内容正文:
.第五部分 写作
第五部分 写 作
第一章
应用文写作
(一)短文投稿十邀请信(邮件)
Writing3(2023全国乙卷)
十申请信(邮件)
学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中
1.短文投稿
学到的新技能,请你以此为主题写一篇短文投
Writing1(2024浙江1月卷)
稿。内容包括:
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sportsand
1.简要描述;
Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间
2.体验和感受。
开展的运动,内容包括;
注意:
1.介绍这项运动;
2.说明推荐理由。
1.词数100左右;
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Learning a New skill
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Writing2(2023全国甲卷)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故
Writing4(2022全国乙卷)
事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English
写一篇短文投稿,内容包括
BeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表
1.人物简介及事迹
中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括
2.意义或启示。
注意:
1.学习活动状况描述
1.词数100左右;
2.简单评论;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.你的建议。
65%
50%
18%
12%
读英语 听英语 看英语 浏览英
电魅
书籍
勤量
语学习
网站
学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)
最新真题分类特训·英语
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.邀请信(邮件)
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Writing1(2022全国新高考I&.II卷)
Learning English Bevond the Classroom
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talkand
Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of
邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
smartphones and computers.
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline.
Writing5(2022全国甲卷)
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办
英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容
包括:
1.海洋的重要性;
Yours sincerely,
2.保护海洋的倡议。
Li Hua
注意:1.词数100左右;
Writing2(2022北京卷)
2.短文的首句已为你写好。
假定你是李华,请给外国学生Jim写一封邀
请信,邀请其为自已的同学线上分享英语写作经
When it comes to ocean, its polloution is
验的交流会。
becoming more and more serious.
1.交流会内容及邀请他的原因;
2.时间及其他注意事项。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数
Dear Jim.
Yours.
Li Hua
第五部分 写作
Writing3(2022浙江卷,6月)
Writing2(新课标I卷)
假定你是李华,你校图书馆开设了一个小组
假定你是李华,暑期在伦教学习,得知当地
学习室,请给留学生Michael写一封邮件,邀请
美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做
一同前往体验,内容如下:
志愿者,内容包括:
1.位置和开放时间
2.室内设施与功能。
1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数80左右;
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.结束语已为你写好。
3.申请信(邮件)
Writing1(2023天津卷)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生
Yours.
项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交
Li Hua
流,将举办“中国工坊”活动。该活动主题涉及
中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟
(二)普通信(邮件)十通知
招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示:
1.普通信(邮件)
写一封申请信
Writing1(2024新课标I8.II卷)
(1)申请参加本次活动;
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能
并阐述原因
分享这次经历,内容包括:
参考词汇:中国工坊ChineseWorkshop
(1)你完成的作品;
中华美食Chinese cuisine
(2)你的感想。
手工艺 handicraft
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
书法calligraphy
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
Dear Chris.
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文
连贯;
I'm writing to share with you an art class
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
had in a park last Friday.
Dear Sir Madam.
Sincerely yours,
Yours.
Li Jin
Li Hua
最新真题分类特训·英语
Writing2(2023北京卷)
Writing4(2022浙江卷1月)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英
假定你是李华,在“中国一爱尔兰文化节”活
国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题
动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请
的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用
你给他写一封邮件,内容包括;
英文给他回复,内容包括;
1.回忆活动经历
(1)活动形式;
2.分享个人收获
(2)活动内容。
3.希望保持联系
注意:(1)词数100左右;
注意:
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
1.词数80左右;
Dear Jim.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Yours.
Li Hua
Writing3(2023新课标I 8. II卷)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机
Writing5(2021新高考I卷)
分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。
样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容
请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括
包括:
1.读报的经历;
1.说明问题;
2.喜爱的栏目
2.提出建议。
3.期望和祝福。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan,
Youth and Me
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
第五部分 写作
Writing6(2020北京卷)
2.通知
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校
Writing(新课标II卷)
英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师lim因疫情滞留英
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写
国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一
一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Grorving
封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容
Together,内容包括:
包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地
1.条件及要求
点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
2.表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意:1.词数100左右;
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim.
