第二节人与社会-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

第三章读后续写训练和提高 【思一思】（请用汉语写出100字左右的提纲，可以有效地针对你的写作内容。） 【写-写】 When it was my turn,I told the young man that he had done an extraordinary job. When I got home,I sent an e-mail to the manager of the store. 第二节 人与社会 ※Passage1 争当火炬手蕊 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Pick up the pace！"said Amy's husband.“But I can't!”Amy said,her heart beating quickly inside.“I can't go any faster!"Her husband encouraged her."Yes,you can!You're making progress every day." To help Amy stay healthy,her husband had been running with her for over two years.Several years ago, Amy could barely walk down the stairs of her apartment building due to fatness caused by eating disorders.She realized the problem after a failed job interview and began walking to improve her ability to move.At first,she could walk for only 15 minutes at a time.But she pushed herself every day,walking 5 minutes longer than she did the day before until she walked for an hour and eventually two.For three years,Amy kept her walking habit, slowly and painstakingly building her body shape.Then she changed her walking shoes to running shoes about two years ago and became an excellent runner. In March 2001,an advertisement invited people to nominate (an ordinary person who inspired them to bring the Olympic flame to Salt Lake City as torch bearers (or support runners.(Support runners serve as"guardians of the flame"and run with torch bearers along the journey.)Amy's experiences touched her husband,so he nominated her to be a torch bearer.The possibility to be selected was low,but Amy wanted to have a try. Running taught Amy the importance of training for a race.She pictured herself running a race and crossing the finish line.For months,she ran through her neighborhood carrying a broken-off broom handle,feeling the weight of the torch.She waved at her neighbors,pretending they were cheering crowds.She also printed a picture of a torch bearer wearing the white uniform,replaced the face with a picture of hers,and put it onto her refrigerator door. Every day,Amy imagined herself as a torch bearer.She was training for a historic running event. On September 26th,while on her daily run through her neighborhood,an express package arrived. 101 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 注意1，续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 Amy opened it and found a letter and a book on the Olympics "One of today's torch bearers can't run her part,"announced the relay organizer. 读一读DU YI DU Ay因为肥胖导致生活不便和工作面试失败，但在丈夫的鼓励下，她开始坚持跑步，并最终成为一名 优秀的跑步者。奥运火炬手征集活动要挑选一名能代表体育精神影响周围人的普通人作为火炬手或者陪 跑手，Amy的丈夫认为妻子坚持锻炼的励志经历符合选拔条件，所以为Amy报了名。虽然人选机会不大， 但是Amy很想尝试一下。Amy开始模拟自己是火炬手的情形：平时跑步时举着扫把、向邻居挥手致意，将 海报上的火炬手换成自己的脸…Amy一直在为成为一名火炬手而努力地练习跑步，直到她收到了一个 包裹。 根据续写的提示：第一句：Amy打开包裹发现了一封信和一本有关奥运会的书：第二句：接力比赛组织 者宣布有一名火炬手因故无法参加火炬接力。 思一思SYMS 根据前文提示可知，Amy是一个意志坚定的人。由续写第一句提示可知，包裹里的信件内容未知，但 是结合续写第二句提示可以合理推测续写部分的故事情节一这封信是为了感谢她积极参加报名却遗憾 落选，但是她依然继续坚持训练，然后在火炬传递的当天，恰好一名火炬手因故无法参加火炬接力跑步， Ay再次争取机会，以替补的身份成功参加了火炬接力，成为一名真正的火炬手。 需要注意的是：1，作为一篇记叙文，前文中的对话不太多，主要集中在第一段，所以在续写的部分也要 注意不能出现太多的对话，有1~2次对话即可，要在写作风格上与前文保持一一致：2.续写中Ay的行为和 心理要和前文铺垫的一致，体现出她是一个意志坚定、非常想要参加火炬传递活动的人；3.作为原文中的一 个关键配角，Ay丈夫积极鼓励妻子运动，并主动帮妻子报名参加火炬手选拔，所以续写中也要继续体现 他的存在和作用。 