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09 Unit1 书面表达15篇 1．假设你是李平，请你对澳大利亚朋友Tom的邮件进行回复。可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 To: Li Ping@ mail.com Subject: Hey, Happy New Year! Hi Li Ping, This winter holiday, I will be in Zhejiang, your hometown. I can’t wait! But I know little about it. Could you please share with me about one or two popular travel places in Zhejiang? And tell me the reasons. If I go there, is there anything I should pay attention to? I am so excited about the trip. Wish you all the best! Tom 注意：(1)邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥： (2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3)词数80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 To: Tom From: Li Ping Hi Tom, How exciting! Welcome to Zhejiang. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe you’ll have an unforgettable trip here. Li Ping 【答案】例文： To: Tom From: Li Ping Hi Tom, How exciting! Welcome to Zhejiang. Zhejiang Province locates in the south of China. If you come to Zhejiang, Hangzhou must be your first place to visit, because it is one of the most famous tourist cities in China, not only for its natural beauty, but also for its history. There are so many tourist attractions in the city like the West Lake. You can go to the West Lake to feel its beauty. Hangzhou is also famous for its silk and tea products. You can go to the Hangzhou Silk City to buy silk articles. And you can also to go the National Tea Museum to have some Chinese tea. In winter, it is not too cold but wet in Hangzhou, so bring some warm clothes with you. I believe you’ll have an unforgettable trip here.     Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封邮件； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； ③ 提示：注意根据所给邮件中的问题进行写作，注意写作格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，表示欢迎到浙江； 第二步，介绍值得去的景点； 第三步，说明注意的事情并结尾。 [亮点词汇] ① not only…but also不仅……而且…… ②be famous for因……而著名 [高分句型] ① If you come to Zhejiang, Hangzhou must be your first place to visit, because it is one of the most famous tourist cities in China, not only for its natural beauty, but also for its history. （条件状语从句+原因状语从句） ② In winter, it is not too cold but wet in Hangzhou, so bring some warm clothes with you.（并列句） 2．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Alex写信向你询问游览义乌最好的时节，请你根据表格信息，谈谈你的看法。 内容要点 写作参考 time weather place activities March, … cool, … … taste brown sugar, visit markets, … 注意： 1.文中必须包含所给出的全部内容要点，可适当发挥（写作参考供选择使用）； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3.词数：80词左右，正文首句和尾句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Alex, Glad to hear from you. I’m happy that you’re interested in visiting Yiwu. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to showing you around when you are here! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Alex, Glad to hear from you. I’m happy that you’re interested in visiting Yiwu. Let me introduce it to you. The city is famous for hosting the world’s largest wholesale market, famous for its commodities like small commodities, jewelry, and daily necessities. March is a good time for sightseeing because the weather is neither too cold nor too hot. You can go to Fotang Ancient Town and Jiming Pavilion to experience the city’s rich cultural heritage. If you like shopping, you can go to Yiwu International Trade City where you can buy anything you want. As for delicious food, you can taste brown sugar and Donghe meat pie. Additionally, you can drink Wu Yue tea, which has been produced for over 1,000 years. I’m looking forward to showing you around when you are here! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇应用文， 为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要有遗漏，介绍自己的家乡义乌，适当增加细节，突出写作的重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，承接开头，引出主题；   第二步，具体介绍义乌的天气、景点、美食等情况； 第三步，最后书写结尾，表达对笔友的欢迎。 [亮点词汇]   ①is famous for因……而出名 ②neither…nor…既不……也不…… ③Additionally此外 ④look forward to期待 ⑤show sb. around带某人参观 [高分句型]   ①March is a good time for sightseeing because the weather is neither too cold nor too hot.（because引导的原因状语从句）   ②Additionally, you can drink Wu Yue tea, which has been produced for over 1,000 years.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ③I’m looking forward to showing you around when you are here!