Unit 7-8 写作专训课件2024-2025学年人教版九年级英语全册 （河南地区）

写作专训　Section B 3a～3b Unit 7　Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes [经典例题] 假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语给你的笔友Mark 写一封信，介绍你校的新校规，并谈谈你对新校规的看法。 提示：1. 作业、手机、睡眠、阅读、锻炼、安全等方面的新校规内 容；2. 你对此有何看法。 要求：1. 文中不能出现学生的真实姓名、校名和地名；2. 词数100 左右（书信格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 返回目录 [高分范文] Dear Mark， How’s it going？ ① I’m glad to share my new school rules with you. We must finish our homework on time. We can’t take phones with us to school. ② We had better get enough sleep， at least 9 hours a　 day. We should develop reading habits. We must read a good book once a week. Doing exercise is also important， so we must do exercise an hour a day. We must keep safe first. ③ Don’t fight with each other and never go swimming alone. 返回目录 ④ I think these school rules are good for us. We must follow them. What about your school rules？ Please write soon. Yours， Li Hua [名师点评] 短文介绍了作者学校的新校规，加深了大家对该校新校规的认识。 ① 开篇点题，点明学校新校规这一主题。 ② 使用had better do sth.结构说明睡眠对于学生的重要性。 ③ 句中祈使句的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。 ④ 句中对新校规的态度体现了作者的综合归纳、总结能力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. Now let me tell you something about my school rules. 2. Recently， I’ve had a discussion with my parents about ... [中间句] 1. Now some more new school rules are added. 2. I disagree with you about what teenagers should do at home. 3. I think that teenagers should be allowed to make more friends. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. In short， if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves， we will grow up safely and healthily. 2. Would you please share your ideas in your next e-mail？ [名言警句] 1. Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. 没有规矩，不 成方圆。 2. A nation has its laws and a family has its rules！ 国有国法，家有家规！ 返回目录 [小试身手] 最近你和父母就周末学生该不该与同学外出活动进行了讨论。你认 为应该允许学生周末和同学一起外出活动，但你的父母坚决反对。请以 “Should teenagers be allowed to go out with their friends on weekends？” 为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，阐述你们各自的观点。 [思路点拨] ① 时态：一般现在时；② 人称：第一、三人称；③ 写作时：第一 段点明讨论的话题，第二段详述父母的观点，第三段详述自己的看法。 返回目录 [妙笔生花] Should teenagers be allowed to go out with [写作提纲] 返回目录 their friends on weekends？ 　　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should be allowed to go out with their friends on weekends.　 　My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to do their homework or review their lessons. After a week’s study， teenagers need to have a good rest at home. They can also help parents do housework on weekends.　 返回目录 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　But I disagree. We teenagers should be allowed to go out with our friends so that we can relax more. We can also get more exercise by taking part in some outdoor activities and share ideas with each other. What’s more， we can develop friendship with classmates. Do you think so？　 返回目录 Unit 8　It must belong to Carla [经典例题] 你在学校门口的路上捡到一件T恤衫，你根据T恤衫口袋中的物品推 测出它的主人，请写出你推测的经过和结果。 要点：1. Maria和Sally的T恤衫都丢了；2. T恤衫口袋中有发带；3. T 恤衫口袋中有一张长城的照片和一张信用卡。 要求：1. 须包括所有要点；2. 词数100左右。 返回目录 [高分范文] ① Oh， look！ There is a T-shirt here. It’s a school T-shirt. The person must study in our school. Maria and Sally lost their T-shirts. ② Could it be Maria’s or Sally’s？ There is a hair band in the pocket. But both of them have long hair. There is a photo of the Great Wall in the pocket. ③ Sally likes Beijing very much， but Maria’s favorite city is Shanghai. So it could be Sally’s. There is a credit card， too. Then it must be Sally’s school T-shirt. ④ She has long hair. She likes Beijing， and she is the only person that has a credit card in our school. 返回目录 [名师点评] 短文详述了作者对于T恤衫主人的推测经过及结果。 ① 开篇点题，点明作者捡到T恤衫的事实。 ② 使用选择疑问句体现作者的推测经过。 ③ 句中并列句的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。 ④ 句中定语从句的恰当运用体现了作者缜密的逻辑思维能力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. Last month， something strange and terrible happened in our community. 2. On my way home， something mysterious suddenly happened. [中间句] 1. I was reading a book when I heard a strange sound outside. 2. I wanted to see what was going on but I didn’t dare to go out alone. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. I was so glad and didn’t care about the strange thing anymore. 2. What a terrible night we spent！ [名言警句] 1. It takes all sorts to make a world. 大千世界，无奇不有。 2. The mystery lies in the subtleties. 奥秘全在细微处。 返回目录 [小试身手] 假设你是夏军，最近你的生活中发生了一件神秘的事情，请根据下 面的提示写一篇英语短文，给同学们讲述这件事。 提示：1. 上周三是我的生日，放学回家后，家里没有人；2. 我发现 我的房间很乱；3. 分析可能的原因，如小偷闯入；4. 后来发现是一只小 狗在房间里，这是爸爸妈妈给我的生日礼物。 要求：1. 不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；2. 词数100左右。 返回目录 [思路点拨] ① 时态：一般过去时；② 人称：第一人称；③ 写作时：第一段点 明神秘事情的背景，第二段详述事情发生的原因，最后一段简述事情的 结果。 [写作提纲] 返回目录 　　 ⁠ ⁠⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　Last Wednesday after school， I came home as usual. To my surprise， I found my room was in a mess when I opened the door. My books were here and there. What was worse， that day was my birthday.　 　I was very angry and decided to find out who did this. I guessed it might be a thief， but other rooms were clean and tidy. Then I thought it could be my little brother， who had played in my room. However， he was too short to open the door.　 [妙笔生花] 返回目录 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　Suddenly， a lovely puppy came out. At the same time， my parents turned up and told me it was my birthday present. I was so happy and didn’t care about the mess anymore. That birthday present was the best one I’d ever got.　 返回目录 $$