写一写XEY1Xg Amy opened it and found a letter and a book on the Olympics. To her disappointment,she wasn't selected as an official bearer. "Though I'm not selected as an official bearer.I'm a substitute bearer."Upset as she was.Amy made up her mind to keep training and prepare for the torch relay.Few months later,when the olympic flame arrived at Salt Lake City.Amy and her husband went to the assembling place to cheer other selected bearers.Unexpectedly,a bearer didn't come. "One of today's torch bearers can't run her part," announced the relay organizer.Amy became excited when she heard the announcement,thinking it was an opportunity for her to achieve her dream.She volunteered bravely."I can!"Having checked Amy's 02 第三章、读后续写训练和提高 identity,the organizer permitted Amy to take the place of the absent bearer.Amy held the torch in her hand.waving her hand towards her husband and the crowds as she had practiced while running."You are great!"yelled her husband.So,never give up when you want to achieve a dream! ※Passage2贪吃之祸 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It's a funny and true experience.Now when Mike thinks of it,he laughs a lot,but when it happened,Mike was really frightened.He is going to tell it to you.Once when Mike was a child,maybe eight years old,he had a frightening experience.Mike thinks about it frequently.He was in his house with all his family.Mike cannot remember when it happened very well,but it was possibly at Christmas.They were going to have a big supper and Mike was very happy because he liked to eat a lot.Besides,Mike hadn't eaten for a long time.Therefore, he was starving.He became very angry,because Mike saw his mother and his aunt talking for a long time.Mike didn't want to wait any longer.Moreover,it was time for having supper.Weren't they starving? "Mother,what happened with the food?"Mike asked.Then she looked at him seriously and said,"You need more patience,my honey." "Yes,"Mike replied,"I see.I need to be patient.Nevertheless,I can't be patient today,because I am starving." Time passed,and finally dinner was on the table.The first dish was "puchero".Puchero is one of his favorite dishes:this dish has chicken,rice,vegetables,and pork.Also,it's a very hot dish,so usually you need to wait at least half an hour before you start to eat.You can enjoy its taste better when it's not so hot. Nevertheless,when Mike saw it on the table,he got a spoon and started to eat quickly.In a moment,his face was red,and there was a strange feeling on his tongue.Mike had burned it.Immediately,Mike shouted in pain and his mother asked him,"What is the matter?" "Mother,help me!I think my tongue is going to fall off!Send me to see the doctor.Mike screamed crazily. "Do not worry,my child.Your father is going to take you to the hospital,"said his mother.Mike looked at his mother's face and he could tell she was concerned. 注意1，续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 Then his father and Mike went to the hospital. Mike did it slowly.He looked at his tongue for a long time. 读一读DU YI DU 文章记叙了Mike小时候因为着急吃饭导致舌头被烫伤的故事。Mike因为饿了等着吃饭，妈妈却和阿 姨一直在聊天。等到终于开饭的时候，第一道菜就是Mike喜欢的puchero(一种炖菜)，所以他大快朵顾， 却没有注意到这道菜需要凉了之后才好吃，结果被烫伤了舌头。这个故事可以称作外国版的“心急吃不了 热豆腐”。 根据续写的提示：第一句：爸爸带Mke去医院；第二句：Mke慢慢做了一个动作，并看若自己的舌头看 了很长时间。 03 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 思一思S11S 根据前文提示可知，故事发生时，Mk只有8岁左右，所以在饥饿时，哪怕妈妈和阿姨正在聊天，他也 会直接表达自己的想法，舌头被烫伤了之后也是直接尖叫并要求去看医生，这种小孩子简单直接的性格要 在续写的部分得到体现。 续写第一段可以描写Mk在医院里的治疗过程以及他和医生的互动，这个部分要结合前文他的性格 来设计对话和情节。第二句提示是Mke慢慢地做了某个动作，所以第一段的最后应设计出医生让Mike 配合检查所做的某一个具体动作。由于人很难自己看到自己的舌头，所以看舌头的内容应该要和镜子有关 系。续写第二段中，应该加入家长（或者医生）对Mk的建议，而建议的内容应该是吃饭要慢一点，更有耐 心一点，且建议的表达方式要符合成人对小孩子讲话的风格。 需要注意的是：1.作为一篇童年回忆文章，前文中对Mk的描写是生动的，所以续写部分也要注意，对 Mk的动作和语言描写要符合儿童的行为特点：2.为了使故事情节比较圆满，续写的结局部分可以对当时 的小意外进行总结。 