五、2023年6月浙江卷改编-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 heartfelt thanks.I knew it was his belief in me that had pushed me to challenge my limits.to fight my fears.and most importantly.to never give up. ⊙拓展 1.重点单词和短语 win first prize获得第一名 give a speech做演讲 act out表演 burst out爆发出 couldn'twait to do等不急做某事，情不自禁地做某事 keep on doing sth.继续做某事 give up放弃 2.重点句型 (1)I got a letter.saying that my story had won first prize,and that I would be invited to give a speech 动词-ing作状语 that引导的并列宾语从句 at the award presentation. 译文：我收到一封信，信上说我的故事获得了一等奖，同时我将被邀请在领奖典礼上发表演讲。 (2)I knew it was his belief in me that had pushed me to challenge my limits,to fight my fears,and 宾语从句中含有一个强调句 并列动词不定式作目的状语 most importantly,to never give up. 译文：我知道是他对我的信任促使我挑战自己的极限，战胜自己的恐惧，最重要的是，永不放弃。 ※五、2023年6月浙江卷改编 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I need to do something in my community (in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school.Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen,so I did,too.It seemed like a good thing to do. I thought that we would just be passing our dinners to those in need,but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner.We began preparing the food,from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat.Much still needed to be done before dinner was served,but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering.It wasn't until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner. As the line of people came toward me,I got a little scared.I'd come face to face with the homeless:How should I act?How would they treat me?Would they hate me for having more than they did?While some of the people looked very friendly,some of them looked so dangerous,I didn't have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned (to serve the salad with the lady next to me.She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she'd be right there,which I found quite comforting. I had never seen so many people wanting food.They were of all ages and nationalities.Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty.Some looked like they had totally given up on life,while others seemed to be making the best of the situation,smiling and joking.Some were better off than others,but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat.It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen. 注意1.续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 As they came in my direction,I put on my brightest and happiest smile I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. 022 第一章、读后续写的要求和历届高考真题分析 读一读DU YI DU 在阅读这篇所给的语篇文本时，同学们可以从所给文章的主题、情节以及伏笔等方面进行着手，认真阅 读文章，厘清文章的脉络，把握文章中人物身份、关系以及性格特点、事件发展的基本线索、故事的主要矛 盾，寻找续写的伏笔等。 (一)读主题 本文主题：自我成长一成长过程中所遇到的困难 (二)读情节 本文文本是记叙文。文章以人物线崇来展开，叙述了作者为了完成高中毕业所需要的社区服务时间， 需要在所在的社区做一些有益处的工作。所以作者就去了施粥所。开始时，作者发现在准备的过程中有许 多事情要做，作者看到无家可归的人靠近时，心里有点害怕，但是却忙得没有时间担心这些。作者看到了年 龄和国籍各不相同的无家可归的人，这让作者感到难过。 (三)读情感和语言 根据所给语篇，同学们可以从下面几点来描述“我”在参加社区活动时的情感变化：l.原文部分：gld (like a good thing to do)-→tired(Much still needed to be done)→fearful(worry about):2.续写部分：anxious/ desperate-→relief-→happy这个过程概括了作者在工作中是如何去做的，这样也为完成任务打下了基础。本 篇文章中，大量的使用了一系列的动词，形容词的使用也很灵活，增加了故事的画面感，使故事更加丰富，更 加有感染力。 思-思S1YS L.根据第一段首句As they came in my direction,I put on my brightest and happiest smile.可知，当他们 朝“我”走来的时候，“我”露出了最灿烂、最幸福的笑容。第一段可描写作者是怎么为无家可归的人施粥， 主要从一些具体的情况进行描述。 2.根据第二段首句I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way..内容可知，“我”很高兴 用这种方式赢得了服务时间。第二段可描写作者对这次社区服务的感悟，这将对作者以后的发展有很大的 帮助。 写一写XIEY1XE 【优秀范文1】 As they came in my direction,I put on my brightest and happiest smile.I wanted to make them know that i was really anxious to help them.To my relief they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile,and I could see their exhaustion in their eyes.I wanted to know what they were going through and I was desperate to know what I could do for them.They nodded gratefully as I pushed my spoon into the pot and took a large spoonful and poured it into their bowls I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. This experience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help.It also made me realize that our small act of kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference to 023 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 them.I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.I am anxious to urge the world to do everything possible to help those in need. ⊙拓展 1.重点单词和短语 be really anxious to do sth,渴望做某事 to one's relief使人宽慰的是 go through经历 make a great difference to对…产生很大的影响 in need在危难中，在危急中 2.重点句型 (1)I wanted to know what they were going through and I was desperate to know what I could do 宾语从句 宾语从句 for them. 译文：我想知道他们经历了什么，同时我迫切想知道我能为他们做些什么。 (2)I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food. 定语从句 时间状语从句 译文：我永远不会忘记他们得到食物时看我的眼神。 【优秀范文2】 As they came in my direction,I put on my brightest and happiest smile.Nervous as I felt,I did my utmost to keep myself calm and hand out the delicately-wrapped meal to those in need,with my hands trembling.Upon seeing it,every one of them beamed with smile,gently murmured "Thank you"and bowed to me sincerely. which brought warmth straight into my heart.The passing time witnessed the smooth process of this event.It was not until the night wiped out the last ray of sun that we finished our community service for the homeless I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. Not only did I clear my previous prejudice against those who seemed to be dangerous and unamiable,but also l extended a helping hand to those who wanted food and clothes.I suddenly came to realize that not everyone was blessed with fortune and born to be wealthy. therefore,we should always keep grateful for what life blessed us with.However,we did have the power to share our happiness with others,that is,spreading love.Love is everything,like the clear moon hanging high in the sky,spreading its comforting moonlight selflessly to everuone. 24 第一章 读后续写的要求和历届高考真题分析 ⊙拓展 1.重点单词和短语 keep one's calm保持平静 hand out分发 beam with smile笑容满面 bring warmth straight into one's heart给某人心里带来了温暖 wipe out消失；擦净，擦掉 extend a helping hand伸出援助之手 2.重点句型 (1)Nervous as I felt,I did my utmost to keep myself calm and hand out the delicately-wrapped meal to 让步状语从句的倒装句 those in need,with my hands trembling. with的复合结构 译文：尽管我感到繁张，但我还是尽力让自己保持冷静，双手颤抖地把包装精美的饭莱分发给有需要 的人。 (2)Not only did I clear my previous prejudice against those who seemed to be dangerous and unamiable, 倒装句(not only..but also...连接的并列句） 定语从句 but also I extended a helping hand to those who wanted food and clothes. 定语从句 译文：我不仅消除了以前对那些看起来危险和不友好的人的偏见，而且向那些需要食物和衣服的人仲 出了援助之手。 ※六，2023年1月浙江卷改编 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention,so I entered it.It was a hummingbird(),desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs (and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand,I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside,closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand,the bird did not fly away:she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider webs that covered her head and wings.Still,she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired?Or too thirsty?As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle,she began to move.I stopped,and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.Hovering ()she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment this tiny creature looked into my eyes,turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout,I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing,my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes,then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment,all were speechless.Then someone said,"She must have come to say goodbye. 注意1.续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 A few weeks later,I went to the farm again. I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. 025