八、2021年新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ卷-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

第一章读后续写的要求和历届高考真题分析 a steadier pace.The next 30 minutes witnessed his strong determination and perseverance.As he finally crossed the finish line. David raised his arms in triumph to the wild cheers and applause. Then.his coach and I rushed forward.and high-fived him.saying. "Good job!David!"In return,he flashed us a toothy grin and said. “Thank youl" ©拓展 1.重点单词和短语 stare at盯着看 be afraid of doing sth.害怕做某事 with a determined look带着坚定的表情 lurch forward蹒跚向前跑 in return作为回报 2.重点句型 (1)What really matters is that you shouldn't let those few people stop you from doing something you 主语从句 表语从句 really want to do. 定语从句 译文：真正重要的事情是，你不应该让那几个人阻止你去做你真正想做的事情。 (2)Encouraged by the audience,David quickly picked himself up.and started running at a steadier pace. 过去分词作状语 主句（含有两个并列谓语picked和started) 译文：在观众的鼓励下，大卫很快站了起来，开始以更稳定的速度跑起来 ※八，2021年新课标I、Ⅱ卷 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A Mother's Day Surprise The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意1.续写的词数应为150个左右：2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 031 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 读一读DU YI DU 在阅读此语篇的内容时，同学们可以从所给文章的主题、情节以及伏笔等方面进行着手，厘请文章的脉 络，把握文章中人物的身份、关系以及性格特点、事件发展的基本线索、故事的主要矛盾，寻找续写的伏 笔等。 (一)读主题 本文主题：人与自我一为妈妈做早餐，反映家人之间的亲情和爱，体现感恩和劳动快乐。 (二)读情节 通过阅读语篇，我们可以了解下面的细节。 1.两个双胞胎孩子计划在母亲节那天给妈妈做早餐，准备给她一个惊喜。 2.母亲节那天早上，他们早早起床，悄悄来到厨房准备早餐：法式吐司和鸡肉粥。 3.这么简单的早餐，两个孩子却弄得手忙脚乱，焦头烂额，都没有弄好。 4.这时，爸爸出现了… (三)读情感和语言 故事以两个孩子在母亲节给妈妈做早餐为主线，故事贯穿着excited→confident→panicked→ disappointed-→surprised-→pleased and proud,向读者展示了充满爱和感恩的幸福家庭在劳动中所得到的幸福 与快乐。通过动作、对话和心理活动等描写，生动、形象地描绘了双胞胎孩子在母亲节为妈妈做早餐的 情景。 思一思SY1S 文章讲述了一对双胞胎在母亲节为妈妈做早餐的过程。看似简单的早餐，却把两个孩子弄得手忙脚 乱，焦头烂额，结果都没有弄好。 L.续写第一段构思：根据续写段第二段首句“The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.”的提示可以推知双胞胎成功地做好了早餐，并将早餐送到妈妈的床前。可以试问：是谁帮助他 们解决困难的呢？从续写段第一段首句“As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeare心d."的提示，运用逆向思维可知是爸爸帮助了他们。因此，续写的第一段应该采取常规思路，描写爸 爸怎样帮助双胞胎完成为妈妈做爱心早餐的心愿」 2.续写第二段构思：续写第二段应该聚焦妈妈看到孩子送到床前的早餐的惊喜和她吃到爱心早餐后的 心理感受，用动作、对话和心理活动等生动描写展现互爱、感恩场景和主题」 本故事的叙事方式是采用“冲突→危机→解决”模式，可以通过故事情节和人物情感变化的发展来完 成写作。 写一写XIE YI XIE 【优秀范文1】 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Faced with the kitchen the twins had made a mess of Father felt annoyed but tried to contain himself Jenna ran up to him. whispering "We...we just want to make breakfast for Mom as Mother's Day gift."After he learned what it was all about.his annoyance gave way to relief and delight.Immediately,he joined them and they started all over again.Soon the French toast and chicken porridge were ready,the kitchen filled with the scent of breakfast and the sweetness of a family.Looking at the work,the 032 第一章读后续写的要求和历届高考真题分析 three exchanged an understanding smile.After signaling them to keep it a secret.Father slipped into the bedroom,pretending to know nothing about it. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Still a little sleepy.Mother failed to figure out what they were up to.“Happy Mother''sDay'”The twins greeted her.“We made breakfast for you as you do that for us.Mom,we love you!"Though still in her pajamas,Mother took a bite of the toast and sipped the hot porridge.Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her twins. she sobbed.with delightful tears streaming down her face.Lovingly. she pressed two gentle kisses on their foreheads,proudly enjoying their best wishes.Father was standing in the doorway,recording this touching scene.The whole room was bathed in a happy mother's day atmosphere. ⊙拓展 1.