Yours,
(三)求助信十告知信十道歉信十发言稿
Li Hua
1.求助信
Writing7(2020浙江卷)
Writing(2021全国甲卷)
假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Pe
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传
ter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内
统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写
容包括:
一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国
1.询问近况;2.分享班级最新消息
传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括
3.表达祝愿。
1.阐明写信事由
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.征求建议;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
最新真题分类特训·英语
2.告知信
4.发言稿
Writing(2021天津卷)
Writing1(2024全国甲卷)
假如你是晨光中学的李津。
你在英国游学
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图
期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy
片,以Development of Transport in China 为题
通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问
写一篇发言稿。
你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语
high-apeed train
shared hicvclc
new energy vehicle
回复,内容包括:
(1)表示感谢并问候;
(2)计划与家人一起做的事情;
(3)你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何
注意:1.词数100左右;
准备。
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
注意,1.词数不少于100
Development of Transport in China
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文
From the vehicle of horses to today's con
连贯;
venient transport, Chinese transport has seen an
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
enormous development.
Dear Nancy,
Yours.
Li Jin
Writing2(2022天津卷)
3.道歉信
你是高中口语社成员李津,李华为了招募新
Writing(2021北京卷)
成员,让你录制一个视频,撰写视频的文字稿,要
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英
点如下:
国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴
1.邀请大家加入社团;
约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容
2.介绍一下社团活动(如英语演讲比赛,观
包括:
看英语电影等);
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
3.谈谈你加入社团以后的收获。
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
参考词汇:Spoken English Club; English
Dear Jim.
Speech Contest
Yours.
Li Hua
第五部分 写作
Writing3(2021全国乙卷)
2.感谢信
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be
Writing(浙江卷)
smartonline learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友
容包括:
Alex即将返回自已的国家。请给他写一封邮
1.分析优势与不足
件,内容包括:
2.提出学习建议。
1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临
注意:1.词数100左右;
别祝愿。
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
注意:1.词数80左右
Be smart online learners
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Learning online has become an important
way to study recently.
(四)致歉信士感谢信
1.致歉信
Writing(新课标III卷)
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起
去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容
包括:
1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。
(五)其他类:人物介绍十
注意:1.词数100左右;
事件介绍士新间报道等
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.人物介绍
Writing(2020新课标I卷)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值
得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容
包括:
1.人物简介
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
最新真题分类特训·英语
The person I respect
My Weekend
We have a lot of respectable people around
us.
3.新闻报道
2.事件介绍
Writing(2020山东卷)
Writing 1(2021浙江卷)
假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。
野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容
请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括
包括:
1.展览时间、地点
1.参加人员;
2.观展感受;
3.推荐观展。
2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.词数80左右;
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.请按如下格式作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
Writing2(2020新课标 II卷)
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请
你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内
容包括:
1.农场情况;2.采摘过程;3.个人感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。详解详析
第五部分写作
Writing 3
第一章应用文写作
Learning a New skill
When I was in my primary school.I had an opportu-
(一)短文投稿十邀请信(邮件)十申请信(邮件)
nity to attend a musical contest held in my school.That
1.短文投稿
was the first time I had watched a live musical perform-
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ance.The fantastic players touched me deeply.
工语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇
I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano les-
短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们
推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
son for beginner.In the beginning,it was quite difficult to
read the notes on the stave.However,it did not demoralize
解析:1.词汇积累
be tired of"be fed up with
me.I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano.Al-
首先:first→above all
though my fingers were painful after few hours practice,I
减径:combat→relieve
felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
提高:improve-→enhance
Even though I will not pursue as my life career,I will
2.句式拓展
still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby.It is
简单句变复合句
simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
原句:This simple routine involves standing up from your
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desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and taking a few
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
deep breaths.
Nowadays.with the growing popularity of smartpho-
拓展句:This is a simple routine that involves standing up
nes and computers,an increasing number of students are
from your desk.stretching your arms.legs and back,and
choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various
taking a few deep breaths.
ways.
[点睛][高分句型l]Lastly,it promotes a healthy and
It can easily be scen that the percentage of students
active lifestyle,which is essential for overall well-being.
who choose listening to English songs and watching Eng
(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
lish movies is respectively 65%and 50%.However,those
[高分句型2]This simple routine involves standing up
choosing reading English books and visiting English learn-
from your desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and
ing websites only account for 18%and 12%.
taking a few deep breaths.(运用了动名词作宾语)
As far as I'm concerned.it is a disturbing trend.For
[高分句型3]1r's a small change that can make8big
students,what benefits most to their study is reading Eng
difference in your day.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
lish books.Because of their lack of self-discipline.they're
[参考范文]
more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games.
Stand Up and Exercise.Everybody!