（when引导的时间状语从句） 3．假如你是安徽青阳的李华，你的英国朋友Emma想要在中国新年期间来青阳和你感受新年，同时也游览一下九华山。请你写一封邮件告诉Emma关于你即将带领她游览的计划和攻略。 请根据提示内容写一篇 60—80 词左右的短文，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 1. 首先上九华山，爬天台峰，参观寺庙，买纪念品。 2. 再游览特色小镇，品尝青阳地方美食。 3. 最后漫步青阳繁华街道，感受中国的新年。 提示词：Mount Jiuhua九华山,  Tiantai Peak 天台峰,  temple寺庙---temples(复数),   souvenir---souvenirs (复数) 纪念品 Dear Emma, I’m quiet excited that you will come here to spend time with me at Chinese Spring Festive. To have a good trip here, I’ll show you traveling plans and arrangements. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your arrival. See you then! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Emma, I’m quite excited that you will come here to spend time with me at Chinese Spring Festival. To have a good trip here, I’ll show you traveling plans and arrangements. Once you arrive, we are going to Mount Jiuhua. After climbing down the Tiantai Peak, we are going to visit some famous temples with many interesting stories. When we are about to leave, you can buy some nice souvenirs you like. I know you are a food lover. In the following days, we are going to visit some small special towns nearby. I promise you will taste different kinds of local food in each town. Finally, the Chinese Spring Festival will be around the corner. It’ll be the best time to hang out on the busy streets in Qingyang to experience our new year. Amazing Chinese lunar new year is waiting for you! I’m looking forward to your arrival. See you then! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，带对方去爬九华山； 第二步，去游览特色小镇，品尝青阳地方美食； 第三步，最后漫步青阳繁华街道，感受中国的新年。 [亮点词汇] ① be about to do即将做 ② different kinds of不同种类的 ③ hang out闲逛 [高分句型] When we are about to leave, you can buy some nice souvenirs you like.（when引导的时间状语从句） 4．假如你叫李华，你的笔友Tony打算来中国，请你向他介绍一些有关于中国的事情。 要求： 1. 书写认真，卷面整洁，语言准确； 2. 提示内容全部用上，可适当发挥。 1. 游览中国最好的时间是在秋天，你可以带上相机到处游览； 2. 冬天你可以去吉林滑冰，湖上有厚厚的冰； 3. 中国人用筷子吃食物。在中国，人们用双手接受礼物； 4. 有很多关于春节的习俗。例如，人们在大年初一禁止打扫卫生； 5. 在公交车站，人们排队等候公交车； 6. 希望你尽快来中国。 Dear Tony, I’m glad that you will come to visit China. Now, let me tell you something in China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tony, I’m glad that you will come to visit China. Now, let me tell you something in China. The best time to visit China is in autumn. You can travel around with your camera. You can go skating in Jilin in winter. There is thick ice on the lake. We Chinese use chopsticks to eat food. In China, people accept a gift with both hands. There are many traditions about the Spring Festival. For example, people mustn’t do any cleaning on the first day of the Spring Festival. At the bus stop, people stand in line and wait for the bus. I hope you can come to China soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意书写工整、避免语法错误并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。寒暄之后点明信件主题内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“最佳旅游时间、传统习俗和日常生活”等方面详细叙述； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望笔友尽快来中国。 [亮点词汇] ①travel around 游历 ②go skating 去滑冰 ③for example 例如 ④on the first day 在第一天 [高分句型] The best time to visit China is in autumn.（不定式作定语） 5．假设你是李华，寒假将至，你的笔友 Kevin 打算来庐江旅行，请根据表格中的内容给他推荐一些好的去处吧。 The best Name Reasons Park Huanbi Park close to the hotels, beautiful flowers Theater Lujiang Theater big screens, comfortable seats Shopping mall Fangyuanhui fashionable clothes, good service and delicious food 写作要求： 1. 词数80—100。 （开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数） 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Dear Kevin, I am happy to know that you are taking a trip to Lujiang soon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you come to Lujiang, I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Kevin, I am happy to know that you are taking a trip to Lujiang soon. First of all, I suggest you go to Huanbi Park. It is close to the hotels and there are many beautiful flowers. You can have fun there and make lots of friends. Second, I suggest you go to the Lujiang Theater. There are big screens and comfortable seats. It also has the latest movies and the best service. Finally, I suggest you go to Fangyuanhui Shopping Hall. There are fashionable clothes, good service and good food. I hope my advice is helpful to you. If you come to Lujiang, I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；   第二步，根据表格内容推荐一些好去处。 [亮点词汇]   ①close to靠近 ②have fun玩得愉快 ③suggest sb to do sth建议某人做某事 [高分句型]   ①There are fashionable clothes, good service and good food.（there be句型） ②I hope my advice is helpful to you.（宾语从句） 6．时间过得真快，寒假就要开始了，你的父母打算带你去哈尔滨（Harbin）过春节，请根据下面的信息，以“My dream holiday”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。 提示信息： 1. Location: northeast 2. Population: 96.2 million 3. Transportation: by high-speed railway/6 hours；by plane/2 hours 4. Temperature：-10C 5. Things to do: 滑雪；堆雪人；观雪景：watch the snow；享受温泉：hot spring；参观教堂和博物馆 6.Places to visit: 哈尔滨冰雪大世界：Harbin Ice and Snow World；冰雕：ice carve；冰灯：ice lantern；冰塔：ice tower；体验冰雪文化。 My dream holiday ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream holiday Winter holiday is coming. My parents are going to take me to Harbin for the Spring Festival.   Harbin is located in the northeast of China. It is a city of ice with a population of 96.2 million. We can travel there by high-speed railway or by plane. It takes six hours by high-speed railway. But flying is faster and it only takes two hours. The temperature is about -10℃. So there is a lot of snow so that we can go skiing, make snowmen and watch the snow. What’s more, we can enjoy the hot spring and visit the famous churches and museums. Besides, we can visit the Harbin Ice and Snow World to enjoy the beautiful ice carves, ice lanterns and ice lantern. We can experience the culture of ice and snow there. I believe I will have a good time there. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍哈尔滨的基本信息，包括地理位置、人口和交通方式等； 第三步，介绍在哈尔滨可以做的事情以及参观的地方； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be located in坐落于 ②by high-speed railway乘高铁 ③what’s more而且 [高分句型] ①So there is a lot of snow so that we can go skiing, make snowmen and watch the snow. (so that引导的目的状语从句) ②I believe I will have a good time there. (宾语从句) 7．人们常说“读万卷书不如行万里路”。回首过去，每个人都经历过一次难忘的旅行。学校英语俱乐部请你以“A/ An ________________ Trip”为题写一篇短文，在期末优秀作品展示会上进行分享，要点如下： 1. Where did you go? 2. Who did you go with? 3. What did you do there? 4. How did you feel about it? 5. What did you learn from this trip? 要求： 1. 补全题目，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于80； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 参考词： meaningful (有意义的); unforgettable (难忘的); pleasant (愉快的); awful (糟糕的) ; ... A/An __________ Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Trip I have been to many places these years. An unforgettable place I have been to is Qingdao. Last summer, my friends and I went to Qingdao. We had a great time there. Qingdao is a beautiful city. We did a lot of things there, such as swimming, boating and climbing mountains. We also visited the trestle. As a landmark landscape of Qingdao, it has its unique charm. Qingdao is also famous for its food. The seafood there is really delicious. Qingdao has a very unique festival—Qingdao Beer Festival. The most exciting thing is to see the sunrise. When the sun rose from the east, we cheered. For the first ray of sunshine in the morning, people always have different emotions. These emotions are the expectation of a new day and the final farewell to yesterday. I took many photos as well. They can be my best memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“最难忘的经历”这一话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，在那里做了哪些事以及它令人难忘的原因； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①have a great time玩得开心 ②be famous for以……而著名 ③as well也 [高分句型] When the sun rose from the east, we cheered. (when引导的时间状语从句) 8．古人云：读万卷书不如行万里路。旅游可以帮助我们开拓视野、结交朋友、了解不同的文化，从而丰富自己的人生阅历。你校英文报正在组织以 “Travelling” 为题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。 要点如下： 1. 介绍旅游的好处； 2. 分享一次旅游经历； 3. 谈谈这次旅游的收获或感想。 注意事项： 1.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 2. 100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 提醒：照抄试卷语篇不得分！ Travelling Travelling is a very good activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Travelling Travelling is a very good activity. We can enjoy the beauty of nature, make friends with the local people and learn about different cultures by travelling. I still remember the trip to Beijing last summer. My parents and I visited the Palace Museum. There we followed the guide and learned more about Chinese history. What’s more, we climbed the Great Wall. Tired but excited, we reached the top of it. The sights were so beautiful that I couldn’t stop taking photos. At the same time, I met a lot of foreigners and talked with them happily. As an old saying goes, “It’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” From this trip, I have learned much knowledge that I can’t learn in the textbooks. I won’t forget it. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给要点提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节。以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍旅游的好处； 第二步，分享自己去北京旅游的经历； 第三步，书写从此次旅行中获得的感想。 [亮点词汇］ ①make friends交朋友 ②learn about了解 ③What’s more此外 ④take photos照相 ⑤At the same time与此同时 [高分句型］ ①The sights were so beautiful that I couldn’t stop taking photos. (so…that引导的结果状语从句) ②From this trip, I have learned much knowledge that I can’t learn in the textbooks. (that引导的定语从句) 9．你收到了澳大利亚笔友Amy发来的一封电子邮件。她打算来大同看你，她想知道你计划带她去哪些名胜古迹，大同的天气怎么样以及她需要准备些什么等等。请用英语给她写一封回信说说你的计划。 From: Amy@Sydney.com Hi, How are you lately? I plan to come to Dalong to see you and enjoy the beautiful winter. What places of interest will you show me around? What’s your plan? Can you tell me something about the weather these days in Datong? What do I need to prepare for this trip? I’m looking forward to seeing you soon. Amy 要点： 1.大同最近天气怎么样？ 2.你打算和她去哪儿？你们还准备干什么？ 3.她需要为旅行做什么准备？ 注意： 1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现你的真名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右，邮件开头不计入总词数。 Word Bank: 云冈石窟Yungang Grottocs 九龙壁the Nine Dragon Screen 华严寺Huayan Temple 刀削面the sliced noodles From: Li Hua@Datong.com Hi, Glad to hear from you! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文 Hi, Glad to hear from you! I am fine these days. I am so glad you are coming to Datong. There are many places of interest in Datong. I will show you around Yungang Grottoes, the Nine-Dragon Screen, Huayan Temple and so on. I hope you can get a better understanding of Chinese culture. Also, Datong is famous for delicious food, so I’d like you to taste the sliced noodles, which is the most popular in our hometown. Nowadays, the weather is cold and sometimes snowy, but it is good for traveling, too. You can play with snow and enjoy a different white world. I think you should prepare warm clothes. Scarfs and gloves are necessary while playing outside. I am sure you will like the beautiful city. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要是介绍你计划带笔友Amy去哪些名胜古迹，大同的天气怎么样以及她需要准备些什么等等，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍你计划带笔友Amy去哪些名胜古迹，大同的天气怎么样以及她需要准备些什么； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①get a better understanding of对……有一个更好的理解 ②be famous for因为……而闻名 [高分句型] ①Datong is famous for delicious food, so I’d like you to taste the sliced noodles, which is the most popular in our hometown. (which引导的定语从句) ②I am sure you will like the beautiful city. (宾语从句) 10．假如你是李明，你的笔友Tony即将来你的家乡度假。他想知道你家乡的情况，及如何度过一个有意义的假期。请你给他写一封信介绍家乡情况，建议如何度过一个有意义的假期。 Hometown Zaoyang, the hometown of the Emperor of Guangwu (光武帝) Places to play China Han City, Baishui Temple, Jinshui Park, Rose Sea Park and so on Places to go shopping and eat Han City Mall, Wanxiang Shopping Mall,... Places to ... ..... 参考语言： be famous for；Why not...；How about...；It’s a good idea to... 写作要求： 1. 文章须包含以上主要内容，可以适当发挥； 2. 使用比较级、最高级的句子，正确选择合适的时态； 3. 文中不能出现真实的学校、班级和人名； 4. 英文80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, Long time no see! I’m writing to tell you about my hometown and give some advice about how to spend your days and enjoy your stay here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m expecting your arrival! Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Tony, Long time no see! I’m writing to tell you about my hometown and give some advice about how to spend your days and enjoy your stay here. My hometown is in Zaoyang. This place is famous for its long history because it is the hometown of Emperor Guangwu. There are many famous scenic spots and historical sites in Zaoyang for you to visit. For example, China Han City is a tourist attraction with Han Dynasty culture as its theme, where you can learn about the history and culture of the Han Dynasty. Baishui Temple is an ancient Buddhist temple with a beautiful environment. There are many different types of roses in the Rose Sea Park. This is the park with the most roses I have ever seen. The scenery of Jinshui Park is charming and also a good choice. If you want to buy something, why not go to Han City Mall or Wanxiang Shopping Mall? Both of these places are very good. But I think there are more products in Wanxiang Shopping Mall than in Han City Mall. It’s a good idea to eat delicious food. You can go to the snack street to taste Zaoyang Steamed Smooth Chicken or Zaoyang Sugar and Oil Cake. How about coming here? You will have an unforgettable and enjoyable vacation. I look forward to your arrival! Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“对我家乡枣阳的介绍，度假建议及参考词汇和要求的句式”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“好久不见！”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“对家乡枣阳的介绍，游览建议”重点介绍我的家乡枣阳的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我期待你的到来！”的强烈愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①for example例如 ②scenic spots and historical sites名胜古迹 [高分句型] ①This place is famous for its long history because it is the hometown of Emperor Guangwu.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②If you want to buy something, why not go to Han City Mall or Wanxiang Shopping Mall?（if引导的条件状语从句，why not句型，表示“为什么不”） 11．假如你是Anna，寒假来临之际，你们一家人打算去旅行。但在出行方式上无法统一，请叙述一下你父母的不同意见，并发表自己的看法。 Family members Transportation Reasons (理由) Anna’s mother plane fast, save time Anna’s father train relaxing, enjoy the beautiful view Anna ... ... 要求： (1) 短文必须包括表格所有内容，并适当发挥。 (2) 短文中不得出现真实的人名，校名。 (3) 词数70个词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 The winter vacation is coming. My family are going to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The winter vacation is coming. My family are going to Hainan. My mother wants to go there by plane. She thinks it is fast and can save time. But my father thinks it’s better to take the train because we can enjoy the beautiful view along the way. But, I have different ideas. I want to go there by car. I think it’s relaxing and convenient. We can not only see the beautiful view but also have all kinds of delicious food. Now I can’t wait to start. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。 ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“对出行方式给出父母和自己的意见”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总起全文，介绍要出去旅行。 第二步，给出父亲、母亲以及自己的意见。 第三步，收尾，期待该次旅行。 [亮点词汇] ①by plane乘飞机 ②along the way沿途 [高分句型] ①She thinks it is fast and can save time. （宾语从句） ②But my father thinks it’s better to take the train because we can enjoy the beautiful view along the way.（because引导原因状语从句） 12．假如你是李华，你校近期将有一次学校旅行，全体师生都将参加。请你根据以下表格内容给Jack写一封信。 集合地点 学校大门口 出发时间 本周日上午8点 旅行目的地 兴庆湿地公园（Xingqing Wetland Park）（距离学校约10公里） 活动安排 1. 参观景区； 2. 合影留念； 3.…… 参考词汇： take part in, school gate（学校门口）, set out, a lot of activities, visit, photos, relax 要求： 1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于60 词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear Jack, Our school will go on a school trip to Xingqing Wetland Park this Sunday. I am writing to invite you to go with us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Come and join us. You will have a good time there! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, Our school will go on a school trip to Xingqing Wetland Park this Sunday. I am writing to invite you to go with us. Almost all the teachers and students will take part in it. We will meet at the school gate at 7: 30 and set out at 8: 00 on Sunday morning. It is about 10 kilometers away from our school and the whole trip will take us about 3 hours. We’re going to visit the park at about 10: 00. There are a lot of activities that you are interested in. We can visit some places of interest and take beautiful photos there. After lunch, we’ll pick up rubbish in the park to protect the environment. The trip will help us relax ourselves as well as build up our bodies. Come and join us. You will have a good time there! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍学校的旅行，邀请Jack参加，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍这次旅行； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①set out出发 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③pick up捡起 [高分句型] ①There are a lot of activities that you are interested in. (that引导的定语从句) ②After lunch, we’ll pick up rubbish in the park to protect the environment. (动词不定式作目的状语) 13．疫情的阴霾渐渐散去，旅游业将迎来春天。旅行社举办一次征文竞赛，请以An unforgettable trip为题，根据以下提示内容，写一篇短文。 提示： 1. What was your unforgettable trip? 2. What did you do during that trip? 3. What has the trip brought to you since then? 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包含所给要点，适当发挥，注意时态。 2. 词数不少于80词。 3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地点名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Trip I have been to many places and among them, Hainan is my favourite place. Last summer holiday, my father and I went there. We went there by plane. The sea there was wonderful. The sky was blue and the sea was blue, too. First, we went to swim in the sea. Then, we lay on the beach and enjoyed the sun. Next, we tried some seafood. It was delicious. We also took lots of photos there. It was a nice trip. I felt very relaxed. I will never forget this experience. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主。 ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍难忘的旅行，如何度过的以及自己的感受”；并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应注意第一人称。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确旅行的地点。 第二步，介绍旅行的时间、和谁去的、怎么去的、看了什么和做了什么。 第三步，谈谈自己对这次旅行的感受，和题目呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①have been to 曾经去过某地 ②by plane 坐飞机 ③take photos 拍照 [高分句型] The sky was blue and the sea was blue, too. (and连接并列句） 14．今年1月6日，你校组织去科技博物馆参观，请根据导图写一篇英语日记。 注意： 1. 词数70左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 January 6th Today I had a school trip. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 January 6th Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off for the Science Museum by bus at 7: 00. As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. I also bought some gifts for my friends. I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again! 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作内容需包含所给提示内容。文章确保语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词语法错误。人称采用“第一人称”。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，开篇点题，交代参观的时间、人物、乘坐的交通工具等； 第二步，对参观科技博物馆的活动进行介绍； 第三步，抒发自己的感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ①set off 出发，动身 ②play chess下国际象棋 ［高分句型］ ①As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句） ②It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them.  (It is + adj. + to do sth.句型) 15．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Mike要来北京体验中国文化（Chinese culture），他想向你了解来北京旅游的最佳时间、出行方式以及在京期间能体验中国文化的活动。请根据他的问题回复邮件。 提示词语：autumn, comfortable, tea, Beijing Opera 提示问题：●When is the best time to visit Beijing? ●How do I travel around Beijing? ●What can I do to experience Chinese culture in Beijing? Dear Mike, I’m glad that you are going to visit Beijing and experience Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I’m glad that you are going to visit Beijing and experience Chinese culture. I’d like to give you some advice to help you make a perfect travel plan. I think that the best time to visit Beijing is in autumn because the weather is the most comfortable during this time of the year. It is neither too hot nor too cold. You can visit Beijing by subway or bus. If you want to know more about Chinese culture, the Qianmen area is worth visiting because there are a lot of things to do. You can drink tea and enjoy Beijing Opera in Lao She Teahouse. You will also have a chance to taste many delicious local foods there. The Palace Museum is a good place to visit, too. I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍参观北京的最佳时间； 第二步，介绍环游北京的交通方式； 第三步，介绍如何在北京体验中国文化。 [亮点词汇] ①the best time to do sth做某事的最佳时间 ②be worth doing sth值得做某事 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] I think the best time to visit Beijing is in autumn because the weather is the most comfortable during this time of the year.（because引导原因状语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$