4 Line 3 2. Page 16 Para 5 Line 1 3. Page 20 Para 3 Line 1 4. Page 20 Para 4 Line 1 5. Page 70 Para 3 Line 1 6. Page 70 Para 10 Line 3 场景描写 When I arrived, the building was completely dark except for one light in a window. Page 70 Para 1 Line 2 外貌描写 A small woman in her 80s stood before me. Page 70 Para 2 Line 2 心理描写 1. “Why should girls learn so much？Finding a good husband should be their final goal！” her brother complained, thinking of the high tuition fees. 2. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. 3. The king was in despair. 1. Page 16 Para 2 Line 2 2. Page 20 Para 4 Line3 3. Page 20 Para 5 Line2 II 语言训练场 汉译英 1. 除了罗莎，谁会想得到那种事？(think of) Who but Rosa could think of something like that? 2. 看到他如此糟蹋自己的生命真让人心碎。(see sb. doing sth.) It's heartbreaking to see him wasting his life like this. 3. 货车失控撞上了一辆公共汽车的尾部。(crash into) A truck went out of control and crashed into the back of a bus. 4. 覆水难收。(spill) It's no use crying over spilt milk. 5. 举起你的手机，然后盯住它的前置摄像头一秒钟就可以解锁。(stare into) Hold your cellphone up and stare into its front-facing camera for a second to unlock it. 6. 小心台阶，做好准备，因为很黑。(completely dark) Mind the stairs and be prepared because it's completely dark. 7. 一个骑着灰马的小个子男人出现了。(small) A small man on a grey horse appeared. 8. 叶芝结婚时已50多岁。(in sb’s 50s) Yeats was in his 50s when he married. 9. 又嚷又叫了一个小时后，她流着泪走了出来。(in tears) After shouting and screaming for an hour she walked out in tears. 10. 他绝望地放弃了斗争。(in despair) He gave up the struggle in despair. III 美文体验馆 Seven Dollars and a Bag of Cookies Forty years seems like a long time to remember the name of an acquaintance. I have forgotten the name of an old lady who was a customer on my paper route when I was a twelve-year-old boy, back in 1959. Yet it seems like just yesterday that she gave me a lesson in forgiveness that I can only hope to pass on to someone else someday. I really understood the importance of honesty, which could make you admit your mistake bravely. I was a newspaper boy then. I could earn a little money by sending paper to my neighbors. I was busy in the morning while I could enjoy the leisure time during the afternoon. On a Saturday afternoon, a friend and I were throwing rocks onto the roof of the old lady’s house from a hidden place in her backyard. The object of our play was to observe how the rocks changed to missiles as they rolled to the roof’s edge and shot out into the yard like comets falling from the sky. I found myself a perfectly smooth rock and sent it for a ride. However, the stone was too smooth. It slipped from my hand as I let it go and headed straight for a small window in the old lady’s house. At the sound of broken glass, we took off from the old lady’s yard faster than any of our missiles that had flown off her roof. I was too scared of getting caught that first night to be concerned about the old lady with the broken window. A few days later, however, when I was sure that I hadn’t been discovered, I started to feel guilty for her misfortune. She still greeted me with a smile each day when I gave her the paper, but I was no longer able to feel comfortable in her presence. I made up my mind that I would save my paper delivery money. ________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ The next day, I handed the old lady her paper and was able to return the warm smile that I was receiving from her. ___________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 主题语境 人与自我 文章出处 2019重庆大学版英语必修第三册Unit 2 Honesty and Care 的Reading, Thinking and Analysing部分，按照高考读后续写试题的要求，略有修改。 词数 正文英文词数311+7（标题），续写第一段首句13个单词，续写第二段首句24个单词。 What 故事脉络 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1) I will never forget the lesson I learned forty years ago that honesty can make one admit his mistake bravely. Build-up (Para.2) As a newspaper boy, I was throwing rocks with a friend on a Saturday afternoon after finishing sending newspaper in the morning. Climax (Para.3) I broke an old lady’s window and escaped, but it seems that she didn’t know what I had done. Resolution (续写第一段) I made up my mind that I would save my paper delivery money. …… Ending (续写第二段) The next day, I handed the old lady her paper and was able to return the warm smile that I was receiving from her. …… Why 故事主题 直面错误，勇于承担，获得谅解。 How 写作手法 第一人称、记叙、描写 人物分析 “我” the old lady I was busy in the morning… 说明作者勤劳。 She still greeted me with a smile each day when I gave her the paper… 女士待人友善 At the sound of broken glass, we took off from the old lady’s yard… 犯错后拔腿就跑，说明作者很害怕。 … I started to feel guilty for her misfortune. 虽然没被发现，但作者很内疚。 场景 女士房子的前面女士的家门口 语言风格 平实质朴 含蓄隽永 幽默风趣 伏笔/照应 Title: seven dollars和a bag of cookies指什么？ 