It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self
Everybody!Are you tired of sitting in class all day?
discipline,and it's also urgent for parents and teachers to
How about incorporating some physical activity into your
strengthen the guidance.
daily routine?One great option is the "Stand Up and
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Stretch"exercise.This simple routine involves standing up
When it comes to ocean,its pollution is becoming
from your desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and
more and more serious.World Ocean Day,falling on June
taking a few deep breaths.It's a quick and easy way to get
8h,is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind.
Ocean plays a key role in our world.Not only does
This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
ocean offer us sufficient food,but also it maintains the bal-
First,it helps to combat the negative effects of pro-
ance of nature.Thus,it is imperative to protect ocean.First
longed sitting,such as back pain and stiffness.Second,it
of all.what we can do is to place importance on our daily
can improve your focus and concentration,making it easier
actions.For example,garbage can't be thrown into ocean.
to stay engaged in class.Lastly,it promotes a healthy and
active lifestyle,which is essential for overall well-being.
What's more,we can also hand out leaflets to call on more
people to protect the ocean.The more people are involved,
So,next time you feel a bit sluggish during class,re-
member to stand up and stretch!It's a small change that
the better the ocean environment is.
can make a big difference in your day.
All in all,it is high time that we devoted ourselves to
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protecting ocean.To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history.
2.邀请信(邮件)
His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values.
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respect for elders,and social harmony.Confucius traveled
Dear Caroline.
throughout the country,imparting his wisdom to countless
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend
disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
our program-Talk and Talk.It is ten years since Talk and
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated.
Talk was established.This is an amazing program where
His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of
you can share your ideas with students.Now,when having
Chinese culture,fostering respect for authority,harmoni-
trouble in learning English well,plenty of students urge to
ous relationships,and the pursuit of knowledge.Even to
know how to deal with it.As our distinguished foreign lan-
day,his ideas continue to guide individuals and communi-
guage teacher,your aid can help us a lot.If you are availa-
ties in China.
ble on this Sunday,I together with the whole Talk and
Confucius's life offers valuable lessons,which serves as
Talk staff am waiting for your coming.I'd appreciate it if
a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world.
you take my invitation into consideration.
His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity.
Yours sincerely.
compassion.and social responsibility.
Li Hua
最新真题分类特训·英语
Writing 2
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food,tradi-
写作指导
tional Chinese handicrafts.Chinese calligraphy and paint-
主题语境:人与社会一人际沟通(良好的人际关系)。邀
ing.So I think this activity is very significant,which is con-
请朋友在线分享英语写作经验
ducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and
(1)审人称和时态。邀请信中的主要人称是第一人称,一般会
promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain.
用到两种时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。那么这篇作文中
As a Chinese,I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine.
for example dumplings.Not only can I teach participants
人称就是我(ID和我们(we):时态可用do,wil十do。
how to make dumplings,but also let them fall in love with
(2)关键词的翻译。主要是围绕作文要点来确定相应的英
Chinese cuisine.
语的表达。
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the
(3)列要点提纲。一般是三段式。第一段(写信目的):邀
event.Looking forward to your reply.
请信的第一段要涉及到两方面的内容:第一句可做简要的
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
的自我介绍(名字加身份)。第二段(具体事宜):这部分就
Writing 2
是邀请信的重心所在,一般写一个过渡句来衔接上下文。
Dear Sir or Madam,
第三段(表达期待的心情):最后一段要做到首尾呼应,再
I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese
次表明期望对方能够接受邀请的心情。
Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery.I
(4)润色作文
think I am qualified for this job.because I have learned Chi
[参考范文]
nese painting since childhood.Equally important,I am flu-
Dear Jim,
ent in both Chinese and English,so I have no difficulty in
communicating with others.If I am lucky enough to be cho-
I'm writing to invite you to an internet-based talk
sen as a volunteer,I can show visitors around the gallery
about how to improve English writing.The talk is thought
and answer their questions about the paintings,after some
important for us Chinese students,of whom most are poor
proper training.
in writing a composition in English.Therefore,we hope
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the op-
you,a native speaker,would like to give us some advice on
portunity.I'm looking forward to your reply.
what we can do well with our English compositions.
Yours.
Li Hua
The online talk is scheduled to take place between
(二)普通信(邮件)十通知
5:00pm and 6:30pm this Saturday,and if you will,I will
1.普通信(邮件)
send you the link to Tencent Meeting.an video app compa-
Writing 1
rable to Zoom.
[语篇解读]本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写
I would appreciate it so much if we could have you in
封信,分享在公园上美术课的经历
the talk.
