微技巧六对话描写-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

第二章写作微技巧 (被凉风所包裹)，the dullness of the day was softened,providing a soothing atmosphere for the soul 9. (沐浴在阳光下)and delighted by fantastic scenery,we headed for the destination. 10.With (头顶上方有沉重的鸟云)，the atmosphere became heavy with anticipation of a storm. 三、翻译下面的句子。 1.突然，天空乌云密布，不到一分钟我们就遇到了可怕的暴风雨。 2.流星像一道闪电划过夜空，是一番美丽又令人难忘的景象。 3.那是一个暴风雨之夜，大雨倾盆，狂风呼啸。 4.她觉得冰冷的寒风正像小刀一样刺痛她的脸。 5.一切万籁俱寂，只有呼呼的风声和噼里啪啦的火苗声相伴。 微技巧六 对话描写 一个人的言行能反映一个人的态度和思想品质。因此，必要的对话能烘托故事中人物的形象。但是， 在读后续写写作中要把握对话描写的分寸：1.对话描写必须为推动故事情节服务，是情节发展的一个环节， 每段出现一两句即可：2.对话描写必须反映人物的心理与情感，有利于刻画人物的性格；3.对话描写不宜过 长，侧重口语化词汇，避开生僻词汇；4.对话描写要尽可能结合动作描写，明确说话对象，使内容具有画面 感：5.对话描写中要学会使用感叹词，表达说话人的喜、怒、哀、乐等情绪。在写作中，如果我们在对话标签 中加入语气、声音、，情感，就可以使我们的描写更生动传神。做法如下。 基本结构 示例 in a pleasant tone用一种愉快的语气 in a firm/rude/sad tone用一种愉快/粗鲁/悲伤的语气 in a tone of curiosity用一种好奇的语气 ina/an+形容词+tone 加语气 in a tone of impatience用一种不耐烦的语气 in a tone of+名词 in a tone of command用一种命令的语气 “I would love to,”said Emily in a pleasant tone.“我很乐意这样 做。”埃米莉用一种愉快的语气说。 in a low voice低声说/用一种低沉的声音 in a high/Iow/sweet/Ioud/soft/weak voice用一种高/低/甜/响亮/ ina/an+形容词 加声音 温柔/无力的声音 +voice “I didn't mean to,”she murmured in a low voice.“我不是故意的。” 她低声说。 081 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 续表 with embarrassment(伴随着)难堪 with excitement(伴随着)激动 加情感 with/in+情感名词 "I...I...don't think I'm right for the part,"I replied with embarrassment..“我…我…认为我不适合这个角色。”我尴尬地 回答。 “I will never do that again,”I answered firmly..“我再也不会那样做 了。”我坚定地回答。 加表示情感 +表情感态度的副词 (副词mly将“我"的决心表现得淋漓尽致。) 态度的副词 Firmly I answered,“I will never do that again.”(可以将副词提到 句首)】 牛刀小试 根据汉语提示，完成下列句子。 1.“恐怕我不行。”我弱弱地说，低下了头。 "I'm afraid I can't make it,"I 2.“你还会来看我吗？”她问道，眼里噙满着泪水。 “Will you come back to see me?”she asked, 3.“没什么。”罗茜心不在焉地说。 “Nothing,”Rosie 4.“是巴顿先生的房子，妈妈。让我去帮忙吧！”他用急切而又激动的语气说道。 "It is Mr.Barton's house,Mother.Do let me go!" 5.“那我们该怎么办呢？”阿瑟环视了一下四周问道，看上去很焦虑。 "What should we do then?"Arthur 6.“来吧！再努力一些，你会成功的。”他微笑着说，给了我一个鼓励的眼神。 Work a bit harder/A little more effort,and you'll make it,"he said with a smile, 7.“救命！我不会游泳。”我惊慌失措地尖叫起来。 “Help！Ican't swim,”I 8.“我很想跟你们一起去。”苏珊叹了一口气，回答道：“可是我还没完成奶奶交给我的任务。” "I should like to go with you very much." ,"but I haven't finished the task Grandmother set me to do. 9.我正看着那个男人和他特殊的家人慢慢地离开我的视线时，我的朋友走过来问我：“你在看什么？” I was still when my friend came up to me ,“What are you looking at?” 10.“抓住那个强盗。”男孩指着那个戴着黑帽子的人高声地减道。 “Catch the robber," 082答案全解全析 8. dependable/trustworthy/faithful 9. unpleasant : 4. His face flamed with shame and he slipped out without being 10. clever/talented/wise/intelligent 11. dishonest 12. proud noticed. 13. lazy 14. inactive 15. imaginative 5. I lowered the test paper and sat down at my desk, anxious 16. careless/inconsiderate/thoughtless 17. boring to find out what I had done wrong 18. selfish 19. impolite 20. cold-hearted 21. daring/brave/adventurous/fearless 22. mean 微技巧五 环境描写 23. impatient 24. unkind/unfriendly/rude/impolit 25. optimistic 【牛刀小试】 二、将下列句子翻译成英语。 一、短语训练。选择适当短语,并用其正确形式填空,然后 1. He is hard-working and energetic. 翻译成汉语。 