写一写XEY1Xg Then his father and Mike went to the hospital.Mike didn't stop crying and screaming until he was taken into a doctor's office.The doctor asked Mike."How are you feeling now?"Mike said nothing but kept crying.The doctor comforted Mike with gentle smiles and asked Mike to open his mouth and examined his tongue carefully "Nothing serious.Take it easy!"The doctor took out a mirror and put it in front of Mike,.“Stick your tongue out!"” Mike did it slowly.He looked at his tongue for a long time.The tongue was redder than he had imagined."Does it still hurt?"the doctor asked.Mike nodded his head with tears in his eyes. "Remember not to be so hurry next time,my little boy."The doctor suggested and then prescribed a spray to ease the pain.Mike's father thanked the doctor and took mike back home.mike made a promise that he would never try the hot puchero any more. ※Passage3善良的店主 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文 It was Christmas Day.Pappy was working alone fixing an old lantern in the back room when he heard the ringing of his bell on the shop door.The bell,which produced a uniquely pleasant sound,had been in Pappy's family for over a hundred years.He valued it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all who came to his shop. Although the bell hung on the inside of the main door,Pappy had tied a wire to the screen door so that it would ring whether the inner door was open or not.Hearing the bell,he left the back room to greet his customer. 04 第三章读后续写训练和提高 "And how can I help you,little lady?"Pappy's voice was joyful. "Hello,sir."The little girl spoke almost in a whisper.She looked at Pappy with her big brown eyes,and then slowly scanned the room in search of something special.Shyly she told him,"I'd like to buy a present,sir.” “Well,ler'ssee,”Pappy said,“who is this present for?" "My grandpa.It's for my grandpa.But I don't know what to get. Pappy began to make suggestions."How about a pocket watch?It's in good condition."The little girl didn't answer.She had walked to the doorway and put her small hand on the door.She shook the door gently to ring the bell.Pappy's face seemed to glow as he saw her smiling with excitement. "This is just right,"the little girl said."Momma says Grandpa loves music. Just then,Pappy's expression changed.Fearful of breaking the little girl's heart,he told her."I'm sorry, Missy.That's not for sale.Maybe your grandpa would like this little radio." The girl looked at the radio,bowed her head,and sadly sighed,"No,I don't think so." In an effort to help her understand,Pappy told her that the bell had been his only companion,for the rest of his family were all gone now,except for his estranged daughter whom he had not seen for nearly a decade 注意1.续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him. Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing. 读一读DUY1DU Pppy是一个善良乐观的小店主，他非常珍爱祖传铃铛，并将其挂在门上，每当有客人进出的时候，铃 铛都会发出悦耳的铃声。圣诞节那天，当一个小姑娘走进Pppy的店里，想要为自己的外公挑选礼物的时 候，她看中了Pappy最珍爱的铃铛。Pappy向她推荐的其他礼物都不能打动她，但是Pappy自己也非常不 舍得铃铛，因为那个铃铛几乎就是他唯一的陪伴，所以他不想把铃铛卖给小姑娘。 根据续写的提示：第一句：小姑娘眼泪汪汪地看着Pappy:第二句：Pappy晚上要关店的时候听到了熟悉 的铃铛声。 思一思S1YIS 根据前文提示，圣诞节是西方国家阖家团圆的日子，而Pppy一个人独居。对家庭成员的线索出现在 给定材料的最后一段，他有一个近10年没有见过面的女儿。文中并未提及Pppy和女儿疏远的原因，但是 在续写部分中，我们可以设计温馨情节：来到店里的小姑娘正是Pppy的外孙女，是好久不见的女儿带着外 孙女回来看望爸爸。因为文章中小女孩声称她妈妈说外公喜欢音乐，如果小女孩和自己的外公经常见面， 那么她就不用转述妈妈的话，由此推断小女孩没有和外公见过面，说明她不知道Pppy就是自己的外公。 因此，续写第一段可以合理想象Pppy不忍心小孩伤心，忍痛割爱将珍爱的铃铛卖给了（或者送给了） 小女孩，这部分的内容要着重突出Pppy的心理活动，因为前文有很多关于他珍爱铃铛的铺垫。续写第二 段可以呈现一场惊喜的温馨大团圆，熟悉的铃铛声音是因为自己好久不见的女儿带着外孙女来到店里，一 家人惊喜重逢团聚。 