一、如何使句子出彩-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

第五章 读后续写的写作策略 懿一、如何使句子出彩刻 由于受到中文思维的影响，很多同学在写句子的时候习惯以人称开头，通篇下来都是“H.·;L,·; The man.·,”等等，这样显得枯燥乏味。事实上，只要有意识地改写句子，尝试以多种方式开头，就能够使 得表达更加灵活，重点更加突出。 1,形容词或副词开头 用作修饰主语状态的形容词、用作修饰动作的副词，以及用作修饰整个句子的副词，都可以放在句首， 以突出该形容词或副词所传达的信息。 Quietly,I departed.悄悄地，我离开了。 Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the woods.顷刻间，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。 Desperate and helpless,Anne knelt down.感到绝望而无助，安妮跪了下来。 Weak as she was,Jane struggled to her feet,continuing to seek help..尽管虚弱，简还是挣扎着站了起来， 继续求助。 2.分词开头 句子开头以doing或done作状语，代替表示原因、时间、方式等的状语从句，能够使得句子简洁而 灵动。 Making the best of this encounter,I took some pictures of the bear.为了充分利用这次邂逅，我给熊拍 了一些照片 Falling in despair,Jane felt exhausted and overwhelmed.简陷入绝望，感到筋疲力尽，不知所措」 Bursting into tears,she threw herself into Tom's arms the moment she saw him.她一见到汤姆就泪流满 面，扑到他的怀里。 Thrilled yet relieved,we grabbed the rope and eventually landed on the helicopter safe and sound. 动而又松了一口气，抓住绳子，最终安然无恙地降落在直升机上。 3.动词不定式开头 位于句首的动词不定式通常作主语或者目的状语。在读后续写当中，以动词不定式开头的句子通常是 为了强调目的状语，可以用in order to替代 To save the child,he laid down his life.(=in order to save the child,he laid down his life.)为了救那 个孩子，他献出了生命。 To get there on time,we hurriedly packed the car.(=In order to get there on time,we hurriedly packed the car,)为了准时到达，我们匆忙地装车。 4.介词开头 句子开头可以使用表示地点、时间、原因等带有介词的短语，如as a result;just at that moment:onmy way back等。在描述性的文字当中，以下三个普遍使用的结构值得同学们牢记。 (1)With/Without+-宾语(+宾语补足语)，表示“伴随着：有着；没有…”等。 Without saying a word,the man picked Kim up off the scooter and calmly stepped away.那人一言不发， 把Km从摩托车上扶起来，然后平静地走开了。 (2)To one's+名词，表示“让某人…的是…” To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.让我们如释重负的是，爸爸拒绝了这个主意。 To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest.让她吃惊的是，她看到的只有森林。 171 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 (3)n+名词，表示“…地”。 In relief,they found their way out finally..他们终于如释重负地找到了出路。 In delight,they entered the room,singing and dancing.他们高兴地唱着跳着进入房间。 5.倒装句 在英语中，有时候为了强调某些信息、平衡句子结构、使上下文衔接更紧密，会使用一些语序不正常的 句子，我们称之为倒装句。正常的句子语序应该是主语位于谓语之前。而倒装句则根据“不正常”的情况 分为完全倒装和部分倒装。 Out rushed the boys.(=The boys rushed out.)男孩们冲了出去。 By the window sat a young man with a book in his hand.(=A young man sat by the window with a book in his hand..)靠窗坐着一个手里拿着一本书的年轻人。 Buried in the sands was a golden box..(=A golden box was buried in the sands.)埋在沙滩上的是一个金 盒子。 Standing beside the table was his wife.(=His wife was standing beside the table..)站在餐桌旁的是他的 妻子。 Little did he know the importance of this appointment.(=He knew little about the importance of this appointment,)他对这项任命的重要性知之甚少。 Only then did I realize how important he was to me.(=I didn't realize how important he was to me only then.)直到那时我才意识到他对我有多重要。 Not only did she speak English,but she also spoke French.(=She not only spoke English,but also French.)她不仅会说英语，而且还会说法语。 So cold was it that we had to stay at home.(=It was so cold that we had to stay at home.)天气太冷了， 我们不得不待在家里。 Not until then did I realize what kind of trouble I was in.(=I didn't realize what kind of trouble I was in until then,)直到那时我才意识到我陷入了什么样的麻烦。 Exhausted as/though he was,he didn't give up.(=Although/Though he was exhausted,he didn't give p.)尽管他筋疲力尽，但他没有放弃。 No sooner had she rushed out of house than tears of regret rolled down her cheeks.(=Hardly had she rushed out of house when tears of regret rolled down her cheeks.=As soon as she rushed out of the house,tears of regret rolled down her cheeks.)她一冲出家门，悔恨的泪水就从她的脸颊上滚落下来。 He doesn't enjoy being alone.Neither do I.(=He doesn't enjoy being alone.I didn't enjoy being alone, either,)他不喜欢独处，我也不喜欢。 