Unit 9-10写作专训课件 2024-2025学年人教版九年级英语全册 （河南地区）

写作专训　Section B 3a～3b Unit 9　I like music that I can dance to [经典例题] （2023·安阳滑县一模）老师要求同学们在下周的英语课上用英语 介绍自己最喜欢的一首歌。请你根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短 文，为下周的英语课做准备。 要点：1. 你最喜欢的歌是什么；2. 简单介绍这首歌；3. 你喜欢这首 歌的原因。 要求：1. 文中不要出现真实的校名和姓名；2. 词数100左右（开头 和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 返回目录 [高分范文] ① Good afternoon， everyone！ I’d like to introduce my favorite song to all of you. ② My favorite song is Shaonian which is sung by Miya. It’s a pop song that is full of energy. Most of its lyrics are Chinese. There are some English lyrics in it. Many students like listening to it and can also sing along with it. Of course， I’m one of them. I like this song best for two reasons. ③ First， the song sounds so lively that it can make me excited. Every time I listen to it， I feel like dancing to it. Second， the lyrics of the song are encouraging. It’s possible for everyone to have problems and failure in life. Whenever something bad happens， I’ll listen to this song. It’ll cheer me up. ④ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 返回目录 [名师点评] 短文介绍了作者最喜欢的一首歌，加深了大家对这首歌曲的认识与 理解。 ① 开篇点题，说明自己要介绍一首歌曲。 ② 使用定语从句说明自己最喜欢的歌曲。 ③ 句中结果状语从句的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。 ④ 最后予以总结并表达谢意，体现了作者良好的素养和英语综合 表达能力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. Music is playing a very important part in our daily life. 2. Please allow me to introduce my favorite movie to everyone. [中间句] 1. I prefer smooth music that can make me relaxed. 2. Different people have different opinions about movies. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. In a word， we can’t live a happy life without music. 2. I believe you’ll fall in love with this movie. [名言警句] 1. Music is the medicine of a troubled mind. 音乐是治疗心灵苦恼的药。 2. Music is the art of life. 音乐是人生的艺术。 返回目录 [小试身手] 某英语报社正在就最喜欢的电影进行征稿。假设你叫邹杰，请根据 以下要点与要求，以“My favorite movie”为题写一篇英语短文，向该 报社投稿。 要点：1. 你最喜欢哪种电影；2. 你最喜欢的电影的内容；3. 你喜欢 它的原因。 要求：1. 语言流畅，条理清晰；2. 词数100左右。 返回目录 ① 时态：一般现在时；② 人称：第三人称；③ 写作时：第一段点 明自己最喜欢的电影类型，第二段详述最喜欢的电影的具体内容，最后 一段简述自己喜欢它的原因。 [写作提纲] [思路点拨] 返回目录 　　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　My favorite kind of movie is animated movies. I like animated movies because they usually have good frames and moving stories.　 　Big Fish & Begonia is my favorite movie. It was directed by two Chinese people. They are Liang Xuan and Zhang Chun. It is set in a wonderland that manages the human world. It tells the story of a young girl from the wonderland and her love for a boy from the human world.　 [妙笔生花] My favorite movie 返回目录 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　Every time I watch it， I feel deeply moved. The movie encourages us to stick to what we’re eager for and what we believe in， even when the world is against us. I think you should also watch it because it is the most moving animated movie that I have ever watched.　 返回目录 Unit 10　You're supposed to shake hands [经典例题] 假设你是王伟，你的英国朋友彼得下周要来中国旅行，并到中国朋 友家做客。请根据下面的内容要点和要求，用英语给彼得写一封电子邮 件，向他介绍一下到中国家庭做客需要注意的礼仪。 要点：1. 初次见面时的礼仪；2. 到朋友家做客一般送什么礼物；3. 就餐时的礼仪。 要求：1. 文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称；2. 词数 100左右。 返回目录 [高分范文] Dear Peter， ① I’m glad that you will take a trip to China. Now let me give you some advice about Chinese customs. ② In China， you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. If you are invited by a Chinese family， you can give the host some fruit or flowers. ③ But it’s impolite to give a clock as a gift since it is considered unlucky in Chinese culture. When you are eating at the table， it is impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. You aren’t supposed to point at anyone with your chopsticks as well. 返回目录 ④ The Chinese are very friendly to guests. I believe you will have a good time here. Yours， Wang Wei 返回目录 [名师点评] 邮件阐述了在中国家庭做客时的礼仪，加深了大家对中国传统习俗 的认识。 ① 开篇点题，提出关于中国做客礼仪的建议。 ② 使用be supposed to结构及时间状语从句说明初次与中国人见面时 的礼仪。 ③ “It’s ＋ adj. ＋ to do sth.”句式及原因状语从句的运用体现了作 者扎实的写作功底。 ④ 句中对中国人对待客人的态度的总结体现了作者的综合归纳、 总结能力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. Let me give you some suggestions/advice about Chinese customs. 2. Good manners are important since they show that you’re polite to others. [中间句] 1. They’re supposed to bow/shake hands. 2. You’re supposed to bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. 2. So if you want to get on well with people from different places， you must follow their cultural traditions. [名言警句] 1. When in Rome， do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。 2. When seeing a person of high caliber， strive to be his equal. 见贤思齐。 返回目录 [小试身手] （2023·开封市金明中学月考）假设你叫李华，三个月后要去英国 参加为期半年的交换生学习项目。请你给英国笔友Leo发一封电子邮 件，就英国社交礼仪方面（衣着、接受邀请、赠送礼物）的问题向他请 教，请他给你一些建议。 要求：1. 文中不要出现真实校名和姓名；2. 词数100左右（邮件格 式已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：正装 formal clothes 返回目录 [思路点拨] ① 时态：一般将来时；② 人称：第一人称；③ 写作时：第一段点 明自己的目的，第二段详细询问关于英国社交礼仪的问题，最后一段简 述对笔友提供建议的感激之情。 返回目录 [妙笔生花] Dear Leo， I am writing to ask for some information about British customs.　 [写作提纲] 返回目录 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ Yours， Li Hua 　I will go to Britain and attend an exchange student program， which will last for half a year. However， I know little about British customs， so I need your help. Would you like to give me some advice on dressing？ In what kind of situation will I need to wear formal clothes and when should I just dress casually？ Besides， I also want to know about accepting invitations and giving gifts. Must I be on time for dinner？ Should I always bring a small gift？　 I will be very grateful if you can give me any advice.　 返回目录 $$