105 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 写一写XIE YI XIE With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him. Pappy couldn't stand with the girl's heart-broken expression.He got into a dilemma.The bell meant too much for him.Not only was it an ancestral bell,but also he was accustomed to the pleasant sound in daily life.However,he couldn't figure out the reason why he liked the little girl and didn't want to let her down.He sighed."Missy.you can give it to your grandpa."The girl left the shop happily with the bell in her hands,leaving Pappy standing there silently Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.He was very confused and rushed out to see where the ringing came from.Much to his surprise,his daughter, together with the girl,stood at the gate.Pappy couldn't help shedding tears."Dad.I'm back."said his daughter.Never would Pappy imagine the reunion with his daughter and granddaughter.He decided to forget all the unpleasant memories with his daughter and celebrate the most unforgettable Christmas ®Passage4 泳池救生员测 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lungs nearly bursting,I struggled to lift my head out of the water.Inch by inch,my tired body reached for the end of the pool. The extent of my swimming career was purely recreational.while the competitive swimmers nearby thought nothing of the seemingly simple task of a 500-meter swim test.Pushing myself to finish what I had started,I could only think:why not take the easy way out? Earlier that week I had turned in my first job application at a local pool.Overqualified.I was hired on the spot.However,the tasks were boring:helping confused visitors and measuring the height of children before they went down the slide,those sorts of things.I was capable of more. So a swim test was required,establishing the mere fact that I was not completely helpless in a pool.Midway through,the manager administering the test remarked,"This looks really easy for you.Why aren't you applying to become a guard?" "The thought hadn't crossed my mind." "Well,life guarding demands more responsibility,strength and respect.Thus the position pays $2 more per hour.Your swimming skills are strong enough.All you need to do is complete a certification class. Inside I was unsure of myself,but his words inspired me-you never know what you are capable of until you force yourself to do it. 第三章读后续写训练和提高 Soon I passed the swim test.All left was to practice and learn first aid,CPR(心肺复苏)，and procedures for different land and water-based emergencies. Work started soon.A well-intentioned yet anxious feeling in me soon passed.Days,weeks and months went by without incident;emergencies were rare.The skills and training I had so carefully studied and acquired seemed unnecessary. Today appeared to be another uneventful day.However,shortly after the other guards signaled to the children to exit the pool,I noticed one boy was still in the middle while the others had climbed up. 往意1.续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 "Something must have gone wrong with him,"I thought to myself. Having the boy on the floor,I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck 读一读DU YI DU 文章介绍了一名泳池救生员的故事。本来作者只是应聘了一个简单的岗位，但是经理建议作者可以做 救生员的工作，作者答应了并且参加了各种急救培训。日复一日，救生员的日常工作中并无紧急事件发生， 作者所学的技能看起来也派不上用场。直到有一天，作者发现水中有个男孩没有按要求游上来。 根据续写的提示：第一句：作者感到那个男孩一定出了问题：第二句：作者把男孩平放到地面上后，用耳 朵和手去感受他的呼吸和脉搏。 思-思SS剑 由第一句续写提示可知，作者是一名救生员，发现男孩出问题，应该会及时赶去救援，故续写第一段可 以从作者发现情况不妙后迅速救授开始，描写在救援过程中作者遇到的困难、身心感受，以及如何把男孩救 到岸上的过程。由第二句续写提示可知，作者已经将男孩救到了岸上，那么接下来续写第二段可以围绕如 何急救来展开，而前文提到作者学过急救知识，可以写作者运用这些知识去抢救男孩。 需要注意的是：续写中会提到专业急救知识，故学生应积累一些关于医学急救上的专业名词，切勿生编 硬造。 