Had you come earlier,you might have witnessed everything.(=If you had come earlier,you might have witnessed everything..)如果你早点来，你可能会目睹一切。 @号牛刀小试 一、把下列句子改写成以形容词或副词开头的句子。 1.Jim carefully stepped over all the broken glass. 2.Arthur skipped up the street joyfully. 3.Tom was curious to know what was inside,so he tiptoed into the dark cave. 72 第五章读后续写的写作策略 4.Ben was unable to say a word and was rooted to the spot. 5.I was hungry and exhausted,and I wondered if we could find our way back. 二、把下列句子改写或翻译成以分词开头的句子。 1.After he looked around cautiously,Jim slipped into the room and softly closed the door. 2.While he was walking along the sands towards his boat,Simon saw the mark of a man's foot in the sand. 3.As he was surrounded by a group of young people,the old man felt pleased. 4.As we were faced with this situation,we had to turn to strangers for help. 5.听到这个消息的时候，他们高兴得跳了起来。 6.他慢慢地走过草地，把枪对准狮子就射击了。 7.当被问到发生了什么事情的时候，他垂下了头。 8.那个女孩陷入了沉思，没有注意到危险正在靠近。 三、把下列句子翻译成以动词不定式开头的句子。 1.为了避免尴尬，她悄悄转身，离开现场。 2.为了满足他的好奇心，他溜进了房间并轻轻关上了门。 四、用介词结构为开头，翻译下列句子。 1.眼里噙着泪水，简(Jane)拾头看着她的丈夫。 2.那个瘦小的小伙子毫不犹豫地跳进冰冷湍急的河水中。 3.让她非常高兴的是，直升机注意到她并且着陆。 4.他们惊讶地睁着眼睛看结果。 五、用倒装句翻译下列句子。 1.她一生中从来没有吃过比这更好的东西。 2.我们一露面，狗就跑走了。 3.虽然他很疲惫，但是他坚持要把工作完成。 173 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 4.我几乎没有意识到那天会发生一些异常的事情。 5.直到那时，我才意识到，尽管乔(Jo)在做家务方面有困难，但是他还是懂得如何照顾我。 6.他是如此绝望和无助，以至于跪了下来。 7.她儿乎不知道的是，家里的一个朋友已经联系该组织了。 8.她做梦也没想到自己会遇到这么大的麻烦。 ※二、如何正确使用修辞蕊 在读后续写中适当使用修辞手法，能够突出所描写事物的特点，增强感染力和语言的生动性，丰富句子 含义，给人留下深刻印象。下面介绍四种常用且相对容易掌握的修辞手法。 L.明喻(simile),是将抽象事物具体化，复杂情况简单化，给文字增加画面感。明喻常用as,like,asif、 as though,similar to,seem等词语指出两种不同事物的共同特征。基本形式是“甲像乙”，即“本体+比喻词+ 喻体”。以下是三种常见的明喻结构。 类型 例句 I reached out to touch her face,which was as cold as the ice.我伸手去摸她的 as或者as.…as作比喻词 脸，那张像冰一样冷的脸。 The icy wind started howling,cutting my face like a sharp knife.寒风开始咆 ke作比喻词 哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛我的脸。 Her hair grew grayer and grayer,as if it were covered with snow and frost. asif作比喻词 的头发越来越白了，仿佛盖了一头霜雪。 He ran like lightning.他跑得如闪电一般飞快。 He looks like a fish out of water.他看起来像一条离开水的鱼 Like the sands through the hourglass,so are the days of our lives.就像沙漏中的沙子一样，我们生命中 的每一天也如此。 The teacher's instructions were of little use to the boy,as if like water off a duck's back. 老师的教导，男孩只当耳旁风，好比是水滴在了鸭子背上，丝毫不起作用。 Those old favorite songs are very dear to me as though they are like long-lost friends that make me cry. 这些老歌对我来说很亲切，犹如好久不见的老友，令我潸然泪下。 As happy as a lark is my daughter,whose presence makes everyone happy and relaxed.我女儿就像百灵 鸟，只要她在，家里人人都心情愉快，情绪放松。 2.暗喻(metaphor),也叫隐喻，根据两个事物的共同特征，把一个事物比喻成另一个事物。通常只出现 本体和喻体，不使用ke和s等比喻词，典型结构是“本体+是+喻体”。 The best mirror is an old friend.老朋友是最好的镜子。 A heavy silence blanketed the room.一片沉默笼罩在整个房间。 The boy wolfed down the food.那个小男孩狼吞虎咽。 Wind and rain whipped the house.风雨鞭答着房子。 The computers at school are old dinosaurs.这些电脑老旧得不像样。答案全解全析 9.A great sense of relief flooded over 十二、名词性从句 10.A smile brightened/lit up her face 【牛刀小试】 11.Motherland is drawing the heart of 12.The sight of the scene filled 运用名词性从句翻译下列句子。 二、运用无灵主语句改写下列句子。 1.I'm wondering whether/if you could tell me more about this activity. 1.The past four years have witnessed an increase in 2.I am completely convinced that everyone has the potential to production. achieve success. 2.Dusk found him crying in the street. 3.By the way,I do hope that you can help me improve my 3.Dawn saw the little boy still working. English writing ability. 4.Ten years of hard work changed her greatly. 4.We share the same belief that he is to come to give us a 5.The city had witnessed many great historic events hand. 6.Whispers went around the classroom. 