解析:1.词汇积累
Yours:
决定:decide-determine
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整个的:entire-→whole
Writing 3
提供:offer-·provide
总之:in a word→in short
写作指导
2.句式拓展
主题语境:人与社会一人际沟通(良好的人际关系)。邀请
简单句变复合句
朋友参与活动体验
原句:Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I decided to create
①首段:开门见山说明写作目的。
a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's
②主体:a,具体交代邀请原因:b.邀请内容:活动性质,时
pond,surrounded by blooming flowers
间、地点、日期:c.有关要求和希望。
拓展句:Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery,I
③尾段:a.再次盛情邀请:b.希望尽快答复。
decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge
over the park's pond,which was surrounded by blooming
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flowers.
Dear Michael.
[点睛][高分句型l]We were tasked to draw or paint
Our school just opened a well-equipped group-study
something that impressed us most.(that引导的定语从
room in the library.so I want to invite you to study with
句)
me this Saturday morning.
[L高分句型2]I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
(as引导的时间状语从句)
The room is designed for six people and open from 8
a.m.to 20 p.m..The room facing south is so bright that
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we can not only enjoy ourselves in the sea of knowledge but
Dear Chris.
bath in sunshine.Meanwhile,it has two well-performing
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a
computers and a big screen,with which we can share our
park last Friday.
thoughts with each other.What's more,free printer is al-
We were tasked to draw or paint something that im-
ways ready whenever you need to print essays.
pressed us most.Inspired by the fantastic scenery.I decid-
I hope you can join me!Looking forward to your early
ed to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over
the park's pond,surrounded by blooming flowers.
reply so I can make a reservation.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.Being
Yours.
surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but al-
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so offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and
3.申请信(邮件)
bustle of school life.I felt a deep sense of peace as I paint-
Writing 1
ed.
Dear Sir/Madam,
In a word,it was not just an art class:it was a mo
I am Li Jin,an exchange student from China.Knowing
ment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school.I am
Yours.
Li Hua
writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
详解详析
Writing 2
very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival
[语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好
two years ago.It was at that festival that you shared so
友Jm策划的“绿色北京”社围活动给出一些建议。
many interesting things about your country together.
解析:1.词汇积累
through which I learned a lot about your food,culture and
建议:suggestion→tip
history.We really enjoyed ourselves there.What is far more
提供:offer-→provide
important is that we became good friends then.Though I
开展:carry out-→conduct
felt a little sorry that you left China last year,I am pleased
主题:theme"topie
to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.
2.句式拓展
I hope we can keep in touch often.
同义句转换
Best wishes!
原句:Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the
Yours.
theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,I am writing
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to offer you my suggestions.
Writing 5
拓展句:Since you are planning a club activity with the
Youth and Me
theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help.I am writing
Congratulations on the tenth anniversary of the launch
to offer you my suggestions.
of Youth.
[点睛][高分句型I]Hearing that you are planning a
Youth has sparkled my interest in English and broad-
club activity with the theme of "Green Beijing"and need my
ened my horizons.It enables me to keep pace with the latest
help,I am writing to offer you my suggestions.(运用了
news at home and abroad.Of all the Youth columns,I like
that引导宾语从句)
Western World most.Written in simple but authentic Eng
L高分句型2]I think you can carry out this activity in an
lish,the articles introduce me to Western society and cul-
nteractive and experiential manner,which means students
ture.Amazingly,they also inspire me to appreciate my own
can participate and have a better understanding of"Green
culture more.
Beijing"through getting involved in different activities by
I hope to continue benefiting from reading it and may
hemselves.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Youth stay in youth forever.
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Writing 6
Dear Jim.
Dear Jim.
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the
How are you doing?I hope everything's OK with you.
theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,I am writing
Our school's drama club plans to start practising.
to offer you my suggestions.
Since you're away in Britain,we need a drama teacher to be
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive
in your place.Would you please recommend one for us?
and experiential manner,which means students can partici-
He or she should be a native English speaker,cur-
pate and have a better understanding of "Green Beijing"
rently in Beijing,and experienced in both directing and teaching.
through getting involved in different activities by them
Thank you for your help.Please take care of yourself.
selves.You can showcase garbage classification on site,
Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
plant trees and publicize sharing economy,which will all fit
Best wishes!
into the theme of“Green Beijing”,
Yours.
Hopefully,you will get some inspiration from my sug
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gestions.Wish you success
Writing 7
Yours.