重点单词和短语 face with面对 give way to让路给：屈服于 pretend to do sth.假装做某事 figure out搞清楚；弄明白 2.重点句型 (1)Faced with the kitchen the twins had made a mess of,Father felt annoyed but tried to contain himself. 过去分词作状语 定语从句 译文：面对双胞胎弄得一团糟的厨房，父亲感到很恼火，但还是努力克制住自己。 (2)Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her twins,she sobbed,with delightful tears 过去分词作状语 with的复合结构 streaming down her face. 译文：沉浸在美味的早餐和来自双胞胎的纯洁的爱中，她抽泣着，喜悦的泪水顺着脸颏流下来。 【优秀范文2】 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Seeing the mess,Father froze with shock,as if rooted to the ground.From the black bread and the spilled porridge,he suddenly figured out their secret.A smile of understanding flashed across his face.He realized their intention.He joined them in preparing the Mother's Day surprise immediately.They started all over again. Everything went smoothly.The chicken and rice were dancing harmoniously in the boiling water pot and bread slices were showing off their most tremendous golden color.Soon the french toast and chicken porridge were ready.the kitchen filled with the scent of 033 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 breakfast and the sweetness of a family.Despite the oil stains on the twins'aprons,everything seemed perfect,and all was in place except the most important one. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Still a little sleepy.Mother failed to figure out what they were up to,but the cheerful "Happy Mother's Day"from the two sweeties brought her back to reality.The breakfast with love made by her twins really struck her heartstrings.Mother kissed them and gave them each a bear hug.saying "Oh dear,thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise!"The next moment,she woke up Father,eager to share the blessing and the inviting breakfast seasoned with love. Father,who had been awake,cooperatively rubbed his eyes and took a big bite,winking at the twins secretly.After all,the breakfast did make a sweet surprise! ⊙拓展 1.重点单词和短语 rooted to the ground扎根在地上 show off炫耀；展示 fill with充满 bring back to reality带回到现实中 wake up叫醒 after all毕竟 2.重点句型 (1)Soon the French toast and chicken porridge were ready,the kitchen filled with the scent of breakfast 独立主格结构 and the sweetness of a family 译文：很快，法式吐司和鸡肉粥就微好了，厨房里充满了早餐的香味和一家人的甜蜜。 (2)Still a little sleepy,Mother failed to figure out what they were up to,but the cheerful "Happy Mother's 状语 宾语从句 but连接并列句 Day"from the two sweeties brought her back to reality. 译文：妈妈还是有点困，不知道他们在干什么，但是这两个小甜心欢快的一声“母亲节快乐”把她带回 了现实。 ※九，2021年1月全国八省联考卷燃 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 During this past year,I've had three instances of car trouble.Each time these things happened,I was sick of the way most people hadn't bothered to help.One of those times,I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep.I put signs in the windows,big signs that said NEED A JACK ()and offered money.Nothing.Right as I was about to give up,a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over,and the father bounded out. He sized up the situation and called for his daughter,who spoke English.He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep,so we would need something to support it.Then he got a saw ()from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road.We rolled it over and put his jack on top,and we were in business.