5.It's a pity that you can't stay longer. 7.School reforms lead to less time spent with parents. 6.As a member of society.I'm aware that being responsible is 8.Good habits lead to efficiency while bad ones bring the what it takes to make a better society. opposite. 7.What impresses me most is his courage and calmness when 9.Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the he meets challenges and difficulties. difference. 8.I've leamned from your post that you want to improve your 10.Views differ from person to person./Opinions vary greatly Mandarin. among people. 9.Word came that the new mayor would come to our school 十、定语从句 s00n. 10.There is no denying/No one can deny the fact that success 【牛刀小试】 lies in a healthy body and mind. 请将下面各题中的两个单句合成一个带定语从句的句子。 1.I cherish the moment when/at which we had a great time 第五章 读后续写的写作策略 together. 一、如何使句子出彩 2.I happened to meet our professor who was reading a book in the library. 【牛刀小试】 3.Mary wants to explain the reason why she was absent from 一、把下列句子改写成以形容词或副词开头的句子。 the class. 1.Carefully,Jim stepped over all the broken glass. 4.The movie (that/which)we saw last night enjoyed great 2.Joyfully,Arthur skipped up the street. 3.Curious to know what was inside,Tom tiptoed into the dark popularity. cave. 5.Olivia.whose mother is a foreign language teacher.has a great talent for language. 4.Unable to say a word,Ben was rooted to the spot. 5.Hungry and exhausted,I wondered if we could find our way 十一、状语从句 back. 【牛刀小试】 二、把下列句子改写或翻译成以分词开头的句子。 一、用适当的连词填空。 1.Looking around cautiously.Jim slipped into the room and 1.Where 2.as if 3.Every time 4.since 5.If softly closed the door. 6.As 7.that 8.in case 9.than 2.Walking along the sands towards his boat,Simon saw the 10.Even though/Although/Though/Even if mark of a man's foot in the sand. 二、请将下面两个单句合成一个带状语从句的句子。 3.Surrounded by a group of young people,the old man felt pleased. 1.Jim was so angry that he almost lost his mind. 4.Faced with this situation,we had to tum to strangers for 2.She left before I could say anything. help. 3.She spoke very slowly in order that/so that we could follow 5.Hearing the news,they all jumped with joy. her. 6.Walking slowly across the grass.he pointed the gun at the 4.He speaks English as well as you do. lion and fired. 5.I will write to you the moment/the minute/when I arrive in 7.Asked what had happened,he lowered his head. Paris. 8.Lost in thought,the girl didn't notice the approaching 三、翻译下列句子。 danger. 1.If I were you,I would finish the homework first. 三、把下列句子翻译成以动词不定式开头的句子。 2.If Mom were here,she could have solved the issue. 1.To avoid embarrassment,she tumed around and left the 3.If I were to get a puppy.I would take great care of it. scene quietly. 4.The teacher loves us as if we were his own children. =In order to avoid embarrassment,she turned around and 5.If I won the lottery,I would buy a big house. left the scene quietly 009 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 2.To satisfy his curiosity.he slipped into the room and softly 三、如何长短句结合 closed the door. 【牛刀小试】 =In order to satisfy his curiosity,he slipped into the room 以长短句结合的结构改写以下段落。 and softly closed the door. One summer night a few years ago.my parents and I. 四、用介词结构为开头，翻译下列句子。 very happy after supper with a cold breeze,went to have a 1.With tears in her eyes,Jane looked up to her husband. walk by the river.Suddenly.I saw a great structure standing 2.Without hesitation.the thin and small young man threw beautifully in the moonlight.It was the TV tower,the highest himself into the cold and swift river. building in the city. 3.To her great joy,the helicopter noticed her and landed. 