Dear Peter.
Li Hua
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on
Writing 3
sick leave.How are you feeling now?
Dear Ryan.
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I think it's not a good idea
shadow of disease.Last month,an English festival was
to randomly pair up students for the spoken English train-
held in our school,and our class performed a song which
ing after class.The reasons are as follows.
you taught us at the festival.As soon as we finished the
To begin with,randomly pairing up students may lead
song.all the audience gave us warm applause.If only you
to unbalanced language abilities within the groups.This
had been there.
can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and
one may dominate the conversation,leaving little room for
complete recovery.
the other students to improve.Besides,students may feel
Yours.
uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who
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they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating
2.通知
with.
Writing
My suggestion is to group students based on their lan-
Hello,everyone!Would you like to learn about how
guage abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
we school developed in the past and will have a big im-
This way,everyone can feel more comfortable practicing
provement in the future?Well,please come to watch the
and improving their spoken English together.
short film called Growing Together,which we made.The
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
film will show in the school hall of the western side of
Yours sincerely,
school at 10:00 am this Friday.This film which lasts for
Li Hua
two hours may have some shortcomings in it,so we really
Writing 4
hope you to offer some ideas and suggestions after watching
Dear Chris.
it so that we can fill in the content and have an overall and
How is everything going?I hope everything is going
exact introduction to our school.If you have any idea or ad-
well back in Ireland.
vice.welcome to contact us by email or mobile phone.
Looking back.I find it has been a year since you came
Thank you a lot!
back to Ireland.I miss you so much.I still remember the
School Union
最新真题分类特训·英语
(三)求助信十告知信十道歉信+发言稿
In addition.next Saturday.there will be a flower
1.求助信
show in Beihai Park.Then we can go to see the flowers to-
Writing
gether.
[审题指导
I am looking forward to your early reply.
审题]
三审:人称,时态,题材
Yours.
人称]
第一人称
Li Hua
「时态]
将来时和一般现在时
4.发言稿
题材
求助信(征求意见)
Writing I
主旨大意]
[语篇解读]根据提供的关于共享单车、高铁和新能源汽
介绍中国文化给外国朋友,发布在英文网站上,这是
车的三幅图片,摆写一篇题目为“中国交通发展”的发言
班会的内容,因此求助外国友人,征求他们的意见。
稿,立足中国科技发展,培养学生创新意识和科学精种,彰
「参考范文]
显时代发展,强化现代化人才建设,实现人才强国,引导学
Dear Chris,
生关注我国经济社会的发展变化,增强国家富强、民族复
How is everything going with you lately?A class
兴的自豪感和自信心。
meeting will be held in my school about Chinese traditional
[参考范文]
cultural and it will be displayed on the English website.I
Development of Transport in China
am writing to ask some advice from you on what kind of
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient trans-
Chinese conventional cultural attracts the foreigners like
port,Chinese transport has seen an enormous develop-
you most.
ment.Firstly,shared bicycles have become a popular choice
As we all know.Chinese traditional culture includes
in cities,providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to
calligraphy,Chinese knots,Chinese paintings,paper cutting
travel short distances.Secondly,the high-speed train net-
and so on.Besides.Chinese culture also includes various
work has revolutionized long-distance travel,significantly
cultural thoughts and spiritual concepts in the national his-
reducing travel time across the country.Finally,the rise of
tory.How much do you want to know about each part.and
new energy vehicles reflects China's commitment to sus-
would you please tell me which part you are curious about?
tainable development and reducing carbon emissions.These
What type of introduction will help foreigners to have a
advancements highlight China's progress in creating a mod-
much clearer knowledge of their interested section?
ern,efficient,and environmentally friendly transport sys-
Your reply will be highly appreciated and thank you for
tem
your help.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Writing 2
Yours.