写一写XEY1XE "Something must have gone wrong with him,"I thought to myself.I hesitated no more,jumped into the pool and swam to the boy immediately.The boy was drowning.When i swam by the side of him,he was already unconscious.I laid him on my back and tried to take him back to the ground.It was not easy to perform my first aid. especially when l found the boy was a bit heavy to carry.Tired and exhausted as I was,I managed to bring him back to the end of the pool. Having the boy on the floor,I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck.I could only feel slight breathes and pulses.He was in danger.I shouted to other guards to call 911 and started to 07 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 perform CPR on him.I pressed his chests regularly,offering proper force to strengthen his heartbeat.Gradually,his condition was getting better.When the ambulance came to the spot,we sent him to hospital at once.Fortunately.word came that he was rescued. ※Passage5郁金香的故事 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was a child growing up in the Netherlands,I often begged my mother to tell me this story about an experience her family had at the end of World War II. During the terrible last winter of the German occupation,food was rare in the Netherlands.People were so hungry that they began to eat small animals and many things not normally considered edible(可食用的)， including tulip bulbs(郁金香球茎)，which could be cooked like potatoes. For centuries my mother's family had owned a highly successful tulip business,which provided jobs for many people in our village.But the war shut their business down,and during the winter of hunger,my grandfather,Albert,donated all his tulip bulbs to feed the hungriest villagers.For years,Albert had been trying to grow a black tulip.By careful selection,he was very close.So he guarded these few bulbs seriously to prevent people from stealing them for food. One day,it was announced that the war was over.But there was much destruction and the Dutch people still faced dangers.My grandfather looked at his pale,thin children and realized that the hunger could continue for a long time,so he made his decision.He seized a shovel (and went into the garden.There he found my mother,Vivian,who was just seven years old,looking nervous.Over her shoulder,Albert saw a band of Germans coming toward them down the street.He whispered to Vivian to run inside the house and began digging for his bulbs.But it was too late.Someone had already stolen them.Angry and desperate,he ran toward the street screaming,"They have stolen my tulip bulbs!"Vivian,watching from the doorway,cried out and ran to stop him.Before she could reach her father,a German soldier raised his gun and shot him. 注意1.续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 Fortunately,Albert survived his wounds and recovered slowly. It took some time for Albert to rebuild his business,starting with those few bulbs. 读一读DUY10U 作者经常让母亲Vivian讲第二次世界大战后期他们家族的故事。当时荷兰被德国纳粹占领，作者的 祖父Albert经营着非常成功的郁金香种植生意，但由于粮食十分短缺，Albert忍痛把可食用的郁金香球茎 给了村民们充饥，只保留一些他细心栽培的黑色郁金香球茎。由于饥荒持续，看到家人由于饥饿而苍白的 脸，他决定把球茎挖出来给家人食用充饥，却发现球茎已经被人偷了，于是他情绪激动，大声呼喊时被路过 的德军一枪射中。 给出的第一句提示：祖父只是受了伤，会慢慢康复过来：第二句提示：祖父花了一些时间重拾生意，而那 几个保留的球茎起了很大作用 08 第三章读后续写训练和提高 思-思SYIS 根据前文提示可知，祖父非常重视自己精选的黑色郁金香球茎，所以发现其被偷了之后非常愤怒。在 续写第一段描写祖父休养的过程中，可以着重体现出他身受重伤但依然内心愤怒。续写第二段提示有几个 郁金香球茎被保留了下来，而原文中祖父剩下的郁金香已经被人拿走了，所以在续写的第一段中还可以交 代保留下来的郁金香球茎是从哪里来的。另外，续写第二段可以描述剩下的儿个郁金香球茎是怎样帮助祖 父重振家族生意的。 需要注意的是：1，无须过多追究郁金香球茎到底是被谁偷的，因为在缺乏食物的战乱时期会有太多的 可能性：2.前文体现出祖父慷慨助人的品质，在续写中也可以适当拓展这种品质如何帮助他重振家族生意。 