2024年浙江省中职英语一轮复习写作大作文素材与思路

大作文 3.1 审题三事项 a.英文指令 b.图画信息 c.文字说明 如何避免跑题：图画信息与文字说明相结合，确定主题（多个均可） 3.2 图画作文思路 首段：图画描述 中间段：寓意阐述（1-2段均可） 尾段：建议+评论+展望等 3.3 精讲 首段：These are two simple but enlightening drawings. Inside a huge warm house, there is a little and delicate flower, growing vigorously and blossoming, with the house protecting it from the outside severe weather. Although it seems quite healthy and strong in the house, this plant withers quickly after it is put in the rain, with its petals falling in the wind. Finally, several Chinese characters can be noticed, which say that flowers in the greenhouse cannot stand the wind and rain. 二段：The contemporary Chinese families are characterized by “one family, one child”, and such a scene above can be associated with a host of parents and their kids in reality. Admittedly, an increasing number of parents, now, prepare almost everything for their children, such as foods, clothes, 图画描述6种手法： ①介词短语表环境 ②there be引出人/物 ③ving表伴随 ④with结构表身上或周围的事物 ⑤although引导让步状语表反差 ⑥被动&定从解释文字 houses, tuition, marriage and even future jobs. This phenomenon is particularly worth concerning for the reason that father and mothers pay excessive attention to youngsters' comfort and enjoyment, ignoring the significance of independence for the young. It is parents' overprotection that causes young people to build up inadequatecompetence or confidence to face the society. 三段：However，independence，to my understanding，can be likened to a journey leading to success. As a significant quality, independence may bring teenagers power, arouse their enthusiasm for life and help them win in the future social competition. Unfortunately, some parents' too much love, like the greenhouse, has constituted an obstacle that hinders their children's growth. 尾段：Hence, the society as a whole should foster a positive atmosphere to criticize parents’ blind love.Furthermore, it is advisable for parents to offer their kids freedom and opportunities to grow independently. To conclude, all parents should bear in mind that they cannot protect their kidsfor a lifetime. 首段：这是一副简单但具有讽刺性的漫画。在一个足球场的中央，有一个可怜的老人，蜷缩着像一个球一样，他的三个儿子和小女儿分别站在各自的大门前。 This is a simple but ironic drawing. On/In the center of a football pitch, there is a pathetic old man, crouching/curling up like a ball, with his three sons and little daughter standing in front of their gates respectively. 尽管这位父亲有4个孩子，但没有一个人愿意照顾他。 Although this aged father has four adult children, none of them look after him. 最后，若干文字可以被注意到，其内容是：养老足球赛 Finally, several Chinese characters can be noticed, which say that this is “a football game” of refusing the aged. 中间段：幸福和谐的家庭突出特征在于成年子女对老人的爱和尊重，但是上述场景却能联系到现实中很多无助的老人 Happy and harmonious families are characterized by grown-up children’s love and respect for the elderly, but such a scene above can be associated with a host of helpless senior citizens in reality. 不得不承认，一些老人，如今，依然生活在各种痛苦之中，例如贫穷、疾病和孤独。这种现象非常值得关注因为他们的子女可能过于关注自己的舒适和享受，忽略了年迈的爸妈。 Admittedly, some aged people, now, still live in a variety of as poverty, disease/illness and loneliness. This phenomenon is particularly worth concerning for the reason that their 老=old/senior/ elderly/aged 人=people/citizens/ parents/fathers and mothers children may pay excessive attention to their own comfort and enjoyment, ignoring their old fathers and mothers. 正是他们冷漠态度导致老人没有享受到健康、幸福和快乐。 It is their cold or indifferent attitudes that cause the senior not to enjoy any health, happiness or pleasure/joy. 事实上，年迈的父母需要子女的关心和爱，这会带给他们力量，会激发他们对生活的热爱，并帮助他们享受幸福晚年。 As a matter of fact, aged parents need their children' care and love, which can bring them power, arouse their enthusiasm for life and help them enjoy the happy twilight. 尾段：因此，整个社会应该营造一种积极氛围去尊老、爱老和保护老人 Hence/Accordingly/Therefore, (the) society as a whole should foster a positive atmosphere to love, respect and protect the aged/senior/elderly. 而且，成年子女都应该挤时间去陪伴父母，无论他们多忙。 Furthermore, it is advisable for adult children to spare the time to accompany their parents, no matter how busy they are. 总之，每个人都应该牢记：没有父母的养育，我们无法长大成人。 To conclude, everyone should bear in mind that without parents' breeding/supporting/efforts, we cannot grow up. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$