写作指导
Li Hua
主题语境:人与社会一人际沟通(良好的人际关系)
2.告知信
(1)审题材:成员招募:(2)审时态:一般现在时为主,进行
Writing
时等为辅助:(3)审人称:第一,第二人称为主:(4)审要点:
参考范文
构思文章是否符合题目要求,主旨突出,内容要点齐全,写
Dear Nancy,
作对象明确,语言的选用得当,符合要求等。
I am very glad to receive your E-mail.I am very grate-
「参考范文门
ful to you and your family for taking care of me during my
Hi!My name is Li Jin,a member from Spoken Eng-
study tour in the UK.And wish you all the best.
lish Club.Now I would like to represent our Club to recruit
Now that I have finished my high school studies.my
new members.
parents and I are going to travel to Beijing.I'm going to
As you can see,various activities are being held in our
Tian'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great
Club.such as English Speech Contest,and Poetry Repeti-
Wall.In addition.I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy
tion,etc.I have gained a lot from this fantastic Club,not
the elegant demeanor of famous universities.I have decided
only because it builds up courage and confidence in me by
to register for the computer major.With the rapid develop-
practising but also because communicating with others easi-
ment of the Internet industry,the high-paying employment
ly in English helps me make more friends.
in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the In-
If you are interested in oral English,you can join us to
ternet tide.Before choosing,consult people engaged in this
explore a new world.and become a new star in our Club.
major or go to training institutions for consultation.Only
We are expecting your joining.
with a clear goal,we will have targeted learning in the fu-
Writing 3
ture.which will be more efficient.
写作指导
Yours.
©题型解读
Li Jin
本篇书面表达考查应用文中的发言稿,属于给提纲作
3.道歉信
文。
要求学生以“Be smart online learners”为题,写一篇发
Writing
言稿参赛,主题语境为人与自我中的善于学习,设置更加
解题]
贴近真实生活的英语交际任务情境,考生非常熟悉并有话
题材门
道歉信
可说,虽给出了写作提纲,但仍具有一定的开放性和灵
「人称]第一人称
活性。
人物关系]同英国好友Jim
⊙审题分析
段落]1.简短寒暄2.表达歉意并说明原因
写一篇发言稿
3.提出建议并给出理由
[参考范文]
要求
主题为人与白我
Dear Jim.
字数100左右
I'm sorry to inform you that I can't go out with you
在线学习成为学习的重要方式
this weekend.I've just been told that I have to go and visit
优势
my sick grandfather in the countryside,who was suddenly
审题分析
巧作
分析作线学习的特点
admitted to the hospital.I hope the change won't cause you
要点
不足
too much trouble.
分享在线学习建议
How about going out next Saturday morning?If it's
以第一人称为主
convenient for you.let's meet at the school gate at 9:00.
Please let me know what time suits you best.I should be
人称和时态
殷现正时为主,
兼用一般将来时态
available anytime next weekend.
6
详解详析
回思路点拨
(五)其他类:人物介绍十事件介绍十新闻报道等
在分析写作要求及所给提钢后,以所给标题和文章首
1.人物介绍
句为依托对所给要点进行扩展,全文以三段式为宜,首句
Writing
已经给出,第二段和第三段为写作重点。先介绍线上学习
The person I respect
的优势,之后是线上学习的缺点,自然引出第三段的内容,
We have a lot of respectable people around us.They
也就是提出在线学习建议。写作内容要条理清嘶,并恰当
may be our teachers.parents or one of our elders.As for
使用高级句式以提升文章档次,但所用语言要符合发言稿
me,my father is the person I respect most.My father is a
的长短句结合,朗朗上口的特点,同时应在结尾处发出呼
teacher who loves his work and his students very much.He
works very hard every day but he will also spare some time
于以引起共鸣
to accompany me and share many funny things with me
[参考范文]
about his work.
Be smart online learners
When I come across the problems of learning in my
Learning online has become an important way to study
study,my father will listen to me patiently and encourage
recently.However,each coin has two sides.So is learning
me to overcome the difficulties bravely.He achieved a lot
online.On the one hand,it is surely convenient and flexible
in his work,respected by his students.So,in my mind my
for us to learn online,because it is up to us to decide what
father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
we learn and where and when we study.What's more,we
2.事件介绍
can learn the lessons repeatedly.On the other hand,learn-
Writing I
ing online has some weaknesses,the biggest of which is low
Hello,everyone!Aiming at promoting Chinese cul-
efficiency caused by a lack of self-discipline.
ture,a students'traditional Chinese painting exhibition is
So how can we be smart online learners?First,it's
held by our school in the library from May 30th to
June 5th.
necessary to have a quiet and comfortable room.which con-
As someone who has visited the exhibition yesterday.I
tributes to focusing attention.Second,good time manage-
personally thought it was amazing.It not only shows us dif-
ment can improve our learning efficiency.More important-
ferent types of painting,but also various tools related to
ly,we should form a learning group online to motivate each
painting,such as brush pens,papers and so on.Apart from
other.
displaying,there are many other great activities like a paint-
(四)致歉信十感谢信
ing knowledge quiz,lectures and games.