写一写XIE YI XIE Fortunately,Albert survived his wounds and recovered slowly. During his recovery,Albert was very painful because of the wound and the loss of his tulip bulbs.Having heard that Albert was hurt. those who had been offered the tulip bulbs came to visit him after the German soldiers left the village,bringing whatever they could find to eat for him.With the encouragement and company of the whole family and villagers.Albert was back on his feet.He decided to continue his planting with the few survived bulbs that were returned from some villagers. It took some time for Albert to rebuild his business,starting with those few bulbs.Hard as it was at the beginning.Albert's generosity during the war made him a trusted and respected man,so villagers came to help actively.With the recovery of the whole nation,Albert's business also became better and better.What's more,after years' attempts,Albert finally succeeded in growing black tulips.The war,as well as the stolen bulbs,has gone,but the generosity and determination of Albert inspired all the members of our family. 》Passage6幸运女病人蕊 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 "The mall?Really,Mom?"13-year-old Michelle asks her mother as her sister Nicole,three,looks on. "Absolutely."Patty smiles."You girls deserve some fun,and I need to get out of the house."With dialysis (treatments every five hours,Patty rarely ventures (from her Raymond,New Hampshire, home.She's also been waiting four years to receive a call-the call that would call her for the double organ transplant (she so desperately needs to live-the call that could come at any time."There,Patty smiles. “Ler's go have an adventure！" 09 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 Before leaving,Patty phones her firefighter husband Gary.But there's no answer.Patty and her children arrive at the mall."Whoa!"Patty laughs,forgetting in the excitement to call Gary. At 3:05 Gary returns to the fire house.Just as he's about to phone home to check on Patty,the phone is ringing!"We've got a match!"Patty's doctor says."But she's got to Charlotte.North Carolina,by midnight." Gary's heart beats fast as he calls home."Why doesn't she answer?"Gary dials again and again. Gary worries at the fire station.He's booked four tickets on both of the two flights to North Carolina,a 6 p.m.from nearby Manchester or a 7:25 p.m.from Boston.Where are you Patty?With still no answer,Gary hangs up and dials the police department.He and his firefighter colleagues phone local stores and malls. Now as Patty and her daughters go shopping,the mall loudspeakers are making an announcement.But in the crowded mall,Patty doesn't hear it. At 5:45 Gary realizes it's too late to make the Manchester flight.And if he doesn't find Patty soon,they won't make the Boston flight either.Patty still hasn't returned at 6:40."Come home,Patty!"he begs,looking at the driveway.It's 7:00.It's too late!Gary panics.Suddenly,he hears the sound of a car!"Patty!"he cries. Spotting her car pulling into the driveway,he calls the fire department."Get that helicopter here!"he shouts. “She's home!" 注意1，续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答 Patty spots Gary racing toward her,a nervous look on his face and suitcases in his hands! At 7:37 the helicopter takes off. 读一读DU YI DU 故事女主角是等待器官移植多年的Pty。由于生病，需要在家做透析和等待医生通知找到匹配器官 的电话，Ptty几乎没怎么带孩子出去玩过。一天，她终于忍不住带着孩子出去玩了。无巧不成书，就在她 出去的期间，医生居然通知她丈夫Gary,说他们已经找到了跟Paty匹配的器官，但必须当天午夜前就赶到 位于另一个州的医院。Gary赶紧给Ptty打电话，但一直联系不上她。时间流逝，Gary购买的两个时间段 的机票都赶不上了！最后晚上七点时，Pty终于回家，Gay见状立刻呼叫了消防局的直升机 根据续写的提示：第-一句：Py看到丈夫紧张的神情并拿着行李箱跑向自己：第二句：直升机在晚上 7:37起飞了。 