四、如何进行篇章的衔接 4.In surprise,they kept their eyes wide open to read the 【牛刀小试】 result. 翻译下面的句子，使用恰当的连接词汇。 五、用倒装句翻译下列句子。 1.On his arrival,Ali found Zahra was waiting outside I.Never in her life had she tasted anything better. 2.Fortunately,with his kind and immediate help,I smoothly 2.No sooner had we turned up than the dog ran off. got on the train. =Hardly/Scarcely had we turned up when the dog ran off. 3.Cold rain was beating against the bus window.However 3.Tired as/though he was,he insisted on finishing the work. Nevertheless,I felt warm inside. 4.Little did I realize something different would happen that 4.The instant Zahra saw the new shoes,her face lit up. day. 5.So thrilled was Zahra that she threw herself into Ali's arms 5.Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take hugging warmly with him. care of me despite his trouble with the housework. 6.He started coming out of the house and talking to his neighbors.Soon.he and the boy became friends. 6.So desperate and helpless was he that he felt on his knees. 7.Thanks to the little boy,the old man stepped out of his 7.Little did she know that a family friend had already reached loneliness and opened the door of his heart. out to the organization. 8.Before long,we caught sight of the light in the distance 8.Never in her wildest dream had she thought that she would We knew we were safe. run into such serious trouble. 9.On the one hand,I can earn some money by doing it to help 二、如何正确使用修辞 my parents,and on the other hand,I can gain some experience from it,which will do good to my future life. 【牛刀小试】 10.Leaving the store,Missus Sommers was no longer elegant 一、根据提示，用比喻的手法翻译以下句子。 but relieved.After all,it was her responsibility to take 1.He loves working out,so his body is as strong as an ox. good care of her dear children. 2.My heart is as sweet as honey. 六、如何进行读后续写的结尾 3.The bus went as slowly as a snail. 【牛刀小试】 4.The scenery in front of us is as pretty as a picture. 请给出恰当的结尾句。 5.He stood still like a stone. 1.Only at that time did we realize that things would turn out 6.The smile on her face shone like a diamond fine if we faced it with sincerity,honesty as well as 7.He was anxious like an ant on a hot pan. responsibility. 8.The diary has accompanied me for quite a long time like an 2.We were wild with joy and promised to take good care of old friend. Timothy later. 二、根据提示，用拟人的手法翻译以下句子。 3.Watching Timothy pacing in the yard and pecking at its food 1.He was running freely as if he were a happy bird. leisurely,we felt the bitter winter wind became warmer than ever before. 2.The puppy looked at me innocently.as if he didn't know 4.Mom and Dad seemed to understand the friendship between what had happened. two kids and a feathery bird,saying,"It's OK.And you 3.He felt as if his heart had been stabbed by a knife. have to promise to take good care of it from now on. 4.The summer breeze gently touched my face. 七、如何升华写作主题 5.The bridge has witnessed the city's great changes in the past decade. 【牛刀小试】 6.Birds are singing everywhere. 根据短文的内容，写作文章的主题句。 7.Excitement took hold of me. 1.Mastering English requires continuous practice,a positive approach towards difficulties,and an unwavering belief in 三、根据提示，用夸张的手法翻译下列句子。 persistent hard work. 1.I was scared to death. 2.Actually,love and care from the teachers and his classmates 2.My heart broke into about a million pieces. has changed him entirely./In my opinion,it's love and 3.When I heard the news,my heart burst. care from the teachers and his classmates that has changed 4.Hearing the news,I was on the top of the world. him entirely. 010