1.致歉信
It is a visual feast that anyone who's interested in tra-
Writing
ditional Chinese painting should no miss.
[写作思路]题目要求写一封道歉信,就不能如约一起去
[范文亮点]
书店,向Bb道歌,使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。
宣传稿应者重于宜传该展览的亮点,以达到吸引更多
写作内容包括:表示歉意:说明原因:另约时间。注意使用
人来观展的目的。根据题目要求,先开门见山指出该展览
连接词,使作文内容连贯。
的基本信息(时问和地点),第二段在介绍观晨感受时应把
展宽的亮点一并写进去,如展览中有什么值得看或者有哪
[参考范文
些特别的活动等等:最后总结该展览并推荐更多人来观
Dear Bob.
展。在写作过程中,多使用高级句型和结构,如范文中的
I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with
定语从句,现在分词作状语和过去分词作后置定语等,这
you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to at-
样文章读起来不会显得索然无味。
tend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the
Writing 2
change will not cause you too much trouble.
[审题指导]
Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out ear-
本题是提纲式作文,要求考生为班级英语角写一篇短
ly so that we'll have more time to read and select books.If
文,介绍“你”和同学上周参加的一次采摘活动。因为文中
it's convenient for you,let's meet at 8:30 outside the school
涉及“你”和同学,所以要使用第一人称。采摘活动是在上
gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I should
周,所以时态主要以一般过去时为主。
写作时不要漏掉题日所要求的要点,注意句子之间的
be available any time after school next week.
连接以及高级句式的使用
Yours.
[参考范文
Li Hua
My Weekend
工亮点]范文包括了所有要点内容,做到了语意连贯。范文
Last week,our class went to a farm to do a vegetable
使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meet
picking in order to experience the joy of picking vegetables
ing that afternoon the change will not cause you too much
in person and learn more about organic vegetables.
trouble:目的状语从句so that we'll have more time to read and
When we arrived,there was a farmer explaining to us
select books:条件句Ifit's convenient for you:省略句If not等,
how they planted organic vegetables and which vegetable
长短句结合,使内容更加丰富。
we could pick.Then we picked organic vegetables by our-
2.感谢信
selves,such as cucumbers,tomatoes,eggplants.The most
Writing
exciting part was that we cooked the vegetables together.
Dear Alex,
At that time.I had a lot of harvests and learned a lot of
I've just learned you're leaving for the United States
knowledge about organic vegetables!
soon.At this moment.I want to express my sincere thanks
It was a very meaningful activity and not only can I
have some new discoveries but also I experience the joy of
to you for your help.
labor and enrich my knowledge.
Honestly speaking,but for your help.I wouldn't have
3.新闻报道
made such great progress in English.With your help.I won
Writing
first prize in an English speech contest.Whenever I have
审题指导
difficulties,you always cheer me up and help me out.Words
本篇作文要求写一篇报道。考生需要运用简洁精练
can't describe how thankful I am.
的语言概述事件的主要内容,文章中应包含新闻报道的五
Wish you a pleasant journey home.
要素(5W:何时when,何地where,何人who,何因why,何
Yours.
事what):在新闻报道中应避免使用第一人称,应从第三视
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角进行客观描述:活动已经结束,因此应用一股过去时。
最新真题分类特训·英语
考生要紧扣主题,展开想象,从参加人员、跑步路线、
behind a legacy of inspiration for those who followed in her
活动反响等方面进行写作,使每一个要点都得到明确的
footsteps.knowing that even without a clear sense of direc-
体现
tion,there's always a way to find one's way.
[参考范文]
Writing 2
A Cross-Country Running Race
Paragraph 1:
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country
A few weeks later,when I almost forgot the comtest,
running race,which nearly drew the attention of every
there came the news.I was informed that I won the first
student and teacher of our school.
prize in the writing contest and that there would be an a-
The students selected from every class took part in the
ward presentation in two days.I was so happy to hear the
competition.The route measured five kilometers.from our
news that I immediately shared it with my teacher."I knew
school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.Every runner
you'dwin!I am proud of you.You made it!”he said excit
tried their best to finish the task,with their classmates
edly.Then came the big day.When I was invited to the
along the way giving them necessarily help as well as en-
stage to receive the award,I expressed my thanks to my
couragement.At last,all the runners managed to arrive at
teacher.I said,"It's you who make me fall in love with
the finish line,receiving cheers from all the directions.
writing,my social studies teacher.Without your recogni-
The activity was highly spoken of,because not only
tion and guidance,I couldn't have written this article.
did it provide chance for us to exercise,but also made us
Again thank you very much!"
more cohesive.