思一思SYMS 根据文章提示可知，Ptty长年被迫待在家里等待器官移植通知，没想到自己难得任性一次，仅仅带着 两个女儿出去玩了一个下午，医生就来了通知电话，而Patty的丈夫Gary深爱妻子，在找不到妻子的时间 里，我们可以看到他有多焦急，因此在续写第一段他见到妻子后的情节中，应该不是去描写他如何责怪妻子 或Py如何解释，否则主题容易跑偏，而是可以描写他俩立马登上直升机赶去医院进行手术，着重注意直 升机上两人的互动。而在续写第二段中，直升机出发后，可以描写他们及时赶到医院，手术成功的情节。 需要注意的是：1，着重描写丈夫Gy深爱妻子的细节，可用对话来进行，也可以采用动作或心理描写： 2.原文用一般现在时讲故事，因此续写的时态也要与原文一致。 写-写XEXE Patty spots Gary racing toward her,a nervous look on his face and suitcases in his hands!She has no idea why her husband is here. but she knows something urgent must have happened."Where have you been?!"Gary cries with his body trembling."The doctor has 10启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 第三章 读后续写训练和提高 予了回复。1.由第一段首句内容“轮到我结账时，我告诉 那个年轻人，他处理这件事做得非常出色。”可知，第一段 第一节人与自我 可描写作者如何赞扬年轻人的。2.由第二段首句内容 “那天我给店里经理发了一封电子邮件。”可知，第二段可 【牛刀小试】 描写感谢信的内容以及作者的感悟。 Passage 1 思一思（请用汉语写出10字左右的提纲，可以有效的 针对你的写作内容。) 读一读（请用汉语写出10字左右的提纲，可以有效的 续写线索：赞扬年轻人—写信—收到回信一 针对你的写作内容。) 得知结果 一感悟 文章主要讲述了Joan在爸爸的提酯下想起来妈妈的 写-写 生日，于是和弟弟一起为妈妈淮备了生日惊喜。1.由第 一段首句内容“大扫除计划开始了。”可知，第一段可描写 When it was my tum.I told the young man that he had Jon和弟弟是如何大扫除的。2.由第二段首句内容“蛋 done an extraordinary job.The young man just smiled 糕放在桌上，妈妈走了进来。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈看 without stopping what he was doing and said. 到Joan和弟弟大扫除以及收到蛋糕后的心理感受 “That's not a problem at all.”I looked at this 思一思（请用汉语写出10字左右的提纲，可以有效的 man.whose face reddened but words revealed 针对你的写作内容。) confidence.The composure he showed when 续写线索：Joan和弟弟在周末的早晨熟睡一Joan facing the embarrassed old man surprised me,and 接到爸爸的电话，得知今天是妈妈的生日一一Joan决定 和弟弟一起给妈妈一个惊喜一Jon和弟弟将家里进行 what he did and said touched me deeply.His 了大扫除一妈妈回来后看到这一切很感动，觉得这是 actions were so quick that I checked out instantly. 最好的生日礼物。 Before walking out of the grocery store,I glanced 写一写 back at the young man who was still standing The Big Cleaning plan began.Joan collected the there.treating each customer with absolute clothes from sofa and then put them in the water patience. of a basin.After pouring in some washing liquids, When I got home,I sent an e-mail to the manager of the she began to wash them by hand.Realizing the store.In the e-mail,I talked about what I had met clothes were clean enough,Joan gently squeezed that day.and praised the young man's behavior. water out and hung them to dry.Meanwhile,Mike When I wrote the e-mail,my mind went back to was busy mopping the floor back and forth with the young man,straight back,warm smile.It was all his strength,really aware of what hard work his his carefulness and patience that made every mum had at home!They had just finished the customer's heart hove a glint of warmth.Suddenly cleaning when the express boy came to the door. I remembered a high school lesson:To reserve With the cake placed on the table,Mum came in. your patience towards everyone and to show "Happy birthday.Mum!",they greeted in chorus. kindness to those in need. Confused and surprised,Mum stood frozen.When 第二节人与社会 Mum realized what had happened,a warm current rose in her heart.Staring at the clean floor and the 【牛刀小试】 washed clothes,she could hardly contain her Passage 1 excitement and hugged them tightly."It is the best 读一读（请用汉语写出100字左右的提纲，可以有效地 birthday gift I have ever had!"Mum said 针对你的写作内容。) emotionally.Just then Joan took out her 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jessica和她的姐体 smartphone and took a happy video named Caya一起参加赛跑比赛，Cayla在比赛中掉倒了，Jessica 认为她没有事就独自继续比赛并取得了第一名，在赛后 Mum's Birthday and sent it to Dad. 她找到Caya并帮助她一起完成比赛的故事。1.由续写 Passage 2 第一段首句内容“为她的行为感到内孩，Jessica蹲下来检 读一读（请用汉语写出100字左右的提纲，可以有效的 查Cayla的伤势，"可知，第一段可描写Jessica为了未等 针对你的写作内容。) 