十，2020年7月浙江卷改编-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

启航英语 高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 ※十、2020年7月浙江卷改编 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside "the polar bear capital of the world"-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance.When I'm face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear,who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws () I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter ()I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bear's eyes,but doesn't hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意1.续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp. At that very moment,the helicopter arrived. 读一读DU YI DU 在阅读此语篇的内容时，为了使已知文本信息更加清晰，同学们可以根据记叙文的六要素来梳理故事 情节，了解主旨大意，把握故事梗概。从情节线、情感线和主题等角度，厘清文章脉络，把握人物身份、关系 及性格特点、事件发展的基本线索、故事的主要矛盾，寻求续写的支撑点和伏笔，同时感受原文的语言风格。 (一)读主题 本文主题：人与自然一尊重和谨慎对待野生动物。 (二)读情节 1.故事以给拍摄北极熊为主线，讲述了“我”和妻子E在营地遭遇北极熊袭击，最终获救的故事 2.根据续写段首句提供的信息，续写段将依次叙述“我”和E再次遭遇去而复返的北极熊的袭击时 的心理感受和反抗措施等，以及登上直升机获救的过程。 (三)读情感和语言 “我”和Eli的心路历程：L,原文部分：adventurous(amazing and dangerous)→determined→terrified.-→ relieved(with a lingering fear):2.续写部分：terrified again→desperate-,hopeful-→relived-→inspired上述情感 变化折射出人与自然之间的激烈矛盾：两位爱冒险的摄影爱好者拼死抵抗北极熊的袭击：而北极熊为了填 饱肚子想尽办法闯进营地找东西吃。在语言的使用上，精准运用动词和形容词进行动作描写、神态描写、心 理活动描写等，将人与熊的激烈战斗，智勇斗争的场景刻画得活灵活现。 思一思S1YIS 从原文中可知，文章主要讲述了人与熊对抗之后成功脱险的故事」 L.续写第一段构思：由续写第一段首句“A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.."可知，熊 发起了新一轮的进攻。再根据第二段首句“At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.”可知，我们当时处境 十分危险，但终于熬过了这半个小时，等到了直升机的营救。利用逆向思维可以试问：在这“漫长”的半小 时里，我们采取了哪些措施？这些措施是否奏效？“我”的情绪有哪些变化？ 38 第一章、读后续写的要求和历届高考真题分析 2.续写第二段构思：根据续写第二段首句“At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.”可知，我们迎来 了逃离营地的希望。可以试问：救援直升机到来后，我们如何利用直升机的特性解决问题？在此过程中有 何心理感受？最终又有什么样的收获？ 写一写XIEY1XE 【优秀范文1】 A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.He must have learned from experience,for he suddenly stood on his back legs and attacked the fence with massive strength.leaving a narrow opening on it.Behind me,Elli muffled a cry of terror.We huddled together,trembling with fear.My eyes were fixed on the uninvited giant while my hands were groping for anything that might keep us safe from the bear's attack.Then l felt a beer bottle.Without hesitation,i squeezed the bottle through the opening as the polar bear closed his jaws on it.He pulled it out and smashed it.There was a dead silence except for the sound of his heavy breathing and sniffing. At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.We ran back to the camp,stumbling a hundred times in our haste.I contacted the pilot over the radio.Hearing that we had not suffered any physical injury. the pilot told us to stay still and cover our ears.The harsh whooshing noises of the approaching helicopter frightened the young bear.The animal took a few hesitant steps back and eventually disappeared back towards the lake.I snatched my camera and snapped one last shot of the bear ⊙拓展 1.重点单词和短语 learn from从…学到：向…学习 tremble with fear因恐惧而颤抖 f6xon集中注意力 keep sb.safe from保护某人不受…的伤害 without hesitation毫不犹豫地 except for除了 stay still保持不动 2.重点句型 (1)He must have learned from experience,for he suddenly stood on his back legs and attacked the fence 简单句 for引导并列句 with massive strength,leaving a narrow opening on it. ,.-ing形式作状语 译文：他一定是从经验中吸取了教训，因为它突然用后腿站起来，用巨大的力量攻击栅栏，在它上面留 下了一个狭窄的开口。 (2)Hearing that we had not suffered any physical injury,the pilot told us to stay still and cover our ears. .-ing形式作状语 that引导宾语从句 译文：听说我们没有受到任何身体伤害，飞行员告诉我们不要动，同时要捂住耳朵。 039 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 【优秀范文2】 A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.Anger overwhelming him,he smashed his paws madly against the wire fence.thrusting his sharp claws at us.Much as I wanted to photograph the approaching bear,my survival instinct overtook my desire to capture the perfect photo.Suddenly.Elli dashed to the kitchen.shouting that she went to fetch the garlic bread.Then we threw the bread at the intruder a little bit at a time until it ran out. With nothing to eat,the guy wildly banged again and shoved the wooden posts which were evidently collapsing!With this angry giant beast within a stone's throw.I huddled with Elli tightly.I could hear nothing but the sound of our hearts beating violently in our chests. At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.The hovering vehicle swept away our choking fear immediately.Out of the helicopter descended a rope to pull us up.Thrilled but relieved,we caught the rope tightly and eventually landed on the helicopter safe and sound. While overlooking the bear from high above,I was amazed to spot this stubborn guy had crushed the fence and headed toward our camp for the inviting garlic bread.At this once-in-a-lifetime moment.I reached into my backpack and pulled out the camera,photographing that impressive scene. ⊙拓展 1.重点单词和短语 dash to冲向 at a time每次；依次 sweep away一扫而光 safe and sound安然无恙 pull up拿出来 2.重点句型 (1)With nothing to eat,the guy wildly banged again and shoved the wooden posts which were evidently with的复合结构 定语从句 collapsing！ 译文：没有东西吃，那个家伙又疯狂地敲打着，推着那些明显要倒塌的木桩！ (2)While overlooking the bear from high above,I was amazed to spot this stubborn guy had crushed the 以.ing形式作状语 宾语从句 fence and headed toward our camp for the inviting garlic bread 译文：当我从高处俯瞰熊的时候，我惊奇地发现这个顽固的家伙已经破坏了橱栏，为了诱人的蒜蓉面包 向我们的营地走来。