Paragraph 2:
第二章读后续写
I went to my teacher's office a fter the award presen-
主题1个人成长
tation.My teacher was waiting for me.Holding my hands,
Writing 1
he said "Congratulations!You are a good writer,so keep
[语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了高中生Ev
writing.""You know I didn't like writing before,but now I
因为方向感不强,经常在学校里迷路,在一次体育课上教
am crazy about it!I will try my best to create good
练耍求他们沿着校园跑步的时候Ev发现跟着树的影子
works."I said seriously.Since then.I have written many
能找到方向,她通过这个方法重斯认识到了校园。
good works and now I am a famous writer.I owe my suc-
解析:1,段落续写:
cess to my social studies teacher who is a beacon in my life
①由第一段首句内容“当Pt教练在终点线对她说:“干得
on the road to writing.
好!”,伊娃很惊讶。”可知,第一段可描写Eva道过自己追
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随影子的方法找到方向,并且受到了教练的称赞。
Paragraph I:
②由第二段首句内容“Ea决定用同样的手段来记住学校大
We sat down nert to each other,but David wouldn't
楼。”可知,第二段可描写Ea通过记住影子的方法来记住学
look at me.I said gently and quietly,"No one can change
校大楼并且通过这件事之后的感悟。
your mind,except yourself.If you desire to challenge your-
2.续写线索:方向感太差记不住学校建筑的位置一体育
self,there is nothing to do with others'thoughts.He sat
课上绕着学校跑却找不到方向
害怕最后一名心里非
still with a deep breath."You have a full preparation before
常紧张一跟随影子找到方向
受到教练的货赏—
this event,which is the most important reason why you
获得感悟
show up here."I added with a sincere tone.Hearing my
3.词汇激活
words.David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling
行为类
out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determi-
①努力做某事:struggle to do sth./strive to do sth.
nation to finish the cross-country run.His coach heard what
②导航:navigate/.guide
David said and gave me a look-the kind that was more de-
③了解:learn,know/acknowledge
termined than anyone else's.
情绪类
Paragraph 2:
①使某人惊讶:surprise sb./astonish sb..
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with
②激动地:excitedly/in excitement
the other runners.The race started.It seemed that the run-
L点睛][高分句型1]Her efforts were noticed
way was extremely long for young children,not to mention
by the teacher,who praised her innovative think
a child with a brain disease.David insisted on running as if
ing.(who引导的非限制性定语从句)
he had forgotten all his weaknesses.though he tripped over
L高分句里2]She learned that with a little crea
within a few kilometers.It didn't take long before he picked
tivity and observation,any challenge could be
himself up again and continued his mission.Classmates all
overcome.(that引导的宾语从句)
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appeared on the racing track,cheering for him."Come on!
When Coach Pitt said "Nice work !to her at the fin-
You can make it!We are proud of you!"they shouted en-
thusiastically.To everyone's joy,he reached the final line
ish line.Eva was surprised.In the vast expanse of her
and ranked the 20th.It was no more important whether he
school,a girl with poor directional skills struggled to navi-
won the first place or not.It was his brave heart and strong
gate and often got lost.One day,during gym class,she ob-
faith that could make something unusual happen finally.
served a unique way to find her way-following the shad-
ows of trees.As the sun cast its rays,the girl noticed how
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the shadows created patterns on the ground,guiding her
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path.She took a leap of faith and followed the shadows.
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surprising herself with each turn and stretch.Her efforts
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were noticed by the teacher.who praised her innovative
已知线索:
thinking.
Henderson教授为他的心理学课分配项目伙伴一“我”被
Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the
分配到自己避之不及的队友一向新的队友介绍自己
school building.She used the shadows to navigate the
一被队友忽视一项目要求每个小组提出一个假说,并
school hallways.find her classes.and even locate the
进行验证一—一“我”和队友见面讨论“我们”的项目—一达
school's various facilities.This newfound skill not only
成一致…
helped the girl navigate her school but also instilled in her a
可续写线索:
sense of confidence and adventure.She learned excitedly
“我”和队友相处如何?两人之间的关系有何转变?看见
that with a little creativity and observation,any challenge
他躺在病床上,“我”有何感想?项目进展如何?“我”有何
could be overcome.And with each step she took,she left
感悟?