待Cayla一起比赛而道歉，并获得Cayla的谅解。2.由续 木文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在商店结账时 写第二段首句内容“当两个姐妹到达终点线的时候她们 遇到了一个年轻店员在非常耐心地帮助一个老人。于是 拥抱在一起。"可知，第二段可描写Jessica和Cayla结束 写信给经理赞扬店员的善良和对顾客的服务，经理也给 比赛的喜悦和两个人的和好 004 答案全解全析 思一思（请用汉语写出100字左右的提纲，可以有效地 写-写 针对你的写作内容。) "Boys,I baked a chocolate cake,"Mrs.Thompson 续写线索：Jessica发现Cayla受伤一Jessica道 walked into the garage.Catching sight of Mrs. 歉一姐妹俩决定继续比赛—Jessica帮助Cayla完成 Thompson,the two froze with fear and followed 比赛—一姐妹俩和好如初 her step with racing hearts.A few minutes later, 写-写 they were served with large slices of cake. Feeling guilty for her behavior,Jessica sat down to check Delicious as the cake was.they didn't have any Cayla's injury.She found that Cayla was injured,and appetite.Mrs.Thompson seemed to notice she regretted running without waiting for her something was wrong."Boys,do you like the sister."What's wrong with your leg?I'm sorry I thought you had a slight fall and you could stand cake?"Paul nodded with his eyes dropping to avoid any eye contact and growing guilt crept into up to continue the race,so I couldn't stop running. his heart. I'm so sorry to leove you alone,but I wanted to When they were about to leave,Mrs.Thompson handed get the first place.You see,I did it."Cayla smiled Paul a brand-new bat and a pair of gloves.Paul looked at and said,"I'm OK.Don't worry about me. them,his face blushing with shame."Th...thanks so Congratulations!.I'm proud of you.”“Do you much."Voice trembling.Paul then bravely poured want to finish the race?"Jessica asked."Yes,let's out everything about the envelope and gave back finish it together."Then Jessica lifted Cayla up the money he hid before.apologizing for his and they ran slowly towards the finish line. stealing.However,Mrs.Thompson.instead of When both the sisters reached the finish line,they boiling with anger,came up to Paul,and said hugged.They laughed and cheered because they gently,"Oh,thank you for helping me find the could finish the race together.Seeing that scene, envelope.I totally forgot where I had put it."In teachers and students all clapped for their courage that split time,it dawned on him that what really and deep sisterhood.Nothing could break them matters is simple honesty and simple kindness. apart!They were still good sisters and best friends, 第三节人与自然 too. Passage 2 【牛刀小试】 读一读（请用汉语写出10字左右的提纲，可以有效地 Passage 1 针对你的写作内容。) 读一读（请用汉语写出100字左右的提纲，可以有效地 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Steve邀约Paul外出 针对你的写作内容。) 打棒球，而Paul答应妈妈帮Thompson夫妇打扫车库卫 文章讲述了作者的儿子抱怨作者不让他晚上外出， 生，之后Steve提议一同干活然后再去玩。在打扫卫生时 但是在通过猫被夜里放出而差点被冻死的事情后，他儿 有信封掉落，孩子们发现大量现金，在Paul想据为己有 子终于明白作者不让他出去是为了他的安全着想。1，由 时，Steve极力打消Paul的想法，之后Thompson太太为感 续写第一段首句内容“Jordan点点头.·我昨晚放她出来 谢孩子们的劳动送来了蛋糕，这让孩子们感到很羞愧，在 的。”可知，第一段可描写猫被放出去后他们去寻找的过 即将离开时Thompson太太送给Paul一只崭新的球棒和 程以及猫被找到后的状态。2.由续写第二段首句内容 一副手套来表达感谢，而Pul也终于意识到自己的错误 “当我开车去动物医院的时候，Jordan坐在后面，把肉球 从而还了钱。1.由续写第一段首句内容“·孩子们，我烤 放在外套里。”可知，第二段可描写他们将猎送去救治的 了一个巧克力蛋糕，'Thompson太太走进车库。”可知，第 过程以及Jordan的懊悔。 一段可描写Thompson太太和孩子们的对话以及两个孩 思一思（请用汉语写出100字左右的提纲，可以有效地 子见到Thompson太太后的反应。2.由续写第二段首句 针对你的写作内容。)》 内容“当他们准备离开时，Thompson太太递给Paul一只 续写线索：去找猫—发现猫—发现猫状态不 崭新的球棒和一副手套。”可知，第二段可描写Paul看到 对一送去救治一猫得救—Jordan懊悔 崭新的球棒和手套时的反应，还钱后Thompson太太的反 写-写 应和对孩子们的感谢，最后是Paul的思想认识。 思一思（请用汉语写出10字左右的提纲，可以有效地 Jordan nodded,"I let her out last night."My mouth 针对你的写作内容。) dropped open."She was outside all night?"I was 续写线索：做蛋糕一送蛋糕—一孩子的担心 so furious,"It was freezing and she could die!" Thompson太太的反应—Paul的愧玖—一送球棒和手 Jordan choked back his words,stunned.I grabbed 套—还钱—感谢—认识 my coat and rushed outside.Jordan followed,fear 05