标题提到了7美元和一袋饼干，可以是作者连同7美元一块给了那位女士，也可以是这一袋饼干是那位女士回馈给作者的，因为作者毕竟还只是一个12岁的孩子。 Para 1: Yet it seems like just yesterday that she gave me a lesson in forgiveness that I can only hope to pass on to someone else someday.这里的forgiveness说明什么？ 这里的forgiveness暗示了作者最后得到了这位女士的原谅。 Para 1: I really understood the importance of honesty, which could make you admit your mistake bravely.以及续写第一段的首句I made up my mind that I would save my paper delivery money.说明了作者会怎么做？ 作者决定要把自己送报纸的钱存下来，那肯定就是要赔偿那位年老女士的窗玻璃。 谋篇布局 续写第一段 Q1: Why did I decide to save money? How much money should I save? What would I do to save the money? Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation? Did the author save enough money? How will the author return to money to the old lady? 问题 素材 功能 Q1 I felt guilty, so I decided to save my paper delivery money to release my sense of guilt. 心理描写表现作者内心活动 动词不定式作目的状语 I didn’t know how much repairing a window would cost, maybe 7 dollars is enough. 现在分词作主语使句子更加精炼 I got up earlier every morning in order to deliver more newspapers. 具体动作描写推进情节发展 I even helped my friends to deliver his newspapers for more money. 副词even的使用增强语气 Q2 Several weeks later, I saved the seven dollars that I calculated would cover the cost of her window. 照应标题 定语从句增加细节表达 I put the money in an envelope with a note explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window and hoped that the seven dollars would cover the cost of repairing it. 动作描写推进情节发展 现在分词作后置定语增加细节表达 I knocked the door and waited. The old lady opened door confusedly and noticed that it was me. She was a bit surprised but still smiled at me as usual. 动作链推动情节发展，结合表达情绪的形容词和副词反应人物情感 谋篇布局 续写第二段 Q3: Why was I able to return the old lady’s warm smile the next day? Q4: How will the woman react to the author’s behavior? 问题 素材 功能 Q3 I returned the money to the old lady and I felt less guilty. 心理描写+比较级，表达更具层次 I felt the long lost freedom of looking straight into the old lady’s eyes. 头韵修辞使表达更有节奏感 Q4 She thanked me and gave me a bag of cookie. 照应标题 She returned the money to me and said, “I have known it was you, because you don’t dare to see my eyes every time you send me the paper. I’m very proud of your honesty.” 语言描写更直观地表达人物的特性 【素材积累】 Para 1 1. acquaintance n. 相识 2. I have forgotten the name of an old lady who was a customer on my paper route when I was a 3. twelve-year-old boy, back in 1959. 定语从句 4. admit your mistake bravely 勇敢地承认你的错误 Para 2 1. leisure time 休闲时光 2. The object of our play was to observe how the rocks changed to missiles as they rolled to the roof’s edge and shot out into the yard like comets falling from the sky. 修辞格 Simile（明喻） Para 3 It slipped from my hand as I let it go and headed straight for a small window in the old lady’s house. 并列谓语 【参考范文】 I made up my mind that I would save my paper delivery money. Three weeks later I had the seven dollars that I calculated would cover the cost of her window. I put the money in an envelope with a note explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window and hoped that the seven dollars would cover the cost of repairing it. I waited until dark, went to the old lady’s house, and put the envelope through the letter slot in her door. Then, I couldn’t wait for the freedom of, once again, looking straight into the old lady’s eyes. (88 words) The next day, I handed the old lady her paper and was able to return the warm smile that I was receiving from her. She thanked me for the paper and said, “Here, I have something for you.” It was a bag of cookies. I thanked her and ate the cookies as I continued on my route. After several cookies, I felt an envelope and pulled it out of the bag. When I opened the envelope, I was surprised. Inside was the seven dollars and a short note that said, “I’m proud of you.” (70 words) IV 技能锻造营 Metaphor（暗喻） 1. 定义 暗喻一词源于希腊语，原意为“用表示别的事物的词语来描述心中的事物”。 暗喻是明喻的浓缩和简化。暗喻不用比喻词，因此被称作“高度浓缩了的明喻”。 暗喻的形式可以简缩为：甲是乙。 2. 作用 暗喻修辞手法的修辞功能是可把所要表达的内容说得生动、形象，给人以鲜明的深刻印象，根据事物的相似点，用具体、浅显、常见的事物来打比方，对生疏深奥的事物进行解释，帮助深入理解。 3. 用法 The world is a stage. 世界就是舞台。 Some people are seeking the bubble reputation every minute. 有些人每时每刻都在追求瞬间即逝的名利。 The tree of love must be refreshed and watered from time to time with sweet words and oaths. 爱情指数必须时常用甜言蜜语和誓言来浇灌。 At last he felt a ray of hope. 最后，他感觉到有一丝希望。 4. 实践 英译汉 (1) Failure is the mother of success. (2) Nobody but a dog would do such a thing. (3) He had been a pig about money. (4) The man has got the brain of a donkey. (5) The army knifed into the town. （1）失败乃成功之母。 （2）只有衣冠禽兽才会做出这样的事来。 （3）他对钱贪得无厌。 （4）那人笨得像头驴。 （5）军队像一把剪刀直插那个城镇。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$