2. Clare has a mature and responsible attitude to work. 1. drummed on 翻译:雨水拍打着窗户,向最后一缕阳光 3. She is honest and hard-working, and has no bad habits 告别。 4. I think he is shallow, proud and irresponsible 2. was accompaniedby 翻译:我的脚步声伴随着优美摆动 5. They can't stand Penny's selfish and childish/immature 着的芦苇。 behavior. 3. is dotted with 翻译:天空中点缀着无数闪烁的星星。 6. He thought the young man was weak, pessimistic and 4. reflected in 翻译:落日映照在窗户上,院子显得格外 lacking in self-confidence. 的美。 7. Some of the nicest people I know are also the most humble 5. was covered with 翻译:山项被积雪覆盖 people I know. 6. was bathed in 翻译:她沐浴在阳光下,享受着温暖 8. He has a lively sense of humour and appears generous and 二、小语境训练。按照提示要求完成下列句子。 confident. 1. danced gracefully 2. was beating against 3. held us 9. She has always been honest with me, and I respect her for that. entirely in their power 4. found ourselves 5. had flooded in 6. the leaves seemed greener: the flowers seemed brighter 10. To find better ways/ approaches, you have to be more flexible and imaginative. 7. A strong wind was blowing hard 8. Wrapped in a cool breeze 9. Bathed in the sunshine 10. dark clouds loomin 微技巧四 心理描写 overhead 【牛刀小试】 三、翻译下面的句子。 1. All at once, the sky was covered with dark clouds and in 一、词汇训练。选择最和画线词语意思一致的短语。 1.F 2.A 3. B 4.C 5.E 6. D less than a minute we were in a terrible storm. 二、短语训练。选择适当的词块,并用其正确形式填空。 2. Like a flash of lightning, the shooting star shot across the 1. am disappointed about 2. was touched beyond words night sky. which is a beautiful and unforgettable sight 3. in low spirits 4. feel guilty about 5. Much to my regret 3. It was a night of stormy weather. with pouring/heavy rain 6. were not satisfied with and high/strong/fierce/violent winds. 三、小语境训练。按照要求完成下列句子。 4. She felt the icy wind cutting her face like a sharp knife. 1. Desperate and hopeless: with tears of regret streaming down 5. Everything was in silence, only the howling of the wind and her cheeks the flames of the fire for company. 2. just stood there. feeling nervous/upset 微技巧六 对话描写 3. which upset me: wondering what I should do 4. to my amazement/surprise/astonishment 【牛刀小试】 5. Excited and moved 根据汉语提示,完成下列句子。 6. Seeing his grandsons: was wild with joy 7. was scared/frightened to death: my legs trembling and my 1. said weakly. lowering my head palms sweating 2. tears welling up in the eyes 8. shining with pure delight and pride 3. said in an absent way 9. What moved us deeply 4. he said in eager, excited tones 10. a mixture of warmth and gratitude 5. looked around and asked. looking anxious 四、翻译下面的句子。 6. Come on: giving me an encouraging look 1. She could hardly hold back her excitement the moment she 7. screamed in a panic knew she was admitted 8. replied Susan, with a sigh 2. Feeling excited. she instantly took out her phone. eager to 9. watching that man and his special family walk just out of tell her friends the experience sight; and asked 3. Heartbroken but fearless, I decided to turn everything 10. shouted the boy at the top of his voice, pointing at the man around. in a black hat 003